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* SugarApocalypse: PlayedForDrama in ''[=CRiTORA=]: Abnormal'' where in the past, [=CRiTOPiA=] is swarmed and overrun by the [=ViRUSES=]. This event was known as the Infestation Invasion.
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* SugarApocalypse: PlayedForDrama in ''[=CRiTORA=]: Abnormal'' where in with the past, Infestation Invasion, an event in which [=CRiTOPiA=] is was swarmed and overrun by the [=ViRUSES=]. This event was known as the Infestation Invasion.[=ViRUSES=].
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* DrivesLikeCrazy: Avery tends to go a little too fast when piloting airships, as seen in "Airship Joyride" and the novelization.
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** In "Airship Joyride", Buttons Chopchop [[FreezeFrameBonus briefly]] flips upside down while the text "Dinnerbone" appears above her, referencing a certain EasterEgg from ''VideoGame/{{Minecraft}}''.
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** In "How [=CRiTORA=] are Created", Avery accidentally plows through a branch Grinny Hackel is sitting on. The unfortunate fellow [[GravityIsAHarshMistress hangs in the air for a second, then plummets]] while uttering a Wilhelm scream.
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** In The Wilhelm scream is uttered on multiple occasions, such as:
*** By Grinny Hackel in "How [=CRiTORA=] are Created", when Averyaccidentally plows through a branch Grinny Hackel is he's sitting on. The unfortunate fellow [[GravityIsAHarshMistress hangs on.
*** By Coneboy inthe air for a second, then plummets]] "Statue Contest", when he's flung backwards while uttering trying to wield a Wilhelm scream.hammer that's too big for him.
*** By Lumpty Bumpty in "Airship Joyride", when Avery's airship knocks him off the wall he's seated on.
*** By Grinny Hackel in "How [=CRiTORA=] are Created", when Avery
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*** By Lumpty Bumpty in "Airship Joyride", when Avery's airship knocks him off the wall he's seated on.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Gardien Luniere's name is derived from French, and it roughly translates to "Moon guardian", which is about as on-the-nose as you can get for the [=GUARDiAN=] of the Moon district.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Gardien Luniere's name is derived from French, and it roughly translates to "Moon "moon guardian", which is about as on-the-nose as you can get for the [=GUARDiAN=] of the Moon district.
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* ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin: Gardien Luniere's name is derived from French, and it roughly translates to "Moon guardian", which is about as on-the-nose as you can get for the [=GUARDiAN=] of the Moon district.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [[SugarApocalypse Infestation Invasion]] was started when Eggy and Yolky were trying to play a game of catch. Then Eggy threw the ball a little too far and Yolky ran off to get it... unaware that a [=ViRUS=] was hidden in the bush it had landed next to. Needless to say, she subsequently became the invasion's first victim.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [[SugarApocalypse Infestation Invasion]] was started when began while Eggy and Yolky were trying to play a game of catch. Then Eggy threw the ball a little too far and Yolky ran off to get it... unaware that a [=ViRUS=] was hidden in the bush it had landed next to. Needless to say, she subsequently became the invasion's first victim.
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* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Eggy, Yolky, and Ribbon seem to be the youngest [=CRiTORA=], with all three of them being four years old. {{Justified|Trope}}, since Eggy was the first [=CRiTORA=] that OS had ever created.
* BadassAdorable: Some of the [=GUARDiANS=], such as [[PreciousPuppy Roxey Robowoof]], have sweet-looking designs, and they were able to put an end to the Infestation Invasion.
* BadassAdorable: Some of the [=GUARDiANS=], such as [[PreciousPuppy Roxey Robowoof]], have sweet-looking designs, and they were able to put an end to the Infestation Invasion.
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* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Eggy, Yolky, and Ribbon and Pop & Pip Singolon seem to be the youngest [=CRiTORA=], with all three of them being four years old. {{Justified|Trope}}, since Eggy was and Yolky were the first two [=CRiTORA=] that OS had ever created.
