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* LovingAShadow: Raphael falls in love with Ariadne because of seeing the way she skillfully navigates situations and believes her to be perfect, but as Ariadne knows she is far from perfect and the only reason she seems so intelligent is because of her knowledge of the previous timeline. Raphael’s view of her is burdensome and she feels if she was with him she would struggle to live up to his perfect image of her so she rejects his confession.

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* BrotherSisterIncest: [[spoiler: Filippo IV, the king of Gallico, was sleeping with his sister Princess Auguste and even had a child, Jean, with her.]]



* PsychopathicWomanchild: Grand Duchess Lariessa de Valois. She lived her entire life in the shadow of her more accomplished and prettier deceased older sister, which resulted in her being extremely insecure and socially awkward. However, it also results in her latching onto anyone who showed her a scrap of attention and instantly reaching {{Yandere}} levels of infatuation to the point of planning murder and endangering political situations.

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* PsychopathicWomanchild: Grand Duchess Lariessa de Valois. She lived her entire life in the shadow of her more accomplished and prettier deceased older sister, which resulted in her being extremely insecure and socially awkward. However, it also results in her latching onto anyone who showed her a scrap of attention and instantly reaching {{Yandere}} levels of infatuation to the point of planning murder and endangering political situations. Eventually she descends into delusions of Alfonso loving her back.
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* AmputativeSentencing: Subverted, since it's not a total amputation, but after Zanobi almost kills Ariadne during the hunting competition, the cardinal orders to cut the tendons in all his limbs.

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* AmputativeSentencing: Subverted, Downplayed, since it's not a total amputation, but after Zanobi almost kills Ariadne during the hunting competition, the cardinal orders to cut the tendons in all his limbs.



** This is Ariadne's MO in general: earlier, she convinces a famous boutique to grant Lucrezia a rebate in order to lure her into messing around with ledgers again, and to expose her to the cardinal.

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** This is Ariadne's MO in general: earlier, she convinces a famous boutique to grant Lucrezia a rebate in order to lure her into messing around with ledgers again, and to expose her to the cardinal.



** Ariadne is also not averse to using those, especially against Isabella.

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** Ariadne is also not averse to using those, those either, especially against Isabella.



** When stumbling onto the scene of what she intially assumes to be rape, Isabella actually plans either scream or bring some help, until she realizes it's just some pair having consensual sex.

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** When stumbling onto the scene of what she intially assumes to be rape, Isabella actually plans either scream considers screaming or bring bringing some help, until she realizes it's just some pair couple having consensual sex.



* FamilyEyeResemblance: Ariadne and Arabella have green eyes like their father. Ippolito and Isabella, have the purple eyes of their mother, [[spoiler: but it turns out Ippolito is not really the cardinal's son, while Isabella's parentage remains ambiguously unadressed.]]

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* FamilyEyeResemblance: Ariadne and Arabella have green eyes like their father. Ippolito and Isabella, Isabella have the purple eyes of their mother, [[spoiler: but it turns out Ippolito is not really the cardinal's son, while Isabella's parentage remains ambiguously unadressed.]]



* FlowerMotif: In the first timeline Ariadne is compared by Cesare to a lily of the valley, a common flower found everywhere that seems to be bowing, "but will never be as cherished as the rose that blooms in a greenhouse" as Isabella notes. In the second timeline Cesare sents Ariadne roses along with other presents.

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* FlowerMotif: In the first timeline Ariadne is compared by Cesare to a lily of the valley, a common flower found everywhere that seems to be bowing, "but will never be as cherished as the rose that blooms in a greenhouse" greenhouse", as Isabella notes. In the second timeline Cesare sents Ariadne roses along with other presents.



* TheMarvelousDeer: In both timelines Cesare was obsessed with killing the legendary golden stag, since slaying it made one destined to become the king. In the second timeline he and Ariadne encounter it after Cesare rescues her during the hunting competition, [[spoiler: but, surprisingly, Cesare gives up on killing it to make sure Ariadne comes back safely to the camp]].

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* TheMarvelousDeer: In both timelines Cesare was obsessed with killing hunting the legendary mythical golden stag, since slaying it made one destined to become the king. In the second timeline he and Ariadne encounter it after Cesare rescues her during the hunting competition, [[spoiler: but, surprisingly, Cesare gives up on killing pursuing it to make sure Ariadne comes back safely to the camp]].
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** Rubina wins no prizes either having been known to slap and yell at Cesare.
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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Hardly anyone, save for a handful of characters, could be called good in this story. Ariadne is a scheming, vindictive ManipulativeBitch who had been a full blown villainess in her first life, while her opponents are her equally scheming and vindictive stepmother and half-sister, her power-hungry ex-BastardBoyfriend, PsychopathicWomanchild

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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Hardly anyone, save for a handful of characters, could be called good in this story. Ariadne is a scheming, vindictive ManipulativeBitch who had been a full blown villainess in her first life, while her opponents are her equally scheming and vindictive stepmother and half-sister, her power-hungry ex-BastardBoyfriend, PsychopathicWomanchild former BastardBoyfriend and his mother, [[PsychopathicWomanchild Psychopathic]] [[{{Yandere}} Womanchild]] foreign princess and [[spoiler: [[DomesticAbuse wife-beating]], syphilitic failure of a king]].



