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Shout Out isn\'t a Trivia trope. Moving.
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* ShoutOut: On the imageboards when Essi does token-reading on the computer monitor.
--> '''LOLICON:''' This is nothing new. You are overreacting as always, [[{{Dragonball}} OVER-9000]].
--> '''LOLICON:''' This is nothing new. You are overreacting as always, [[{{Dragonball}} OVER-9000]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Essi was originally written as a more mysterious heroine and a darker heroine in general; however, Zeiva felt that she couldn't quite capture a darker, mysterious personality for the point of view character, so Essi become a more BishoujoGenre heroine. As far as the story goes, [[spoiler:Loil was originally intended to just be murder fodder rather than the BigBad]], but Zeiva couldn't stand to waste a character, and so rewrote [[spoiler:him]] into the story. [[spoiler:Anon]] was also intended to be the BigBad, [[spoiler:and pursuing his path would lead to either a BadEnding, or a "GoodEnding" in which Essi becomes a DarkActionGirl.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Essi was originally written as a more mysterious heroine and a darker heroine in general; however, Zeiva felt that she couldn't quite capture a darker, mysterious personality for the point of view character, so Essi become a more BishoujoGenre Bishoujo heroine. As far as the story goes, [[spoiler:Loil was originally intended to just be murder fodder rather than the BigBad]], but Zeiva couldn't stand to waste a character, and so rewrote [[spoiler:him]] into the story. [[spoiler:Anon]] was also intended to be the BigBad, [[spoiler:and pursuing his path would lead to either a BadEnding, or a "GoodEnding" in which Essi becomes a DarkActionGirl.]]
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* ShoutOut: On the imageboards when Essi does token-reading on the computer monitor.
--> '''LOLICON:''' This is nothing new. You are overreacting as always, [[{{Dragonball}} OVER-9000]].
--> '''LOLICON:''' This is nothing new. You are overreacting as always, [[{{Dragonball}} OVER-9000]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Essi was originally written as a more mysterious heroine and a darker heroine in general; however, Zeiva felt that she couldn't quite capture a darker, mysterious personality for the point of view character, so Essi become a more BishoujoGenre heroine. As far as the story goes, [[spoiler:Loil was originally intended to just be murder fodder rather than the BigBad]], but Zeiva couldn't stand to waste a character, and so rewrote [[spoiler:him]] into the story. [[spoiler:Anon]] was also intended to be the BigBad, [[spoiler:and pursuing his path would cause both a BadEnding, ''and'' a "GoodEnding" in which Essi becomes a DarkActionGirl.]]
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Essi was originally written as a more mysterious heroine and a darker heroine in general; however, Zeiva felt that she couldn't quite capture a darker, mysterious personality for the point of view character, so Essi become a more BishoujoGenre heroine. As far as the story goes, [[spoiler:Loil was originally intended to just be murder fodder rather than the BigBad]], but Zeiva couldn't stand to waste a character, and so rewrote [[spoiler:him]] into the story. [[spoiler:Anon]] was also intended to be the BigBad, [[spoiler:and pursuing his path would cause both lead to either a BadEnding, ''and'' or a "GoodEnding" in which Essi becomes a DarkActionGirl.]]
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*WhatCouldHaveBeen: Essi was originally written as a more mysterious heroine and a darker heroine in general; however, Zeiva felt that she couldn't quite capture a darker, mysterious personality for the point of view character, so Essi become a more BishoujoGenre heroine. As far as the story goes, [[spoiler:Loil was originally intended to just be murder fodder rather than the BigBad]], but Zeiva couldn't stand to waste a character, and so rewrote [[spoiler:him]] into the story. [[spoiler:Anon]] was also intended to be the BigBad, [[spoiler:and pursuing his path would cause both a BadEnding, ''and'' a "GoodEnding" in which Essi becomes a DarkActionGirl.]]
