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Imagine a FilmNoir DefectiveDetective cast in the role of a [[StarWars Jedi Knight]], fighting a humorously incompetent version of [[Franchise/StarTrek the Borg]], and you'll get the general idea.
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Imagine a FilmNoir DefectiveDetective cast in the role of a [[StarWars [[Franchise/StarWars Jedi Knight]], fighting a humorously incompetent version of [[Franchise/StarTrek the Borg]], and you'll get the general idea.
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A [[SciFiWebcomics science fiction webcomic]] by view, the artist behind ''Webcomic/NeverMindTheGap''. Compared to the latter, ''Space Pulp'' is a lighter work, and lies closer to the "soft" end of science fiction -- [[PulpMagazine as the name is meant to suggest]]. However, as with view's other comics, the reader needs to pay attention to follow the twists and turns of the story.
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A [[SciFiWebcomics science fiction webcomic]] by view, the artist behind ''Webcomic/NeverMindTheGap''. Compared to the latter, Creator/{{view}}. ''Space Pulp'' is a lighter work, and lies closer to the "soft" end of science fiction -- [[PulpMagazine as the name is meant to suggest]]. However, as with view's other comics, the reader needs to pay attention to follow the twists and turns of the story.
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IUEO now
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In this SpaceOpera, we follow [[AwesomeMcCoolname Iridium Lake]] -- a sort of interstellar KnightErrant [[KnightInSourArmour In Sour Armour]] -- as she attempts to save a species of kind-hearted but [[NobleSavage technologically backward]] aliens from conquest by [[TheEmpire Unity]] and its army of {{cyborg}} {{Super Soldier}}s.
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In this SpaceOpera, we follow [[AwesomeMcCoolname Iridium Lake]] Lake -- a sort of interstellar KnightErrant [[KnightInSourArmour In Sour Armour]] -- as she attempts to save a species of kind-hearted but [[NobleSavage technologically backward]] aliens from conquest by [[TheEmpire Unity]] and its army of {{cyborg}} {{Super Soldier}}s.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Members of Iridium Lake's species pick their own names, and they tend to have a flair for the dramatic.
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* TheEmpire: Unity.
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[[caption-width-right:344:"SPAAAACE PUUULLLP"]]
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Poison Monkeys]] were engineered as slaves to handle hazardous materials (which explains their heightened resistance to those). Until they rose and promptly exterminated their creators.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Poison Monkeys]] were engineered as slaves to handle hazardous materials (which explains their heightened resistance to those). Until they rose and promptly exterminated their creators.creators, likely [[spoiler:by poisoning the atmosphere with the very chemicals they were handling]].
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A [[SciFiWebcomics science fiction webcomic]] by view, the artist behind ''Webcomic/NeverMindTheGap''. Compared to the latter, ''Space Pulp'' is a lighter work, and lies [[MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness closer to the "soft" end]] of science fiction -- [[PulpMagazine as the name is meant to suggest]]. However, as with view's other comics, the reader needs to pay attention to follow the twists and turns of the story.
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A [[SciFiWebcomics science fiction webcomic]] by view, the artist behind ''Webcomic/NeverMindTheGap''. Compared to the latter, ''Space Pulp'' is a lighter work, and lies [[MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness closer to the "soft" end]] end of science fiction -- [[PulpMagazine as the name is meant to suggest]]. However, as with view's other comics, the reader needs to pay attention to follow the twists and turns of the story.
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* MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness: Level 2 -- Mohs/WorldOfPhlebotinum. Plenty of fictional physics and essentially magical powers, but there are also consistent rules for how these things work.
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* PsychicPowers: Iridium Lake is a {{seer}}, and can foresee different possible futures. The exact extent and limits of her powers are explored throughout the story. There are also several other kinds of psychic powers found in the setting. The [[MagicAIsMagicA rules of how they work]] become fairly important to the plot.
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* PsychicPowers: Iridium Lake is a {{seer}}, {{seer|s}}, and can foresee different possible futures. The exact extent and limits of her powers are explored throughout the story. There are also several other kinds of psychic powers found in the setting. The [[MagicAIsMagicA rules of how they work]] become fairly important to the plot.
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Those Two Bad Guys is replaced by Bumbling Henchmen Duo with a slightly different definition, as per this thread.
