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* ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', an extended retelling of the second season finale of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', puts all of the heroes through the ringer:

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* ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', In''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', an extended retelling of the second season finale of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', puts ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' tortures just about all of the heroes through the ringer:heroes:
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*** On top of being brainwashed by Queen Chrysalis and the wedding being cancelled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]]. After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a brutal [[ATasteOfTheLash public flogging]] for disgracing the guard and learns that [[spoiler:many of his friends in the guard have been murdered, and his sister -- emotionally messed up and deaf to his warnings -- is engaged to a sociopath who'd kill her if he found another powerful unicorn mare to seduce]].

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*** On top of being brainwashed by Queen Chrysalis and the wedding being cancelled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]]. After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a brutal [[ATasteOfTheLash public flogging]] for disgracing the guard and learns that [[spoiler:many of his friends in the guard have been murdered, and his sister -- emotionally messed up manipulated and deaf to his warnings -- is engaged to a sociopath who'd who'll kill her if should he found find another powerful unicorn mare to seduce]].
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*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her into seething hatred. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].

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*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her into seething hatred. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]]]. choked to death]]]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting Celestia has become so demoralized that she starts to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius Jewelius, to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].
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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[TheSociopath heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publicly shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave also being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[TheSociopath heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publicly shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[TheSociopath heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publically shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[TheSociopath heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publically publicly shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[TheSociopath heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publically shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[TheSociopath heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publically shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.



*** On top of the wedding being cancelled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]]. After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a brutal [[ATasteOfTheLash public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.

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*** On top of being brainwashed by Queen Chrysalis and the wedding being cancelled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]]. After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a brutal [[ATasteOfTheLash public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.guard and learns that [[spoiler:many of his friends in the guard have been murdered, and his sister -- emotionally messed up and deaf to his warnings -- is engaged to a sociopath who'd kill her if he found another powerful unicorn mare to seduce]].
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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publically shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns the [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her into seething hatred. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].

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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard [[TheSociopath heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publically shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns the [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her into seething hatred. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].

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* ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', an extended retelling of the second season finale of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', puts all of the heroes through this:
** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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* ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', an extended retelling of the second season finale of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', puts all of the heroes through this:
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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]].truth]] and are instead [[ShamedByAMob publically shamed by the citizens of Canterlot]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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*** On top of the wedding being cancelled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]]. After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a [[ATasteOfTheLash merciless public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.

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*** On top of the wedding being cancelled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]]. After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a brutal [[ATasteOfTheLash merciless public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.

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* This applies to all the heroes in ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', an extended retelling of the second season finale of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'':

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* This applies to all the heroes in ''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', *''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', an extended retelling of the second season finale of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'':''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', puts all of the heroes through this:

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*** On top of the wedding being cancelled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread]]. After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a [[ATasteOfTheLash merciless public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.



** On top of the wedding being canceled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread.]] After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a [[ATasteOfTheLash merciless public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.
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** On top of the wedding being canceled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[TheSadist Commander Hildread.]] After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a [[ATasteOfTheLash merciless public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.

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** On top of the wedding being canceled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[TheSadist [[KnightTemplar Commander Hildread.]] After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a [[ATasteOfTheLash merciless public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.
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** On top of the wedding being canceled, Shining Armor is stripped of his title as Captain of the Guard and mercilessly beaten by [[TheSadist Commander Hildread.]] After being bitterly renounced by his own little sister, he endures a [[ATasteOfTheLash merciless public flogging]] for disgracing the guard.
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*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns into hatred [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].

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*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns into hatred the [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her.her into seething hatred. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].
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*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns into hatred [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].

