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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man, a previously, and intended, minor comic relief character who began as a non-speaking role, has been voted the third most popular character after Misty and Reg, and given his own plot arc. [[spoiler: VIVA LA UNDERGROWTH!]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: The elven party came just in time for poor Misty
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* BigDamnHeroes: The elven party came just in time for poor MistyMisty.
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What part of "ALPHABETICAL ORDER" is so hard? I'm too tired to fix it all atm.
* ActionGirl: Recruit Reg is clearly one of these, especially when she gets angry.
* AnyoneCanDie: if (ANNOYED_W_FANS==true) { KILL_CHAR(rand()); }
* AnyoneCanDie: if (ANNOYED_W_FANS==true) { KILL_CHAR(rand()); }
* BadLiar: It isn't a good idea to use an order from the mayor as an excuse when talking to the mayor himself.
* CerebusSyndrome: The story takes a couple of turns into darker comedy, once along the journey and once at the end. To be expected from Dwarf Fortress.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The story takes CoolOldGuy: Captain Holt. He isn't bad with a couple of turns into darker comedy, once along the journey and once at the end. To be expected from Dwarf Fortress.blade either.
* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' mule has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.
* ElvesVsDwarves: Misty's biological parents died in the Great Elf-Dwarf War, and signs of the war show up from time to time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together. All that goes right out the window when they reach Shielddawn, though.
* ExactWords: Misty is forbidden from opening her door... but not from deconstructing a nearby wall and escaping through the adjacent room.
* ElvesVsDwarves: Misty's biological parents died in the Great Elf-Dwarf War, and signs of the war show up from time to time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together. All that goes right out the window when they reach Shielddawn, though.
* ExactWords: Misty is forbidden from opening her door... but not from deconstructing a nearby wall and escaping through the adjacent room.
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler:Gods, your dad is such an ass.]]
* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith and de facto leader of the migrant group]], finds out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith and de facto leader of the migrant group]], finds out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
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* ElvesVsDwarves: Misty's biological parents died in the Great Elf-Dwarf War, and signs of the war show up from time to time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together. All that goes right out the window when they reach Shielddawn, though.
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* ExactWords: Misty is forbidden from opening her door... but not from deconstructing a nearby wall and escaping through the adjacent room.
* BadLiar: It isn't a good idea to use an order from the mayor as an excuse when talking to the mayor himself.
* ActionGirl: Recruit Reg is clearly one of these, especially when she gets angry.
* CoolOldGuy: Captain Holt. He isn't bad with a blade either.
* BadLiar: It isn't a good idea to use an order from the mayor as an excuse when talking to the mayor himself.
* ActionGirl: Recruit Reg is clearly one of these, especially when she gets angry.
* CoolOldGuy: Captain Holt. He isn't bad with a blade either.
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* WindmillCrusader: Reg is absolutely convinced that kobolds are behind everything. EVERYTHING.
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* EatTheDog: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man already has a bite taken out of his head when he is first introduced, and the elves' mule has been gradually eating him alive, piece by piece. Given the usual role of Plump Helmet Men in dwarf culture, it is not unlikely that he is being kept as emergency rations to begin with.
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]
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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]]]
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:Gods, your dad is such an ass.]]
* WindmillCrusader: Reg is absolutely convinced that kobolds are behind everything. EVERYTHING.
* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith and de facto leader of the migrant group]], finds out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
* WhamLine: [[spoiler:Gods, your dad is such an ass.]]
* WindmillCrusader: Reg is absolutely convinced that kobolds are behind everything. EVERYTHING.
* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith and de facto leader of the migrant group]], finds out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
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Blessed Are The Cheesemakers is being cut as a result of discussion at this thread: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=1452198729060688300
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* BlessedAreTheCheesemakers: Literally, considering Misty's interpretation of Cowsea.
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* [[Obstructive Bureaucrat]]: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]
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* [[Obstructive Bureaucrat]]: ObstructiveBureaucrat: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]
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* Obstructive Bureaucrat: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]
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* Obstructive Bureaucrat: [[Obstructive Bureaucrat]]: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man, a previously, and intended, minor comic relief character who began as a non-speaking role, has been voted the third most popular character after Misty and Reg, and given his own plot arc. [[spoiler: VIVA LA UNDERGROWTH!]]