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: The two GenreSavvy Unity soldiers provide some exposition when first introduced. They become {{Recurring Character}}s, though they're too busy trying to stay alive to provide much exposition after that point.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Members of Iridium Lake's species pick their own names, and they tend to have a flare for the dramatic.
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* AwesomeMcCoolname: Members of Iridium Lake's species pick their own names, and they tend to have a flare flair for the dramatic.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Poison Monkeys]] were engineered as slaves to handle hazardous materials. Until they rose and promptly exterminated their creators.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Poison Monkeys]] were engineered as slaves to handle hazardous materials.materials (which explains their heightened resistance to those). Until they rose and promptly exterminated their creators.
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The comic concluded in March 2014, and the artist has moved onto another (equally NSFW) project, ''Scrub Diving'', followed by a (ditto) fantasy, ''Dragons and Silk''..
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The comic concluded in March 2014, and the artist has moved onto another (equally NSFW) project, ''Scrub Diving'', followed by a (ditto) fantasy, ''Dragons and Silk''..
Silk''.
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In this SpaceOpera, we follow [[AwesomeMcCoolname Iridium Lake]] -- a sort of interstellar KnightErrant [[KnightInSourArmour In Sour Armour]] -- as she attempts to save a species of kind-hearted but [[NobleSpaceSavage technologically backward]] aliens from conquest by [[TheEmpire Unity]] and its army of {{cyborg}} {{Super Soldier}}s.
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In this SpaceOpera, we follow [[AwesomeMcCoolname Iridium Lake]] -- a sort of interstellar KnightErrant [[KnightInSourArmour In Sour Armour]] -- as she attempts to save a species of kind-hearted but [[NobleSpaceSavage [[NobleSavage technologically backward]] aliens from conquest by [[TheEmpire Unity]] and its army of {{cyborg}} {{Super Soldier}}s.
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The comic concluded in March 2014, and the artist has moved onto another (equally NSFW) project, ''Scrub Diving''.
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The comic concluded in March 2014, and the artist has moved onto another (equally NSFW) project, ''Scrub Diving''.
Diving'', followed by a (ditto) fantasy, ''Dragons and Silk''..
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** WordofGod is that Iri's cigarettes help to reproduce the toxic atmosphere Poison Monkeys are accustomed to.
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Misuse. It's Genre Savvy, not just "savvy".
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* GenreSavvy: Two Unity {{Super Soldier}}s introduced near the start of the story turn out to be smart enough to ''get out of the way and hide'' as soon as the hero starts doing her thing. ("She's been meditating for eight hours." "... We're f***ed.") As a result, they end up being the only {{mooks}} to survive Iridium Lake's escape from the Unity prison. Unfortunately, their superiors mistake sensible cowardice for skill, and they're forced to tag along with the Unity task force pursuing Lake. They become {{Recurring Character}}s -- usually distinguishable by the way they always cautiously hang behind the other {{mooks}}.
** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced. When confronted by Iri, this villain looks like she's about to go into the usual EvilGloating while showing off her CoolButInefficient super-powers -- but instead she suddenly ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grabs a gun and shoots the hero]]''.
** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced. When confronted by Iri, this villain looks like she's about to go into the usual EvilGloating while showing off her CoolButInefficient super-powers -- but instead she suddenly ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grabs a gun and shoots the hero]]''.
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The comic concluded in March 2014, and the artist has moved onto another (equally NSFW) project, ''Scrub Diving''.
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* AsYouKnow: Lampshaded in the title of one page: "As you know, Bob".
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* LastOfHisKind: Unity's emperor is the last of his species, having been exiled before the extinction event.
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* LastOfHisKind: Unity's emperor [[spoiler:Unity's emperor]] is the last of his species, having been exiled before the extinction event.
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* HiveQueen / TheEmperor: Unity's leader is also their keystone.
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* LastOfHisKind: Unity's emperor is the last of his species, having been exiled before the extinction event.
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* PsychicStatic: Psychers disrupt other psychers' future perception just by being there.
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* TurnedAgainstTheirMasters: [[spoiler:Poison Monkeys]] were engineered as slaves to handle hazardous materials. Until they rose and promptly exterminated their creators.
