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* AnticipatoryBreathSpray: Cleats pops a Spearmint Lifesaver into his mouth before trying to meet Carla.

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* AnticipatoryBreathSpray: Cleats pops a Spearmint Lifesaver into his mouth before trying to meet up with Carla.



* ByTheHair: Cleats does this with Priscilla.

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* ByTheHair: Cleats also does this with Priscilla.



* DreamSequence: Cleats once had a dream about bedding Carla.



* FanService: Bobby and Joyce's explicit sex scene.

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* FanService: Bobby and Joyce's explicit sex scene.



* LaughingMad: Priscilla, for a bit after Bobby's death.

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* LaughingMad: Priscilla, for a bit after Bobby's death.lot.



* MsFanservice: Priscilla.

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* MsFanservice: Priscilla.Priscilla, who spends most of the book topless.



* PurpleEyes: Priscilla, whose eyes are violet-ish shade of blue.

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* PurpleEyes: Priscilla, whose eyes are a violet-ish shade of blue.



* TagalongKid: Eddy, the fifteen year-old cousin of Bobby.

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* TagalongKid: Eddy, the fifteen year-old cousin cousin[=/=]sixteen year-old brother of Bobby.


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* ThoroughlyMistakenIdentity: Cleats is convinced Priscilla is his old crush, Carla.

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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Cleats, over the unconscious Priscilla.



* ByTheHair: Cleats does this with Priscilla.



* TheCheerleader: Cleats's old classmate, Patty.



* FacialHorror: Cleats's face is covered in scars, he has no nose, and most of his mangled teeth and gums are exposed.



* GangOfBullies: Only one of them, Derek, gets a name.



* ManBitesMan: Priscilla bites Cleats's hand.



* {{Phlegmings}}: Cleats.



* ScaryTeeth: Cleats.



* SeriesContinuityError: Eddy is introduced as Bobby's cousin, but is inexplicably changed to his brother partway through the book.

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* SeriesContinuityError: Eddy is introduced as Bobby's fifteen year-old cousin, but is inexplicably changed to his sixteen year-old brother partway through the book.



* ShirtlessScene: Bobby.

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* ShirtlessScene: Bobby.Bobby, and Cleats.



* TapOnTheHead: Priscilla briefly knocks Clifford out, after mistaking him for Cleats.

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* TapOnTheHead: Priscilla briefly knocks Clifford out, after mistaking him for Cleats.Cleats, while Cleats later beats Priscilla unconscious.


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** 10:10 P.M.
** 10:20 P.M.
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* TwistedAnkle: Clifford.


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* UnstoppableRage: Cleats.


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* WaitHere

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* ExtremelyDustyHome: The gatehouse.



* ScrewThisImOutOfHere: Ralph tries this, but is dismayed to realize that Bobby had the car keys.

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* ScrewThisImOutOfHere: Ralph tries this, but is dismayed to realize that Bobby had the car keys. Later, he just makes a run for it.

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--> '''Carlos:''' It's okay. You're safe now. I'll take care of you.



* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Cleats, with Priscilla.



* PurpleEyes: Priscilla, whose eyes are violet-ish shade of blue.



** 1982, Colma, California



** May, 1974

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** May, May 1974


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** June, 1976
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* AnticipatoryBreathSpray: Cleats pops a Spearmint Lifesaver into his mouth before trying to meet Carla.


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* BlindWithoutEm: Clifford.


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* BridalCarry: Cleats does this with Priscilla.


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* CigaretteOfAnxiety: Amanda.


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* DramaticDrop: Cleats, when he notices Priscilla's resemblance to Carla.


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* {{Fainting}}: Priscilla, after witnessing Carlos's death.


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* PowerfulPick: Carlos gets a pickaxe to the head.


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* RiseOfZitboy: One of Cleats's teenage tormentors.


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* SkeletonKey: Cleats has one for All Saints Hills.


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* SternTeacher: Mr. Mahoney.


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* TapOnTheHead: Priscilla briefly knocks Clifford out, after mistaking him for Cleats.


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** 9:30 P.M.
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: Carlos's death causes Priscilla and Clifford to vomit.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Joyce, and Lupe.

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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Joyce, Joyce (killjoy) and Lupe.Lupe (bitch).

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Lupe's opinion of a joke Eddy cracks.

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Lupe's opinion of a joke the drunk Eddy cracks.cracks.
* AgonyOfTheFeet: As Joyce climbs the gate, Cleats stabs her in the foot.



* AgonyOfTheFeet: As Joyce climbs the gate, Cleats stabs her in the foot.



* DysfunctionalFamily: The Atchisons, and Ralph's parents.