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man, a previously, and intended, minor comic relief character who began as a non-speaking role, has been voted the third most popular character after Misty and Reg, and given his own plot arc. [[spoiler: VIVA LA UNDERGROWTH!]]UNDERGROWTH!]]
* Obstructive Bureaucrat: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]
* Obstructive Bureaucrat: [[spoiler: Enir Twigappears, the Overseer of Shielddawn. She crushed Misty's dreams by a single phrase. Also, she speaks in the same tone about weather, work, severed heads, someone dying from starvation...]]
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A DwarfFortress tale in the style of MSPA, written by [=evictedSaint=], about a young dwarf girl who has recently come of age and is ready to pursue her life-long goal of becoming The Greatest Cheesemaker ''Ever.'' That is, if everyone in her home fort wasn't so against it. So, she must sneak away and set off with the next group of migrants to the mighty fortress of [=ShieldDawn=]. [[TemptingFate After all, there must be a place for a cheesemaker in such a grand hall, right?]]
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A DwarfFortress ''VideoGame/DwarfFortress'' tale in the style of MSPA, written by [=evictedSaint=], about a young dwarf girl who has recently come of age and is ready to pursue her life-long goal of becoming The Greatest Cheesemaker ''Ever.'' That is, if everyone in her home fort wasn't so against it. So, she must sneak away and set off with the next group of migrants to the mighty fortress of [=ShieldDawn=]. [[TemptingFate After all, there must be a place for a cheesemaker in such a grand hall, right?]]
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man, a minor comic relief character with a non-speaking role, has been voted the third most popular character after Misty and Reg.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man, a previously, and intended, minor comic relief character with who began as a non-speaking role, has been voted the third most popular character after Misty and Reg.Reg, and given his own plot arc. [[spoiler: VIVA LA UNDERGROWTH!]]
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* TheVoiceless: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man.
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* TheVoiceless: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man.[[spoiler: Until the first update of the third plot, where he is revealed as Che Plumpy.]]
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* TheVoiceless: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man.
* TheChewToy: Plumpy again. Literally, in his case.
* TheChewToy: Plumpy again. Literally, in his case.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Reg. She might be a little too obsessed with kobolds, but are you going to argue with someone who can bisect a night creature with a single slice?
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Reg. She might be a little too obsessed with kobolds, but are you going to argue with someone who can bisect a night creature with a single slice?slice?
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man, a minor comic relief character with a non-speaking role, has been voted the third most popular character after Misty and Reg.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Plumpy the Plump Helmet Man, a minor comic relief character with a non-speaking role, has been voted the third most popular character after Misty and Reg.
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* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith]], finds out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
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* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith]], armorsmith and de facto leader of the migrant group]], finds out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
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* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]], who happens to be [[PrecociousCrush almost 30]] based on WordOfGod.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]], who happens to be [[PrecociousCrush almost 30]] and married, based on WordOfGod.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]], who happens to be [[PreciousCrush almost 30]] based on WordOfGod.
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* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]], who happens to be [[PreciousCrush [[PrecociousCrush almost 30]] based on WordOfGod.
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* TheWorfEffect: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith, found out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]].
* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance elf]].
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* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler: Rimtar, the burly armorsmith, found armorsmith]], finds out the hard way that undead are not to be trifled with. Even if they are building some kind of nefarious road...
* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomanceelf]].elf]], who happens to be [[PreciousCrush almost 30]] based on WordOfGod.
* {{Tsundere}}: Misty to Darkerdaffodil the [[InterspeciesRomance
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A DwarfFortress tale in the style of MSPA, written by [=evictedSaint=], about a young dwarf girl who has recently come of age and is ready to pursue her life-long goal of becoming The Greatest Cheesemaker ''Ever.'' That is, if everyone in her home fort wasn't so against it. So, she must sneak away and set off with the next group of migrants to the mighty fortress of [=ShieldDawn=]. [[TemptingFate After all, there must be a place for a cheesemaker in such a grand hall, right?
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A DwarfFortress tale in the style of MSPA, written by [=evictedSaint=], about a young dwarf girl who has recently come of age and is ready to pursue her life-long goal of becoming The Greatest Cheesemaker ''Ever.'' That is, if everyone in her home fort wasn't so against it. So, she must sneak away and set off with the next group of migrants to the mighty fortress of ShieldDawn.[=ShieldDawn=]. After all, there must be a place for a cheesemaker in such a grand hall, right?