* PsychopathicWomanchild: Lariessa de Valois. She lived her entire life in the shadow of her more accomplished and prettier deceased older sister, which resulted in her being extremely insecure and socially awkward. However, it also results in her latching onto anyone who showed her a scrap of attention and instantly reaching {{Yandere}} levels of infatuation to the point of planning murder and endangering political situations.

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* PsychopathicWomanchild: Grand Duchess Lariessa de Valois. She lived her entire life in the shadow of her more accomplished and prettier deceased older sister, which resulted in her being extremely insecure and socially awkward. However, it also results in her latching onto anyone who showed her a scrap of attention and instantly reaching {{Yandere}} levels of infatuation to the point of planning murder and endangering political situations.

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* BlackAndGrayMorality: Hardly anyone, save for a handful of characters, could be called good in this story. Ariadne is a scheming, vindictive ManipulativeBitch who had been a full blown villainess in her first life, while her opponents are her equally scheming and vindictive stepmother and half-sister, her power-hungry ex-BastardBoyfriend, PsychopathicWomanchild



** Ariadne is also not averse to using those, especially against Isabella.



** Later the cardinal banishes Lucrezia from his house [[spoiler: for attempting to perform magic ritual]] in fear she would eventually attract the attention of the Inquisition and cause their entire family to be burned at stake.

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** Later the cardinal banishes Lucrezia from his house [[spoiler: for attempting to perform a magic ritual]] in fear she would eventually attract the attention of the Inquisition and cause their entire family to be burned at stake.



* TheMarvelousDeer: In both timelines Cesare was obsessed with killing the legendary golden stag, since slaying it made one destined to become the king. In the second timeline both him and Ariadne encounter it after Cesare rescues her during the hunting competition, [[spoiler: but, surprisingly, Cesare gives up on killing it to make sure Ariadne comes back safely to the camp]].

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* TheMarvelousDeer: In both timelines Cesare was obsessed with killing the legendary golden stag, since slaying it made one destined to become the king. In the second timeline both him he and Ariadne encounter it after Cesare rescues her during the hunting competition, [[spoiler: but, surprisingly, Cesare gives up on killing it to make sure Ariadne comes back safely to the camp]].



* SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains: While "hero" might be a bit of a stretch, Ariadne dresses much more conservatively and in more somber colors than Lucrezia and Isabella. This is also part of her deliberate ploy to come across as more sensible and pious compared to them.



* WickedStepmother: Lucrezia is instantly abusive towards Ariadne.

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* WickedStepmother: Lucrezia is instantly abusive towards Ariadne.Ariadne, though she's a pretty awful biological mother to Arabella as well.
* WoundedGazelleGambit: Both Isabella and Ariadne use this tactic against each other. While Ariadne is less prone to actively do anything against Isabella, she's quick to turn Isabella's schemes against her and turning on the waterworks in front of their father to get her sister punished. It usually works.
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** When stumbling onto the scene of what she intially assumes to be rape, Isabella actually plans either scream or bring some help, until she realizes it's just some pair having consensual sex.


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** Clemente Bartolini, who's married to an elderly count, [[spoiler: is having multiple affairs with her husband's consent, but she becomes increasingly miserable with this arrangement, since it makes her believe he doesn't really love her.]]

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* Myth/ClassicalMythology: In addition to real life historical figures, some characters are also inspired by characters from Greek myths, most notably Ariadne, who shares some traits with both her namesake and Medea, women spurned by men they helped.

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* Myth/ClassicalMythology: In addition to real life historical figures, some characters are also inspired by characters from Greek myths, most notably Ariadne, who shares some traits with both her namesake and Medea, women spurned by the men they helped.



** Lucrezia resentment of her status of mere cardinal's mistress at first seems to be only caused by the fact she's not properly wed to him, since he's a member of the clergy. [[spoiler: However, it turns out to be more than that: she loved a nobleman who was Ippolito's actual father, and planned to run away with him, but got pregnant with Arabella and had to stay with the cardinal, whom she viewed as undeserving of her.]] It also explains her hatred of Arabella.



* GoMadFromTheIsolation: [[spoiler: Maletta]] is pretty delusional from the very start, but after she's placed [[spoiler: in Rambouillet Shelter by Ariadne and left alone for a while, her grip on sanity starts slipping even more (which might be exacerbated by her pregnancy), causing her to run away despite her precarious situation and eventually get killed.]]



* OrderedToDie: [[spoiler: After Lucrezia's order to kill Maletta results in the death of another girl, the cardinal, to avoid a scandal and compensate the girl's father, orders Lucrezia to drink poison. She does it, after realizing if she lives longer she would be forced to confess about Ippolito being a bastard.]]

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* OrderedToDie: [[spoiler: After Lucrezia's order to kill Maletta results in the death of another girl, the cardinal, to avoid a scandal and compensate the girl's father, orders Lucrezia to drink poison. She does it, after realizing if she lives longer she would will be forced to confess about Ippolito being a bastard.]]

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* EvilRedhead: Cesare and his mother. Also Maletta, but averted with her sister, Sancha.

