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For the majority of the first and second chapters, Carter does his best to get Adrian to sleep with him, using every method from flat-out asking him ''in a bookstore'' to installing a confetti cannon into Adrian's locker and stuffing hand-written notes into seemingly every crevice. To Adrian's disdain, his friend Maria is even encouraging Carter's desperation. However, Adrian is still getting over a past love - David - and does not appreciate Carter's advances, to say the least.
The story takes a somewhat darker turn during a party they attend, in which [[spoiler: both Adrian and Maria drink something with roofies in it. Carter finds a drunk and horny Adrian in the coat room, where they make out for a few pages. Soon after, Carter leaves and ends up saving Maria from an unknown hockey player.]]
The story takes a somewhat darker turn during a party they attend, in which [[spoiler: both Adrian and Maria drink something with roofies in it. Carter finds a drunk and horny Adrian in the coat room, where they make out for a few pages. Soon after, Carter leaves and ends up saving Maria from an unknown hockey player.]]
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For the majority of the first and second chapters, Carter does his best to get Adrian to sleep with him, using every method from flat-out asking him ''in a bookstore'' to installing a confetti cannon into Adrian's locker and stuffing hand-written notes into seemingly every crevice. To Adrian's disdain, his friend Maria is even encouraging Carter's desperation. However, Adrian is still getting over a past love - David - and does not appreciate Carter's advances, to say the least.
least. The story takes a somewhat darker turn during a party they attend, in which [[spoiler: both Adrian and Maria drink something with roofies in it. Carter finds a drunk and horny Adrian in the coat room, where they make out for a few pages. Soon after, Carter leaves and ends up saving Maria from an unknown hockey player.]]
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* ArtEvolution: The art style used in the comic starts off very angular, and 'pointy', with the way characters pose looking slightly odd. Fast forward to the newest pages, in which the art looks more professional, shading and poses look well done, and Hazel (the artist) showing a teensy bit of manga inspiration.
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* ArtEvolution: The art style used in the comic starts off very angular, angular and 'pointy', with the way characters pose looking slightly odd. Fast forward to the newest pages, in which the art looks more professional, shading and poses look well done, and Hazel (the artist) showing a teensy bit of manga inspiration.
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* BookEnds: At one point of the story, Carter drives Adrian who still looks uncomfortable around him, [[spoiler:in the end, Carter is driving Adrian to a weekend away with him and their friends, they share a loving look in the last page of the comic.]]
* BrickJoke: Carter fathoms himself to be great at French, then, when Adrian makes a comment on the subject, replies with [[GratuitousSpanish "gracias"]]. At a later occasion, Adrian uses the word "passé"... leading Carter to say "I don't know Spanish, Adrian."
* ChivalrousPervert: Carter. Even though he's after Adrian for a non-commital sex relationship and flirts like a mad man, [[spoiler: he didn't take advantage of Adrian when he was drunk at the party]].
* BrickJoke: Carter fathoms himself to be great at French, then, when Adrian makes a comment on the subject, replies with [[GratuitousSpanish "gracias"]]. At a later occasion, Adrian uses the word "passé"... leading Carter to say "I don't know Spanish, Adrian."
* ChivalrousPervert: Carter. Even though he's after Adrian for a non-commital sex relationship and flirts like a mad man, [[spoiler: he didn't take advantage of Adrian when he was drunk at the party]].
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* BookEnds: At one point of the story, Carter drives Adrian who still looks uncomfortable around him, him; [[spoiler:in the end, Carter is driving Adrian to a weekend away with him and their friends, and they share a loving look in the last page of the comic.]]
* BrickJoke: Carter fathoms himself to be great at French, then, when Adrian makes a comment on the subject, replies with [[GratuitousSpanish "gracias"]].At On a later occasion, Adrian uses the word "passé"... leading Carter to say "I don't know Spanish, Adrian."
* ChivalrousPervert: Carter. Even though he's after Adrian for a non-commital sex relationship and flirts like amad man, madman, [[spoiler: he didn't doesn't take advantage of Adrian when he was he's drunk at the party]].
* BrickJoke: Carter fathoms himself to be great at French, then, when Adrian makes a comment on the subject, replies with [[GratuitousSpanish "gracias"]].
* ChivalrousPervert: Carter. Even though he's after Adrian for a non-commital sex relationship and flirts like a
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Maria calling Carter a "social boundaries infringer" near the beginning of the second chapter. In the first chapter, it was her who got him the key combination for Adrian's locker so he could store a bunch of hand-written proposals for sex there.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: Maria calling Carter a "social boundaries infringer" near the beginning of the second chapter. In the first chapter, it was her who got him the key combination for Adrian's locker so he could store a bunch of hand-written proposals propositions for sex there.