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*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns into hatred [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]].choked]]]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].
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*** Princess Celestia gets a special mention. Not only does her nephew Jewelius usurp her by using her mistakes against her, but he also turns into hatred [[HundredPercentAdorationRating the utter adoration]] her faithful student and Canterlot's citizens felt toward her. She finds out, much to the horror of both Shining Armor and herself, that [[spoiler:while they were in banishment, Jewelius [[ThePurge ordered]] the royal guards who [[UndyingLoyalty remained loyal to them]] to be [[SickbedSlaying murdered while they were in the infirmary]]]]. She very nearly becomes [[spoiler:publicly [[PublicExecution hanged]], and only by giving her former subjects and Twilight a heartwrenching apology speech she manages to trigger forgiveness in all of them before [[ShootTheRope Luna rescues her from the death of being choked]]. By the time she and the others [[spoiler:find refuge in Ponyville, she's starting to lose hope of Twilight coming around and helping them against Jewelius to the point that Cadance needs to urge her not to give up on her faithful student yet]].

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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
** After all the suffering she endures due to Queen Chrysalis as per canon, Princess Cadance is unfairly exiled as well from Equestria by Jewelius, her favorite cousin and surrogate little brother. After she returns to Canterlot with the other heroes, she's attacked, tortured and planned to be killed by [[spoiler:Jewelius who's revealed to have not only [[GreenEyedMonster hated Cadance for years simply because of her popularity]], but also convinced Chrysalis to go through with the Changeling invasion on Cadance's wedding day]].

** Aside from the canon example, Twilight is hit with immense guilt after learning that [[spoiler: her mentor/friend/husband Jewlius is every bit the evil and heartless manipulator her [[CassandraTruth friends warned her he was]]]] and that she helped him in taking over Canterlot and [[HeroesWithBadPublicity destroying her loved ones' reputations.]]

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** Princess Celestia, the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changeling invasion to frame them as traitors and banish them from Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator]] who's intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain some major short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
** After all the suffering she endures due to Queen Chrysalis as per canon, Princess Cadance is unfairly exiled as well from Equestria by Jewelius, her favorite cousin and surrogate little brother. After she returns to Canterlot with the other heroes, she's attacked, tortured and planned to be killed by [[spoiler:Jewelius who's revealed to have not only [[GreenEyedMonster hated Cadance for years simply because of her popularity]], popularity for years]], but also convinced Chrysalis to go through with the Changeling invasion on Cadance's wedding day]].

day. Though Cadance accepts that Jewelius is truly a monster, [[SympathyForTheDevil she's still sad for him]] after his {{karmic death}}]].
** Aside from the canon example, After what she goes through canonically, Twilight is hit with immense guilt after learning that [[spoiler: [[CorruptTheCutie emotionally manipulated]] to lose all love and trust toward her mentor/friend/husband Jewlius is every bit the evil and heartless manipulator her [[CassandraTruth brother, friends warned and mentor for how they shunned her he was]]]] at the wedding rehearsal, becoming unhappy yet accepting of [[TyrantTakesTheHelm Equestria's new questionable ruler]] who [[spoiler:has all along faked being her friend and [[LoveInterestTraitor possible love interest]] as well as used her in stealing Equestria's throne. She accepts his proposal, unaware that she helped Jewelius [[DarwinistDesire only wants her to birth for him in taking over Canterlot powerful offspring to keep up his legacy]] and [[HeroesWithBadPublicity destroying is open to the possibility of killing her "accidentally" and marrying a more powerful unicorn mare should he meet one]]. Once Twilight realizes the truth, her [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone utter mortification with herself]] leads her to seek out her loved ones' reputations.]]
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* This applies to all of the heroes in ''[[Fanfic/LovedAndLost]]'':
** Celestia, The Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their mistakes that contributed to the Changling invasion to frame them traitors, and banish them from Equestria.
** A week later, return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]] only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for the wedding rehearsal.
** As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator who's intent been using both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, major shortsightedness on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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* This applies to all of the heroes in ''[[Fanfic/LovedAndLost]]'':
''Fanfic/LovedAndLost'', an extended retelling of the second season finale of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'':
** Princess Celestia, The the Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their canon mistakes that contributed to the Changling Changeling invasion to frame them traitors, as traitors and banish them from Equestria.
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Equestria, with the Mane Five and Shining Armor [[MadeASlave being also enslaved]]. A week later, they return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]] Twilight]], only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for [[MadeOutToBeAJerkass their treatment of her at the wedding rehearsal.
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rehearsal]]. As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not [[spoiler:not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad true mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator manipulator]] who's intent been using intending to exploit both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] more than he already has]]. Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain major shortsightedness short-sightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.right.
** After all the suffering she endures due to Queen Chrysalis as per canon, Princess Cadance is unfairly exiled as well from Equestria by Jewelius, her favorite cousin and surrogate little brother. After she returns to Canterlot with the other heroes, she's attacked, tortured and planned to be killed by [[spoiler:Jewelius who's revealed to have not only [[GreenEyedMonster hated Cadance for years simply because of her popularity]], but also convinced Chrysalis to go through with the Changeling invasion on Cadance's wedding day]].