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* EvilRedhead: Cesare and his mother. Also Maletta, but averted mother, Zanobi and Maletta. Averted with her sister, Sancha.Sancha.
* FamilyEyeResemblance: Ariadne and Arabella have green eyes like their father. Ippolito and Isabella, have the purple eyes of their mother, [[spoiler: but it turns out Ippolito is not really the cardinal's son, while Isabella's parentage remains ambiguously unadressed.]]



* IncestantAdmirer: Zanobi towards his cousin Isabella, who uses this attraction to manipulate him.



* [[TheSpanishInquisition The Inquisition]]: Makes an appearance in chapter 12 to arrest Alejandro, "the Apostle of Asserto", for his heretical teachings.

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* [[TheSpanishInquisition [[UsefulNotes/TheSpanishInquisition The Inquisition]]: Makes an appearance in chapter 12 to arrest Alejandro, "the Apostle of Asserto", for his heretical teachings.
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* OpenSecret: Everyone knows the king's nephew, Cesare, is actually his illegitimate son.
** To a lesser extent, Cesare's mother, Countess Rubinia, employing the services of a Moorish fortune-teller for over twenty years is a well known fact among society ladies. However, just because the king's mistress gets away with it, [[spoiler: does not mean the cardinal's mistress does as well]].

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* SheKnowsTooMuch: Lucrezia orders [[spoiler: Maletta]] to be killed after realizing she [[spoiler: overheard the discussion regarding Lucrezia's infidelity and one of her children being a bastard]].

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* SheKnowsTooMuch: Lucrezia orders [[spoiler: Maletta]] to be killed after realizing she [[spoiler: had overheard the discussion regarding Lucrezia's infidelity and one of her children being a bastard]].bastard]].
** Giada, Lucrezia's personal maid, ends up being this due to her knowledge of her mistress going to a fortune-teller [[spoiler: and trying to perform magic in cardinal's house]]. Ironically, this is not [[spoiler: what gets her killed: it's accompanying Ariadne to said fortune-teller for more information and overhearing the talk about "the hex of Amhara", which causes her to perish by literally turning to dust.]]


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** Lucrezia going to a fortune-teller is risky enough, but her [[spoiler: attempting to perform a magic ritual in cardinal's house in broad daylight]], when the Inquisition could arrest and execute their entire family, is downright criminally stupid and gets her banished from the manor. [[spoiler: She's eventually forced into suicide by the cardinal to appease the angry mob after her order to kill Maletta results in another person getting murdered.]]

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*[[TheSpanishInquisition The Inquisition]]: Makes an appearance in chapter 12 to arrest Alejandro, "the Apostle of Asserto", for his heretical teachings.
** Later the cardinal banishes Lucrezia from his house [[spoiler: for attempting to perform magic ritual]] in fear she would eventually attract the attention of the Inquisition and cause their entire family to be burned at stake.



** Averted with blonde [[BitchInSheepsClothing Isabella]], who makes her first entrance wearing a cream wedding dress and ordering Ariadne's murder. She also consistently wears light colors (aside from mourning) in the second timeline.
** In a similar vein to Isabella, Ariadne is introduced wearing a white gown when she poisons Alfonso in the first timeline.

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** Averted with blonde * LightIsNotGood: Blonde [[BitchInSheepsClothing Isabella]], who Isabella]] makes her first entrance wearing a cream wedding dress and ordering Ariadne's murder. She also consistently wears light colors (aside from mourning) in the second timeline.
** In a similar vein to Isabella, Ariadne is introduced wearing a white gown when she poisons Alfonso in the first timeline.

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* BerserkButton: Lucrezia really hates being reminded of the fact she's only the cardinal's mistress despite being a noblewoman. Queen Margaret easily puts her in her place by calling her "Miss de Rossi" instead of "Lady de Mare".



* YouAreGrounded: The cardinal orders Isabella to be confined to her rooms for a long time for Ariadne's hunting accident.

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* YouAreGrounded: The cardinal orders Isabella to be confined to her rooms for a long time for almost ruining Ariadne's reputation during her hunting accident.
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* DefiledForever: Invoked. The reason for the cardinal's rage at both Zenobi and Iabella after Ariadne's hunting accident is that she would be considered "ruined" if she spent the night at the forest.


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* YouAreGrounded: The cardinal orders Isabella to be confined to her rooms for a long time for Ariadne's hunting accident.

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* AmputativeSentencing: Not a total amputation, but after Zanobi almost kills Ariadne during the hunting competition, the cardinal orders to cut the tendons in all his limbs.

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* AmputativeSentencing: Not Subverted, since it's not a total amputation, but after Zanobi almost kills Ariadne during the hunting competition, the cardinal orders to cut the tendons in all his limbs.



* HuntingAccident: Isabella asks her cousin, Zanobi, to "teach Ariadne a lesson" during hunting, leaving her words up for interpretation. After a brief verbal spat with Ariadne, Zanobi shoots a crossbow bolt into her horse's rear, causing it to run off a cliff, but Ariadne is rescued by Cesare.

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* HuntingAccident: Isabella asks her cousin, Zanobi, to "teach Ariadne a lesson" during hunting, leaving her words up for interpretation. After a brief verbal spat with Ariadne, Zanobi shoots a crossbow bolt into her horse's rear, causing it to run off a cliff, but Ariadne is rescued by Cesare. When the matter is brought before the king, Zanobi is "only" sentenced to lashing and barred from ever becoming a knight, as Ariadne bitterly notes the charge of a murder attempt is not recognized.


