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In the midst of this is [[SuperTeam The Vanguard Militia]], a group spread out through the whole Solar System who received SuperPowers through an as-of-yet unexplained cosmic event and use them to help police the international relations and keep them on the straight and narrow [[KnightTemplar through almost any means necessary]].
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The story takes place in [[TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture the year 2151]] where a [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalypse humanity]] has rebuilt civilization into the [[TheFederation The Commonwealth of Earth]] and colonized the rest of the Solar System. Once they left the planet Earth, they fractured into other nations - two of them. [[PoliceState The Coalition]] [[BigBrotherIsWatching of Mars]] and the [[FeudalFuture The Kingdoms of Venus]].
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''The Sol Wars'' is a web series written by Fulcon.
The story takes place in [[TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture the year 2151]] where a [[AfterTheEnd Post-Apocolypse Humanity]] has rebuilt civilization into the [[TheFederation The Commonwealth of Earth]] and colonized the rest of the Solar System. Once they left the planet Earth, they fractured into other nations - two of them. [[PoliceState The Coalition]] [[BigBrotherIsWatching of Mars]] and the [[FeudalFuture The Kingdoms of Venus]].
In the midst of this is [[SuperTeam The Vanguard Militia]], a group spread out through the whole Solar System who received SuperPowers through an as-of-yet unexplained cosmic event and use them to help police the international relations and keep them on the straight and narrow [[KnightTemplar through almost any means necessary]].
Can be read [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3293537/1/The-Sol-Wars here]].
'''Tropes associated with The Sol Wars-'''
*AfterTheEnd: The story takes place after human civilization collapsed due to a series of plagues - an unusual example in that it takes place after it's been rebuilt as well.
*AIIsACrapshoot: Arguably Averted - The Vanguard are led by an AI named Sentinel, who is very concerned with the ethics of the organization.
*AnIcePerson: Kylie - who has the power to freeze herself. She primarily uses it to keep [[EnergyWeapons her]][[MoreDakka weapon]] cool so it [[HeroicRROD doesn't melt in her hands]].
*FlyingCar: Jason owns a red one.
*SuperSpeed: Jason's power - restricted in that he can only maintain it for a few seconds.
*TheFederation: The Commonwealth.
The story takes place in [[TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture the year 2151]] where a [[AfterTheEnd Post-Apocolypse Humanity]] has rebuilt civilization into the [[TheFederation The Commonwealth of Earth]] and colonized the rest of the Solar System. Once they left the planet Earth, they fractured into other nations - two of them. [[PoliceState The Coalition]] [[BigBrotherIsWatching of Mars]] and the [[FeudalFuture The Kingdoms of Venus]].
In the midst of this is [[SuperTeam The Vanguard Militia]], a group spread out through the whole Solar System who received SuperPowers through an as-of-yet unexplained cosmic event and use them to help police the international relations and keep them on the straight and narrow [[KnightTemplar through almost any means necessary]].
Can be read [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3293537/1/The-Sol-Wars here]].
'''Tropes associated with The Sol Wars-'''
*AfterTheEnd: The story takes place after human civilization collapsed due to a series of plagues - an unusual example in that it takes place after it's been rebuilt as well.
*AIIsACrapshoot: Arguably Averted - The Vanguard are led by an AI named Sentinel, who is very concerned with the ethics of the organization.
*AnIcePerson: Kylie - who has the power to freeze herself. She primarily uses it to keep [[EnergyWeapons her]][[MoreDakka weapon]] cool so it [[HeroicRROD doesn't melt in her hands]].
*FlyingCar: Jason owns a red one.
*SuperSpeed: Jason's power - restricted in that he can only maintain it for a few seconds.
*TheFederation: The Commonwealth.
