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->Hero. Villain. It's complicated.
-->-- Banner ad for ''The Young Protectors'', featuring Kyle and the Annihilator
-->-- Banner ad for ''The Young Protectors'', featuring Kyle and the Annihilator
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** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: The Annihilator seems to have no trouble with money, seeing as he can spend over $200 a plate on his RedHeadedHero dinner date.
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** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: The Annihilator seems to have no trouble with money, seeing as he can spend over $200 a plate on his RedHeadedHero dinner date. It's implied that at least some of this money came from [[spoiler: robbing Fort Knox]].
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**[[spoiler: Annihilator: "LAAMPROS BA SUKOTH BA SUGGROTH!"]]
**[[spoiler: Laampros: "My darling son."]]
**[[spoiler: Annihilator: "LAAMPROS BA SUKOTH BA SUGGROTH!"]]
**[[spoiler: Laampros: "My darling son."]]
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* NinetiesAntiHero: Hunter and Killer, the vigilantes who show up to fight Annihilator in Hong Kong. They're cocky [[JerkAss Jerkasses]] who don't care about collateral damage in the service of their work.
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* NinetiesAntiHero: Hunter and Killer, the vigilantes who show up to fight Annihilator in Hong Kong. They're cocky [[JerkAss Jerkasses]] who don't care about collateral damage in the service of their work.wor
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** And before that, the first time he said "THE ANNIHILATOR".
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* Foreshadowing: Kyle's very first line (before we know anything about him or even his name) is, "Oh, to hell with it". Then chapter two rolls around, and [[spoiler: the statement has become literal]].
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* Foreshadowing: ForeShadowing: Kyle's very first line (before we know anything about him or even his name) is, "Oh, to hell with it". Then chapter two rolls around, and [[spoiler: the statement has become literal]].
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* Foreshadowing: Kyle's very first line (before we know anything about him or even his name) is, "Oh, to hell with it". Then chapter two rolls around, and [[spoiler: the statement has become literal]].
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** [[ZigzaggedTrope Depending on your point of view,]] Fluke's power is either this or CursedWithAwesome. His power is "balancing luck", so if he wants to grant good luck to the people he saves, bad stuff must happen to him on a regular basis. But then again, he loves to save people,so he's willing and eager to go with it.
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** [[ZigzaggedTrope Depending on your point of view,]] Fluke's power is either this or CursedWithAwesome. His power is "balancing luck", so if he wants to grant good luck to the people he saves, bad stuff must happen to him on a regular basis. But then again, he loves to save people,so people, so he's willing and eager to go with it.
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* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler: Will be deliberately averted, according to Word of God.]] You can read Alex's (somewhat spoilery) comments on the subject on [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch2-page-32/ this page]].
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* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler: Will be deliberately averted, according to Word of God.]] You can read Alex's (somewhat spoilery) comments on regarding the subject on [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch2-page-32/ this page]].
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* [[spoiler: LukeIAmYourFather: Kyle is Laampros's son.]]
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* [[spoiler: ImmortalitySeeker: The Annihalator. He summons a demon specifically for this purpose.]]
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* [[spoiler: ImmortalitySeeker: The Annihalator.Annihilator. He summons a demon specifically for this purpose.]]
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* ImmortalitySeeker: [[spoiler: The Annihalator. He summons a demon specifically for this purpose.]]
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* WrongContextMagic: [[spoiler:Kyle's flame abilities aren't a mutation, nor do they come from magic or alien interference. What this means is anyone's guess.]]
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** [[spoiler: If Kyle's reaction to seeing Annihilator naked and aroused is any indication, though, this is pretty thoroughly averted.]]
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* BiggusDickus: [[spoiler: Several readers have noted Laampros's shadowed crotch bears a very... intimidating, distinct outline. He IS apparently a demon, after all.]]
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* InvisibleStreaker: As a result of the above - Kyle's invisible, but his clothes aren't. Cue him frantically shucking clothes as he escapes.
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* ImmortalitySeeker: [[spoiler: The Annihalator. He summons a demon specifically for this purpose.]]