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* INeverSaidItWasPoison: After Zanobi is brought before the king and accused of attacking Ariadne, he denies he shot a bolt into her horse's hindquarters. Ariadne points out he was only accused of shooting at her and nowhere it was stated ''where'' he shot her or if it even hit the target.


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* TheMarvelousDeer: In both timelines Cesare was obsessed with killing the legendary golden stag, since slaying it made one destined to become the king. In the second timeline both him and Ariadne encounter it after Cesare rescues her during the hunting competition, [[spoiler: but, surprisingly, Cesare gives up on killing it to make sure Ariadne comes back safely to the camp]].
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* AmputativeSentencing: Not a total amputation, but after Zanobi almost kills Ariadne during the hunting competition, the cardinal orders to cut the tendons in all his limbs.


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* HuntingAccident: Isabella asks her cousin, Zanobi, to "teach Ariadne a lesson" during hunting, leaving her words up for interpretation. After a brief verbal spat with Ariadne, Zanobi shoots a crossbow bolt into her horse's rear, causing it to run off a cliff, but Ariadne is rescued by Cesare.


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** Ariadne is in general wary of publicly engaging into arguments with her family, since she has to keep up her image as an obedient daughter.


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* ATasteOfTheLash: Maletta is lashed after bragging to Ariadne she would seduce her father one day.
** Later the king sentences Zanobi to flogging for shooting Ariadne's horse and almost causing her to die.

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* BreakingSpeech: Isabella delivers such a brutal one to Ariadne just before her death, it still weighs on Ariadne's mind in the second timeline to the point of inducing an eating disorder.

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* BreakingSpeech: Isabella delivers such a brutal one to Ariadne just before her death, it still weighs on Ariadne's mind in the second timeline to the point of inducing causing her to develop an eating disorder.



* DoubleInLawMarriage: In the first timeline Alfonso and Cesare, half-brothers, are married/engaged to Isabella and Ariadne, half-sisters.

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* DoubleInLawMarriage: In the first timeline Alfonso and Cesare, half-brothers, are were married/engaged to Isabella and Ariadne, half-sisters.



* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The entire setting, including names, fashions, characters and events, is explicitly based off Renaissance era Europe. Etruscan Kingdom is Italy, Gallico is France, Moorish Empire seems to be either North Africa or Moorish Spain. There are also mentions of "Helenia" and "Ratan Empire" etc.

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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The entire setting, including names, fashions, characters and events, is explicitly based off Renaissance era Europe.Europe with a dash of Medieval Ages. Etruscan Kingdom is Italy, Gallico is France, Moorish Empire seems to be either North Africa or Moorish Spain. There are also mentions of "Helenia" and "Ratan Empire" etc.



* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Ariadne is ran through with sword in the first timeline.

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* ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice: Ariadne is ran through with a sword in the first timeline.



** In the second timeline he keeps pining for Ariadne, who constantly rejects his advances, and [[spoiler: despises Isabella, who already slept with him and other men]].

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** In the second timeline he keeps pining for Ariadne, who constantly rejects his advances, and [[spoiler: and despises Isabella, who already slept with him and other men]].


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* ThisMeansWar: Ariadne already hated and planned the downfall of her stepmother's family for treating her terribly, but she openly declares she will won't stop until she punishes those responsible for [[spoiler: Arabella's death]]. [[spoiler: She succeeds pretty quickly with destroying Lucrezia, but Isabella proves to be a more difficult enemy to pin down.]]

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* ArrangedMarriage: All around the place. Most notably, Isabella and Alfonso's in the first timeline, then Alfonso and [[spoiler: Lariessa's]] in the second one. Ariadne and Cesare were similarly arranged to be married by their parents [[spoiler: in both timelines]], but Cesare kept her as his fiancée indefinitely in the first timeline and eventually put her in prison after she started nagging him about it once he became the king, while [[spoiler: Ariadne herself breaks off their engagement in the second timeline]].

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* ArrangedMarriage: All around the place. Most notably, Isabella and Alfonso's in the first timeline, then Alfonso and [[spoiler: Lariessa's]] in the second one. Ariadne and Cesare were similarly arranged to be married by their parents [[spoiler: in both timelines]], but Cesare kept her as his fiancée indefinitely in the first timeline and eventually put her in prison after she started nagging him about it once he became the king, while king [[spoiler: in the first timeline, while Ariadne herself breaks off their engagement in the second timeline]].



** This is Ariadne's MO in general: earlier, she convinces a famous boutique to grant Lucrezia a rebate in order to lure into messing around with ledgers again and to expose her to the cardinal.

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** This is Ariadne's MO in general: earlier, she convinces a famous boutique to grant Lucrezia a rebate in order to lure her into messing around with ledgers again again, and to expose her to the cardinal.



* BreakingSpeech: Isabella delivers such a brutal one to Ariadne just before her death, it still weighs on Ariadne's mind in the second timeline.

