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[[WMG: This universe is the one [[spoiler: Edward Elric and Hohenheim land in at the end of [[Anime/FullmetalAlchemist the 2003 anime adaptation]] and Al ends up in in the movie]]]]
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[[WMG: This universe is the one [[spoiler: Edward Elric and Hohenheim land in at the end of [[Anime/FullmetalAlchemist the 2003 anime adaptation]] ''Anime/FullmetalAlchemist2003'' and Al ends up in in the movie]]]]
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* {{Jossed}}. [[spoiler: She was crying because Komaba's family is going bankrupt and is going to lose their farm.]]
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* {{Jossed}}. [[spoiler: She was crying because Komaba's family is going bankrupt and is going to lose their farm.]]]]
[[WMG: Why the Holstein Club is considered a 'sports club'.]]
So, why is there a club like the Holstein Club when it was explicitly mentioned that ''all'' the clubs in Ezono are sports clubs? I submit that it was once a ''bona fide'' sports club...the Horse Racing Club!
Mikage the grandfather may have once attended Ezono, and been a part of the Horse Racing Club, as evidenced by the look on his proud look on his face once time when horses were mentioned. Over the years, the Horse Racing Club began to breed their own race horses (probably around Aki's grandfather's time), then eventually stopped racing altogether (because of gambling) and focused on breeding horses.
Later, the former Horse Racing Club began to breed cattle...and over a few decades, they no longer bred horses, but concentrated fully on breeding cows, thus transforming into the Holstein Club. Yet, it somehow never lost that 'sports club' designation. :D
[[WMG: Why the Holstein Club is considered a 'sports club'.]]
So, why is there a club like the Holstein Club when it was explicitly mentioned that ''all'' the clubs in Ezono are sports clubs? I submit that it was once a ''bona fide'' sports club...the Horse Racing Club!
Mikage the grandfather may have once attended Ezono, and been a part of the Horse Racing Club, as evidenced by the look on his proud look on his face once time when horses were mentioned. Over the years, the Horse Racing Club began to breed their own race horses (probably around Aki's grandfather's time), then eventually stopped racing altogether (because of gambling) and focused on breeding horses.
Later, the former Horse Racing Club began to breed cattle...and over a few decades, they no longer bred horses, but concentrated fully on breeding cows, thus transforming into the Holstein Club. Yet, it somehow never lost that 'sports club' designation. :D
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Aki, thinking of her own imminent future of inheriting her family's farm, knew that she may have to find a husband soon...or have someone else do that for her. Knowing that she won't be able to fulfill her dreams of having a horse-related job, she cried.
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Aki, thinking of her own imminent future of inheriting her family's farm, knew that she may have to find a husband soon...or have someone else do that for her. Knowing that she won't be able to fulfill her dreams of having a horse-related job, she cried.cried.
* {{Jossed}}. [[spoiler: She was crying because Komaba's family is going bankrupt and is going to lose their farm.]]
* {{Jossed}}. [[spoiler: She was crying because Komaba's family is going bankrupt and is going to lose their farm.]]
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We may meet [[spoiler:Ed's]] Grand/Great grandchildren at some point in the story, and they will be friends of Hachiken's in either the present or the past. They will also be very good at science. Also, in this universe, [[spoiler: Ed and Al]] failed their attempt to [[spoiler: find the atomic bomb]] and change the course of history, which is why this version of Japan is just like ours.
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We may meet [[spoiler:Ed's]] Grand/Great grandchildren at some point in the story, and they will be friends of Hachiken's in either the present or the past. They will also be very good at science. Also, in this universe, [[spoiler: Ed and Al]] failed their attempt to [[spoiler: find the atomic bomb]] and change the course of history, which is why this version of Japan is just like ours.ours.
