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** [[Franchise/{{Watchmen}} Rorshach's]] [[TheCameo cameo]] in the beginning of Chapter 4 at one point had him break out into a fight with the unnamed mustached cop over the former's broken car, but James decided that would make the cameo too long. On the subject of the cop, he was meant to be [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Commissioner Gordon]] at some point.
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** [[Franchise/{{Watchmen}} [[ComicBook/{{Watchmen}} Rorshach's]] [[TheCameo cameo]] in the beginning of Chapter 4 at one point had him break out into a fight with the unnamed mustached cop over the former's broken car, but James decided that would make the cameo too long. On the subject of the cop, he was meant to be [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Commissioner Gordon]] at some point.
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** Eggmanland was going to make an appearance before [[spoiler:the unmasking of Dr. Eggman as the Ghost Biker]] before the author decided against it.
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** Eggmanland was going to make an appearance before after [[spoiler:the unmasking of Dr. Eggman as the Ghost Biker]] before the author decided against it.
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** In Chapter 5, James considered Amy mentioning Sonic having an affair with Franchise/WonderWoman, but ultimately decided not to go there.
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** In Chapter 5, James considered Amy mentioning Sonic having an affair with Franchise/WonderWoman, but ultimately decided not to go there. Similarly, he at one point thought about adding a subplot with Sonic having an affair with Daphne, but didn't go through with it.
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*** At one point, the Penguin and Nightwing were going to show up for the ‘66 Window Cameos, but the author ultimately decided on Poison Ivy, Bat Mite and Creator/StanLee.
*** Creator/StanLee was at one point going to make a comment about the 1960’s (a reference to ''Film/AntManAndTheWasp'') in his cameo, instead of his final line.
*** Creator/StanLee was at one point going to make a comment about the 1960’s (a reference to ''Film/AntManAndTheWasp'') in his cameo, instead of his final line.
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*** At one point, the Penguin and Nightwing were going to show up for the ‘66 '66 Window Cameos, but the author ultimately decided on Poison Ivy, Bat Mite and Creator/StanLee.
*** Creator/StanLee was at one point going to make a comment about the1960’s 1960s (a reference to ''Film/AntManAndTheWasp'') in his cameo, instead of his final line.
*** Creator/StanLee was at one point going to make a comment about the
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** The Ghost Biker listening in on the heroes' battle plan with the Fly Bot device (a reference to ''WesternAnimation/SonicBoom'') in Chapter 13 was initially unplanned.
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* WorkingTitle: The story was originally going to be called "The Strangest Crossover Adventure Ever", and while the story was changed when it was posted, the cover art keeps the original title.
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* WorkingTitle: The story was originally going to be called "The Strangest Crossover Adventure Ever", and while the story this was changed when it the story was posted, the cover art keeps the original title.
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* ThrowItIn: The author didn’t plan on the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] ShoutOut, but kept it in because of his love for the series.
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** The author didn’t plan on the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] ShoutOut, but kept it in because of his love for theseries.series.
** He also didn't plan to have Daphne do a handstand in Chapter 12 after getting out of the pool, but decided to add it in because, in his words, "[[RuleOfCool handstands are cool]]".
** The author didn’t plan on the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] ShoutOut, but kept it in because of his love for the
** He also didn't plan to have Daphne do a handstand in Chapter 12 after getting out of the pool, but decided to add it in because, in his words, "[[RuleOfCool handstands are cool]]".
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** At one point in the story's creation process, Sonic still had problems swimming and was going to take swimming lessons from both his girlfriend (who was presumably undecided at the time, see above) and Daphne.
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** Daphne was originally going to wear a thong bikini in Chapter 12, but the author decided on a regular one, since she wore a thong earlier in Chapter 9.
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** The author thought about giving Sonic an original girlfriend, but decided to settle for Amy instead out of respect for the community that ships Sonic and Amy.
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** The author thought about giving Sonic an original girlfriend, but decided to settle for Amy instead out of respect for the community that ships Sonic and Amy. He also at one point considered Fiona Fox as his girlfriend, and Serena Mongoose at another point.
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** When Daphne flies off her bike in Chapter 11, Sonic was going to catch her in his arms like he did earlier, but she ended up landing in Fred's arms instead.
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** When Daphne flies off her bike in Chapter 11, Sonic was going to catch her in his arms like he did earlier, but she ended up landing in Fred's arms instead.instead.
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* ThrowItIn: The author didn’t plan on the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] ShoutOut, but kept it in because of his love for the series.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** The author thought about giving Sonic an original girlfriend, but decided to settle for Amy instead out of respect for the community that ships Sonic and Amy.
