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He disguised himself as a normal hare to go to the “human” world. He would mind controlled and lured innocent humans in where he and his fellow demons will eat them as a feast.
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He disguised himself as a normal hare to go to the “human” world. He would mind controlled control and lured lure innocent humans in back to his own world, where he and his fellow demons will would eat them as a feast.feast.
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[[WMG: The Hare was actually a demon.]]
He disguised himself as a normal hare to mind controlled and lured innocent humans in where he and his fellow demons will eat them as a feast.
He disguised himself as a normal hare to mind controlled and lured innocent humans in where he and his fellow demons will eat them as a feast.
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[[WMG: The Hare was is actually a demon.]]
He disguised himself as a normal hare to go to the “human” world. He would mind controlled and lured innocent humans in where he and his fellow demons will eat them as a feast.
He disguised himself as a normal hare to go to the “human” world. He would mind controlled and lured innocent humans in where he and his fellow demons will eat them as a feast.
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He disguised himself as a normal hare to trick and lured innocent humans in.
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He disguised himself as a normal hare to trick mind controlled and lured innocent humans in.in where he and his fellow demons will eat them as a feast.
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[[WMG: The Hare was actually a demon]]
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[[WMG: The Hare was actually a demon]]demon.]]
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[[WMG: The Hare was actually a demon]]
He disguised himself as a normal hare to trick and lured innocent humans in.
He disguised himself as a normal hare to trick and lured innocent humans in.
