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* StealthPun: Kyle is gay and has fire powers, making him a "flaming faggot".
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* StealthPun: Kyle is gay and has fire powers, making him a "flaming faggot".(gay man)".
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* VisualPun: Kyle is ginger with flame powers making him a "fiery red head".
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* VisualPun: Kyle is ginger with flame powers making him a "fiery red head".redhead". He doesn't count as a true fiery redhead because we haven't seen him lose his temper yet.
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** Red Hot, a (closet gay) Caucasian male
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** Red Hot, a (closet gay) ginger, Caucasian male
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* StealthPun: Kyle is gay and has fire powers, making him a "flaming faggot".
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* VisualPun: Kyle is ginger with flame powers making him a "fiery red head".
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kyle's consent to going out on a date with Annihilator is under the pretense that Annihilator doesn't just plan to '[[IntercourseWithYou screw with him all night]]'. The Platinum Priestess is quick to jump on this, in that if that's Kyle's limitation, it sort of defeats the purpose of a date.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kyle's consent to going out on a date with Annihilator is under the pretense that Annihilator doesn't just plan to '[[IntercourseWithYou screw 'screw with him all night]]'.night'. The Platinum Priestess is quick to jump on this, in that if that's Kyle's limitation, it sort of defeats the purpose of a date.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kyle's consent to going out on a date with Annihilator is under the pretense that Annihilator doesn't just plan to 'screw with him all night'. The Platinum Priestess is quick to jump on this, in that if that's Kyle's limitation, it sort of defeats the purpose of a date.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kyle's consent to going out on a date with Annihilator is under the pretense that Annihilator doesn't just plan to 'screw '[[IntercourseWithYou screw with him all night'.night]]'. The Platinum Priestess is quick to jump on this, in that if that's Kyle's limitation, it sort of defeats the purpose of a date.
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** NighInvulnerability: At least to cuts ([[PowerLimiter usually]]) and fire, as we've seen so far.
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** NighInvulnerability: At least to cuts ([[PowerLimiter usually]]) usually]]), explosions, and fire, as we've seen so far.
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently, his [[PlayingWithFire fire power]] is augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotion]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRosiePalms date with Rosie Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to experience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently, his recently. His [[PlayingWithFire fire power]] is powers]] are augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotion]], emotions]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRosiePalms date with Rosie Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to experience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* CurtainsMatchTheWindow: The Platinum Priestess has, fittingly, platinum-colored hair and eyes.
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* ThatCameOutWrong: Kyle's consent to going out on a date with Annihilator is under the pretense that Annihilator doesn't just plan to 'screw with him all night'. The Platinum Priestess is quick to jump on this, in that if that's Kyle's limitation, it sort of defeats the purpose of a date.
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** Red Hot's [[PlayingWithFire fiery powers]] are also EmotionalPowers, which includes orgasm. As a result, Kyle is terrified of even masterbation, [[CelibateHero let alone finding a sexual partner]], as the last time he had ADateWithRosiePalms he burned down his foster parent's house.
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** Red Hot's [[PlayingWithFire fiery powers]] are also EmotionalPowers, which includes orgasm. As a result, Kyle is terrified of even masterbation, masturbation, [[CelibateHero let alone finding a sexual partner]], as the last time he had ADateWithRosiePalms he burned down his foster parent's house.
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** Red Hot's [[PlayingWithFire fiery powers]] are also EmotionalPowers, which includes orgasm. As a result, Kyle is terrified of even masterbation, [[CelibateHero let alone finding a sexual partner]], as the last time he had ADateWithRosiePalms he burned down his foster parent's house.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Kyle and Duncan's romance is very abrupt, one encounter in a shady alley and a date in Hong Kong and the Annihilator is already telling Kyle being with him makes him want to try and be a better person, and Kyle, a previously CelibateHero, is asking Duncan to be his first the night of his eighteenth birthday.
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** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Runs some sort of major corporation on the side, how else can he spend $200 a plate on his RedHeadedHero dinner date?
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** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Runs some sort of major corporation on the side, how else The Annihilator seems to have no trouble with money, seeing as he can he spend over $200 a plate on his RedHeadedHero dinner date?date.
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* CoolGate / PortalDoor: One of the Platinum Priestess's powers.
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* EmotionalPowers: Kyle's [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]] are linked to his emotions ... [[CelibateHero including orgasm]].
