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* AuthorsSavingThrow: In response to critique from readers, the author rewrote some early chapters, added new scenes, and added new chapters portraying the Parisa parents in a more favorable light (both kids have bank accounts now) and loving their kids when it matters most.
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** In her notes for chapter 55, she mentioned wanting to have Lavinia the Scyther not trust Julia at all, and have the latter release her as a way to address some reviewers' complaints about how her Pokemon seem to love her from the start. But since this chapter takes place [[WhamEpisode right after chapter 54]], she decided against it, figuring it'd wind up coming off more as an unnecessary KickTheDog moment than anything. Instead, Lavinia stays with Julia.
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** In her notes for chapter 55, she mentioned wanting to have Lavinia the Scyther not trust Julia at all, and have the latter release her as a way to address some reviewers' complaints about how her Pokemon Pokémon seem to love her from the start. But since this chapter takes place [[WhamEpisode right after chapter 54]], she decided against it, figuring it'd wind up coming off more as an unnecessary KickTheDog moment than anything. Instead, Lavinia stays with Julia.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: In response to critique from readers, the author rewrote some early chapters, added new scenes, and added new chapters portraying the Parisa parents in a more favorable light (both kids have bank accounts now) and loving their kids when it matters most.
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* CreatorsFavorite: Notice how Chikorita often appears in the fic? Yeah, the authoress has admitted that Chikorita is her favorite starter Pokemon.
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* CreatorsFavorite: Notice how Chikorita often appears in the fic? Yeah, the authoress has admitted that Chikorita is her favorite starter Pokemon.Pokémon.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The authoress revealed at the end of one chapter that she was originally planning to make Julia's Togepi shiny too along with her shiny Pichu, but figured it would be too much.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The author notes reveal several things that were going to happen in the story but didn't:
** The authoress revealed at the end of one chapter that she was originally planning to make Julia's Togepi shiny too along with her shiny Pichu, but figured it would be toomuch.much.
** Julia was going to attend a ballroom dance with Saoirse.
** Caiseal was going to catch Girafarig instead of Perrine.
** The authoress revealed at the end of one chapter that she was originally planning to make Julia's Togepi shiny too along with her shiny Pichu, but figured it would be too
** Julia was going to attend a ballroom dance with Saoirse.
** Caiseal was going to catch Girafarig instead of Perrine.
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* CreatorsFavorite: Notice how Chikorita often appears in the fic? Yeah, the authoress admitted in the most recent chapter that Chikorita is her favorite starter Pokemon.
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* CreatorsFavorite: Notice how Chikorita often appears in the fic? Yeah, the authoress has admitted in the most recent chapter that Chikorita is her favorite starter Pokemon.
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** In her notes for chapter 55, she mentioned wanting to have Lavinia the Scyther not trust Julia at all, and have the latter release her as a way to address some reviewers' complaints about how her Pokemon seem to love her from the start. But since this chapter takes place [[WhamEpisode right after chapter 54]], she decided against it, figuring it'd wind up coming off more as an unnecessary KickTheDog moment than anything. Instead, Lavinia stays with Julia.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The authoress revealed at the end of one chapter that she was originally planning to make Julia's Togepi shiny too along with her shiny Pichu, but figured it would be too much.
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* She also mentions her favorite Johto gym leader is Jasmine, which is why she's given a lot of focus during the Olivine City chapters.
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* She also mentions her favorite Johto gym leader is Jasmine, which is why she's given a lot of focus during the Olivine City chapters.
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* CreatorsFavorite: Notice how Chikorita often appears in the fic? Yeah, the authoress admitted in the most recent chapter that Chikorita is her favorite starter Pokemon.
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* RealitySubtext: The chapters that deal with Julia being forced to give Geraldine to a rehabilitation facility and [[spoiler: Saoirse's death]] are both based on experiences the authoress had with some of her pets, in which one beloved cat died suddenly, and she was forced to give another one up due to being unable to help it with its many health issues.
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* BonusMaterial: There's a lot of it sprinkled on the authoress's various accounts on websites, like Bulbagarden and Deviant Art, such as Q&As, character interviews, artwork, etc.
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* BonusMaterial: There's a lot of it sprinkled on the authoress's various accounts on websites, like Bulbagarden and Deviant Art, such as Q&As, character interviews, artwork, etc.etc.
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* BonusEpisode: The authoress makes a few from time to time in the form of bonus chapters, usually centering on characters that aren't Julia.
* BonusMaterial: There's a lot of it sprinkled on the authoress's various accounts on websites, like Bulbagarden and Deviant Art, such as Q&As, character interviews, artwork, etc.
* BonusMaterial: There's a lot of it sprinkled on the authoress's various accounts on websites, like Bulbagarden and Deviant Art, such as Q&As, character interviews, artwork, etc.
