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''North Vander of Ravencourt Castle had died recently - very recently. His heiress was a young American named May Vandernot. And, according to the family solicitor, someone was trying to kill her.''
''Before Parker could get the specifics from the man, the phone had gone dead. And so he had taken the last train up from London. What else could a chief inspector do?''
''Thanks to the storm, he had barely enough time to send in a call to the local constable requesting information and to hire the last possible boat out. Alone, he would have to sniff out the would-be murderer and incapacitate him until help could arrive.''
''He finds that he is quite looking forward to it.''
''Before Parker could get the specifics from the man, the phone had gone dead. And so he had taken the last train up from London. What else could a chief inspector do?''
''Thanks to the storm, he had barely enough time to send in a call to the local constable requesting information and to hire the last possible boat out. Alone, he would have to sniff out the would-be murderer and incapacitate him until help could arrive.''
''He finds that he is quite looking forward to it.''
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''North Vander of Ravencourt Castle had died recently - very recently. His heiress was a young American named May Vandernot. And, according to the family solicitor, someone was trying to kill her.
Before Parker could get the specifics from the man, the phone had gone dead. And so he had taken the last train up from London. What else could a chief inspector do?
Thanks to the storm, he had barely enough time to send in a call to the local constable requesting information and to hire the last possible boat out. Alone, he would have to sniff out the would-be murderer and incapacitate him until help could arrive.
He finds that he is quite looking forward to it.''
Before Parker could get the specifics from the man, the phone had gone dead. And so he had taken the last train up from London. What else could a chief inspector do?
Thanks to the storm, he had barely enough time to send in a call to the local constable requesting information and to hire the last possible boat out. Alone, he would have to sniff out the would-be murderer and incapacitate him until help could arrive.
He finds that he is quite looking forward to it.''
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''North Vander of Ravencourt Castle had died recently - very recently. His heiress was a young American named May Vandernot. And, according to the family solicitor, someone was trying to kill her.
Beforeher.''
''Before Parker could get the specifics from the man, the phone had gone dead. And so he had taken the last train up from London. What else could a chief inspectordo?
Thanksdo?''
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Hearrive.''
''He finds that he is quite looking forward to it.''
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''Before Parker could get the specifics from the man, the phone had gone dead. And so he had taken the last train up from London. What else could a chief inspector
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''He finds that he is quite looking forward to it.''
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He found that he was quite looking forward to it.
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He found finds that he was is quite looking forward to it.
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* EveryoneIsASuspect: Several of the guests.
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* EveryoneIsASuspect: Several of the guests.guests and residents.
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** Lady Eggerton complains about being broke (although it tunrs out she has one ''million'' pounds in the bank);
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** Lady Eggerton Barbara Eggerton-Vandernot complains about being broke (although it tunrs out she has one ''million'' pounds in the bank);
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* EveryoneIsASuspect: Well, everyone but the heiress, who'd lived in New York and never set foot in England before North's death.
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* EveryoneIsASuspect:Well, everyone but Several of the heiress, who'd lived in New York and never set foot in England before North's death.guests.
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* ForcedTutorial: The first five levels. Thankfully, it's quite understated and can be avoided almost entirely if one wishes.
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* WorthlessYellowRocks: Invoked by North, who went through pains to have the Bloodstone registered in his name and made public that he was the legal owner. This made it worthless on the black market and pointless to steal - no one would be willing to buy such a famous item.
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* WorthlessYellowRocks: Invoked by North, who went through pains to have the Bloodstone registered in his name and made public that he was the its legal owner. This made it worthless on the black market and pointless to steal - no one would be willing to buy such a famous and easily retrievable item.
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* WorthlessYellowRocks: Invoked by North, who went through pains to have the Bloodstone registered in his name and made public that he was the legal owner. This made it worthless on the black market and pointless to steal - no one would be willing to buy such a famous item.
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Inspector Parker must investigate a murder attempt on May Vandernot, heiress to North Vandernot's fortune following his recent death, in Ravencourt Manor, an English castle which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are suspects.
