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* LoveAtFirstSight: The method royalty use to choose partners in this world seems to rely on either this trope if they haven't been paying attention to the palace servants: appropriately-aged servants in the palace line up so the prince or princess can look at them and choose a mate out of one of them. Due to this custom, this happened to Garnet and Citrine, and later Sapphire and Emerald.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: The method royalty use to choose partners in this world seems to rely on either this trope if they haven't been paying attention to the palace servants: appropriately-aged servants in the palace line up so the prince or princess can look at them and choose a mate out of one of them. Due to this custom, this happened to Garnet and Citrine, and later Sapphire and Emerald.
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''Flight: The Tale of Two Sisters'' is a ComingOfAge/drama WebComic about winged cats who live on an island. The prologue was posted on Scratch April 7, 2018 and is about thirty chapters long with the last chapter having come out October 7, 2020.
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''Flight: The Tale of Two Sisters'' is a ComingOfAge/drama WebComic about winged cats who live on an island. The prologue was posted on Scratch {{Website/Scratch}} April 7, 2018 and is about thirty chapters long with the last chapter having come out October 7, 2020.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from the top: [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold King Garnet]], Queen Citrine, Princess Sapphire, [[CheerfulChild Princess Diamond Moonsong]].]]
[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from the top: [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold King Garnet]], Queen Citrine, Princess Sapphire, [[CheerfulChild Princess Diamond Moonsong]].]]
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-> '''Servant:''' Princess? I'm really sorry... but your sister... she's not royalty -- and the King's laws state that only the royal family can wear gemstones --\\
'''Sapphire:''' ''Silence!'' Return to your duties at once!\\
'''Servant:''' Yes, princess. Forgive me, princess. ''[walks away]''\\
'''Diamond:''' ''[stunned]'' Sapphire, you've -- you've changed!\\
'''Sapphire:''' ''[beat]'' So have you.
'''Sapphire:''' ''Silence!'' Return to your duties at once!\\
'''Servant:''' Yes, princess. Forgive me, princess. ''[walks away]''\\
'''Diamond:''' ''[stunned]'' Sapphire, you've -- you've changed!\\
'''Sapphire:''' ''[beat]'' So have you.
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[[https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/478826234/ Quiet]]: Backstory for when Garnet was a child.
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[[https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/478826234/ Quiet]]: Backstory for from when Garnet was a child.
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* LoveTriangle: Dusk loves Diamond, but so does [[OfficialFanSubmittedContent Catfish]], while Diamond thinks of both of them as friends. However, Dusk and Catfish seem to be pretty good friends with each other and there isn't any real conflict who Diamond should end up with.
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* LoveTriangle: Dusk loves Diamond, but so does [[OfficialFanSubmittedContent Catfish]], while Diamond thinks of both of them as friends. However, Dusk and Catfish seem to be pretty good friends with each other and there isn't any real conflict over who Diamond should end up with.
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* AerithAndBob: Most cats on the island are named after plants, animals, or other natural things (think Lilac, Catfish, and Dusk, respectively), but the royal family are all named after gemstones, so Diamond causes this when she leaves the palace to become a healer apprentice.
** Usually, this trope is defied when a cat marries into the royal family by having their name changed.
** Usually, this trope is defied when a cat marries into the royal family by having their name changed.
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* AerithAndBob: Most cats on the island are named after plants, animals, or other natural things (think Lilac, Catfish, and Dusk, respectively), but the royal family are all named after gemstones, so Diamond causes [[spoiler:and Zircon]] caused this when she leaves moving away from the palace to become a healer apprentice.
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** Usually, this trope is defied within the royal family when a cat marries intothe royal family it by having their name changed.changed to that of a gemstone.
** Usually, this trope is defied within the royal family when a cat marries into
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** Actually, the whole palace could be considered an example because all the servants and guards who live there have the same naming pattern as the commoners.
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** Actually, the whole palace could be considered an example because all the servants and guards who live there have the same naming pattern as all the commoners.
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* FantasticCasteSystem: There are technically six classes: the royalty at the top, the healers as a close second, then the palace guards, then the servants, the fishers are at the very bottom, and then there are the shadows, who don't have a place in the hierarchy and are any members of the royal family who are not currently ruling or chosen to be an heir. Some movement between different classes is possible: [[HeirInLaw guards and servants can marry into the royal family]],
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* FantasticCasteSystem: There are technically six classes: the royalty at the top, the healers as a close second, then the palace guards, then the servants, the fishers are at the very bottom, and then there are the shadows, who don't have a place in the hierarchy and are any members of the royal family who are not currently ruling or chosen to be an heir. Some movement between different classes is possible: [[HeirInLaw guards and servants can marry into the royal family]],
family]], fishers can become servants or guards [[note]]presumably, they can become healers, too, but this is never stated[[/note]], and shadows seem to be able to join any class below royalty.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: The method royalty use to choose partners in this world seems to rely on either this trope if they haven't been paying attention to the palace servants: appropriately-aged servants in the palace line up so the prince or princess can look at them and choose a mate out of one of them. Due to this custom, this happened to Garnet and Citrine, and later Sapphire and [[spoiler: Fern/Emerald]].