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* BreakingSpeech: Isabella delivers such a brutal one to Ariadne just before her death, it still weighs on Ariadne's mind in the second timeline.timeline to the point of inducing an eating disorder.



* LadykillerInLove: [[spoiler: Cesare towards Ariadne in the second timeline. He's famous for his numerous conquests, and initially pursues Ariadne just because his half-brother is interested in her as well, but he eventually falls for her, while she keeps refusing him.]]



* MaliciousSlander: Isabella constantly tries undermine other women, particularly her half-sister, by spreading gossip about them.

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* MaliciousSlander: Isabella constantly tries undermine other women, particularly her half-sister, by spreading gossip about them. It eventually causes other society ladies to turn away from her, as they become disgusted by her blatant scheming.

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After more than half a life of scheming, which included incting a rebellion and murdering the crown prince, Ariadne de Mare finally manages to put her longtime fiancé, Cesare, on the throne of the Etruscan Kingdom. However, this hard-earned success does not end in a wedding, as she had hoped, but instead she finds herself thrown in a cell as her older half-sister, and crown princes' widow, Isabella, explains to her [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness she has outlived her usefulness]], before going off to marry Cesare. After getting murdered by Isabella's henchman, Ariadne hears a voice talking to her about a "Golden Rule", and wakes up in the past as a 15 year old girl on the day she was taken to her father's estate in the capital.

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After more than half a life of scheming, which included incting inciting a rebellion and murdering the crown prince, Ariadne de Mare finally manages to put her longtime fiancé, Cesare, on the throne of the Etruscan Kingdom. However, this hard-earned success does not end in a wedding, as she had hoped, but instead she finds herself thrown in a cell as her older half-sister, and crown princes' prince's widow, Isabella, explains to her [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness she has outlived her usefulness]], before going off to marry Cesare. After getting murdered by Isabella's henchman, Ariadne hears a voice talking to her about a "Golden Rule", and wakes up in the past as a 15 year old girl on the day she was taken to her father's estate in the capital.


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** In a similar vein to Isabella, Ariadne is introduced wearing a white gown when she poisons Alfonso in the first timeline.

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** This is Ariadne's MO in general: earlier, she makes one of the famous boutiques grant Lucrezia a rebate in order to lure into messing around with ledgers again and to expose her to the cardinal.

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** This is Ariadne's MO in general: earlier, she makes one of the convinces a famous boutiques boutique to grant Lucrezia a rebate in order to lure into messing around with ledgers again and to expose her to the cardinal.



* BreakingSpeech: Isabella delivers such a brutal one to Ariadne just before her death, it still weighs on Ariadne's mind in the second timeline.



* CainAndAbel: Cesare and Alfonso, and Isabella and Ariadne. Both Alfonso and Ariadne end up dead at the hands of their siblings (technically Ariadne poisoned Alfonso at Cesare's behest) in the first timeline.

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* CainAndAbel: Cesare and Alfonso, and Isabella and Ariadne. Both Alfonso and Ariadne end up dead at the hands orders of their siblings (technically Ariadne poisoned Alfonso at Cesare's behest) in the first timeline.



* Myth/ClassicalMythology: In addition to real life historical figures, some characters are also inspired by characters from Greek myths, most notably Ariadne, who shares some traits with both her namesake and Medea, women spurned by men whom they helped.

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* Myth/ClassicalMythology: In addition to real life historical figures, some characters are also inspired by characters from Greek myths, most notably Ariadne, who shares some traits with both her namesake and Medea, women spurned by men whom they helped.



* DisproportionateRetribution: Discussed and defied. Ariadne is explicitly told she cannot do to her enemies anything that would exceed what they have done to her, otherwise she'll have to pay for it in some way.



* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Lucrezia genuinely loves her children. Well, the ones not named Arabella. [[spoiler: Even after she realizes both Ippolito and Isabella forsake her to save their own skin (albeit Isabella, in a rare show of humanity, did seem somewhat conflicted on this issue) and she's forced to drink poison, she still insists Ippolito is cardinal de Mare's legitimate son.]]

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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Lucrezia genuinely loves her children. Well, the ones not named Arabella. [[spoiler: Even after she realizes both Ippolito and Isabella forsake had forsaken her to save their own skin (albeit Isabella, in a rare show of humanity, did seem somewhat conflicted on this issue) and she's forced to drink poison, she still insists Ippolito is cardinal de Mare's legitimate son.]]



** While Cesare made this comparison as a backhanded compliment, he did have some point: lily of the valley is highly poisonous.

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** While Cesare made this comparison as a backhanded compliment, he unknowingly did have some point: lily of the valley is highly poisonous.



** Maletta brags to Ariadne that if she were to have a child with the cardinal, it would have the same social standing as Ariadne. Ariadne internally admits begrudgingly that she has a point. [[spoiler: She later uses Maletta's ambitions by encouraging her relationship with Ippolito, which results in Maletta getting pregnant. Contrary to Maletta's lofty expectations, this gets her thrown out of the de Mare manor and ultimately killed.]]
* FunctionalAddict: Ippolito got addicted to opium during his studies in Padua. Aside from his permanently dark-rimmed eyes, it doesn't seem to affect him much and he later becomes a drug dealer in San Carlo.