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently, his [[PlayingWithFire fire power]] is augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotion]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRosiePalms date with Rosie Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to expirience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently, his [[PlayingWithFire fire power]] is augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotion]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRosiePalms date with Rosie Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to expirience experience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently, his [[PlayingWithFire fire power]] is augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotion]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRoseyPalms date with Rosey Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to expirience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently, his [[PlayingWithFire fire power]] is augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotion]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRoseyPalms [[ADateWithRosiePalms date with Rosey Rosie Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to expirience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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* CelibateHero: Kyle up until recently, his [[PlayingWithFire fire power]] is augmented by his [[EmotionalPowers emotion]], which includes orgasm. After burning down his foster parent's home after his first [[ADateWithRoseyPalms date with Rosey Palms]] as a kid, he swore never to expirience that pleasure, even with himself, again.
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** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Runs some sort of major corporation on the side, how else can he spend $200 a plate on his FieryRedhead dinner date?
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** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Runs some sort of major corporation on the side, how else can he spend $200 a plate on his FieryRedhead RedHeadedHero dinner date?
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: Kyle, twice actually, once before he realized his powers by his original parents for an undisclosed reason, and then after he burned down the house with his fire powers, [[ParentalAbandonment he was abandoned by his foster parents]].
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Kyle's backstory on the discovery of his [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]] is both tragic and [[ADateWithRosiePalms humiliating]].
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Kyle's backstory on the discovery of his [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]] is both tragic and [[ADateWithRosiePalms humiliating]].
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** [[NinetiesAntiHero Hunter and Killer]] fit this trope quite well.
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* ParentalAbandonment: After his [[PlayingWithFire powers]] manifested and he [[DarkAndTroubledPast accidentaly burned down their home and scarred their child]], Kyle's foster parents couldn't even look him in the eye anymore.
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* CompensatingForSomething: The Annihilator admits that his supervillain moniker sounds like he's compensating for something.
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* PornNames: Kyle, a.k.a. Red Hot, admits his name is this, but in his defense he chose it when he was 12, based on his childhood nickname of '[[FieryRedhead Red]]' and the fact he had [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]].
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* PornNames: Kyle, a.k.a. Red Hot, admits his superhero name is this, but in his defense he chose it when he was 12, based on his childhood nickname of '[[FieryRedhead Red]]' and the fact he had [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]].
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** SuperStrength: [[Able to punch PunchedAcrossTheRoom]] Kyle several stories into the air ...
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** SuperStrength: [[Able [[PunchedAcrossTheRoom Able to punch PunchedAcrossTheRoom]] punch]] Kyle several stories into the air ...
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* SuperpowerLottery: There's a reason Annihilator is one of the most feared supervillains around:
** SuperStrength: [[Able to punch PunchedAcrossTheRoom]] Kyle several stories into the air ...
** SuperReflexes: ... then [[InASingleBound leap from building to building]] to catch him again.
** SuperSpeed: Catches a news story where Kyle and the Young Protectors are tending to an arson fire, and makes it to the scene within a few minutes.
** InASingleBound: Not quite able to make the leap to Hong Kong, but still ...
** NighInvulnerability: At least to cuts ([[PowerLimiter usually]]) and fire, as we've seen so far.
** HealingFactor: When he ''does'' take damage he can regenerate from his wounds in around ten minutes time.
** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Runs some sort of major corporation on the side, how else can he spend $200 a plate on his FieryRedhead dinner date?
** SuperStrength: [[Able to punch PunchedAcrossTheRoom]] Kyle several stories into the air ...
** SuperReflexes: ... then [[InASingleBound leap from building to building]] to catch him again.
** SuperSpeed: Catches a news story where Kyle and the Young Protectors are tending to an arson fire, and makes it to the scene within a few minutes.
** InASingleBound: Not quite able to make the leap to Hong Kong, but still ...
** NighInvulnerability: At least to cuts ([[PowerLimiter usually]]) and fire, as we've seen so far.
** HealingFactor: When he ''does'' take damage he can regenerate from his wounds in around ten minutes time.
** ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Runs some sort of major corporation on the side, how else can he spend $200 a plate on his FieryRedhead dinner date?
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* PornNames: Kyle, a.k.a. Red Hot, admits his name is this, but in his defense he chose it when he was 12, based on his childhood nickname of '[[FieryRedhead Red]]' and the fact he had [[PlayingWithFire fire powers]].
