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** Kol and Thalia would have been named Dominic and Heather respectively.
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** Kol and Thalia would have been named Dominic and Heather respectively. The names were later used for characters introduced in book two instead.
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** There was an option for the MC to [[spoiler:assist Reyna in stealing the artifacts.]]
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** There was an option for the MC to [[spoiler:assist Reyna in stealing the artifacts.]]
** Kol was supposed to be [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal by the end of Book One. This was changed when the beta testers didn't like that fate for him.]]
** Kol was supposed to be [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal by the end of Book One. This was changed when the beta testers didn't like that fate for him.]]
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** Jarrod, Gisela, Reyna, Davina and Jaime could have been [[LoveInterest romantic options]] for the MC.
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** Jarrod, Gisela, Reyna, Davina and Jaime could have been [[LoveInterest romantic options]] LoveInterests for the MC.MC.
** There was an option for the MC to [[spoiler:assist Reyna in stealing the artifacts.]]
** There was an option for the MC to [[spoiler:assist Reyna in stealing the artifacts.]]
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Changed line(s) 2 (click to see context) from:
** Kol and Thalia would have been named Dominic and Heather respectively.
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** Kol and Thalia would have been named Dominic and Heather respectively.respectively.
** Jarrod, Gisela, Reyna, Davina and Jaime could have been [[LoveInterest romantic options]] for the MC.
** Jarrod, Gisela, Reyna, Davina and Jaime could have been [[LoveInterest romantic options]] for the MC.
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** Kol and Thalia would have been named Dominic and Heather respectively.
** Kol and Thalia would have been named Dominic and Heather respectively.