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** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced -- when confronted by Iri, this villain looks like she's about to go into the usual EvilGloating while showing off her CoolButInefficient super-powers -- but instead she suddenly ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grabs a gun and shoots the hero]]''.
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** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced -- when faced. When confronted by Iri, this villain looks like she's about to go into the usual EvilGloating while showing off her CoolButInefficient super-powers -- but instead she suddenly ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grabs a gun and shoots the hero]]''.
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** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced -- when confronted by Iri, this villain looks like she's about to go into the usual EvilGloating while showing off her CoolButInefficient evil powers, but instead she suddenly ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grabs a gun and shoot the hero]]''.
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** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced -- when confronted by Iri, this villain looks like she's about to go into the usual EvilGloating while showing off her CoolButInefficient evil powers, super-powers -- but instead she suddenly ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grabs a gun and shoot shoots the hero]]''.
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The \"couldn\'t be remotely disabled\" bit doesn\'t really make sense out of context, I think — could cofuse someone who hadn\'t read the page.
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** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced -- when confronted by Iri, this one actually had villain looks like she's about to go into the sense to usual EvilGloating while showing off her CoolButInefficient evil powers, but instead she suddenly ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grab grabs a gun that couldn't be remotely disabled, and shoot the hero]]''.
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** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced -- this one actually had the sense to ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grab a gun and shoot the hero]]''.
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** In a flashback, we also see a DangerouslyGenreSavvy villain that Iridium once faced -- this one actually had the sense to ''[[WhyDontYouJustShootHim grab a gun that couldn't be remotely disabled, and shoot the hero]]''.
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There's also some romance and sex, some twisted humour, lots of PsychicPowers, and the occasional SpacePirate.
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There's also some romance and sex, sex (including '''[[NotSafeForWork NSFW]]''' pages, beware), some twisted humour, lots of PsychicPowers, and the occasional SpacePirate.
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Imagine a FilmNoir DefectiveDetective cast in the role of a [[StarWars Jedi Knight]], fighting a humorously incompetent version of [[StarTrek the Borg]], and you'll get the general idea.
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Imagine a FilmNoir DefectiveDetective cast in the role of a [[StarWars Jedi Knight]], fighting a humorously incompetent version of [[StarTrek [[Franchise/StarTrek the Borg]], and you'll get the general idea.
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* TheFederation: The Space Federation, which occasionally fights with Unity, and may be headed for full-out war. It is far from being an utopia -- there is a lot of FantasticRacism amongst the Federation's citizens, and the occasional WretchedHive here and there. Iridium Lake describes the Space Federation as "very nice, in the places I never go."
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* TheFederation: The Space Federation, which occasionally fights with against Unity, and may be headed for full-out war. It is far from being an utopia -- there is a lot of FantasticRacism amongst the Federation's citizens, and the occasional WretchedHive here and there. Iridium Lake describes the Space Federation as "very nice, in the places I never go."
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* TheFederation: The Space Federation, which must occasionally fight against the Unity, and may be headed for full-out war. It is far from being an utopia -- there is still some FantasticRacism amongst the Federation's citizens, and the occasional WretchedHive along its seedy underbelly. Iridium Lake describes the Space Federation as "very nice, in the places I never go."
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* TheFederation: The Space Federation, which must occasionally fight against the fights with Unity, and may be headed for full-out war. It is far from being an utopia -- there is still some a lot of FantasticRacism amongst the Federation's citizens, and the occasional WretchedHive along its seedy underbelly.here and there. Iridium Lake describes the Space Federation as "very nice, in the places I never go."
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* ShoutOut:
** A few to ''StarWars'', such as the distinction between diplomatic ships and blockade runners
** All on-page lines from the in-story movie are ''Comicbook/{{Doom}}'' quotes.
** A few to ''StarWars'', such as the distinction between diplomatic ships and blockade runners
** All on-page lines from the in-story movie are ''Comicbook/{{Doom}}'' quotes.
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* ActionGirl: The setting offers a refreshingly gender-balanced cast of action heroes (and villains). Iridium Lake is the greatest action girl of them all, of course.
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* MagicAIsMagicA: There are consistent, important rules as to how the various PsychicPowers found in the setting work. The various other forms of AppliedPhlebotinum are also consistently handled.