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** As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator who's intent been using both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, major shortsightedness]] shortsightedness on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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** As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator who's intent been using both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[ThanksForFixingItVillain major shortsightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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** As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator who's intent been using both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[ThanksForFixingItVillain major shortsightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
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** As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator who's intent been using both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[ThanksForFixingItVillain major shortsightedness on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]]]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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** As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator who's intent been using both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[ThanksForFixingItVillain major shortsightedness shortsightedness]] on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]]]] [[spoiler:Jewelius]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.

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* This applies to all of the heroes in the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fic ''[[Fanfic/LovedAndLost]]'':

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** Aside from the canon example, Twilight is hit with immense guilt after learning that [[spoiler: her mentor/friend/husband Jewlius is every bit the evil and heartless manipulator her [[CassandraTruth friends warned her he was]]]] and that she helped him in taking over Canterlot and [[HeroesWithBadPublicity destroying her loved ones' reputations.]]
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* * This applies to all of the heroes in the ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fic ''{{LovedAndLost}}:
** Celestia, The Mane Five, Shining Armor, and Spike have their [[HeroesWithBadPublicity reputations tarnished]] by [[TheUsurper Prince Jewelius]], who uses their mistakes that contributed to the Changling invasion to frame them traitors, and banish them from Equestria.
** A week later, return to Canterlot to clear their names and [[MustMakeAmends make amends with Twilight]] only to be bitterly rejected by her in retaliation for the wedding rehearsal.
** As the now demoralized heroes rot in their cells in the 11th chapter, they learn a terrible secret: [[spoiler: not only is Prince Jewelius the [[BigBad mastermind behind the Changeling invasion]], but he's also a [[ManipulativeBastard heartless manipulator who's intent been using both Twilight and the citizens of Canterlot to his own advantage.]]]] Unfortunately, the heroes are [[CassandraTruth unable to convince anypony to believe them about this terrible truth]]. Luckily, [[ThanksForFixingItVillain major shortsightedness on behalf of [[spoiler:Jewelius]]]] proves them right and provides them a chance to reconcile with Twilight and set things right.
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* In ''FanFic/{{Fractured}}'', a ''Franchise/MassEffect''[=/=]''Franchise/StarWars''[[spoiler:[=/=]''[=Borderlands=]'']] [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover crossover]] and its [[FanFic/SovereignGFCOrigins sequel]], Samantha Shepard [[BreakTheBadass gets hit with this]]. First, [[spoiler:Liara and several others]] end up dying, for which she blames herself. This [[HeroicBSOD drives her into depression]], making her an easy convert to the ways of an [[InsaneAdmiral insane]] [[GeneralRipper admiral]], whereupon she engages in some highly questionable missions. Due to her FaceHeelTurn, her now-former friends abandon Shepard, even going so far as to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown administer a savage beating]] in order to keep Sam out of the final fight, though she is recovered afterward with severe injuries. Once [[BackFromTheDead reawoken]], a continuous losing battle against [[spoiler:a Force-wielding Siren]] combined with the arrival of [[spoiler:Flood]] breaks her ''again,'' causing Shepard to hang up her uniform. Only some pep talks from [[spoiler:Garrus and Wrex]] combined with the magnitude of what's at stake manage to convince her to step back into the fight. Even then, she initially leaves command to others.