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* ItMeantSomethingToMe: True, Carter initially was after Adrian only for sex, but he seems genuinely heartbroken when [[spoiler:they eventually got intimate with each other and he realizes afterwards that, to Adrian, it was only a bit of stress relief and [[OnTheRebound replacing David]].]]
* KissingUnderTheInfluence: Adrian initiated a full make out session when he was drunk.
* KissingUnderTheInfluence: Adrian initiated a full make out session when he was drunk.
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* ItMeantSomethingToMe: True, Carter initially was is after Adrian only for sex, but he seems genuinely heartbroken when [[spoiler:they eventually got get intimate with each other and he realizes afterwards that, to Adrian, it was only a bit of stress relief and [[OnTheRebound replacing David]].]]
* KissingUnderTheInfluence: Adrian initiated a fullmake out make-out session when he was drunk.
* KissingUnderTheInfluence: Adrian initiated a full
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* StraightGay: Carter. One of his hockey acquaintances was surprised when he finds out that Carter's gay.
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* StraightGay: Carter. One of his hockey acquaintances was is surprised when he finds out that Carter's gay.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Adrian is this, especially in [[http://alwaysraininghere.com/index.php/extras/ Extras]].
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* {{Tsundere}}: Adrian is this, especially in the [[http://alwaysraininghere.com/index.php/extras/ Extras]].
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* BookEnds: At one point of the story, Carter drives Adrian who still looks uncomfortable around him, [[spoiler:in the end, carter is driving Adrian to a weekend away with him and their friends, they share a loving look in the last page of the comic.]]
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* BookEnds: At one point of the story, Carter drives Adrian who still looks uncomfortable around him, [[spoiler:in the end, carter Carter is driving Adrian to a weekend away with him and their friends, they share a loving look in the last page of the comic.]]]]
* BrickJoke: Carter fathoms himself to be great at French, then, when Adrian makes a comment on the subject, replies with [[GratuitousSpanish "gracias"]]. At a later occasion, Adrian uses the word "passé"... leading Carter to say "I don't know Spanish, Adrian."
* BrickJoke: Carter fathoms himself to be great at French, then, when Adrian makes a comment on the subject, replies with [[GratuitousSpanish "gracias"]]. At a later occasion, Adrian uses the word "passé"... leading Carter to say "I don't know Spanish, Adrian."
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* AllGaysArePromiscuous: Played with in regards to Carter.
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* AllGaysArePromiscuous: Played with in regards to Carter. Carter in that he sure would ''[[HormoneAddledTeenager like]]'' to have a lot of sex, but cannot find someone he'd sleep with besides Adrian who rejects his advances. Once he gets to know Adrian a bit better, it's apparent that he's actually very much the type for a committed relationship and capable of emotional attachment.
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* EducationMama: Both of Adrian's parents are this, leading him to study diligently for hours deep into the night.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Maria chews Adrian out for using Carter as an outlet for his frustrations, especially since, after what has been with David, he should know not to involve someone else's feelings in his selfish whims.
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* ItMeantSomethingToMe: True, Carter initially was after Adrian only for sex, but he seems genuinely heartbroken when [[spoiler:they eventually got intimate with each other and he realizes afterwards that, to Adrian, it was only a bit of stress relief and [[OnTheRebound replacing David]].]]
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* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: [[spoiler:Adrian and Carter]] get it on with on the kitchen floor.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Carter. Even though he's after Adrian for a one-night-stand and flirts like a mad man, [[spoiler: he didn't take advantage of Adrian when he was drunk at the party]].
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* ChivalrousPervert: Carter. Even though he's after Adrian for a one-night-stand non-commital sex relationship and flirts like a mad man, [[spoiler: he didn't take advantage of Adrian when he was drunk at the party]].
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* OpenMindedParents: Carter's parents apparently had an idea that he was gay before he had; his mother made a bet on it.
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* OpenMindedParents: OpenMindedParent: Carter's parents apparently had an idea that he was gay before he had; his mother made a bet on it.
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* EntitledToHaveYou: Carter seems to think that, because he's one of the very few gay guys at their school and probably the only one who's not closeted or hideous, Adrian just has to sleep with him. Luckily, he grows out of that attitude.
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* OpenMindedParents: Carter's parents apparently had an idea that he was gay before he had; his mother made a bet on it.