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* [[spoiler: BigRedDevil: [[OurDemonsAreDifferent Laampros]] seems to be one.]]
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Kyle and Duncan's romance is very abrupt, one encounter in a shady alley and a date in Hong Kong and the Annihilator is already telling Kyle being with him makes him want to try and be a better person, and Kyle, a previously CelibateHero, is asking Duncan to be his first the night of his eighteenth birthday.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Kyle and Duncan's romance is very abrupt, one encounter in a shady alley and a date in Hong Kong and the Annihilator is already telling Kyle being with him makes him want to try and be a better person, and Kyle, a previously CelibateHero, is asking Duncan to be his first the night of his eighteenth birthday.
** [[spoiler: Invoked and Subverted. Whatever Anihilator's feelings Kyle, his primary interest is in Kyle's unique power.]]
** [[spoiler: Invoked and Subverted. Whatever Anihilator's feelings Kyle, his primary interest is in Kyle's unique power.]]
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Annihilator. So far though, he doesn't seem so bad...
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The Annihilator. So far though, he doesn't seem so bad... [[spoiler: Though this quickly becomes a lot murkier once Chapter 2 rolls around.]]
** [[spoiler: Laampros is several heads taller than him!]]
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* ParentalAbandonment: After his [[PlayingWithFire powers]] manifested and he [[DarkAndTroubledPast accidentaly burned down their home and scarred their child]], Kyle's foster parents couldn't even look him in the eye anymore.
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* ParentalAbandonment: After his [[PlayingWithFire powers]] manifested and he [[DarkAndTroubledPast accidentaly accidentally burned down their home and scarred their child]], Kyle's foster parents couldn't even look him in the eye anymore.
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* ShipperOnDeck: It seems like the Platinum Priestess seems to ship Kyle/Annihilator.
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* ShipperOnDeck: It seems like the Platinum Priestess seems to ship Kyle/Annihilator.Kyle/Anihilator.
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* WhenTheClockStrikesTwelve: Complete with a ShoutOut to Disney.
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* WhenTheClockStrikesTwelve: Complete with a ShoutOut to Disney.Disney.
* [[spoiler: WrongContextMagic: Kyle's flame abilities aren't a mutation, nor do they come from magic or alien interference. What this means is anyone's guess.]]
* [[spoiler: WrongContextMagic: Kyle's flame abilities aren't a mutation, nor do they come from magic or alien interference. What this means is anyone's guess.]]
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** Red Hot's [[PlayingWithFire fiery powers]] are also EmotionalPowers, which includes orgasm. As a result, Kyle is terrified of even masturbation, [[CelibateHero let alone finding a sexual partner]], as the last time he had ADateWithRosiePalms he burned down his foster parent's house.
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** Red Hot's [[PlayingWithFire fiery powers]] are also EmotionalPowers, which includes orgasm. As a result, Kyle is terrified of even masturbation, [[CelibateHero let alone finding a sexual partner]], as the last time he had ADateWithRosiePalms he burned down his foster parent's parents' house.
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently. His [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]] are augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotions]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRosiePalms date with Rosie Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to experience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* BuryYourGays: [[spoiler: Will be deliberately averted, according to Word of God.]]
]] You can read Alex's (somewhat spoilery) comments on the subject on [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch2-page-32/ this page]].
* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently. His [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]] are augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotions]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his fosterparent's parents' home after his first [[ADateWithRosiePalms date with Rosie Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to experience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: A temporary swerve into Type 2, when Kyle reveals the first time he discovered he could [[PlayingWithFire play with fire]] was during ADateWithRosiePalms that caused him to accidentally burn down his foster parent's house, Annihilator laughes. Quickly averted, however, when Annihilator realizes Kyle [[DudeNotFunny isn't exaggerating]], and in fact gravely hurt his foster sister and was abandoned by his foster parents after the incident.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: A temporary swerve into Type 2, when Kyle reveals the first time he discovered he could [[PlayingWithFire play with fire]] was during ADateWithRosiePalms that caused him to accidentally burn down his foster parent's parents' house, Annihilator laughes.laughs. Quickly averted, however, when Annihilator realizes Kyle [[DudeNotFunny isn't exaggerating]], and in fact gravely hurt his foster sister and was abandoned by his foster parents after the incident.
