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100 years after the human's being wiped out, in factory 005, Build-a the Build-bot is constructed and has no orders or supervisors. The only other functioning brain case type bot she can find is a Query unit. It does not take long for Solider Bots Red and Blue to come by on their normal patrols and discover her existence. While she simply wants to be left to build everything she imagines, the warring sides want to know who's side is she on, and who is in charge of her and the other Grey side bots.
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100 years after the human's humans being wiped out, in factory 005, Build-a the Build-bot is constructed and has no orders or supervisors. The only other functioning brain case type bot she can find is a Query unit. It does not take long for Solider Bots Red and Blue to come by on their normal patrols and discover her existence. While she simply wants to be left to build everything she imagines, the warring sides want to know who's whose side is she on, and who is in charge of her and the other Grey side bots.
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* CuteMachines: Many of the Grey Side bots look cute, although Jump Bot with it's small face and happy, bouncy nature is seen as cute and harmless.
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* CuteMachines: Many of the Grey Side bots look cute, although Jump Bot with it's its small face and happy, bouncy nature is seen as cute and harmless.
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* HoppingMachine: Jump bot is a spring based robot [[spoiler: Build-a made for fun. She and Build-b later made a Flip bot to go with it.]]
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* HoppingMachine: Jump bot is ForeverWar: Red side and Blue side have been in a spring based robot [[spoiler: Build-a made war for fun. She and Build-b later made a Flip bot to go hundreds of years with it.]]no real end in sight. The only thing that could start to wind it down was removing the ability of either side being able to repair themselves.
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* ForeverWar: Red side and Blue side have been in a war for hundreds of years with no real end in sight. The only thing that could start to wind it down was removing the ability of either side being able to repair themselves.
* HopelessWar: Red side and Blue side have lost all humans and many bots as a result of this war. Ironically, human orders were the one thing that could have stopped this war but [[spoiler:they were killed by the soldier bots.]]
* HopelessWar: Red side and Blue side have lost all humans and many bots as a result of this war. Ironically, human orders were the one thing that could have stopped this war but [[spoiler:they were killed by the soldier bots.]]
* HopelessWar: Red side and Blue side have lost all humans and many bots as a result of this war. Ironically, human orders were the one thing that could have stopped this war but [[spoiler:they were killed by the soldier bots.]]
* HoppingMachine: Jump bot is a spring based robot [[spoiler: Build-a made for fun. She and Build-b later made a Flip bot to go with it.]]
* HoppingMachine: Jump bot is a spring based robot [[spoiler: Build-a made for fun. She and Build-b later made a Flip bot to go with it.]]
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* NameDrop: The title is frequently asked towards Build-a at the start of the story to determine whose side she is on.
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* TitleDrop: The title is frequently asked towards Build-a at the start of the story to determine whose side she is on.