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** Maletta brags to Ariadne that if she were to have a child with the cardinal, it would have the same social standing as Ariadne. Ariadne internally admits begrudgingly that she has a point. [[spoiler: She later uses Maletta's ambitions by encouraging her relationship with Ippolito, which results in Maletta getting pregnant. Contrary to Maletta's lofty expectations, this gets her thrown out of the de Mare manor and ultimately killed.]]
* FunctionalAddict: Ippolito got addicted to opium during his studies in Padua. Aside from permanent shadows under his permanently dark-rimmed eyes, it doesn't seem to affect him much and he later becomes a drug dealer in San Carlo.



* INeverGotAnyLetters: [[spoiler: After Alfonso leaves for a crusade, his and Ariadne's mutual letters are intercepted by Sir Elco.]]

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* INeverGotAnyLetters: [[spoiler: After Alfonso leaves for a crusade, his and Ariadne's mutual letters are intercepted by Sir Elco.Elko.]]



** In the first timeline he treats Ariadne as the whore for her sexual availability, while upholding his view of Isabella as an untouched virgin, and [[InsaneTrollLogic reacts violently]] when Ariadne points out that Isabella has been married to his brother for years and already miscarried his child. In her speech to Ariadne Isabella speculates he will eventually grow bored of her at some point in the future and come back to Ariadne, which is why she has her killed.

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** In the first timeline he treats Ariadne as the whore for her sexual availability, while upholding his view of Isabella as an untouched virgin, and [[InsaneTrollLogic reacts violently]] when Ariadne points out that Isabella has been married to his brother for years and had already miscarried his child. In her speech to Ariadne Isabella speculates he will eventually grow bored of her at some point in the future and come back to Ariadne, which is why she has her killed.



* TheMistress: Lady Rubinia, Cesare's mother and king's favorite mistress. However, while he prefers her over his wife, he still favors his legitimate son over Cesare.

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* TheMistress: Lady Countess Rubinia, Cesare's mother and king's favorite mistress. However, while he prefers her over his wife, he still favors his legitimate son over Cesare.



* PlayingCyrano: Subverted. [[spoiler: Following Arabella's death,]] Alfonso leaves Harenae to see Ariadne [[spoiler:since he assumes she was the de Mare sister who died]], whilst pretending to be sick in his quarters and leaving one of his aides to write letters to Lariessa (who insisted on exchanging daily mail, despite them living in the same place). Said aide overdoes it a bit and after coming back Alfonso discovers, to his horror, that Lariessa is even more enamored with him.

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* PlayingCyrano: Subverted. [[spoiler: Following Arabella's death,]] Alfonso leaves Harenae to see Ariadne [[spoiler:since he assumes she was the de Mare sister who died]], whilst pretending to be sick in his quarters and leaving one of his aides to write letters to Lariessa (who insisted on exchanging daily mail, despite them living in the same place).place) in his stead. Said aide overdoes it a bit and after coming back Alfonso discovers, to his horror, that Lariessa is even more enamored with him.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Isabella delivers such a brutal one to Ariadne just before her death, it still weighs on Ariadne's mind in the second timeline.
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* HopeSpot: Ariadne tries to get Arabella out of harm's way by sending her off to a music college in Padua where she would avoid the incoming plague and hopefully eventually profit from her musical talents. [[spoiler: Arabella dies on the same day Ariadne receives her admission to the college.]]

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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Arabella is initially this to both her sisters, but she later warms up to Ariadne.



* BigSisterBully: Isabella towards Arabella. [[spoiler: It eventually ends with her pushing Arabella down the stairs to her death.]]



* GracefulLadiesLikePurple: Isabella wears mostly purple to compliment her eyes. Even Ariadne admits grudgingly that, for all her flaws, her fashion sense is impeccable.



* INeverGotAnyLetters: [[spoiler: After Alfonso leaves for a crusade, his and Ariadne's mutual letters are intercepted by Sir Elco.]]



* PeggySue: After being killed Ariadne goes back in time in order to get revenge. It turns out, her actions are limited by the Golden Rule and she cannot exceed her vengeance over what was done to her.

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* PeggySue: After being killed Ariadne goes back in time in order to get revenge. It turns out, her actions are limited by the Golden Rule and she cannot exceed her vengeance over what was done to her.


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* ThePromise: [[spoiler: After Arabella's death]] Alfonso promises Ariadne to create a better world for her.


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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Ariadne's original plan in the second timeline. As it turns out, her actions are limited by the Golden Rule and she cannot exceed her vengeance over what was done to her.

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** Averted with blonde [[BitchInSheepsClothing Isabella]], who makes her first entrance wearing a cream wedding dress and ordering Ariadne's murder. She also consistently wears light colors (aside from mourning) in the second timeline.



* PeggySue: After being killed Ariadne goes back in time in order to get revenge. It turns out, her actions are limited by the Golden Rule and she cannot just kill whoever she wants.

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* PeggySue: After being killed Ariadne goes back in time in order to get revenge. It turns out, her actions are limited by the Golden Rule and she cannot just kill whoever she wants.exceed her vengeance over what was done to her.

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* DoubleInLawMarriage: In the first timeline Alfonso and Cesare, half-brothers, are married/engaged to Isabella and Ariadne, half-sisters.