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** [[spoiler: According to the Anihilator, the names of Kyle's teammates are an OpenSecret to both the other heroes and villains alike.]]
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* [[spoiler: WhamEpisode: Chapter 2]]
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** Confirmed and Justified during the date in Hong kong; Pummeling an anti-hero while yelling at him not to be a dick.
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** Confirmed and Justified during the date in Hong kong; Pummeling an anti-hero while yelling at him not to be a dick. dick.
** The 'activities' on Kyle's 18th birthday were apparently so good that it literally blew his socks off.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colourist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue is complete.
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A multi-chapter superhero webcomic by author Alex Woolfson and artists Adam [=DeKraker=] [line artist] and Veronica Gandini [colourist]. It can be found [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete_title_page/ here]]. As of now, the prologue is and first chapter are complete.
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** Confirmed and Justified during the date in Hong kong; Pummeling an anti-hero while yelling at him not to be a dick.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Even the bad guys have rules. And one of the is that no one messes with children. [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch2-page-14/ At least that's what Anni says.]]
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* VisualPun: Kyle is ginger with flame powers making him literally a "fiery redhead". He doesn't count as a true {{FieryRedhead}} because we haven't seen him lose his temper yet.
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* BridalCarry: [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch2-page-1/ Here]]. Kyle even comments that it feels "[A] bit, uh...[[{{Superman}} Lois Lane]]".
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Kyle, twice actually, once before he realized his powers by his original parents for an undisclosed reason, and then after he burned down the house with his fire powers, [[ParentalAbandonment he was abandoned by his foster parents]].
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Kyle, twice actually, once before he realized his powers powers, by his original parents for an undisclosed reason, and then after he burned down the house with his fire powers, [[ParentalAbandonment he was abandoned by his foster parents]].
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* BlessedWithSuck: [[ZigzaggedTrope Depending on your point of view,]] Fluke's power is either this or CursedWithAwesome.
** Elaborating a little, his power is "balancing luck", so if he wants to grant good luck to the people he saves, bad stuff must happen to him on a regular basis. But then again, he loves to save people,so he's willing and eager to go with it.
** Elaborating a little, his power is "balancing luck", so if he wants to grant good luck to the people he saves, bad stuff must happen to him on a regular basis. But then again, he loves to save people,so he's willing and eager to go with it.
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* BlessedWithSuck: BlessedWithSuck:
** [[ZigzaggedTrope Depending on your point of view,]] Fluke's power is either this orCursedWithAwesome.
** Elaborating a little, hisCursedWithAwesome. His power is "balancing luck", so if he wants to grant good luck to the people he saves, bad stuff must happen to him on a regular basis. But then again, he loves to save people,so he's willing and eager to go with it.
** [[ZigzaggedTrope Depending on your point of view,]] Fluke's power is either this or
** Elaborating a little, his
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* DeadpanSnarker: The Platinum Priestess has her moments.
** The Commander too.
** The Commander too.
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* DeadpanSnarker: The Platinum Priestess has her moments.
**and The Commander too.both have their moments.
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* AManIsNotAVirgin: Averted with Kyle. (Explained under CelibateHero and BlessedWithSuck)
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* VisualPun: Kyle is ginger with flame powers making him literally a "fiery redhead". He doesn't count as a true [[FieryRedhead]] because we haven't seen him lose his temper yet.
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* VisualPun: Kyle is ginger with flame powers making him literally a "fiery redhead". He doesn't count as a true [[FieryRedhead]] {{FieryRedhead}} because we haven't seen him lose his temper yet.
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* StealthPun: Kyle is gay and has fire powers, making him literally a "flaming (gay man)".
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* StealthPun: Kyle is gay and has fire powers, making him literally a "flaming (gay man)".flaming homosexual.
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** Red Hot, a (closet gay) ginger, Caucasian male
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* VisualPun: Kyle is ginger with flame powers making him literally a "fiery redhead". He doesn't count as a true fiery redhead [[FieryRedhead]] because we haven't seen him lose his temper yet.