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* In ''FanFic/{{Fractured}}'', a ''Franchise/MassEffect''[=/=]''Franchise/StarWars''[[spoiler:[=/=]''[=Borderlands=]'']] [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover crossover]] and its [[FanFic/SovereignGFCOrigins [[Fanfic/{{Origins}} sequel]], Samantha Shepard [[BreakTheBadass gets hit with this]]. First, [[spoiler:Liara and several others]] end up dying, for which she blames herself. This [[HeroicBSOD drives her into depression]], making her an easy convert to the ways of an [[InsaneAdmiral insane]] [[GeneralRipper admiral]], whereupon she engages in some highly questionable missions. Due to her FaceHeelTurn, her now-former friends abandon Shepard, even going so far as to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown administer a savage beating]] in order to keep Sam out of the final fight, though she is recovered afterward with severe injuries. Once [[BackFromTheDead reawoken]], a continuous losing battle against [[spoiler:a Force-wielding Siren]] combined with the arrival of [[spoiler:Flood]] breaks her ''again,'' causing Shepard to hang up her uniform. Only some pep talks from [[spoiler:Garrus and Wrex]] combined with the magnitude of what's at stake manage to convince her to step back into the fight. Even then, she initially leaves command to others.
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* ''Fanfic/TheManyDatesOfDannyFenton'' (''WesternAnimation/DannyPhantom'', WesternAnimation, [[{{Series}} TV Series]], and ComicBooks.): Vicky from ''WesternAnimation/TheFairlyOddParents'' gets this at the hands of Danny. Using his invisibility, he throws a sticky bun at Vicky's head, causes her trip over a can, which causes a bucket of paint to fall on her head, after which she falls into a pile of garbage. She throws the can of paint into a pile of bees, which proceed to sting and chase after her after being attracted to the garbage and sticky bun stuck on her body.
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* In ''FanFic/{{Fractured}}'', a ''MassEffect''[=/=]''StarWars''[[spoiler:[=/=]''[=Borderlands=]'']] [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover crossover]] and its [[FanFic/SovereignGFCOrigins sequel]], Samantha Shepard [[BreakTheBadass gets hit with this]]. First, [[spoiler:Liara and several others]] end up dying, for which she blames herself. This [[HeroicBSOD drives her into depression]], making her an easy convert to the ways of an [[InsaneAdmiral insane]] [[GeneralRipper admiral]], whereupon she engages in some highly questionable missions. Due to her FaceHeelTurn, her now-former friends abandon Shepard, even going so far as to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown administer a savage beating]] in order to keep Sam out of the final fight, though she is recovered afterward with severe injuries. Once [[BackFromTheDead reawoken]], a continuous losing battle against [[spoiler:a Force-wielding Siren]] combined with the arrival of [[spoiler:Flood]] breaks her ''again,'' causing Shepard to hang up her uniform. Only some pep talks from [[spoiler:Garrus and Wrex]] combined with the magnitude of what's at stake manage to convince her to step back into the fight. Even then, she initially leaves command to others.

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* In ''FanFic/{{Fractured}}'', a ''MassEffect''[=/=]''StarWars''[[spoiler:[=/=]''[=Borderlands=]'']] ''Franchise/MassEffect''[=/=]''Franchise/StarWars''[[spoiler:[=/=]''[=Borderlands=]'']] [[MassiveMultiplayerCrossover crossover]] and its [[FanFic/SovereignGFCOrigins sequel]], Samantha Shepard [[BreakTheBadass gets hit with this]]. First, [[spoiler:Liara and several others]] end up dying, for which she blames herself. This [[HeroicBSOD drives her into depression]], making her an easy convert to the ways of an [[InsaneAdmiral insane]] [[GeneralRipper admiral]], whereupon she engages in some highly questionable missions. Due to her FaceHeelTurn, her now-former friends abandon Shepard, even going so far as to [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown administer a savage beating]] in order to keep Sam out of the final fight, though she is recovered afterward with severe injuries. Once [[BackFromTheDead reawoken]], a continuous losing battle against [[spoiler:a Force-wielding Siren]] combined with the arrival of [[spoiler:Flood]] breaks her ''again,'' causing Shepard to hang up her uniform. Only some pep talks from [[spoiler:Garrus and Wrex]] combined with the magnitude of what's at stake manage to convince her to step back into the fight. Even then, she initially leaves command to others.

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