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* DysfunctionalFamily: The Atchisons, and Ralph's parents.family.



* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Joyce is disliked by most of the others, and barely tolerated by the rest. The only reason she came along on the trip is because Priscilla vouched for her.

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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Joyce is disliked by most of the others, Joyce, and barely tolerated by the rest. The only reason she came along on the trip is because Priscilla vouched for her.Lupe.



* TheScourgeOfGod



* TheScourgeOfGod



--> '''Eddy:''' How do you breathe through that little thing?

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--> '''Eddy:''' How do you breathe through that little thing?thing.



* WalkingTheEarth: Joe Riley, a former employee of All Saints Hills.



* WalkingTheEarth: Joe Riley, a former employee of All Saints Hills.

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* AbusiveParents: Cleats's father was a bitter and hateful man who, during an argument, punched Cleats, spat on him, and destroyed the book of poems his wife had given Cleats.

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* AbusiveParents: Cleats's father was a bitter and hateful man who, during an argument, punched Cleats, his son, spat on him, and destroyed the book of poems his wife had given Cleats.



* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Lupe's opinion of a joke Eddy cracks.



* AgonyOfTheFeet: As Joyce tries climbing the gate, Cleats stabs her in the foot.

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* AgonyOfTheFeet: As Joyce tries climbing climbs the gate, Cleats stabs her in the foot.



* CreepyCemetery: All Saints Hills Cemetery.

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* CreepyCemetery: All Saints Hills Cemetery.Hills.



* DysfunctionalFamily: The Atchisons, and Ralph's parents.



* EyeScream: Bobby gets gasoline thrown into his face, and is completely immobilized by how much it burns his eyes.

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* EyeScream: Bobby gets gasoline thrown into his face, and is completely immobilized by how much it burns his eyes.



** Right before his death, Mr. Atchison unleashes a series of Dog Kicking.

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** Right before his death, Mr. Atchison unleashes a series of Dog Kicking.Kicks.



* SeriesContinuityError: Eddy is introduced as Bobby's cousin, but is inexplicably changed to his brother partway through the book.



* SweaterGirl: Priscilla.

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* SweaterGirl: Priscilla.SpellMyNameWithAnS: Eddy.



* SweaterGirl: Priscilla.



* TeenyWeenie: "Okay, what did the elephant say to the naked man? How do you breathe through that little thing?"

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* TeenyWeenie: "Okay, TeenyWeenie:
--> '''Eddy:''' Okay,
what did the elephant say to the naked man? man?
--> '''Amanda:''' I give up.
--> '''Eddy:'''
How do you breathe through that little thing?"thing?

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* CantHoldHisLiquor: Eddy.



* {{Hunk}}: Bobby.



* {{Jerkass}}: Lupe.

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* {{Jerkass}}: Lupe.Lupe, Mr. Atchison, and Derek.


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* MsFanservice: Priscilla.


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* NervousWreck: Clifford.


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* WalkingTheEarth: Joe Riley, a former employee of All Saints Hills.
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* NerdGlasses: Joyce.

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* NerdGlasses: Joyce.Joyce, and Clifford.
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It's the middle of June in 1983, and to celebrate their impending graduation, nine high school students from Colma, California sneak into All Saints Hills Cemetery, where they plan to party the night away with lots of snacks, drugs, alcohol, and sexual debauchery. Unfortunately for the rambunctious tresspassers, Robert "Cleats" Atchison, the creepy caretaker, locks them in, and begins hunting them down one by one, due to the teenagers reminding him of the ones who irreversibly damaged his mind and face during a prank gone wrong back in 1974.

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It's the middle of June in 1983, and to celebrate their impending graduation, nine high school students (Bobby, Priscilla, Carlos, Lupe, Joyce, Amanda, Ralph, Eddy, and Clifford) from Colma, California sneak into All Saints Hills Cemetery, where they plan to party the night away with lots of snacks, drugs, alcohol, and sexual debauchery. Unfortunately for the rambunctious tresspassers, Robert "Cleats" Atchison, the creepy caretaker, locks them in, and begins hunting them down one by one, due to the teenagers reminding him of the ones who irreversibly damaged his mind and face during a prank gone wrong back in 1974.
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* LaughingMad: Priscilla, for a bit after Bobby's Death.

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* LaughingMad: Priscilla, for a bit after Bobby's Death.death.



* MatchlightDangerRevelation: Carlos drops a flashlight, and one Clifford picks it up, it shines right on Bobby's charred remains.

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* MatchlightDangerRevelation: Carlos drops a flashlight, and one when Clifford picks it up, it shines right on Bobby's charred remains.



