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* MakeMeWannaShout: Lollipop Girl's power, channeled through sound holes (not mouths) in her hands. It proves to be very [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1485366/ball-and-chain-ch-2-page-19/ effective]]
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No longer a trope. Also, ZCE comment-outs.
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* ClingyMacguffin: Dorioth's transforming gloves.
* EpicFlail: Sliver's weapon of choice.
* EpicFlail: Sliver's weapon of choice.
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* MorphWeapon: See {{swiss army weapon}}.
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Vidoc.]]
* ProphetEyes: Sliver has them.
* SelfMadeOrphan: Sliver, [[spoiler: or so she thought.]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Vidoc.]]
* ProphetEyes: Sliver has them.
* SelfMadeOrphan: Sliver, [[spoiler: or so she thought.]]
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hooker at first, and later Dahlia with her purple hair.
* YouMustBeCold: Dorioth to Sliver.
* YouMustBeCold: Dorioth to Sliver.
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* ActionGirl: Sliver
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* ActionGirl: SliverHaving fought in a gladiator arena for several years, Silver is a strong and skilled fighter.
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A webcomic by Super-Chi that can be found [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ here]] on Smackjeeves and also on Website/{{Deviantart}}. Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, Ball and Chain focuses on Sliver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirely monochrome except for a few things, such as Sliver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
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A webcomic by Super-Chi that can be found [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ here]] on Smackjeeves Smackjeeves]] and also on Website/{{Deviantart}}. Website/{{Deviantart}}.
Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, Ball and Chain focuses on Sliver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps herescape. escape.
The webcomichas a very striking visual style, being is almost entirely monochrome except for a few things, such as Sliver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, Ball and Chain focuses on Sliver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her
The webcomic
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* EpicFlail: Sliver's {{weapon of choice}}.
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* EpicFlail: Sliver's {{weapon weapon of choice}}.choice.
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* SwissArmyWeapon: Dorioth's {{weapon of choice}}.
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* SwissArmyWeapon: Dorioth's {{weapon weapon of choice}}.choice.
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Should be \"Lollipop\", not \"lolipop\"
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* MakeMeWannaShout: Lolipop Girl's power, channeled through sound holes (not mouths) in her hands. It proves to be very [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1485366/ball-and-chain-ch-2-page-19/ effective]]
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* MakeMeWannaShout: Lolipop Lollipop Girl's power, channeled through sound holes (not mouths) in her hands. It proves to be very [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1485366/ball-and-chain-ch-2-page-19/ effective]]
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Should be \"None too happy\" under Improvised Weapon
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Dorioth uses Sliver's violin. Sliver is none to happy about this.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Dorioth uses Sliver's violin. Sliver is none to too happy about this.
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Protagonist\'s name is Sliver, not Silver. Also capitalised \"see\" under Morph Weapon.
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A webcomic by Super-Chi that can be found [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ here]] on Smackjeeves and also on Website/{{Deviantart}}. Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, Ball and Chain focuses on Silver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirely monochrome except for a few things, such as Silver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
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A webcomic by Super-Chi that can be found [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ here]] on Smackjeeves and also on Website/{{Deviantart}}. Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, Ball and Chain focuses on Silver, Sliver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirely monochrome except for a few things, such as Silver's Sliver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's [[spoiler: adoptive]] dad, Vidoc. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most definitely qualifies.
* ActionGirl: Silver
* BerserkButton: Silver does not like it when you shoplift from the store she works at.
* ActionGirl: Silver
* BerserkButton: Silver does not like it when you shoplift from the store she works at.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's Sliver's [[spoiler: adoptive]] dad, Vidoc. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most definitely qualifies.
* ActionGirl:Silver
Sliver
* BerserkButton:Silver Sliver does not like it when you shoplift from the store she works at.
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* EpicFlail: Silver's {{weapon of choice}}.
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* EpicFlail: Silver's Sliver's {{weapon of choice}}.
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* FantasticRacism: There is some towards so-called "nuclear babies" such as Silver or Dahlia.
* HypnoticEyes: Silver has this ability, but so far it's only been shown to work on animals.
* HypnoticEyes: Silver has this ability, but so far it's only been shown to work on animals.
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* FantasticRacism: There is some towards so-called "nuclear babies" such as Silver Sliver or Dahlia.
* HypnoticEyes:Silver Sliver has this ability, but so far it's only been shown to work on animals.
* HypnoticEyes:
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Dorioth uses Silver's violin. Silver is none to happy about this.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Dorioth uses Silver's Sliver's violin. Silver Sliver is none to happy about this.
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* MorphWeapon: see {{swiss army weapon}}.
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* MorphWeapon: see See {{swiss army weapon}}.
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* ProphetEyes: Silver has them.
* SelfMadeOrphan: Silver, [[spoiler: or so she thought.]]
* SelfMadeOrphan: Silver, [[spoiler: or so she thought.]]
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* ProphetEyes: Silver Sliver has them.
* SelfMadeOrphan:Silver, Sliver, [[spoiler: or so she thought.]]