** The author thought about making the receptionist in Chapter 3 a Mobian, but decided on a human instead.
** [[Franchise/{{Watchmen}} Rorshach's]] [[TheCameo cameo]] in the beginning of Chapter 4 at one point had him break out into a fight with the unnamed mustached cop over the former's broken car, but James decided that would make the cameo too long. On the subject of the cop, he was meant to be [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Commissioner Gordon]] at some point.
** In Chapter 5, James considered Amy mentioning Sonic having an affair with Franchise/WonderWoman, but ultimately decided not to go there.
** In Chapter 7, the author thought about having Velma's hotel room be next to Shaggy and Scooby's, but instead had them down a hall across each other. He also thought about having her and Shaggy share a room at some point as a reference to their romance in ''WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooMysteryIncorporated''.
** Several changes in Chapter 8:
*** The author almost had Sonic kiss Daphne as he was holding her, but since both of them were in a committed relationship, this was obviously a no go.
*** At one point, the Penguin and Nightwing were going to show up for the ‘66 Window Cameos, but the author ultimately decided on Poison Ivy, Bat Mite and Creator/StanLee.
*** Creator/StanLee was at one point going to make a comment about the 1960’s (a reference to ''Film/AntManAndTheWasp'') in his cameo, instead of his final line.
** During Batman’s cameo in Chapter 9, one of the heroes was going to ask if it was Bruce Wayne under the mask (which, of course, is true). This was cut for fear of the cameo dragging too long.
** Several changes in Chapter 10:
*** Dr. Eggman was going to offer Sonic’s girlfriend (then a Sonic fandom character called Serena) for a short bike ride without kidnapping her, where he would then hint his connection to the Ghost Biker offscreen. The author reworked the scene into another way Eggman would hint said connection.
*** The author mentioned the gang teaming up with Wonder Woman to take down the fake Minotaur from ''WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooAndGuessWho''. This was changed to Wonder Woman helping them in a different way.
*** The author considered giving Shroomy a cameo to go along with the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] ShoutOut, but decided that it wouldn’t make sense.
** When Daphne flies off her bike in Chapter 11, Sonic was going to catch her in his arms like he did earlier, but she ended up landing in Fred's arms instead.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** The author thought about giving Sonic an original girlfriend, but decided to settle for Amy instead out of respect for the community that ships Sonic and Amy.
** The author thought about making the receptionist in Chapter 3 a Mobian, but decided on a human instead.
** [[Franchise/{{Watchmen}} Rorshach's]] [[TheCameo cameo]] in the beginning of Chapter 4 at one point had him break out into a fight with the unnamed mustached cop over the former's broken car, but James decided that would make the cameo too long. On the subject of the cop, he was meant to be [[Franchise/{{Batman}} Commissioner Gordon]] at some point.
** In Chapter 5, James considered Amy mentioning Sonic having an affair with Franchise/WonderWoman, but ultimately decided not to go there.
** In Chapter 7, the author thought about having Velma's hotel room be next to Shaggy and Scooby's, but instead had them down a hall across each other. He also thought about having her and Shaggy share a room at some point as a reference to their romance in ''WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooMysteryIncorporated''.
** Several changes in Chapter 8:
*** The author almost had Sonic kiss Daphne as he was holding her, but since both of them were in a committed relationship, this was obviously a no go.
*** At one point, the Penguin and Nightwing were going to show up for the ‘66 Window Cameos, but the author ultimately decided on Poison Ivy, Bat Mite and Creator/StanLee.
*** Creator/StanLee was at one point going to make a comment about the 1960’s (a reference to ''Film/AntManAndTheWasp'') in his cameo, instead of his final line.
** During Batman’s cameo in Chapter 9, one of the heroes was going to ask if it was Bruce Wayne under the mask (which, of course, is true). This was cut for fear of the cameo dragging too long.
** Several changes in Chapter 10:
*** Dr. Eggman was going to offer Sonic’s girlfriend (then a Sonic fandom character called Serena) for a short bike ride without kidnapping her, where he would then hint his connection to the Ghost Biker offscreen. The author reworked the scene into another way Eggman would hint said connection.
*** The author mentioned the gang teaming up with Wonder Woman to take down the fake Minotaur from ''WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooAndGuessWho''. This was changed to Wonder Woman helping them in a different way.
*** The author considered giving Shroomy a cameo to go along with the [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] ShoutOut, but decided that it wouldn’t make sense.
** When Daphne flies off her bike in Chapter 11, Sonic was going to catch her in his arms like he did earlier, but she ended up landing in Fred's arms instead.
