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''Rocket Member'' is an unfinished ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fan-comic by hopelessromantic721 on Website/{{Deviantart}}. It's a Meowth/Pikachu themed story where all the Pokémon are [[AnthropomorphicPersonification humanized]].
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''Rocket Member'' is an unfinished ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' ''[[Anime/PokemonTheSeries Pokémon]]'' fan-comic by hopelessromantic721 on Website/{{Deviantart}}. It's a Meowth/Pikachu themed story where all the Pokémon are [[AnthropomorphicPersonification humanized]].
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* PrecisionFStrike: Meowth curses Persian out for rubbing in his mistake:
-->Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Pichu brothers are Pikachu's kid brothers.
-->Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Pichu brothers are Pikachu's kid brothers.
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* TokenMiniMoe: Mime Jr. is an adorable little girl and is the youngest Team Rocket member shown. [[spoiler:She may, or may not, have been killed in a blast along with the rest of Meowth's friends]].
* PrecisionFStrike: Meowth curses Persian out for rubbing in his mistake:
-->Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Pichu brothers are Pikachu's kid brothers.
* PrecisionFStrike: Meowth curses Persian out for rubbing in his mistake:
-->Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Pichu brothers are Pikachu's kid brothers.
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* TokenMiniMoe: Mime Jr. is an adorable little girl and is the youngest Team Rocket member shown. [[spoiler:She may, or may not, have been killed in a blast along with the rest of Meowth's friends]]. \n* PrecisionFStrike: Meowth curses Persian out for rubbing in his mistake: \n-->Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!\n* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Pichu brothers are Pikachu's kid brothers.
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* AdaptedOut: All the humans except for Giovanni and most of their Pokémon as well.
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* AdaptedOut: All the humans are absent, except for Giovanni and most Giovanni. Most of their Pokémon are as well.
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* {{Animesque}}: It's styled after {{doujinshi}}.
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* {{Animesque}}: It's The comic is styled after Japanese {{doujinshi}}.
* DeadFic: The comic took 5 years to reach 50 pages. It hasn't been updated since 2012 (and on a page lampshading the slowness of the comic, at that).
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* DeathOfAChild: It's implied that [[spoiler:Togepi]] was killed in an explosion.
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* SamusIsAGirl: Pikachu first appears wearing jeans and with her hoodie up, so people mistake her for a boy. It only becomes apparent she's female when she charges up and her hood gets knocked off.
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* SamusIsAGirl: Pikachu first appears wearing jeans and with her hoodie up, so people mistake her for a boy. It only becomes apparent that she's female when she charges up and her hood gets knocked off.
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The story starts with Meowth being kicked out of Team Rocket for not stopping an accident that killed several people. While in the forest, he comes across several Pokémon being attacked by Team Rocket. Suddenly an unusually powerful Pikachu comes along and knocks out the attackers. This is the start of how Meowth and Pikachu left.
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The story starts with Meowth being kicked out of Team Rocket for not stopping an accident that killed several people. While in the forest, he comes across several Pokémon being attacked by Team Rocket. Suddenly an unusually powerful Pikachu comes along and knocks out the attackers. This is the start of how Meowth and Pikachu left.
met.
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** Pokéballs are used in order to enslave gijinka. Only bad people like Team Rocket use them.
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** Pokéballs Poké Balls are used in order to enslave gijinka. Only bad people like Team Rocket use them.
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The story starts with Meowth being kicked out of Team Rocket for causing an accident that killed several people.
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The story starts with Meowth being kicked out of Team Rocket for causing not stopping an accident that killed several people.
people. While in the forest, he comes across several Pokémon being attacked by Team Rocket. Suddenly an unusually powerful Pikachu comes along and knocks out the attackers. This is the start of how Meowth and Pikachu left.
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* TokenMiniMoe: Both Togepi and Mime Jr. are the adorable little girls of the series.
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* TokenMiniMoe: Both Togepi and Mime Jr. are the is an adorable little girls of girl and is the series.youngest Team Rocket member shown. [[spoiler:She may, or may not, have been killed in a blast along with the rest of Meowth's friends]].
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* GratuitousJapanese: Mime Jr. refers to Meowth as "onii-sama" and Pokémon are gijinka".
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* GratuitousJapanese: Mime Jr. refers to Meowth as "onii-sama" "onii-sama", Meowth once says "itai" (instead of "ouch"), and humanized Pokémon are gijinka"."gijinka".
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* MythologyGag: Pikachu and Meowth share an apple like in " ".
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* MythologyGag: Pikachu and Meowth share an apple like in " "."A Scare To Remember".
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* AdaptedOut: All the humans except for Giovanni and most of their Pokémon as well.
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* ArtEvolution: There was a shift from hand-drawn to Photoshop in volume 2.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Meowth breaks it to complain about how deep the hole he's in is, as he's been falling for several pages.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Meowth breaks it to complain about how deep the hole he's in is, as he's been falling for several pages.
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* ArtEvolution: There was a shift from hand-drawn to Photoshop in volume 2.2 but then a shift back later. The comic gets slightly less animesque as time goes on and the art-style improves as well. There was a several month gap between pages 48 and 49, and it ''shows''.
*BreakingTheFourthWall: BreakingTheFourthWall:
** Meowth breaks it to complain about how deep the hole he's in is, as he's been falling for severalpages.pages.
** Pikachu breaks to wall to lampshade how slow the comic updates are.
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** Meowth breaks it to complain about how deep the hole he's in is, as he's been falling for several
** Pikachu breaks to wall to lampshade how slow the comic updates are.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Pokéballs are used in order to enslave gijinka. Only bad people like Team Rocket use them.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** Pokéballs are used in order to enslave gijinka. Only bad people like Team Rocket usethem. them.