* IronicEcho: In the first timeline Isabella repeats to Ariadne Cesare's derogatory comments about her body, complaining about her broad shoulders and large breasts. In the second timeline, [[spoiler: after sleeping with Isabella,]] Cesare complains to Ariadne about her skinny body and flat chest.



** In the first timeline he treats Ariadne as the whore for her sexual availability, while upholding his view of Isabella as an untouched virgin, and [[InsaneTrollLogic reacts violently]] when Ariadne points out that Isabella had been married to his brother for years and already miscarried his child. In her speech to Ariadne Isabella speculates he will eventually grow bored of her at some point in the future and come back to Ariadne, which is why she has her killed.

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** In the first timeline he treats Ariadne as the whore for her sexual availability, while upholding his view of Isabella as an untouched virgin, and [[InsaneTrollLogic reacts violently]] when Ariadne points out that Isabella had has been married to his brother for years and already miscarried his child. In her speech to Ariadne Isabella speculates he will eventually grow bored of her at some point in the future and come back to Ariadne, which is why she has her killed.


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* MaliciousSlander: Isabella constantly tries undermine other women, particularly her half-sister, by spreading gossip about them.


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* SayingTooMuch: Maletta just doesn't know when to shut up, even after it has repeatedly backfired at her.

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* Myth/ClassicalMythology: In addition to real life historical figures, some characters are also inspired by characters from Greek myths, most notably Ariadne, who shares some traits with both her namesake and Medea, both being women spurned by men whom they helped.
** Cesare is partly inspired by Jason and Theseus.

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* Myth/ClassicalMythology: In addition to real life historical figures, some characters are also inspired by characters from Greek myths, most notably Ariadne, who shares some traits with both her namesake and Medea, both being women spurned by men whom they helped.
** Mirroring her, Cesare is partly inspired by Jason and Theseus.


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* MadonnaWhoreComplex: Cesare suffers from this mindset.
** In the first timeline he treats Ariadne as the whore for her sexual availability, while upholding his view of Isabella as an untouched virgin, and [[InsaneTrollLogic reacts violently]] when Ariadne points out that Isabella had been married to his brother for years and already miscarried his child. In her speech to Ariadne Isabella speculates he will eventually grow bored of her at some point in the future and come back to Ariadne, which is why she has her killed.
** In the second timeline he keeps pining for Ariadne, who constantly rejects his advances, and [[spoiler: despises Isabella, who already slept with him and other men]].


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** Cardinal de Mare shares some similarities with Rodrigo Borgia [[spoiler: although he doesn't become the pope]].


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* TorchesAndPitchforks: The outraged mob gathers outside de Mare manor after a young girl is mistakenly killed [[spoiler: due to Lucrezia demanding Maletta's head]].
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* TooDumbToLive: Maletta is really, really dense on top of being malicious, and she ''never'' learns from her mistakes. Early on she runs her mouth in front of Ariadne, bragging how she might seduce the cardinal one day, which results in Ariadne repeating it to Lucrezia and Maletta getting lashes as a punishment. She thinks she will become Isabella's lady-in-waiting after the latter becomes a queen despite only noblewomen being allowed that position, later assumes [[spoiler: de Mares will show any regard to her and her child with Ippolito,]] even though Ariadne and her mother were just sent to the countryside, where Ariadne's mother eventually died, not to mention Lucrezia absolutely despises her. [[spoiler: After she's thrown out]] and brought by Sancha to Rambouillet Shelter, she still does not understand her situation and throws tantrums.

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* TooDumbToLive: Maletta is really, really dense on top of being malicious, and she ''never'' learns from her mistakes. Early on she runs her mouth in front of Ariadne, bragging how she might seduce the cardinal one day, which results in Ariadne repeating it to Lucrezia and Maletta getting lashes as a punishment. She thinks she will become Isabella's lady-in-waiting after the latter becomes a queen despite only noblewomen being allowed that position, later assumes [[spoiler: de Mares will show any regard to her and her child with Ippolito,]] even though Ariadne and her mother were just sent to the countryside, where Ariadne's mother eventually died, not to mention Lucrezia absolutely openly despises Maletta and is physically abusive to her. [[spoiler: After she's [[spoiler: thrown out]] out and ]] brought by Sancha to Rambouillet Shelter, she still does not understand her situation situation, [[spoiler: even though she's well aware she has nowhere else to go,]] and throws tantrums.tantrums at people who basically saved her life. When Ariadne interrogates her, she just lists a handful of completely irrelevant facts and gossip and only accidentally mentions [[spoiler: the topic of Ippolito's illegitimate birth]]. (Amusingly enough, she figured it out before Ippolito, who thought it was Arabella.) Then she runs away from the shelter, [[spoiler: only to get gruesomely killed almost immediately afterwards]].

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* DecapitationPresentation: Luzrezia issues [[spoiler: a bounty for killing Maletta after realizing the latter knows about Ippolito being an illegitimate child]], requiring her head as a proof. However, this results in a tragedy when another girl is killed for looking like her.

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* DecapitationPresentation: Luzrezia Lucrezia issues [[spoiler: a bounty for killing Maletta after realizing the latter knows about Ippolito being an illegitimate child]], requiring her head as a proof. However, this This results in a tragedy when another girl is killed for looking like her.