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* LoveAtFirstSight: The method royalty use to choose partners in this world seems to rely on either this trope if they haven't been paying attention to the palace servants: appropriately-aged servants in the palace line up so the prince or princess can look at them and choose a mate out of one of them. Due to this custom, this happened to Garnet and Citrine, and later Sapphire and [[spoiler: Fern/Emerald]].
Emerald.
* LoveTriangle: Dusk loves Diamond, but so does [[OfficialFanSubmittedContent Catfish]], while Diamond thinks of both of them as friends. However, Dusk and Catfish seem to be pretty good friends with each other and there isn't any real conflict who Diamond should end up with.
* LoveTriangle: Dusk loves Diamond, but so does [[OfficialFanSubmittedContent Catfish]], while Diamond thinks of both of them as friends. However, Dusk and Catfish seem to be pretty good friends with each other and there isn't any real conflict who Diamond should end up with.
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** In an [[WhatCouldHaveBeen earlier version of the story]], Diamond would have ended up defying this trope by changing her name to Marigold.
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* FantasticCasteSystem: There are five classes in this society:
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** Royalty
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* FantasticCasteSystem: There are five technically six classes: the royalty at the top, the healers as a close second, then the palace guards, then the servants, the fishers are at the very bottom, and then there are the shadows, who don't have a place in the hierarchy and are any members of the royal family who are not currently ruling or chosen to be an heir. Some movement between different classes in this society:
** Royalty
is possible: [[HeirInLaw guards and servants can marry into the royal family]],
** Royalty
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* FantasticCasteSystem: There are five classes in this society:
** Royalty
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* VertebrateWithExtraLimbs: Every cat above a certain age fits the "four limbs plus wings" variety of this trope.
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PoorCommunicationKills: Double-subverted. When Diamond accidentally arrives very late to Sapphire's wedding, Sapphire takes it as a sign she didn't care and intentionally avoids looking Diamond's way. Sapphire ''does'' send her LadyInWaiting to request a private meeting with Diamond, but this was only after it had started raining and Diamond had left the palace to go back to the cottage she'd been living in.
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* AlmostKiss: After Lilac and Parsley watch a sunset, they start to get close, but then Diamond calls out for Lilac to come meet some cats she'd just met.
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* AlmostKiss: After Lilac and Parsley watch a sunset, they start to get close, but then Diamond calls out for interrupts because she wants Lilac to come meet some cats she'd just met.
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* EvilWearsBlack: If fur color is treated as clothing, this trope is zigzaged. Out of Garnet and Citrine play it straight, with Garnet being dark gray and strict while Citrine is softer and a pale cream color. The colors reverse for their daughters: Sapphire is white, but got more of Garnet's strictness due to her upbringing, while black-spotted Diamond is more friendly and kind. Then, we get [[spoiler: Inkberry]] and [[spoiler: Garnet's brother Zircon]], both of whom are straight black cats and villains.
* HappilyMarried: Sapphire and [[spoiler:Fern/Emerald]] end up this way.
* HappilyMarried: Sapphire and [[spoiler:Fern/Emerald]] end up this way.
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* EvilWearsBlack: If fur color is treated as clothing, this trope is zigzaged. Out of Garnet and Citrine play it straight, straight between the two of them, with Garnet being dark gray and strict while Citrine is softer and a pale cream color. The colors reverse for their daughters: Sapphire is white, but got more of Garnet's strictness due to her upbringing, while black-spotted Diamond is more friendly and kind. Then, we get [[spoiler: Inkberry]] and [[spoiler: Garnet's brother Zircon]], both of whom are straight black cats and villains.
* HappilyMarried: Sapphire and[[spoiler:Fern/Emerald]] Emerald end up this way.
* HappilyMarried: Sapphire and
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* MeaningfulRename: When [[spoiler:Fern]] married into the royal family and got renamed [[spoiler:Emerald]], it is implied that he had actually ''become'' royalty, and Sapphire expected him to act as such.
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* MeaningfulRename: When [[spoiler:Fern]] Fern married into the royal family and got renamed [[spoiler:Emerald]], Emerald, it is implied that he had actually ''become'' royalty, and Sapphire expected him to act as such.
** [[spoiler: Citrine]] technically had this twice: once when [[spoiler: she got married and changed her commoner name to Citrine]] and then [[spoiler: after she dies, she insists her family use her first name, Columbine.]]
** [[spoiler: Citrine]] technically had this twice: once when [[spoiler: she got married and changed her commoner name to Citrine]] and then [[spoiler: after she dies, she insists her family use her first name, Columbine.]]
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** Sapphire and [[spoiler: Fern/Emerald]], Emerald, starting around halfway through,
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