[[WMG: The cause of why Aki was crying at the beginning of the Autumn Arc was because of [[spoiler:Ayame]]]]
Ichiro and Aki were really good friends since childhood, so it may have been natural for Aki to have some concern over Ichiro's well-being. But after the death of Ichiro's father, the Komabas pretty much ended up with a lack of manpower and struggling for money.
However, [[spoiler: the Minamikujous have the opposite problem: A lot of money, but no more land]]. Thus, at some point between the end of summer break and the beginning of the fall semester, Ichiro may have been bethrothed to [[spoiler: Ayame]], and that's the reason why Ichiro can no longer have a girlfriend.
Aki, thinking of her own imminent future of inheriting her family's farm, knew that she may have to find a husband soon...or have someone else do that for her. Knowing that she won't be able to fulfill her dreams of having a horse-related job, she cried.
[[WMG: The cause of why Aki was crying at the beginning of the Autumn Arc was because of [[spoiler:Ayame]]]]
Ichiro and Aki were really good friends since childhood, so it may have been natural for Aki to have some concern over Ichiro's well-being. But after the death of Ichiro's father, the Komabas pretty much ended up with a lack of manpower and struggling for money.
However, [[spoiler: the Minamikujous have the opposite problem: A lot of money, but no more land]]. Thus, at some point between the end of summer break and the beginning of the fall semester, Ichiro may have been bethrothed to [[spoiler: Ayame]], and that's the reason why Ichiro can no longer have a girlfriend.
Aki, thinking of her own imminent future of inheriting her family's farm, knew that she may have to find a husband soon...or have someone else do that for her. Knowing that she won't be able to fulfill her dreams of having a horse-related job, she cried.
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[[WMG: This universe is the one [[spoiler: Edward Elric and Hohenheim land in at the end of [[Anime.FullmetalAlchemist [[Anime/FullmetalAlchemist the first anime]] and Al ends up in in the movie]]]]
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** {{Jossed}}. They gave him a check/cheque.
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** {{Jossed}}. They gave him a check/cheque.check/cheque.
[[WMG: This universe is the one [[spoiler: Edward Elric and Hohenheim land in at the end of [[Anime.FullmetalAlchemist the first anime]] and Al ends up in in the movie]]]]
We may meet [[spoiler:Ed's]] Grand/Great grandchildren at some point in the story, and they will be friends of Hachiken's in either the present or the past. They will also be very good at science. Also, in this universe, [[spoiler: Ed and Al]] failed their attempt to [[spoiler: find the atomic bomb]] and change the course of history, which is why this version of Japan is just like ours.
[[WMG: This universe is the one [[spoiler: Edward Elric and Hohenheim land in at the end of [[Anime.FullmetalAlchemist the first anime]] and Al ends up in in the movie]]]]
We may meet [[spoiler:Ed's]] Grand/Great grandchildren at some point in the story, and they will be friends of Hachiken's in either the present or the past. They will also be very good at science. Also, in this universe, [[spoiler: Ed and Al]] failed their attempt to [[spoiler: find the atomic bomb]] and change the course of history, which is why this version of Japan is just like ours.
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** {{Jossed}}. They gave him a check/cheque
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** {{Jossed}}. They gave him a check/chequecheck/cheque.
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Just replace the calf with Aki, and there you have it. The dialogue doesn't even have to change!
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Just replace the calf with Aki, and there you have it. The dialogue doesn't even have to change!change!
**{{Jossed}}. They gave him a check/cheque
**{{Jossed}}. They gave him a check/cheque
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One that fought in World War II and is famed for punching out his enemies.
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One that fought in World War II and is famed for punching out his enemies.enemies.
[[WMG: Yugo's nightmare about getting paid the wrong way is a foreshadowing of something much more pleasant.]]
Just replace the calf with Aki, and there you have it. The dialogue doesn't even have to change!
[[WMG: Yugo's nightmare about getting paid the wrong way is a foreshadowing of something much more pleasant.]]
Just replace the calf with Aki, and there you have it. The dialogue doesn't even have to change!