* TheSeventies: The subplot concerning Cleats's backstory takes place in 1974.

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* TheSeventies: The subplot concerning Cleats's backstory takes place in 1974.1970s.

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* DwindlingParty



* LaughingMad: Priscilla, for a bit after Bobby's Death.



* MatchlightDangerRevelation: Carlos drops a flashlight, and one Clifford picks it up, it shines right on Bobby's charred remains.



* TheQuietOne: Clifford.



* ScrewThisImOutOfHere: Ralph tries this, but is dismayed to realize that Bobby had the car keys.
* SelfMadeOrphan: Whipped into a frenzy due to a fight they had, Cleats shoved his father down a flight of stairs.
* TheSeventies: The subplot concerning Cleats's backstory takes place in 1974.



* SelfMadeOrphan: Whipped into a frenzy due to a fight they had, Cleats shoved his father down a flight of stairs.
* TheSeventies: The subplot concerning Cleats's backstory takes place in 1974.


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* TeenyWeenie: "Okay, what did the elephant say to the naked man? How do you breathe through that little thing?"
* TenSecondFlashlight


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** 9:00 P.M.
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* TwoLinesNoWaiting: The main events, and Cleats's origin.
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* AssholeVictim: Mr. Atchison.


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* TheBully: Derek.


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* DeathBySex: Bobby.


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* EyeScream: Bobby gets gasoline thrown into his face, and is completely immobilized by how much it burns his eyes.


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--> '''Bobby:''' Who are you?
* FanService: Bobby and Joyce's explicit sex scene.


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* GayCowboy: Amanda fell for a cowboy she flirted with at the drive-in, despite Lupe telling her he was probably gay.


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* InnocentBlueEyes: Carla.


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* JerkJock: Derek.


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* ManOnFire: Bobby's death.


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* ShirtlessScene: Bobby.


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* TheStoner: Amanda.


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** 8:00 P.M.
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* WallOfWeapons: The pegboards displaying Cleats's tools.
* WhatDoesSheSeeInHim: Cleats wonders this about Carla and Derek.

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It's the middle of June in 1983, and to celebrate their impending graduation, nine high school students from Colma, California sneak into All Saints Hills Cemetery, where they plan to party the night away with lots of snacks, drugs, alcohol, and sexual debauchery. Unfortunately for the rambunctious tresspassers, Cleats, the creepy caretaker, locks them in, and begins hunting them down one by one, due to the teenagers reminding him of the ones who irreversibly damaged his mind and face during a prank gone wrong back in 1974.

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It's the middle of June in 1983, and to celebrate their impending graduation, nine high school students from Colma, California sneak into All Saints Hills Cemetery, where they plan to party the night away with lots of snacks, drugs, alcohol, and sexual debauchery. Unfortunately for the rambunctious tresspassers, Cleats, Robert "Cleats" Atchison, the creepy caretaker, locks them in, and begins hunting them down one by one, due to the teenagers reminding him of the ones who irreversibly damaged his mind and face during a prank gone wrong back in 1974.



* AccidentalMurder: Cleats killing Mr. Atchison (his father).



* GrayEyes: Mr. Atchison's once blue eyes had faded to a dull and lifeless gray.

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* GrayEyes: Mr. Atchison's once blue eyes had faded to a dull and lifeless gray.Atchison.



** Mr. Atchison's actions before his death is just one long string of Kicking the Dog.

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** Mr. Atchison's actions Right before his death is just one long string death, Mr. Atchison unleashes a series of Kicking the Dog.Dog Kicking.


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* OldDarkHouse: The cemetery gatehouse.

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* AbusiveParents: Cleats's father was a bitter and hateful man who, during an argument, punched Cleats, spat on him, and destroyed the book of poems his wife had given Cleats.



* CallingTheOldManOut:
--> '''Mr. Atchison:''' You want! You want? You want what, you ungrateful bastard? You're just like your mother. No loyalty! She couldn't wait to leave me!
--> '''Robert[=/=]Cleats:''' Mother didn't leave you. She loved you... she gave you everything she had! This place killed her. ''You'' killed her... just like you're killing me!



* EmbarrassingNickname: "Twinkie" (which he got for scarfing down four packages of pastries the first day of high school) for Ralph.

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* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: Cleats, when he was Robert.
* EmbarrassingNickname: Ralph has "Twinkie" (which he got for scarfing once wolfed down four packages of pastries bags of) while Cleats once had the first day of high school) for Ralph.rather weird "Coma Man".
* EvilCripple: Mr. Atchison, who was confined to a wheelchair after falling into an open grave.



--> '''Joyce:''' Oh God, no... no... ''please'', no...

