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wow some of these really steered away from "disobedient child" and onto Enfant Terrible.
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* Scarlet Riding Hood was a werewolf from the Middle Ages, using dark magic to purposefully transform and hunt humans. She and her sister Cape (a harmless werepup) were shot by silver bullets.
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* Scarlet Riding Hood was a werewolf from the Middle Ages, using dark magic to purposefully transform and hunt humans. She and her sister Cape (a harmless werepup) went into the woods past their curfew. They were shot mutilated by silver bullets.a rabid wolf.
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* Haley Galaxy was an alien invader bent on conquering Earth. [[TheyWouldCutYouUp She was captured by the government and her body was used for studies and experiments]].
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* Haley Galaxy was an alien invader bent on conquering took a joyride from her parents' spaceship and crashed into Earth. She survived that, but then [[TheyWouldCutYouUp She she was captured by the government and her body was used for studies and experiments]].
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* Sprouts Sunshine joked about Jesus's crucifixation... right in Church. She was lynched by evangelicals.
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* Sprouts Sunshine joked about Jesus's crucifixation...crucifixion... right in Church. She was lynched by evangelicals.
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* Star Magic Spells cheated in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'', and was just generally unpleasant to play the game with. She slipped on a d20 and cracked her skull on the table.
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* Star Magic Spells cheated was a frequent player in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'', and a ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'' campaign, but was just generally unpleasant to play the game with. She slipped on a d20 and cracked her skull on the table.
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** Adding on, she's the only one who remembers her past life, but she knows nobody would believe her.
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* Scarlet Riding Hood was a werewolf who lacked the AlternateIdentityAmnesia most werewolves in media have and purposefully hunted humans. She and her sister Cape (a harmless werepup) were shot by silver bullets.
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* Scarlet Riding Hood was a werewolf who lacked from the AlternateIdentityAmnesia most werewolves in media have and Middle Ages, using dark magic to purposefully hunted transform and hunt humans. She and her sister Cape (a harmless werepup) were shot by silver bullets.
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* Frost I.C. Cone would [[YellowSnow pee in snow cones]] and sell them to others, [[WesternAnimation/MonstersInc claiming them to be lemon-flavored]]. She would accidentally consume one of her own and got fatally sick from it.
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* Frost I.C. Cone would [[YellowSnow pee in snow cones]] and sell them to others, [[WesternAnimation/MonstersInc claiming them to be lemon-flavored]]. She would accidentally consume one of her own Testing a new take on the prank, she consumed a snow cone with windshield wash, and got fatally sick from it.was subsequently poisoned.
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* Star Magic Spells cheated in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''. She slipped on a d20 and cracked her skull on the table.
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* Star Magic Spells cheated in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''.''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons'', and was just generally unpleasant to play the game with. She slipped on a d20 and cracked her skull on the table.
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* Whimsy Sugar Puff and her sister Whispy tore up cotton-stuffed pillows and cushions at department stores. They died after eating an asbestos that was mistaken for cotton candy while cleaning out the attic.
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* Whimsy Sugar Puff and her sister Whispy tore up cotton-stuffed pillows and cushions at department stores. They died after eating an asbestos insulation that was mistaken for cotton candy while cleaning out the attic.
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trope was cut/disambiguated due to cleanup
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* Jewel: {{Vanity}}. Jewel takes [[ThePerfectionist a lot of care]] into mimicking the [[PrincessPhase mannerisms of a princess]], and her mini playset is also a ''[[JustForPun vanity]]''.
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* Jewel: {{Vanity}}. Jewel takes [[ThePerfectionist a lot of care]] into mimicking the [[PrincessPhase mannerisms of a princess]], and her mini playset is also a ''[[JustForPun ''[[{{Pun}} vanity]]''.
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*** Breeze E. could likely have a mix of both of her sisters'.
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*** Breeze E. and Rain E. could likely have a mix of both of her their sisters'.
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* Whimsy Sugar Puff and her sister Whispy tore up cotton-stuffed pillows and cushions at department stores. They died after eating an asbestos that was mistaken for cotton candy while cleaning out the attic.
