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here]]. The comic concluded in October 2017 after sixteen chapters and three hundred and ninety pages.
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* SupernaturalGoldEyes: Dara's MoodRingEyes turn gold when she's using her powers to "convince" someone.
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* SupernaturalGoldEyes: Dara's MoodRingEyes eyes turn gold when she's using her powers to "convince" someone.
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: Dara has a few eye tropes going, such as GlowingEyes, and EyeColorChange that are blue when she's calm, but go RedEyesTakeWarning and SupernaturalGoldEyes given the proper triggers.
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: Dara has a few eye tropes going, such as GlowingEyes, and EyeColorChange that EyeColorChange: Dara's are blue when she's calm, but go RedEyesTakeWarning and SupernaturalGoldEyes given the proper triggers.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Dara's MoodRingEyes switch to red when she's angry.
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* LegCling: Mac to Roan -- it's in the middle of the fight and they are after her, not him -- she's trying to hide.
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* LegCling: [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-6/page-127/ Mac to Roan Roan]] -- it's in the middle of the fight and they are after her, not him -- she's trying to hide.
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* PintsizedPowerhouse: Dara is the shortest of the main characters, but she really kicks butt thanks to her training [[spoiler:and her Ancient blood.]]
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: Dara has a fair few eye tropes going:
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** KaleidoscopeEyes: They default to blue, however...
*** RedEyesTakeWarning: They switch to red when she's angry, and become SupernaturalGoldEyes when she's using her powers to "convince" someone.
** GlowingEyes: hidden behind OpaqueLenses.
** KaleidoscopeEyes: They default to blue, however...
*** RedEyesTakeWarning: They switch to red when she's angry, and become SupernaturalGoldEyes when she's using her powers to "convince" someone.
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* ExoticEyeDesigns: Dara has a fair few eye tropes going:
** GlowingEyes: hidden behind OpaqueLenses.
** KaleidoscopeEyes: They default to blue, however...
*** RedEyesTakeWarning: They switch to redgoing, such as GlowingEyes, and MoodRingEyes that are blue when she's angry, calm, but go RedEyesTakeWarning and become SupernaturalGoldEyes when she's using her powers to "convince" someone.given the proper triggers.
** GlowingEyes: hidden behind OpaqueLenses.
** KaleidoscopeEyes: They default to blue, however...
*** RedEyesTakeWarning: They switch to red
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* {{Squee}} Mac, for pretty much anything involving Roan or high technologytechnology.
* SupernaturalGoldEyes: Dara's MoodRingEyes turn gold when she's using her powers to "convince" someone.
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* WhamLine: The implication at [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-16/page-356/ the start of chapter 16]] is that [[spoiler: Auhle is actually a human, and is likely the guinea-pig for the device]].
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* OutGambited: Elnor blackmails [[spoiler: the King of Eldendore into altering the terms of her contract - unfortunately, said blackmail [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-11/page-265/ leads to him contracting her to KILL Dara instead of bodyguarding her]].]]
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* OutGambited: OutGambitted: Elnor blackmails [[spoiler: the King of Eldendore into altering the terms of her contract - unfortunately, said blackmail [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-11/page-265/ leads to him contracting her to KILL Dara instead of bodyguarding her]].]]
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Olgosto, by virtue of being something of a snob, even to those he travels with [[BullyingADragon even if he should really know better]].
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* OutGambited: Elnor blackmails [[spoiler: the King of Eldanore Eldendore into altering the terms of her contract - unfortunately, said blackmail [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-11/page-265/ leads to him contracting her to KILL Dara instead of bodyguarding her]].]]
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** The regular civilians [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-11/page-247/ aren't sometimes worse]].
** The Eldendorian merchant Dara saves from the Golems, who bashes her over the head with a pipe as soon as her back is turned
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** The regular civilians Eldendorian merchant Dara saves from the Golems, [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-11/page-247/ aren't sometimes worse]].