* BadassAdorable: Some of the [=GUARDiANS=], such as [[RobotDog Roxey]] [[PreciousPuppyRoxey Robowoof]], have sweet-looking designs, and they were able to put an end to the Infestation Invasion.
* BadassAdorable: Some of the [=GUARDiANS=], such as [[RobotDog Roxey]] [[PreciousPuppy
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [[SugarApocalypse Infestation Invasion]] was started when Eggy and Yolky were trying to play ball, until they got infected by [=ViRUSES=].
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [[SugarApocalypse Infestation Invasion]] was started when Eggy and Yolky were trying to play ball, until they got infected by [=ViRUSES=].a game of catch. Then Eggy threw the ball a little too far and Yolky ran off to get it... unaware that a [=ViRUS=] was hidden in the bush it had landed next to. Needless to say, she subsequently became the invasion's first victim.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The [=ViRUSES=] are not above infecting any [=CRiTORA=] that are children. Most especially evident with the start of the Infestation Invasion, in which the first two [=CRiTORA=] to get infected were Yolky and Eggy, who are both only ''four years old''.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The [=ViRUSES=] are not above infecting any [=CRiTORA=] that are children. Most especially evident with the start of the Infestation Invasion, in which the first two [=CRiTORA=] to get infected were Yolky and Eggy, who are both of them only ''four years old''.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no]] [[RobotBuddy name[=]=]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild Eg]][[BurningWithAnger gy]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no]] [[RobotBuddy name[=]=]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild [[TheBabyOfTheBunch Eg]][[BurningWithAnger gy]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no]] [[RobotBuddy name[=]=]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild Eg]][[PlayingWithFire gy]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no]] [[RobotBuddy name[=]=]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild Eg]][[PlayingWithFire Eg]][[BurningWithAnger gy]].]]
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* TheBabyOfTheBunch: Eggy, Yolky, and Ribbon seem to be the youngest [=CRiTORA=], with all three of them being four years old. {{Justified|Trope}}, since Eggy was the first [=CRiTORA=] that OS had ever created.
* BadassAdorable: Some of the [=GUARDiANS=], such as [[PreciousPuppy Roxey Robowoof]], have sweet-looking designs, and they were able to put an end to the Infestation Invasion.
* BadassAdorable: Some of the [=GUARDiANS=], such as [[PreciousPuppy Roxey Robowoof]], have sweet-looking designs, and they were able to put an end to the Infestation Invasion.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: [[TheBabyOfTheBunch Eggy]] is normally outgoing, but he will go absolutely ''berserk'' around [=ViRUSES=], and will not stop until they are down.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The [=ViRUSES=] are not above infecting any [=CRiTORA=] that are children.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The [=ViRUSES=] are not above infecting any [=CRiTORA=] that are children. Most especially evident with the start of the Infestation Invasion, in which the first two [=CRiTORA=] to get infected were Yolky and Eggy, who are both only ''four years old''.
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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: The [[SugarApocalypse Infestation Invasion]] was started when Eggy and Yolky were trying to play ball, until they got infected by [=ViRUSES=].
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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Eggy and Yolky only speak in high-pitched squeaks, but everyone else understands them just fine. The same applies to Cloud, who only whistles to speak, and Stella Twirlwindy, who only speaks in cartoon sound effects.
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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Eggy and Yolky only speak in high-pitched squeaks, but everyone else understands them just fine. The same applies to Cloud, who Cloud (who only whistles to speak, and whistles), Stella Twirlwindy, who only Twirlwindy (who speaks in with cartoon sound effects.effects), and BONUS (who uses PokemonSpeak).
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Adapted from a Main/{{Webcomic}} inspired by ''WesternAnimation/{{Mixels}}'' in 2016, the series has continued to develop over several years, with the pilot season debuting on July 29, 2020, on Website/{{YouTube}}, with the first season later debuting on August 6, 2021.
