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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Boredom", "Passport to Rubbish", or "Passport to Jail" due to the boring story and the main cast's frequently indecent behavior that crosses into illegal territory.
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Speculation doesn't fit What Could Have Been
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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Boredom," "Passport to Rubbish," or "Passport to Jail" due to the boring story and the main cast's frequently indecent behavior that crosses into illegal territory.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and an unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and an unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.
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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Boredom," Boredom", "Passport to Rubbish," Rubbish", or "Passport to Jail" due to the boring story and the main cast's frequently indecent behavior that crosses into illegal territory.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and an unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.territory.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and an unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.
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** Male!Charlie uses the same face models as [[VisualNovel/BigSkyCountry Morgan]].
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** Ahmed's coach is [[VisualNovel/HighSchoolStory Andrew Isa]].
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** Ahmed's coach is [[VisualNovel/HighSchoolStory Andrew Isa]].Isa]].
** One of the fans at the stadium is [[VisualNovel/HighSchoolStory Julian Castillo]].
** One of the fans at the stadium is [[VisualNovel/HighSchoolStory Julian Castillo]].
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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Boredom" Boredom," "Passport to Rubbish," or "Passport to Jail" due to the boring story and the main cast's frequently indecent behavior that crosses into illegal territory.
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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.
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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Boredom" or "Passport to Jail" due to how often the boring story and the main cast breaks the law.cast's frequently indecent behavior that crosses into illegal territory.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and an unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and an unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.book.
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** William Langdon has the same face as [[VisualNovel/DesireAndDecorum Bartholomew Chambers]].
** Ahmed's coach is [[VisualNovel/HighSchoolStory Andrew Isa]].
* YouLookFamiliar:
** William Langdon has the same face as [[VisualNovel/DesireAndDecorum Bartholomew Chambers]].
** Ahmed's coach is [[VisualNovel/HighSchoolStory Andrew Isa]].
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and an unsympathetic main cast, it ended in one book.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that this was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, cultural references and unsympathetic protagonists, this story ended in one book.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that this the story was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, cultural references barely any exploration of other places after Paris, and unsympathetic protagonists, this story main cast, it ended in one book.
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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.
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* FanNickname: Many detractors have given this story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.law.
*WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that this was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, cultural references and unsympathetic protagonists, this story ended in one book.
*WhatCouldHaveBeen: The ending of Chapter 15 is very open-ended, implying that this was intended to be a series. However, due to the large amount of negative criticism this story received for lack of conflict, cultural references and unsympathetic protagonists, this story ended in one book.
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* FanNickname: Several detractors jokingly refer to this series as "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.
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* FanNickname: Several Many detractors jokingly refer to have given this series as story disparaging nicknames like "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.
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* FanNickname: Several detractors jokingly refer to this series as "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some detractors feel that a story about a travel vlog is an interesting premise, but the writers botched it by not focusing on the cultural aspects of the locations Charlie and the gang visited, instead focusing on pointless escapades with UnintentionallyUnsympathetic protagonists.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some detractors feel that a story about a travel vlog is an interesting premise, but the writers botched it by not focusing on the cultural aspects of the locations Charlie and the gang visited, instead focusing on pointless escapades with UnintentionallyUnsympathetic protagonists.
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* FanNickname: Several detractors jokingly refer to this series as "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some detractors feel that a story about a travel vlog is an interesting premise, but the writers botched it by not focusing on the cultural aspects of the locations Charlie and the gang visited, instead focusing on pointless escapades with UnintentionallyUnsympathetic protagonists.law.
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some detractors feel that a story about a travel vlog is an interesting premise, but the writers botched it by not focusing on the cultural aspects of the locations Charlie and the gang visited, instead focusing on pointless escapades with UnintentionallyUnsympathetic protagonists.
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* FanNickname: Several detractors jokingly refer to this series as "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.
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* FanNickname: Several detractors jokingly refer to this series as "Passport to Jail" due to how often the main cast breaks the law.law.
*WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some detractors feel that a story about a travel vlog is an interesting premise, but the writers botched it by not focusing on the cultural aspects of the locations Charlie and the gang visited, instead focusing on pointless escapades with UnintentionallyUnsympathetic protagonists.
*WhatCouldHaveBeen: Some detractors feel that a story about a travel vlog is an interesting premise, but the writers botched it by not focusing on the cultural aspects of the locations Charlie and the gang visited, instead focusing on pointless escapades with UnintentionallyUnsympathetic protagonists.
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* FanNickname: Several detractors jokingly refer to this series as "Passport to Jail" due to how often the protagonists break main cast breaks the law.
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*FanNickname: Several detractors refer to this series as "Passport to Jail" due to how often the protagonists break the law.