** The Eldendorian merchant Dara saves from the Golems,who bashes her over the head with a pipe as soon as her back is turnedturned]].
*** Eldendore in general takes the FantasticRacism to its logical extreme, [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-12/page-268/ as the King wants Roan imprisoned even after he'd helped the guards]].
** The Eldendorian merchant Dara saves from the Golems,
*** Eldendore in general takes the FantasticRacism to its logical extreme, [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-12/page-268/ as the King wants Roan imprisoned even after he'd helped the guards]].
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** The regular civilians [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-11/page-247/ aren't sometimes worse]].
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Mac, at least when it comes to technology.
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Mac, at least when it comes [[WrenchWench to technology.technology]].
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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Mac, at least when it comes to technology.
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* TheDogBitesBack: A subdued version, [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-5/page-114/ but Roan doesn't lift a finger to help Olgosto]].
-->'''Mac''': Aren't we on his side?\\
'''Roan''': He's not on my side.
-->'''Mac''': Aren't we on his side?\\
'''Roan''': He's not on my side.
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* WeAREStrugglingTogether: The Watchers are a [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-4/page-085/ decidedly fractious group]].
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* WhatTheHellHero: Roan rightfully [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-4/page-080/ calls out the Watchers Council]] for arguing that he should be locked up minutes after he'd [[NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished helped fend off an attack on the town]].
-->'''Council member''': I-it's our duty to-\\
'''Roan''': '''To let me fight your battles for you and push me into a cell? That's your duty?'''\\
'''Council member''': Erm... Well, we've sworn to... that is, I mean...
-->'''Council member''': I-it's our duty to-\\
'''Roan''': '''To let me fight your battles for you and push me into a cell? That's your duty?'''\\
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Elnor bursts out laughing after ]]http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-3/page-065/ this quip]] from Roan.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Elnor bursts out laughing after ]]http://impurebloodwebcomic.[[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-3/page-065/ this quip]] from Roan.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Elnor bursts out laughing after ]]http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-3/page-065/ this quip]] from Roan.
-->'''Elnor''': My head is pounding from the jostling in the carriage.
-->'''Roan''': Is that what they called [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl the ale in Twin Pass]]?
-->'''Elnor''': My head is pounding from the jostling in the carriage.
-->'''Roan''': Is that what they called [[HardDrinkingPartyGirl the ale in Twin Pass]]?
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* EvilLawyerJoke: The section Roan is initially held in includes Gladiators, Murderers, Thieves, Rapists, and Lawyers.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Roan is ordered to "throw down your arms", [[http://impurebloodwebcomic.com/comic/chapter-1/page-004/ and he drops the arm]] [[AnArmAndALeg he'd torn from the final combatant he'd killed that day]].
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* RunningGag: Roan tearing off Caspian's sleeves. The last time Caspian actually wanted it because it was torn and the flapping was annoying him.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Caspian is an inversion. Practically none of his features would look out of place on an African character except for the pale color of his skin. It reminds a thoughtful reader how much a "white is normal" attitude underlies the very concept of the ambiguously brown trope.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Elnor arranges with Caspian's father to get herself and Dara wounded as a way out of her contract. [[spoiler: We later learn that this specifically won't get her out of her contract, so what's her game?]]. Unfortunately, her attempt at loopholing the Assasin's Assassin's Guild ends up backfiring on her.
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* TheWrongfulHeirToTheThrone: The current king, who may be Dara's "father" or stepfather, it's not made clear, king is the King Regent, e.g. the former queen's consort, meaning he is not king in his own right and his claim to the throne comes through Dara. This is something he the princess. He is trying to rectify this by having Dara killed.herkilled.
** Based on the merchant's reaction it's pretty obvious the populace would consider [[spoiler: Dara]] a wrongful heir based solely on her ancient blood.
** Based on the merchant's reaction it's pretty obvious the populace would consider [[spoiler: Dara]] a wrongful heir based solely on her ancient blood.
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