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Adapted from a Main/{{Webcomic}} inspired by ''WesternAnimation/{{Mixels}}'' in 2016, the series has continued to develop over several years, with the pilot season debuting on July 29, 2020, on Website/{{YouTube}}, Platform/{{YouTube}}, with the first season later debuting on August 6, 2021.
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* SpinOff: Of the creator's old ''WesternAnimation/{{Mixels}}'' OCs and a little-known webcomic published on Website/{{Smack Jeeves}} called ''Avey.''
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* SpinOff: Of the creator's old ''WesternAnimation/{{Mixels}}'' OCs and a little-known webcomic published on Website/{{Smack Platform/{{Smack Jeeves}} called ''Avey.''
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no]] [[RobotBuddy name]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild Eg]][[PlayingWithFire gy]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no]] [[RobotBuddy name]]], name[=]=]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild Eg]][[PlayingWithFire gy]].]]
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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Eggy and Yolky only speak in high-pitched squeaks, but everyone else understands them just fine. The same applies to Stella Twirlwindy, who only speaks in cartoon sound effects.
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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Eggy and Yolky only speak in high-pitched squeaks, but everyone else understands them just fine. The same applies to Cloud, who only whistles to speak, and Stella Twirlwindy, who only speaks in cartoon sound effects.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Chapter 9 of ''[=CRiTORA=]: Abnormal'' reveals that [[spoiler:being a [=V-CRiTORA=] is one. They only act vicious if there are other [=CRiTORA=] around to infect. If there aren't, they'll come back to their senses. This implies that all [=V-CRiTORA=] are aware of their condition on some level, but can't do anything about it unless they find the means to cure themselves]].
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Chapter 9 of ''[=CRiTORA=]: Abnormal'' reveals that [[spoiler:being a [=V-CRiTORA=] is one. They only act vicious if there are other [=CRiTORA=] around to infect. If there aren't, they'll come back to their senses. This implies that all [=V-CRiTORA=] are aware of their condition on some level, but can't do anything about it unless they find the means to cure themselves]].themselves, they're out of luck. Also, [=CRiTORA=] can't die under normal circumstances, not even while infected, which pushes this into AndIMustScream territory]].
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** Contradicted in Meetup Mayhem (Part 1), in which Eggy's panicked worry about an encounter with a [=ViRUS=] isn't grasped upon Coneboy because he could not understand his squeaks... or anything. So much so, that Eggy [[WhoWritesThisCrap looks over his script]] and further demonstrates to Coneboy what he just said [[TalkingThroughTechnique with a bush and some props]] before running away. [[note]]Although, this episode [[CanonDiscontinuity isn't canon anymore]], so it doesn't count.[[/note]]
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** Contradicted in Meetup Mayhem (Part 1), in which Eggy's panicked worry about an encounter with a [=ViRUS=] isn't grasped upon Coneboy because he could not understand his squeaks... or anything. So much so, that Eggy [[WhoWritesThisCrap looks over his script]] and further demonstrates to Coneboy what he just said [[TalkingThroughTechnique with a bush and some props]] before running away. [[note]]Although, this episode [[CanonDiscontinuity isn't canon anymore]], so it doesn't count.[[/note]][[/note]]
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: After the [[SugarApocalypse Infestation Invasion]] was resolved, OS erased every [=CRiTORA=]'s memories of the event. The memory wipe unfortunately failed on seven [=CRiTORA=] with particularly rough lives, who went on to form the [=CRiViRUS=] Gang.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: After the [[SugarApocalypse Infestation Invasion]] was resolved, OS erased every [=CRiTORA=]'s memories of the event. The memory wipe unfortunately failed on seven [=CRiTORA=] with particularly rough lives, who went on to form the [=CRiViRUS=] Gang.
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* AnthropomorphicFood: Plenty of [=CRiTORA=] look like this, most of them from the Food District. Caroline Cakepod, for example, looks like a cake.