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Before Parker could get the specifics from the man, the phone had gone dead. And so he
Thanks to the storm, he had barely enough time to send in a call to the local constable requesting information and
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* ArtifactOfDeath: The Bloodstone.
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* ArtifactOfDeath: The Bloodstone.Bloodstone, a large, flawless ruby.
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* {{Curse}}: The Ga-gorib.
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* {{Curse}}: The Ga-gorib.Ga-gorib, caused by five men stealing the Bloodstone from an African tribe:
** One man died suddenly;
** One was ripped apart by lions;
** One was burnt alive;
** One was drained of all his blood;
** The last was disemboweled.
** One man died suddenly;
** One was ripped apart by lions;
** One was burnt alive;
** One was drained of all his blood;
** The last was disemboweled.
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** Fu Ling promised his agent he would have the Bloodstone for his next performance;
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** Fu Ling promised his agent he would have the Bloodstone for his next performance;performance and North refused;
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Inspector Parker must investigate a murder in an English castle, which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are suspects.
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Inspector Parker must investigate a murder attempt on May Vandernot, heiress to North Vandernot's fortune following his recent death, in Ravencourt Manor, an English castle, castle which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are suspects.
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** Major Gunn owes back taxes on his house;
** Dashalot is reportedly broke;
** Fu Ling promised his agent he would have the Bloodstone for his next performance;
** Lady Eggerton complains about being broke (although it tunrs out she has one ''million'' pounds in the bank);
** Phillipa was scorned by North.
** Dashalot is reportedly broke;
** Fu Ling promised his agent he would have the Bloodstone for his next performance;
** Lady Eggerton complains about being broke (although it tunrs out she has one ''million'' pounds in the bank);
** Phillipa was scorned by North.
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* {{Foreshadowing}} / EurekaMoment: Parker's observation that Greek goddesses and sisters Hestia and Demeter look very similar.
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** FallingChandlierOfDoom. Other times it's a flower pot, sometimes it's a Mills bomb, and sometimes it an anchor. Yes, an 'anchor'';
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** FallingChandlierOfDoom.FallingChandelierOfDoom. Other times it's a flower pot, sometimes it's a Mills bomb, and sometimes it an anchor. Yes, an 'anchor'';''anchor'';
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* BoobyTrap: Every room is rigged, some being reasonable, others being somewhat esotaric.
** SpikesOfDoom - a giant metal spike pops out of the floor;
** FallingChandlierOfDoom. Other times it's a flower pot, sometimes it's a Mills bomb, and sometimes it an anchor. Yes, an 'anchor'';
** TrapDoor
** SpikesOfDoom - a giant metal spike pops out of the floor;
** FallingChandlierOfDoom. Other times it's a flower pot, sometimes it's a Mills bomb, and sometimes it an anchor. Yes, an 'anchor'';
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* FedToTheBeast: One of the Ga-gorib's punishments was being torn apart by lions. [[spoiler:Masterwood's fate, only with the guard dogs riled up with Bachelor Buttons.]]
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* MurderByCremation: One of the Ga-gorib's punishments, and [[spoiler:Dashalot's]] fate.
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* YouLookFamiliar: [[Countess Rodrigez]] to Phillipa. [[spoiler:She's turns out to be Julliette's sister, and they're the daughters of jewel theif Dirk Chaimberlain.]]
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* YouLookFamiliar: [[Countess [[spoiler:Countess Rodrigez]] to Phillipa. [[spoiler:She's turns out to be Julliette's sister, and they're the daughters of jewel theif Dirk Chaimberlain.]]
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* {{Curse}}: The Ga-Gorib.
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* EveryoneIsASuspect: Well, everyone but the heiress.
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* {{Curse}}: The Ga-Gorib.
Ga-gorib.
* EveryoneIsASuspect: Well, everyone but theheiress.
heiress, who'd lived in New York and never set foot in England before North's death.
*FrenchMaidFakeNationality: [[spoiler:Fu Ling, whose [[OohMeAccentsSlipping Chinese accent slips at every meeting,]] then speaks perfect English and reveals he went to bording school with North, and Countess Rodrigez. who wears makeup to look Spanish.]]