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* TooDumbToLive: Maletta is really, really dense on top of being malicious, and she ''never'' learns from her mistakes. Early on she runs her mouth in front of Ariadne, bragging how she might seduce the cardinal one day, which results in Ariadne repeating it to Lucrezia and Maletta getting lashes as a punishment. She thinks she will become Isabella's lady-in-waiting after the latter becomes a queen despite only noblewomen being allowed that position, later assumes [[spoiler: de Mares will show any regard to her and her child with Ippolito,]] even though Ariadne and her mother were just sent to the countryside, where Ariadne's mother eventually died, not to mention Lucrezia absolutely despises her. [[spoiler: After she's thrown out]] and brought by Sancha to Rambouillet Shelter, she still does not understand her situation and throws tantrums.

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** The king is a pretty terrible parent to both his sons, but particularly Cesare.

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* AltarDiplomacy: Alfonso's marriage with Lariessa de Valois in exchange for Gallican canons, gunpowder and military training. However, Alfonso points out this plan will work out only for a short term, since Gallico will eventually hold their monopoly on gunpowder production over Etruscan's head and use this leverage to demand more concessions from them in the future.

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* AltarDiplomacy: Alfonso's marriage with Lariessa de Valois in exchange for Gallican canons, cannons, gunpowder and military training. However, Alfonso points out this plan will work out only for a short term, since Gallico will eventually hold their monopoly on gunpowder production over Etruscan's head and use this leverage to demand more concessions from them in the future.



* DecapitationPresentation: Luzrezia issues [[spoiler: a bounty for killing Maletta after realizing the latter knows about Ippolito being an illegitimate child]], requiring her head as a proof. However, this results in a tragedy when another girl is killed for looking like her.



** Maletta brags to Ariadne that if she were to have a child with the cardinal, it would have the same social standing as Ariadne. Ariadne internally admits begrudgingly that she has a point. [[spoiler: She later uses Maletta's ambitions by encouraging her relationship with Ippolito, which results in Maletta getting pregnant. However, this gets her thrown out of the de Mare household and ultimately killed.]]

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** Maletta brags to Ariadne that if she were to have a child with the cardinal, it would have the same social standing as Ariadne. Ariadne internally admits begrudgingly that she has a point. [[spoiler: She later uses Maletta's ambitions by encouraging her relationship with Ippolito, which results in Maletta getting pregnant. However, Contrary to Maletta's lofty expectations, this gets her thrown out of the de Mare household manor and ultimately killed.]]



** Alfonso is a composite character of Alfonso d'Aragon and Alfonso d'Este, both husbands of Lucrezia Borgia.

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** Alfonso is a composite character of Alfonso d'Aragon and Alfonso d'Este, particularly the former, both husbands of Lucrezia Borgia.


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* SheKnowsTooMuch: Lucrezia orders [[spoiler: Maletta]] to be killed after realizing she [[spoiler: overheard the discussion regarding Lucrezia's infidelity and one of her children being a bastard]].

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* AbusiveParents: Lucrezia towards Arabella, her youngest daughter [[spoiler: because her birth ultimately prevented her mother from eloping with another man. It eventually ends with Arabella dying due to Lucrezia refusing to spend money on a doctor]]. Cardinal de Mare is more of a neglectful variety.

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* AbusiveParents: Lucrezia towards Arabella, her youngest daughter daughter. [[spoiler: because her birth ultimately prevented her mother from eloping with another man. It eventually ends with Arabella dying due to Lucrezia refusing to spend money on a doctor]]. doctor.]] Cardinal de Mare is more of a neglectful variety.


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* AltarDiplomacy: Alfonso's marriage with Lariessa de Valois in exchange for Gallican canons, gunpowder and military training. However, Alfonso points out this plan will work out only for a short term, since Gallico will eventually hold their monopoly on gunpowder production over Etruscan's head and use this leverage to demand more concessions from them in the future.


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** While Cesare made this comparison as a backhanded compliment, he did have some point: lily of the valley is highly poisonous.


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* UnholyMatrimony: Ariadne and Cesare in the first timeline. Except they weren't married, something Ariadne was hoping for until the very end, before Cesare discarded her.
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The entire setting, including names, fashions, characters and events, is explicitly based off Renaissance era Europe. Etruscan Kingdom is Italy, Gallico is France, Moor kingdom seems to be either North Africa or Moorish Spain. There are also mentions of "Helenia" and "Ratan Empire" etc.

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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: The entire setting, including names, fashions, characters and events, is explicitly based off Renaissance era Europe. Etruscan Kingdom is Italy, Gallico is France, Moor kingdom Moorish Empire seems to be either North Africa or Moorish Spain. There are also mentions of "Helenia" and "Ratan Empire" etc.



** Maletta brags to Ariadne that if she were to have a child with the cardinal, it would have the same social standing as Ariadne.

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** Maletta brags to Ariadne that if she were to have a child with the cardinal, it would have the same social standing as Ariadne. Ariadne internally admits begrudgingly that she has a point. [[spoiler: She later uses Maletta's ambitions by encouraging her relationship with Ippolito, which results in Maletta getting pregnant. However, this gets her thrown out of the de Mare household and ultimately killed.]]

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