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* June Seashore, Autumn Spice, Seed Sunburst, and Sweater Snowstorm all liked to torment others during specific seasons. As karma, June was assaulted by a dolphin, Autumn drank a poison pumpkin spice latte, Seed got skin cancer from exposure to the Sun without protection, and Sweater froze.
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* June Seashore, Autumn Spice, Seed Sunburst, and Sweater Snowstorm all liked to torment others misbehaved during specific seasons. As karma, June was assaulted by a dolphin, Autumn drank a poison pumpkin spice latte, Seed got skin cancer from exposure to the Sun without protection, and Sweater froze.
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typo
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* April Sunsplash stayed ouside despite her parents' warnings of the rain getting worse. She later succumbed to pneumonia.
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* April Sunsplash stayed ouside outside despite her parents' warnings of the rain getting worse. She later succumbed to pneumonia.
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* Likewise, Trace E. Doodles and Squiggles 'N' Shapes made offensive chalk drawings and clay statues respectively. Trace E. suffocated in a chalk cloud and Squiggles was crushed by a giant clay middle finger she sculpted.
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* Likewise, Trace E. Doodles and Squiggles 'N' Shapes made offensive chalk drawings and clay statues respectively. Trace E. suffocated in a chalk cloud and Squiggles was crushed by fell into a giant clay middle finger she sculpted.vat of clay, becoming her last piece of artwork.
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* Mittens Fluff 'N' Stuff and her sister Bundles didn't listen to their mother when they were told to come inside because of snow. They went missing and were found a few days later dead in the snow from hypothermia.
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* Mittens Fluff 'N' Stuff and her sister Bundles didn't listen to their mother when they were told to come inside because of snow.a blizzard. They went missing and were found a few days later dead in the snow from hypothermia.
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* April Sunsplash didn't listen to her mother when she was told to come inside the house due to rain. She later succumbed to pneumonia.
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* April Sunsplash didn't listen to stayed ouside despite her mother when she was told to come inside parents' warnings of the house due to rain.rain getting worse. She later succumbed to pneumonia.
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* Curls 'N' Locks broke into and vandalized other's homes. During one of her 'visits', she decided to stay for the night, the family the house belonged to came home and, unable to see her in the dark, killed her in fearful self-defense.
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* Curls 'N' Locks broke into and vandalized other's homes. During one of her 'visits', she decided to stay for the night, the family the house belonged to came home and, unable to see her in the dark, killed her in fearful self-defense.out of fear.
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* Star Magic Spells cheated in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''. She choked on a d20 that landed in her mouth during a session.
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* Star Magic Spells cheated in ''TabletopGame/DungeonsAndDragons''. She choked slipped on a d20 that landed in and cracked her mouth during a session.skull on the table.
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* Sweetie Candy Ribbon and her sister Lolly liked to eat too much candy, especially Taffy. They eventually both got infective cavities ''[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill and]]'' [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill suffered a diabetic shock]].
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* Sweetie Candy Ribbon and her sister Lolly liked to eat too much candy, especially Taffy. They eventually both got infective cavities ''[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill and]]'' [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill suffered a diabetic shock]].choked from swallowing too much of it.
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okay, this is just ripping off the Buttonettes' deaths.
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* Penny Dots 'N' Blots did twisted and offensive artworks and murals, and tormented her fellow artists. The last art studio that she was in collapsed one day.
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* Penny Dots 'N' Blots did twisted and offensive artworks and murals, and tormented her fellow artists. murals. The last art studio that she was in collapsed one day.caught on fire.
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decided not to go with the Insane Equals Violent trope
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* Crumpet Hearts and her sister Teacup would only invite certain friends to their tea parties due to their arrogant natures. The ones who were uninvited went insane due to the lingering curse affecting their minds, and thus they broke into their latest tea party and killed them.
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* Crumpet Hearts and her sister Teacup would only invite certain friends to their tea parties due to their arrogant natures. The ones who were uninvited went insane due to the lingering curse affecting their minds, and thus they broke into their latest tea party and killed them.them on complete accident during the fight.
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we got way too many "broke into their home and killed their family" stuff.