** Team Rocket aren't just greedy Pokémon stealers. They enslave Pokémon gijinka.
** Pokéballs are used in order to enslave gijinka. Only bad people like Team Rocket use
** Team Rocket aren't just greedy Pokémon stealers. They enslave Pokémon gijinka.
* ArtEvolution: There was a shift from hand-drawn to Photoshop in volume 2.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Meowth breaks it to complain about how deep the hole he's in is, as he's been falling for several pages.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Meowth breaks it to complain about how deep the hole he's in is, as he's been falling for several pages.
* ExpressiveHair: Pikachu's hair builds up static when she's angry.
* InterspeciesRomance:
** Pikachu's mother is a Marill. Her DisappearedDad is either a Pikachu or Raichu.
** The comic ships Meowth and Pikachu together.
** Pikachu's mother is a Marill. Her DisappearedDad is either a Pikachu or Raichu.
** The comic ships Meowth and Pikachu together.
* MythologyGag: Pikachu and Meowth share an apple like in " ".
* ParentalAbandonment: Pikachu's father ran off after [[spoiler:his wife's death]]. Her mother [[spoiler:died fighting Team Rocket]].
* TheRunaway: Pikachu ran away from her brothers to get stronger.
* ParentalAbandonment: Pikachu's father ran off after [[spoiler:his wife's death]]. Her mother [[spoiler:died fighting Team Rocket]].
* TheRunaway: Pikachu ran away from her brothers to get stronger.
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-->''Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!''already!''
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Pichu brothers are Pikachu's kid brothers.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: The Pichu brothers are Pikachu's kid brothers.
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* CuteFangs: Arbok has visible fangs to emphasis her snake qualities.
* EyesAwaysShut: Wobbuffet keeps his eyes shut at all times.
* EyesAwaysShut: Wobbuffet keeps his eyes shut at all times.
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* CuteFangs: CuteLittleFangs: Arbok has visible fangs to emphasis her snake qualities.
qualities. It would be FangsAreEvil if she wasn't so ineffectual and kind.
*EyesAwaysShut: EyesAlwaysShut: Wobbuffet keeps his eyes shut at all times.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Meowth spends a lot more time brooding than he does in canon.
* AdaptationalVillainy: Pokéballs are used in order to enslave gijinka. Only bad people like Team Rocket use them.
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* GratuitousJapanese: Mime Jr. refers to Meowth as "onii-sama" and Pokémon are gijinka".
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* SamusIsAGirl: Pikachu first appears wearing jeans and with her hoodie up, so people mistake her for a boy. It only becomes apparent she's female when she charges up and her hood gets knocked off.
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* MoeAnthropomorphism: ''Rocket Members'' is a romance fan-comic starring {{animesque}} LittleBitBeasty versions of Meowth and Pikachu from the ''Pokemon'' anime. They can still use their powers as well.
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* MoeAnthropomorphism: ''Rocket Members'' is a romance fan-comic starring {{animesque}} LittleBitBeasty LittleBitBeastly versions of Meowth and Pikachu from the ''Pokemon'' anime. They can still use their powers as well.
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* GenderFlip: Pikachu is a female in the comic. This is because the comic predates Pikachu being confirmed male.
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* GenderFlip: Pikachu is a female in the comic. This is because the comic predates Pikachu being confirmed male. a male.
* MoeAnthropomorphism: ''Rocket Members'' is a romance fan-comic starring {{animesque}} LittleBitBeasty versions of Meowth and Pikachu from the ''Pokemon'' anime. They can still use their powers as well.
* MoeAnthropomorphism: ''Rocket Members'' is a romance fan-comic starring {{animesque}} LittleBitBeasty versions of Meowth and Pikachu from the ''Pokemon'' anime. They can still use their powers as well.
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''Rocket Member'' is an unfinished ''Anime/{{Pokemon}}'' fan-comic by hopelessromantic721 on Website/{{Deviantart}}. It's a Meowth/Pikachu themed story where all the Pokémon are [[AnthropomorphicPersonification humanized]].
The story starts with Meowth being kicked out of Team Rocket for causing an accident that killed people.
You can view the comic [[https://www.deviantart.com/hopelessromantic721/art/Rocket-Member-Cover-73042112 starting here]].
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!!''Rocket Member'' provides examples of:
* {{Animesque}}: It's styled after {{doujinshi}}.
* GenderFlip: Pikachu is a female in the comic. This is because the comic predates Pikachu being confirmed male.
* TokenMiniMoe: Both Togepi and Mime Jr. are the adorable little girls of the series.
* PrecisionFStrike: Meowth curses Persian out for rubbing in his mistake:
-->''Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!''
The story starts with Meowth being kicked out of Team Rocket for causing an accident that killed people.
You can view the comic [[https://www.deviantart.com/hopelessromantic721/art/Rocket-Member-Cover-73042112 starting here]].
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!!''Rocket Member'' provides examples of:
* {{Animesque}}: It's styled after {{doujinshi}}.
* GenderFlip: Pikachu is a female in the comic. This is because the comic predates Pikachu being confirmed male.
* TokenMiniMoe: Both Togepi and Mime Jr. are the adorable little girls of the series.
* PrecisionFStrike: Meowth curses Persian out for rubbing in his mistake:
-->''Do me a favor! Go burn and rot in hell! Keep your damn dirty mouth closed already!''
