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** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist, who would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]] (with the author comparing him to Ridley from ''Videogame/{{Metroid}}''), but the author thought the story was too packed, so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
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** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist, who would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]] (with the author comparing him to Ridley from ''Videogame/{{Metroid}}''), ''Franchise/{{Metroid}}''), but the author thought the story was too packed, so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
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* InspirationForTheWork: In the final chapter, the author gives a list of works that inspired him for the fanfic. The ''Franchise/MetalGearSolid'' franchise, ''Videogame/KingdomUnderFire'', ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'', ''Manga/{{Metroid}}'' and Videogame/{{Darkstalkers}}.
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* CreatorsFavorite: The author's favorite character in the fanfic is Caulifla. He is disappointed he didn't give her a victory.
* InspirationForTheWork: In the final chapter, the author gives a list of works that inspired him for the fanfic. The''Franchise/MetalGearSolid'' ''Videogame/MetalGearSolid'' franchise, ''Videogame/KingdomUnderFire'', ''Videogame/KingdomUnderFireTheCrusaders'', ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'', ''Manga/{{Metroid}}'' and Videogame/{{Darkstalkers}}.
* InspirationForTheWork: In the final chapter, the author gives a list of works that inspired him for the fanfic. The
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** Taura was meant to transform into either a plant monster or a [[YouAreWhatYouHate female Namekian]] during her final confrontation, but the author thought it would betray Turles's biggest appeal of never needing a transformation.
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** Taura was meant to transform into either a plant monster or a [[YouAreWhatYouHate female Namekian]] during her final confrontation, but the author thought it would betray Turles's biggest appeal of never needing a transformation.transformation.
** Originally the fight between Goku and Hit was going to be adapted, but since neither of the characters is important to Cabba's CharacterDevelopment, the fight was glossed over.
** Originally the fight between Goku and Hit was going to be adapted, but since neither of the characters is important to Cabba's CharacterDevelopment, the fight was glossed over.
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* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he had forgotten of the content.
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* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: InspirationForTheWork: In the final chapter, the author gives a list of works that inspired him for the fanfic. The ''Franchise/MetalGearSolid'' franchise, ''Videogame/KingdomUnderFire'', ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'', ''Manga/{{Metroid}}'' and Videogame/{{Darkstalkers}}.
*WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he had forgotten of the content.
*WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he had forgotten of the content.
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* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he forgot of the content.
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* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he forgot had forgotten of the content.
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** The line "she may be a girl" was gonna be added into the text, but was scrapped as its a PetPeeveTrope of the author.
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** The line "she may be a girl" was gonna going to be added into the text, but was scrapped as its it's a PetPeeveTrope of the author.
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** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]] (with the author comparing him to Ridley from ''Videogame/{{Metroid}}''), but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
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** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that antagonist, who would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]] (with the author comparing him to Ridley from ''Videogame/{{Metroid}}''), but the author thought the story was too packed packed, so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
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** Taura was meant to transform during her final confrontation, in either a plant monster or a female Namekian, but the author thought it would betray Turles biggest appeal of never needing a transformation.
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** Taura was meant to transform into either a plant monster or a [[YouAreWhatYouHate female Namekian]] during her final confrontation, in either a plant monster or a female Namekian, but the author thought it would betray Turles Turles's biggest appeal of never needing a transformation.
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** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]] (with the author comparing him to Ridley from ''Videogame/Metroid''), but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
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** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]] (with the author comparing him to Ridley from ''Videogame/Metroid''), ''Videogame/{{Metroid}}''), but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
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** Evaprimolca was originally going to be named Choco, to combine with Cacao's EdibleThemeNaming, but this was scrapped.
** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]], but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]], but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
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** Evaprimolca was originally going to be named Choco, to combine with Cacao's Cacao' EdibleThemeNaming, but this was scrapped.
** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giantNamekian]], Namekian]] (with the author comparing him to Ridley from ''Videogame/Metroid''), but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant
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** Taura and Cabba were meant to fight outside the Tree of Might while a war happened off-screen. The author didn't think it was thematically appropriate, and [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow couldn't see Cabba winning against her in that scenario]].
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** Taura and Cabba were meant to fight outside the Tree of Might while a war happened off-screen.in the background. The author didn't think it was thematically appropriate, and [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow couldn't see Cabba winning against her in that scenario]].
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* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he forgot of the content.
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* WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants: The author admits he writes this way. When he had to retire from the story due to a personal project, he needed to read the previous chapters because he forgot of the content.content.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some ideas were considered for the story but were dropped due to CreatorBreakdown.
** The line "she may be a girl" was gonna be added into the text, but was scrapped as its a PetPeeveTrope of the author.
** Evaprimolca was originally going to be named Choco, to combine with Cacao's EdibleThemeNaming, but this was scrapped.
** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]], but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
** Taura and Cabba were meant to fight outside the Tree of Might while a war happened off-screen. The author didn't think it was thematically appropriate, and [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow couldn't see Cabba winning against her in that scenario]].
** Taura was meant to transform during her final confrontation, in either a plant monster or a female Namekian, but the author thought it would betray Turles biggest appeal of never needing a transformation.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some ideas were considered for the story but were dropped due to CreatorBreakdown.
** The line "she may be a girl" was gonna be added into the text, but was scrapped as its a PetPeeveTrope of the author.
** Evaprimolca was originally going to be named Choco, to combine with Cacao's EdibleThemeNaming, but this was scrapped.
** [[spoiler: Esparra]] was going to be even more of a fearsome antagonist that would mutate while fighting [[spoiler: Pirina as a giant Namekian]], but the author thought the story was too packed so it was made [[SelfDisposingVillain anticlimactic on purpose]].
** Taura and Cabba were meant to fight outside the Tree of Might while a war happened off-screen. The author didn't think it was thematically appropriate, and [[OnlyTheAuthorCanSaveThemNow couldn't see Cabba winning against her in that scenario]].
** Taura was meant to transform during her final confrontation, in either a plant monster or a female Namekian, but the author thought it would betray Turles biggest appeal of never needing a transformation.
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