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* Yuki Kimono was the daughter of a corrupt daimyo. Robbers broke into her home and killed her family. She committed seppuku out of grief and fear of dying to them.
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* Yuki Kimono was the daughter of a corrupt daimyo. Robbers broke into Shinobi attacked her home and killed her family. area. She committed seppuku out of grief and [[BetterToDieThanBeKilled fear of dying to them.them]].
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i just realized, wouldn't there be a more logical reasoning one would die of eating shaving cream?
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* Curls 'N' Locks broke into and vandalized other's homes. During one of her 'visits', she decided to stay for the night, the family the house belonged to came home and attacked and killed her in the darkness.
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* Curls 'N' Locks broke into and vandalized other's homes. During one of her 'visits', she decided to stay for the night, the family the house belonged to came home and attacked and and, unable to see her in the dark, killed her in the darkness.fearful self-defense.
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* Choco Whirl Swirl liked to feed chocolate to dogs. She was then eaten by them like Jezebel was in Literature/TheBible.
* Fancy Frost N Glaze was a stuck-up brat who wouldn’t invite unpopular kids to her tea parties. She choked on a Walmart sugar cookie.
* Fancy Frost N Glaze was a stuck-up brat who wouldn’t invite unpopular kids to her tea parties. She choked on a Walmart sugar cookie.
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* Choco Whirl Swirl liked to feed chocolate to dogs.dogs, not even caring about the nasty effects. She was then eaten by them like Jezebel was in Literature/TheBible.
* Fancy Frost N Glaze was a stuck-up brat who wouldn’t invite unpopular kids to her tea parties. She choked on aWalmart frosted sugar cookie.
* Fancy Frost N Glaze was a stuck-up brat who wouldn’t invite unpopular kids to her tea parties. She choked on a
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* Scoops Waffle Cone and her sister Spoons liked to open ice cream tubs in the Walmart freezer aisle, lick it, and leave it there for clueless customers to buy. They eventually sealed their own fates by consuming contaminated ice cream.
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* Scoops Waffle Cone and her sister Spoons liked to open ice cream tubs in the Walmart grocery freezer aisle, lick it, and leave it there for clueless customers to buy. They eventually sealed their own fates by consuming contaminated ice cream.
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* Anna Double Scoops, Patty Burgers 'N' Buns, Fries Curls 'N' Crinkles, and Pizza Cutie Pie all disobeyed work rules and ethics when working at the same fast food joint. Anna was accidentally trapped in the freezers and froze to death overnight. Patty and Fries slipped on grease, leading Patty to fall on the grill and Fries straight into the deep fryer. Pizza caught fire from the pizza oven and burned to ashes and bone.
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* Anna Double Scoops, Patty Burgers 'N' Buns, Fries Curls 'N' Crinkles, and Pizza Cutie Pie all disobeyed work rules and ethics when working at the same fast food joint. Anna was accidentally trapped in the freezers and froze to death overnight. Patty and Fries slipped on grease, leading Patty to fall on the grill and Fries straight into the deep fryer. Pizza caught fire from the pizza oven and burned to ashes charred muscle and bone.
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* Blush Pink Pastry liked to play pranks with whipped cream. Once, she tried to eat what she thought was whipped cream, but it was actually shaving cream, causing her to choke ''[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill and]]'' [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill get a deadly stomach virus]].
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* Blush Pink Pastry liked to play pranks with whipped cream. Once, she tried to eat what she thought was whipped cream, but it was actually shaving cream, causing her thus she succumbed to choke ''[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill and]]'' [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill get a deadly stomach virus]].the toxic chemicals within it.
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The flower that killed Blossom and Petal was never specified as Aconitum
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* Happy Daisy Crown, Mari Golden Petals (and her sister Posy), Rosebud Longstem, and Bluebell Dewdrop enjoyed messing with their neighbors' gardens. Like Blossom and Petal, they were then poisoned by ''Aconitum''.
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* Happy Daisy Crown, Mari Golden Petals (and her sister Posy), Rosebud Longstem, and Bluebell Dewdrop enjoyed messing with their neighbors' gardens. Like Similar to Blossom and Petal, they were then poisoned by ''Aconitum''.