* SelfMadeOrphan:
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* YouMustBeCold: Dorioth to Silver.
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* YouMustBeCold: Dorioth to Silver.Sliver.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's [[spoiler: adoptive]] dad, Vidoc. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most defiantly qualifies.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's [[spoiler: adoptive]] dad, Vidoc. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most defiantly definitely qualifies.
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A webcomic by Super-Chi that can be found [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ here]] on Smackjeeves and also on {{Deviantart}}. Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, Ball and Chain focuses on Silver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirely monochrome except for a few things, such as Silver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
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A webcomic by Super-Chi that can be found [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ here]] on Smackjeeves and also on {{Deviantart}}.Website/{{Deviantart}}. Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, Ball and Chain focuses on Silver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirely monochrome except for a few things, such as Silver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's dad, Vidoc. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most defiantly qualifies.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's [[spoiler: adoptive]] dad, Vidoc. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most defiantly qualifies.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's dad. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most defiantly qualifies.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's dad.dad, Vidoc. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most defiantly qualifies.
* ImperialStormtrooperMarksmanshipAcademy: {{Lampshaded}} and [[JustifiedTrope justified]] as it being due to Vidoc mostly hiring stuntmen as his goons.
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Silver's father.]]
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* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Silver's father.Vidoc.]]
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* StrawNihilist: Ladies and gentlemen, [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1456609/ball-and-chain-ch-2-page-15/ Nihilist Greg]]!
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* TimeSkip: Throughout the first part of chapter two.
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* HypnoticEyes: Silver has this ability, but so far it's only been shown to work on animals.
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* MindControlEyes: Silver has this ability, but so far it's only been shown to work on animals.
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* MakeMeWannaShout: Lolipop Girl's power, channeled through sound holes (not mouths) in her hands. It proves to be very [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ effective]]
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* MakeMeWannaShout: Lolipop Girl's power, channeled through sound holes (not mouths) in her hands. It proves to be very [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ com/comics/1485366/ball-and-chain-ch-2-page-19/ effective]]
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* BerserkButton: Silver does not like it when you shoplift from the store she works at.
* ClingyMacguffin: Dorioth's transforming gloves.
* ClingyMacguffin: Dorioth's transforming gloves.
* ImprovisedWeapon: Dorioth uses Silver's violin. Silver is none to happy about this.
* MakeMeWannaShout: Lolipop Girl's power, channeled through sound holes (not mouths) in her hands. It proves to be very [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ effective]]
* MakeMeWannaShout: Lolipop Girl's power, channeled through sound holes (not mouths) in her hands. It proves to be very [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ effective]]
* NotQuiteDead: [[spoiler: Silver's father.]]
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hooker at first, and later Dahlia with her purple hair.
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* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hooker at first, and later Dahlia with her purple hair.hair.
* YouMustBeCold: Dorioth to Silver.
* YouMustBeCold: Dorioth to Silver.
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* AbusiveParents: Silver's dad. Forcing your daughter to fight in to-the-death gladiator matches most defiantly qualifies.
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* FantasticRacism: There is some towards so-called "nuclear babies" such as Silver or Dahlia.
* MindControlEyes: Silver has this ability, but so far it's only been shown to work on animals.
* MindControlEyes: Silver has this ability, but so far it's only been shown to work on animals.
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* SelfMadeOrphan: Silver, [[spoiler: or so she thought.]]
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Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, BallAndChain focuses on Silver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirly monochrome except for a few things, such as Silver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
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A webcomic by Super-Chi that can be found [[http://ballandchain.smackjeeves.com/comics/1170479/ball-and-chain-ch-1-page-01/ here]] on Smackjeeves and also on {{Deviantart}}. Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, BallAndChain Ball and Chain focuses on Silver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirly entirely monochrome except for a few things, such as Silver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.weapon.
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!!This webcomic contains examples of:
* EpicFlail: Silver's {{weapon of choice}}.
* ExtraEyes: Dahlia has a third eye in the middle of her back.
* MorphWeapon: see {{swiss army weapon}}.
* ProphetEyes: Silver has them.
* SwissArmyWeapon: Dorioth's {{weapon of choice}}.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hooker at first, and later Dahlia with her purple hair.
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!!This webcomic contains examples of:
* EpicFlail: Silver's {{weapon of choice}}.
* ExtraEyes: Dahlia has a third eye in the middle of her back.
* MorphWeapon: see {{swiss army weapon}}.
* ProphetEyes: Silver has them.
* SwissArmyWeapon: Dorioth's {{weapon of choice}}.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair: Hooker at first, and later Dahlia with her purple hair.
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Taking place several years after a nuclear disaster, BallAndChain focuses on Silver, a girl with blank white eyes who competes in the Devil's Playground gladiatorial arena while her father acts as her manager, and Dorioth, the pickpocket who helps her escape. The webcomic has a very striking visual style, being almost entirly monochrome except for a few things, such as Silver's bright red hair or the blue energy blasts from Dorioth's weapon.