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* AnthropomorphicFood: Plenty of [=CRiTORA=] look like this, most of them from the Food District. Caroline Cakepod, for example, looks like a [[AnimalMotifs whale-themed]] cake.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The [=ViRUSES=] are not above infecting any [=CRiTORA=] that are children.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: ''[=CRiTORA: Abnormal=]'' has a darker tone compared to the main series. This is ''especially'' true for the now-scrapped initial version, which involved a permanent [=V-CRiTORA=] slashing through and deleting anything (and [[AnyoneCanDie any]]''[[AnyoneCanDie one]]'') in its path. However, this idea was ultimately abandoned for being ''too'' dark. While the rebooted version is LighterAndSofter compared to that, it's still noticeably darker than the main series, with the usual wacky hijinks largely absent in favor of a more dramatic, high-stakes narrative.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: ''[=CRiTORA: Abnormal=]'' has a darker tone compared to the main series. This is ''especially'' true for the now-scrapped initial version, which involved a permanent [=V-CRiTORA=] (who would later be known as V-Yolky) slashing through and deleting anything (and [[AnyoneCanDie any]]''[[AnyoneCanDie one]]'') ''[[AnyoneCanDie anyone]]'') in its path. However, this idea was ultimately abandoned for being ''too'' dark. While the rebooted version is LighterAndSofter compared to that, it's still noticeably darker than the main series, with the usual wacky hijinks largely absent in favor of a more dramatic, high-stakes narrative.
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* EnfantTerrible: [[CuteKitten Ne & Ko Felipom]], who are stated to be the youngest villain [=CRiTORA=], both being only ''six years old''.
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* ShoutOut: A few of Coneboy's accessories in "The Trash Can" reference ''Toys/LittlestPetShop'', ''Franchise/AngryBirds'', ''ComicStrip/{{Peanuts}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/WonderPets''.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** At one point, in "Error 404", scribbles of ''VideoGame/CookieRun'' characters can be seen on the walls.
** A few of Coneboy's accessories in "The Trash Can" reference ''Toys/LittlestPetShop'', ''Franchise/AngryBirds'', ''ComicStrip/{{Peanuts}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/WonderPets''.
** At one point, in "Error 404", scribbles of ''VideoGame/CookieRun'' characters can be seen on the walls.
** A few of Coneboy's accessories in "The Trash Can" reference ''Toys/LittlestPetShop'', ''Franchise/AngryBirds'', ''ComicStrip/{{Peanuts}}'' and ''WesternAnimation/WonderPets''.
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* TheVirus: A [=ViRUS=] infection turns a [=CRiTORA=] into a [=V-CRiTORA=], able to infect normal [=CRiTORA=] with a single touch.
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* TheVirus: A [=ViRUS=] infection turns mutates a [=CRiTORA=] into a [=V-CRiTORA=], able corrupting their appearance and causing them to attack and infect normal other [=CRiTORA=] with a single touch.on sight.
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Note: I wrote the script for Meetup Mayhem so I'm allowed to insult it.
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** Contradicted in Meetup Mayhem (Part 1), in which Eggy's panicked worry about an encounter with a ViRUS isn't grasped upon Coneboy because he could not understand his squeaks... or anything. So much so, that Eggy [[WhoWritesThisCrap looks over his script]] and further demonstrates to Coneboy what he just said [[TalkingThroughTechnique with a bush and some props]] before running away. [[note]]Although, this episode [[CanonDiscontinuity isn't canon anymore]], so it doesn't count.[[/note]]
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** Contradicted in Meetup Mayhem (Part 1), in which Eggy's panicked worry about an encounter with a ViRUS isn't grasped upon Coneboy because he could not understand his squeaks... or anything. So much so, that Eggy [[WhoWritesThisCrap looks over his script]] and further demonstrates to Coneboy what he just said [[TalkingThroughTechnique with a bush and some props]] before running away. [[note]]Although, this episode isn't canon anymore, so it doesn't count.[[/note]]
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** Contradicted in Meetup Mayhem (Part 1), in which Eggy's panicked worry about an encounter with a ViRUS isn't grasped upon Coneboy because he could not understand his squeaks... or anything. So much so, that Eggy [[WhoWritesThisCrap looks over his script]] and further demonstrates to Coneboy what he just said [[TalkingThroughTechnique with a bush and some props]] before running away. [[note]]Although, this episode [[CanonDiscontinuity isn't canon anymore, anymore]], so it doesn't count.[[/note]]
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* LimitedAnimation: In Season 0. Starting with Season 1, the animation become much more fluid. It switched back to a more limited style in Season 2-- according to WordOfGod, this was done to make animating for the show easier and less stressful.
