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** Asomewhat larger role for Major Morris in which he was also ponified and served as Erin's backup in Equestria.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The "Author's notes" chapter of the first story covers several of these, including Erin unknowingly being in the middle of a love triangle between Big Mac and her coworker Lucky, a different take on Erin's being outed as a human (in which she saved the Crusaders after they'd been abducted by Paul Velchiek), a somewhat larger role for Major Morris in which he was also ponified and served as Erin's backup in Equestria, a couple of different Equestria-side villains (and a brief time where there were ''no'' Equestrian villains) before Malachite was ultimately developed, and an ending for the "no Equestrian villains" version in which the Black Tide ''won'' but the world of Harmony was discovered in time for mankind to move there instead.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The "Author's notes" chapter of the first story covers several of these, including these which include:
** Erin unknowingly being in the middle of a love triangle between Big Mac and her coworkerLucky, a Lucky.
** A different take on Erin's being outed as a human(in in which she saved the Crusaders after they'd been abducted by Paul Velchiek), a somewhat Velchiek.
** Asomewhat larger role for Major Morris in which he was also ponified and served as Erin's backup inEquestria, a Equestria.
** A couple of different Equestria-side villains (and a brief time where there were ''no'' Equestrian villains) before Malachite was ultimatelydeveloped, and developed.
** And lastly, an ending for the "no Equestrian villains" version in which the Black Tide ''won'' but the world of Harmony was discovered in time for mankind to move there instead.
** Erin unknowingly being in the middle of a love triangle between Big Mac and her coworker
** A different take on Erin's being outed as a human
** Asomewhat larger role for Major Morris in which he was also ponified and served as Erin's backup in
** A couple of different Equestria-side villains (and a brief time where there were ''no'' Equestrian villains) before Malachite was ultimately
** And lastly, an ending for the "no Equestrian villains" version in which the Black Tide ''won'' but the world of Harmony was discovered in time for mankind to move there instead.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The "Author's notes" chapter of the first story covers several of these, including Erin unknowingly being in the middle of a love triangle between Big Mac and her coworker Lucky, a different take on Erin's being outed as a human (in which she saved the Crusaders after they'd been abducted by Paul Velchiek), a somewhat larger role for Major Morris in which he was also ponified and served as Erin's backup in Equestria, a couple of different Equestria-side villains (and a brief time where there were ''no'' Equestrian villains) before Malachite was ultimately developed, and an ending for the "no Equestrian villains" version in which the Black Tide ''won'' but the world of Harmony was discovered in time for mankind to move there instead.