* FrenchMaid: Julliette.
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* XMeetsY: It's often described as {{Minesweeper}} meets {{Clue}}
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* XMeetsY: It's often described as {{Minesweeper}} meets {{Clue}}{{Clue}}
* YouLookFamiliar: [[Countess Rodrigez]] to Phillipa. [[spoiler:She's turns out to be Julliette's sister, and they're the daughters of jewel theif Dirk Chaimberlain.]]
* YouLookFamiliar: [[Countess Rodrigez]] to Phillipa. [[spoiler:She's turns out to be Julliette's sister, and they're the daughters of jewel theif Dirk Chaimberlain.]]
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* TheButlerDidIt: Briefly hinted at with the butler missing when Parker arrives. Turns out [[spoiler:it was the maid and her sister, who killed the butler.]]
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* TheButlerDidIt: Briefly hinted at with the butler missing when Parker arrives. Turns out [[spoiler:it was the maid and her sister, who also killed the butler.]]
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* TheButlerDidIt: Briefly hinted at with the butler missing when Parker arrives. Turns out [[spoiler:it was the maid and her sister, who killed the butler.]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: The Bloodstone.
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* ArtifactOfDoom: ArtifactOfDeath: The Bloodstone.
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* {{Curse}}: the The Ga-Gorib.
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[=BeTrapped!=] is a Yahoo muder-mystery computer game that [[XMeetsY combines]] ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and ''{{Clue}}''.
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* ClosedCircle: A storm prevents anyone from leaving, and the island ferry is out of service.
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* ClosedCircle: A storm [[ItWasADarkAndStormyNight storm]] prevents anyone from leaving, and the island ferry is out of service.
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* ItWasADarkAndStormyNight
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* TenLittleMurderVictims:
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Gameplay involves finding and disabling traps by standing next to them, then rightclicking them (like {{Minesweeper}}), and interrogating suspects and ultimately deducing who the murderer is.
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Gameplay involves finding and disabling traps by standing next to them, then rightclicking them (like {{Minesweeper}}), and interrogating suspects and ultimately deducing who the murderer is.
is (like {{Clue}}).
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[=BeTrapped!=] is an MSN muder-mystery computer game that [[XMeetsY combines]] ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and ''{{Clue}}''.
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[=BeTrapped!=] is an MSN a Yahoo muder-mystery computer game that [[XMeetsY combines]] ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and ''{{Clue}}''.
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Gameplay involves finding and disabling traps by standing next to them, then rightclicking them (like {{Minesweeper}}), and interrogating suspects and ultimately deducing who the murderer is.
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* XMeetsY: It's often described as {{Minesweeper}} meets {{Clue}}
* XMeetsY: It's often described as {{Minesweeper}} meets {{Clue}}
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[=BeTrapped!=] is an MSN muder-mystery computer game that [[XMeetsY combines]] {{Minesweeper}} and BoardGame/{{Clue}}.
Inspector Parker must investigate a murder in an English castle, which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are suspects.
Inspector Parker must investigate a murder in an English castle, which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are suspects.
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[=BeTrapped!=] is an MSN muder-mystery computer game that [[XMeetsY combines]] {{Minesweeper}} ''{{Minesweeper}}'' and BoardGame/{{Clue}}.
''{{Clue}}''.
Inspector Parker must investigate a murder in an English castle, which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests aresuspects.suspects.
!![=BeTrapped!=] shows examples of the following tropes:
* FrenchMaid
Inspector Parker must investigate a murder in an English castle, which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are
!![=BeTrapped!=] shows examples of the following tropes:
* FrenchMaid
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[=BeTrapped!=] is an MSN muder-mystery computer game that [[XMeetsY combines]] {{Minesweeper}} and BoardGame/{{Clue}}.
Inspector Parker must investigate a murder in an English castle, which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are suspects.
Inspector Parker must investigate a murder in an English castle, which has been rigged with booby traps he must avoid and disable, and all twelve guests are suspects.