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** Contradicted in Meetup Mayhem (Part 1), in which Eggy's panicked worry about an encounter with a ViRUS isn't grasped upon Coneboy because he could not understand his squeaks... or anything. So much so, that Eggy [[WhoWritesThisCrap looks over his script]] and further demonstrates to Coneboy what he just said [[TalkingThroughTechnique with a bush and some props]] before running away. [[note]]Although, this episode isn't canon anymore, so it doesn't count.[[/note]]
* LimitedAnimation: In Season 0. Starting with Season 1, the animationbecome becomes much more fluid. It switched back to a more limited style in Season 2-- according to WordOfGod, this was done to make animating for the show easier and less stressful.
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* MadEye: A uncommon design quirk for some of the characters. It's a lot more common for [=ViRUSES=] and [=V-CRiTORA=].
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* SailorEarth: Many of those in the fanbase have created their own [=CRiTORA=] based on different themes.
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* SailorEarth: Many of those in the fanbase its fans have created their own [=CRiTORA=] based on different themes.
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** A few [=CRiTORA=] are shout-outs by design. For example, Isaac X-Beetle, Miyamoto Blockinjump and Paratchet Stataplay each reference one of the "Big Three" of gaming companies (Creator/{{Microsoft}}, Creator/{{Nintendo}} and Creator/{{Sony}} respectively).
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** A few [=CRiTORA=] are shout-outs by design. For example, Isaac X-Beetle, Miyamoto Blockinjump Blockinjump, and Paratchet Stataplay each reference one of the "Big Three" of gaming companies (Creator/{{Microsoft}}, Creator/{{Nintendo}} and Creator/{{Sony}} respectively).
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* TrappedInVillainy: In the bonus chapter of ''[=CRiTORA=]: Abnormal'', it's revealed that [[spoiler:this is Queen Creatophage's situation. She ended up in the Abnormal District, then ran into VS, with whom she made a deal to save her own life. That deal just happened to entail aiding VS in her quest to destroy [=CRiTOPiA=].]]
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* TrappedInVillainy: In the bonus chapter of ''[=CRiTORA=]: Abnormal'', it's revealed that [[spoiler:this is Queen Creatophage's situation. She ended up in the Abnormal District, and then ran into VS, with whom she made a deal to save her own life. That deal just happened to entail aiding VS in her quest to destroy [=CRiTOPiA=].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no name]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild Eggy]].]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Clockwise from top: [[NoNameGiven [no [no]] [[RobotBuddy name]]], [[TheSmartGuy Bunsen]] [[ShockAndAwe Bitz]], [[TheMedic Nuzzie]] [[LightEmUp Bitz]], [[LadyOfAdventure Avery]] [[GadgeteerGenius Darling]], [[TheLeader Spottie]] [[ImaginationBasedSuperpower Leonard]], [[BewareTheSillyOnes Coneboy]] [[BoxingBattler Golliday]], [[GentleGiant Big G]] [[SuperToughness Miner]]. In the center: [[CheerfulChild Eggy]].Eg]][[PlayingWithFire gy]].]]
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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Eggy and Yolky only speak in high-pitched squeaks, but everyone else understands them just fine.
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* IntelligibleUnintelligible: Eggy and Yolky only speak in high-pitched squeaks, but everyone else understands them just fine. The same applies to Stella Twirlwindy, who only speaks in cartoon sound effects.