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* BadassAdorable: Reg. No doubt about it.
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* BlessedAreTheCheesemakers: Literally, considering Misty's interpretation of Cowsea
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* BlessedAreTheCheesemakers: Literally, considering Misty's interpretation of CowseaCowsea.
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* CerebusSyndrome: The story takes a couple of turns into darker comedy, once along the journey and once at the end. To be expected, from Dwarf Fortress
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* CerebusSyndrome: The story takes a couple of turns into darker comedy, once along the journey and once at the end. To be expected, expected from Dwarf FortressFortress.
* CutesyDwarf: Misty. She is ''adorable''.
* CutesyDwarf: Misty. She is ''adorable''.
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* {{Deutragonist}}: Reg is the {{Deutragonist}} to Misty's protagonist.
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* {{Deutragonist}}: {{Deuteragonist}}: Reg is the {{Deutragonist}} {{Deuteragonist}} to Misty's protagonist.
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* ActionGirl: Reg. Misty, too, though to a lesser extent.
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* ActionGirl: Reg. Misty, too, though to Recruit Reg is clearly one of these, especially when she gets angry.
* CoolOldGuy: Captain Holt. He isn't bad with alesser extent.blade either.
* CoolOldGuy: Captain Holt. He isn't bad with a
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* ThrowingYourSwordAlwaysWorks: Holt disarms a night creature with a thrown blade. Literally.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: Misty's biological parents died in the Great Elf-Dwarf War, and signs of the war show up from time to time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together.
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* ElvesVsDwarves: Misty's biological parents died in the Great Elf-Dwarf War, and signs of the war show up from time to time. The elves consider the dwarves barbaric for destroying trees, and the Dwarven creation myth apparently holds that elves were the last of Armok's creations, right after the 'creeping, crawling, ugly things'. Even so, there are signs of the two races attempting to come to a better understanding of each other, and the dwarven migrants get along all right with the elven caravan when they decide to travel together. All that goes right out the window when they reach Shielddawn, though.
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* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is [[spoiler: watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier]].
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* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching upon setting foot in Shielddawn is [[spoiler: watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier]].
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* SacrificialLamb: Darkerdaffodil, the nice elf who saves the migrants from the zombies, becomes friends with Misty and the first person to believe in her dream, is shot on sight, along with the rest of the elves, the moment the migrants set foot in Shielddawn.
* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier.
* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding soldier.
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* SacrificialLamb: Darkerdaffodil, the nice elf who saves the migrants from the zombies, becomes friends with Misty and the first person to believe in her dream, is shot on sight, along with the rest of the elves, the moment the migrants set foot in Shielddawn.
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* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is [[spoiler: watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wieldingsoldier.soldier]].
* [[WelcomeToTheBigCity Welcome to the Dwarf Fortress]]: Misty's first experience the moment reaching Shielddawn is [[spoiler: watching her new elvish friend get shot in the throat with a crossbow and then killed by an axe-wielding
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* AnyoneCanDie: Below the author's avatar: if (ANNOYED_W_FANS==true) { KILL_CHAR(rand()); }
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* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Two]][[ThoseTwoBadGuys (Bad?)]][[ThoseTwoGuys Guys]]: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.
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* [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Two]][[ThoseTwoBadGuys (Bad?)]][[ThoseTwoGuys Two]] [[ThoseTwoBadGuys (Bad?)]] [[ThoseTwoGuys Guys]]: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.
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* [ThoseTwoGuys Those Two][ThoseTwoBadGuys (Bad?)][ThoseTwoGuys Guys]: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.
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* [ThoseTwoGuys [[ThoseTwoGuys Those Two][ThoseTwoBadGuys (Bad?)][ThoseTwoGuys Guys]: Two]][[ThoseTwoBadGuys (Bad?)]][[ThoseTwoGuys Guys]]: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.
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* ThoseTwoGuys/ThoseTwoBadGuys: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.
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* ThoseTwoGuys/ThoseTwoBadGuys: [ThoseTwoGuys Those Two][ThoseTwoBadGuys (Bad?)][ThoseTwoGuys Guys]: [[StraightMan Captain Gruzzluss Holt]] and [[WindmillCrusader Recruit Reg Pashmad]]. They aren't evil, but they still count as antagonists within the context of the story in that their mission is to capture Misty and bring her home against her will.