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[[caption-width-right:300:Our '[[DesignatedHero Heroes]]']]
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[[caption-width-right:300:Our '[[DesignatedHero Heroes]]']]
heroes]]'.]]
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The artist has drawn a prologue comic which has been added to the comics archives but originally featured on the artists [[http://tousebothsyllables.deviantart.com/ Deviant art account page ]]
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The artist has drawn a prologue comic which has been added to the comics archives but originally featured on the artists artist's [[http://tousebothsyllables.deviantart.com/ Deviant art DeviantArt account page page.]]
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While the comic is no longer on it's original site, it is available on the [[https://www.cassiecartoons.com/kila-ilo-index/ artists website.]] and [[https://tapas.io/episode/1133730 tapas]]
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While the comic is no longer on it's its original site, it is available on the [[https://www.cassiecartoons.com/kila-ilo-index/ artists website.]] artist's website]] and [[https://tapas.io/episode/1133730 tapas]]
tapas.]]
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* AerithAndBob: the two main characters, being from different alien races will do that.
* AlienHair: Kila's 'Hair' is actually a crest, made of finger nail like material.
* AlienHair: Kila's 'Hair' is actually a crest, made of finger nail like material.
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* AerithAndBob: the The two main characters, being characters. Being from different alien races will do that.
* AlienHair: Kila's 'Hair' is actually a crest, made offinger nail like fingernail-like material.
* AlienHair: Kila's 'Hair' is actually a crest, made of
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* BlackSheep:Richard Ferris, a polite easy going, timid guy from a respected crime family. His mother isn't happy with his career choice [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1099357/bye-mom/ (here)]]
* CommonTongue: Galactic standard, which Kila speaks with an accent.
* DismantledMacGuffin: The weapon (maybe)
* CommonTongue: Galactic standard, which Kila speaks with an accent.
* DismantledMacGuffin: The weapon (maybe)
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* BlackSheep:Richard Ferris, a polite easy going, timid guy from a respected crime family. His mother isn't happy with his career choice [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1099357/bye-mom/ (here)]]
His mother isn't happy with his career choice.]]
* CommonTongue: Galactic standard, which Kila speaks with anaccent.
accent.
* DismantledMacGuffin: The weapon(maybe)(maybe).
* CommonTongue: Galactic standard, which Kila speaks with an
* DismantledMacGuffin: The weapon
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* HandicappedBadass: Kila. She's deaf in one ear, took a stab wound in the side, a hammer smashed against her hand, punched a door, her arm has been implied to have been severed at one point and directly shown to have been badly dislocated, and her spiky subordinate unintentionally stabs her with needles when they have physical contact. She also was born with birth defects and cannot taste or smell. Also she's kind of short. Despite this, she's probably done more actual work than most of the cast, has very good aim with a gun, and is pretty believable when she boasts to being able to kill monsters in 10 minutes flat.
* FTLRadio: allowing you to yell at people across the galaxy [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1188683/the-phone/ at 4am]]
* HeadTiltinglyKinky: [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1292354/random/ researching on the internet]]
* HolographicDisguise: used to blend in with the locals, it also makes Richard look like a dog, rabbit, thing.
* FTLRadio: allowing you to yell at people across the galaxy [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1188683/the-phone/ at 4am]]
* HeadTiltinglyKinky: [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1292354/random/ researching on the internet]]
* HolographicDisguise: used to blend in with the locals, it also makes Richard look like a dog, rabbit, thing.
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* HandicappedBadass: Kila. She's deaf in one ear, took a stab wound in the side, a hammer smashed against her hand, punched a door, her arm has been implied to have been severed at one point and directly shown to have been badly dislocated, and her spiky subordinate unintentionally stabs her with needles when they have physical contact. She also was born with birth defects and cannot taste or smell. Also Also, she's kind of short. Despite this, she's probably done more actual work than most of the cast, has very good aim with a gun, and is pretty believable when she boasts to being able to kill monsters in 10 minutes flat.
* FTLRadio: allowing you to yell at people across the galaxy [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1188683/the-phone/ at 4am]]
* HeadTiltinglyKinky: [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1292354/random/ researching Researching on the internet]]
internet.]]
* HolographicDisguise:used Used to blend in with the locals, it locals. It also makes Richard look like a dog, rabbit, thing.dog-rabbit-thing.
* HolographicDisguise:
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* InsignificantLittleBluePlanet: The aliens didn't even know earth was inhabited by intelligent life, let alone they were technologically advanced.
* LostSuperweapon: What the two were sent to earth to look for, well the pieces of it anyway.
* LostSuperweapon: What the two were sent to earth to look for, well the pieces of it anyway.
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* InsignificantLittleBluePlanet: The aliens didn't even know earth Earth was inhabited by intelligent life, let alone they were technologically advanced.
* LostSuperweapon: What the two were sent toearth Earth to look for, well for -- well, the pieces of it it, anyway.
* LostSuperweapon: What the two were sent to
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* MoleMen: Rooter, apparently, a claim supported by his name and the fact that he [[RedRightHand always wears oven mitts...]]
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* MoleMen: Rooter, apparently, a claim supported by his name and the fact that he [[RedRightHand always wears oven mitts...]]mitts]]...
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* {{Omniglot}}: Kila states that she speaks five languages and learns new ones quickly, apparently a species trait. She does seem to have a noticable accent however.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The heroes - a respectable scientist, a really sketchy scientist, and a guy from a family of criminals. Kila seems to have a tendency to get roped into especially shady groups of these.
* RunningOnAllFours: Kila, although she does mention she could [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1169026/im-running-im-running/ break her fingers]]
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The heroes - a respectable scientist, a really sketchy scientist, and a guy from a family of criminals. Kila seems to have a tendency to get roped into especially shady groups of these.
* RunningOnAllFours: Kila, although she does mention she could [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1169026/im-running-im-running/ break her fingers]]
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* {{Omniglot}}: Kila states that she speaks five languages and learns new ones quickly, apparently a species trait. She does seem to have a noticable accent noticeable accent, however.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The heroes- -- a respectable scientist, a really sketchy scientist, and a guy from a family of criminals. Kila seems to have a tendency to get roped into especially shady groups of these.
* RunningOnAllFours: Kila, although she does mention she could [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1169026/im-running-im-running/ break herfingers]]fingers]].
* SubspaceAnsible: Allowing you to yell at people across the galaxy [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1188683/the-phone/ at 4am]].
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The heroes
* RunningOnAllFours: Kila, although she does mention she could [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1169026/im-running-im-running/ break her
* SubspaceAnsible: Allowing you to yell at people across the galaxy [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1188683/the-phone/ at 4am]].
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* {{Teleportation}}: Can be used to send small items long distances but their is not indication it can be used on larger or organic items.
* TranslatorMicrobes: May involve [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1310313/implant/ brain surgery]]
* TranslatorMicrobes: May involve [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1310313/implant/ brain surgery]]
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* {{Teleportation}}: Can be used to send small items long distances distances, but their there is not no indication it can be used on larger or organic items.
* TranslatorMicrobes: May involve [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1310313/implant/ brainsurgery]]surgery]].
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* TranslatorMicrobes: May involve [[http://theworldisyours.smackjeeves.com/comics/1310313/implant/ brain
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* Teleportation: {{Teleportation}}: Can be used to send small items long distances but their is not indication it can be used on larger or organic items.
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