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--> '''Joyce:''' '''Joyce Caruthers:''' Oh God, no... no... ''please'', no...no...
--> '''Daniel Atchison:''' You son-of-a-bitch! I'll have one foot in the grave and I'll still-



* GrayEyes: Mr. Atchison's once blue eyes had faded to a dull and lifeless gray.
* GrumpyOldMan: Mr. Atchison.



* IcyBlueEyes: Bobby.

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* IcyBlueEyes: Bobby.Bobby, and Cleats.


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* PerpetualFrowner: Mr. Atchison.


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* SelfMadeOrphan: Whipped into a frenzy due to a fight they had, Cleats shoved his father down a flight of stairs.


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* SpitefulSpit: During the last argument they had, Cleats was spat on by his father.
* StaircaseTumble: Mr. Atchison's death.

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* DevelopingDoomedCharacters



--> '''Peter:''' (while looking at statues of Biblical figures) "You know what I don't understand? I don't understand, you know, like, in, y'know, in the bible, and y'know, the stories that you hear, y'know, they're always upset, and weeping, and crying and stuff like that. These people just have a stoned look on their face. Get it?"
--> '''Cameraman:''' "That was bad."

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--> '''Peter:''' (while looking at statues of Biblical figures) "You You know what I don't understand? I don't understand, you know, like, in, y'know, in the bible, and y'know, the stories that you hear, y'know, they're always upset, and weeping, and crying and stuff like that. These people just have a stoned look on their face. Get it?"
it?
--> '''Cameraman:''' "That That was bad."



--> '''Peter:''' "Doesn't she look smart like that?"
--> '''Crusty:''' "That's because I'm [[HotLibrarian a librarian]], now fuck me!"

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--> '''Peter:''' "Doesn't Doesn't she look smart like that?"
that?
--> '''Crusty:''' "That's That's because I'm [[HotLibrarian a librarian]], now fuck me!"me!



* SelfHarm: Crusty ("I like dull knives better").

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* SelfHarm: Crusty ("I Crusty.
--> "I
like dull knives better").better"



--> '''Crusty:''' (mockingly) "Awww, poor baby! You're not gonna have to worry about growing up now, sweetie!"

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--> '''Crusty:''' (mockingly) "Awww, Awww, poor baby! You're not gonna have to worry about growing up now, sweetie!"sweetie!
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* AxCrazy: Cleats.
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* DaylightHorror: The killing of the Dachshund.


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* ThePigPen: Ralph, who leaves a trail of crumbs and junk food packaging wherever he goes.

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* AdjustingYourGlasses: Clifford, a lot.


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* DrunkDriver: Carlos.


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* FatalFamilyPhoto: Joyce thinks about her sister's baby shower, and is cut to pieces a few minutes later.


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* LanternJawOfJustice: Bobby, and Cleats (for a villainous example).
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* TheDragAlong: Joyce.

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It's the middle of June in 1983, and to celebrate their impending graduation, nine high school students from Colma, California sneak into All Saints Hills Cemetery, where they plan to party the night away with lots of snacks, drugs, alcohol, and sexual debauchery. Unfortunately for the rambunctious tresspassers, Cleats, the creepy caretaker, locks them in, and begins hunting them down one by one, due to the teenagers reminding him of the ones who irreversibly damaged his mind and face during a prank gone wrong back in 1974.



* AgonyOfTheFeet: As Joyce tries climbing the gate, Cleats causes her to fall by stabbing her in the foot.

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* AgonyOfTheFeet: As Joyce tries climbing the gate, Cleats causes her to fall by stabbing stabs her in the foot.



* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Joyce is disliked by most of the others, and barely tolerated by the rest.

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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Joyce is disliked by most of the others, and barely tolerated by the rest. The only reason she came along on the trip is because Priscilla vouched for her.



* OddFriendship: Priscilla (outgoing, pretty, adventurous) and Joyce (introverted, plain, prudish).

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* OddFriendship: Priscilla (outgoing, pretty, adventurous) popular) and Joyce (introverted, plain, prudish).



* TagalongKid: Eddy, the fifteen year-old cousin of Bobby.



* TokenMinority: Carlos and Lupe.

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* TokenMinority: Carlos Carlos, and Lupe.
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[[caption-width-right:236: [-The Ultimate Terror Trip-] ]]



The Ultimate Terror Trip


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* CaptainErsatz: Cleats seems inspired by Cropsy from ''Film/TheBurning''.
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* GardeningVarietyTools: Cleats's arsenal.

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* GardeningVarietyTools: GardeningVarietyWeapon: Cleats's arsenal.

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