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January 5, 1742. Albert Cloudsley and Oberon Geller agree to split the treasure from their expedition to [[Literature/TheMonkeysPaw Monkey Paw]] [[ShoutOut Island]]. What happens next leads to a treacherous tale that changes the course of human history.
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January 5, 1742. Albert Cloudsley and Oberon Geller agree to split the treasure from their expedition to [[VideoGame/MonkeyIsland Monkey]] [[Literature/TheMonkeysPaw Monkey Paw]] [[ShoutOut Island]]. What happens next leads to a treacherous tale that changes the course of human history.
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** As mentioned above, Monkey Paw Island is a reference to ''Literature/TheMonkeysPaw''.
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** As mentioned above, Monkey Paw Island is a reference to both the classic 90's adventure game series ''VideoGame/MonkeyIsland'' and the short horror story ''Literature/TheMonkeysPaw''.
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** Dr. Turner and Lord Koch successfully frame the Loyalist party leader for the murder of the Moderate party leader, effectively beheading both parties.
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** Dr. Turner and Lord General Koch successfully frame the Loyalist party leader for the murder of the Moderate party leader, effectively beheading both parties.
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* RegimeChange: After the Moderate Party leader is killed and the Loyalist Party leader is accused of his murder, Lazarus Hurst's Order Party dominates the government, where they set about transforming the country. Unbeknownst to everyone else, Hurst planned out the entire thing, having used his allies to murder the former and frame the latter.
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* RegimeChange: After the Moderate Party leader is killed and the Loyalist Party leader is accused of his murder, Lazarus Hurst's Herst's Order Party dominates the government, where they set about transforming the country. Unbeknownst to everyone else, Hurst Herst planned out the entire thing, having used his allies to murder the former and frame the latter.
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* BizarreGamblingWinnings: The final scenario has someone gamble away a cannon over a game of cards to a drunkard. [[spoiler:Said drunkard later proceeds to fire it at point blank range, killing the main antagonist.]]
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* BizarreGamblingWinnings: The final scenario has someone gamble away a cannon over a game of cards to a drunkard. [[spoiler:Said Said drunkard later proceeds to fire it at point blank range, killing the main antagonist.]]
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* RedHerring: Every single shareholder of the Seven Seas Trading Company is listed in the final case, but literally none of them matter except for Oberon Geller, not even Albert Cloudsley. None of those names are ever used in the solution, in order to obfuscate the identity of the Spider and the fact that Zubiri and Yupik Kerra are the only important people that Oberon met.
