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[[WMG: The South is a standing for the US, Sentan island for Japan, and the north for China.]]
[[WMG: No, Sentan Island is Japan, but the south is China and the north is Russia.]]
[[WMG: No, Sentan Island is Japan, but the south is China and the north is Russia.]]
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[[WMG: The South is a standing stand in for the US, Sentan island Island for Japan, and the north North for China.]]
[[WMG: No, Sentan Island is Japan, but thesouth South is China and the north North is Russia.]]
[[WMG: No, Sentan Island is Japan, but the
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[[WMG: Both the North and South were once a single country but split due to scientific and religious views.]]
[[WMG: Had furuichi gestated first Haru would have fallen in love with him instead of akiyuki.]]
[[WMG: Had furuichi gestated first Haru would have fallen in love with him instead of akiyuki.]]
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[[WMG: Both the The North and South were once a single country but split due to scientific and religious views.]]
[[WMG: Hadfuruichi Guruichi gestated first first, Haru would have fallen in love with him instead of akiyuki.Akiyuki.]]
[[WMG: Had
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[[WMG: Had Akiyuki not given away his armband, Midori would have recieved the hiroku.]]
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[[WMG: Had Akiyuki not given away his armband, Midori would have recieved received the hiroku.]]
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[[WMG: Both the North and South were once a single country but split due to scientific and religious views.]]
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[[WMG: Both the North and South were once a single country but split due to scientific and religious views.]]
[[WMG: Had furuichi gestated first Haru would have fallen in love with him instead of akiyuki.]]
[[WMG: The Xam'd and human forms are the next step in earth's evolutionary path.]]
[[WMG: Had Akiyuki not given away his armband, Midori would have recieved the hiroku.]]
[[WMG: Prios is a Xam'd who has obtained full instrumentality with her hiroku.]]
[[WMG: The mainsoul mechas are Xam'd:LoM's equivalent of EVAs.]]
[[WMG: Had furuichi gestated first Haru would have fallen in love with him instead of akiyuki.]]
[[WMG: The Xam'd and human forms are the next step in earth's evolutionary path.]]
[[WMG: Had Akiyuki not given away his armband, Midori would have recieved the hiroku.]]
[[WMG: Prios is a Xam'd who has obtained full instrumentality with her hiroku.]]
[[WMG: The mainsoul mechas are Xam'd:LoM's equivalent of EVAs.]]
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[[WMG: Both the North and South were once a single country but split due to scientific and religious views.]]
