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* In ''Fanfic/TurningRedSecretsOfThePanda'', Xia generally remains quite calm, even when around members of the PCA or when she knows they're involved in something. However, after she [[spoiler:sees the horrible things Jason has done, and witnesses Jason shooting Mei in the gut, she [[RageBreakingPoint completely snaps]]. This leads to her [[CurbStompBattle beating the ever-living hell out of Jason]], while in her red panda form]].
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* In ''Fanfic/TurningRedSecretsOfThePanda'', Xia generally remains quite calm, even when around members of the PCA or when she knows they're involved in something. However, after she [[spoiler:sees the horrible things Jason has done, and witnesses Jason shooting Mei in the gut, she [[RageBreakingPoint completely snaps]]. This leads to her [[CurbStompBattle beating the ever-living hell out of Jason]], while in her red panda form]].
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** {{Discussed}} in Chapter 9. It's made clear that Godzilla relies on controlled and calculated fury to fuel his actions when fighting.
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** {{Discussed}} {{Discussed|Trope}} in Chapter 9. It's made clear that Godzilla relies on controlled and calculated fury to fuel his actions when fighting.
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** In [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/700972045402603520/ another]] such non-canon crossover where the fic's Mark Russell meets his [[Characters/MonsterVerseMarkRussell canon self]] from ''Film/GodzillaVsKong''; the [=Mark's=] argue with each-other over Abraxas!Mark being a less smothering and controlling father to Madison than Canon!Mark is out of fear of losing her, and when Canon!Mark accuses Abraxas!Mark of not caring if Godzilla kills his Madison after they originally lost their other child to a Titan battle, Abraxas!Mark's response isn't to raise his voice and counter-argue at all. It's to breathe deeply, then tell Canon!Mark in a calm tone; it's a shame that he (Abraxas!Mark) can't go back in time and warn Canon!Mark's Vivienne off of saving his life in Antarctica, because if he could, it would save Canon!Vivienne from being eaten by Ghidorah and would ensure that Canon!Mark's Madison would have a more competent and comforting guardian than either of her biological parents turned out to be.
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** In [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/700972045402603520/ another]] such non-canon crossover where the fic's Mark Russell meets his [[Characters/MonsterVerseMarkRussell canon self]] self from ''Film/GodzillaVsKong''; the [=Mark's=] argue with each-other over Abraxas!Mark being a less smothering and controlling father to Madison than Canon!Mark is out of fear of losing her, and when Canon!Mark accuses Abraxas!Mark of not caring if Godzilla kills his Madison after they originally lost their other child to a Titan battle, Abraxas!Mark's response isn't to raise his voice and counter-argue at all. It's to breathe deeply, then tell Canon!Mark in a calm tone; it's a shame that he (Abraxas!Mark) can't go back in time and warn Canon!Mark's Vivienne off of saving his life in Antarctica, because if he could, it would save Canon!Vivienne from being eaten by Ghidorah and would ensure that Canon!Mark's Madison would have a more competent and comforting guardian than either of her biological parents turned out to be.
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* ''Fanfic/AllForLuz'':
** In chapter 3, Camp Counsellor Johnson is described as one point looking like wanting to scream his face off at AntagonisticGovernor Maxwell, he's able to compose himself, not wanting to continue to let the SmugSnake to get a rise out of him.
** In chapter 4, Julia is described has having eyes glimmering in anger, repulsion, and fury; yet has a ever-calm expression that did not display any of that when first meeting Governor Maxwell. Luz envies that characteristic.
** In chapter 13, upon hearing about the Wittebanes' involvement with the Death Camp from Pastor Domenico makes Luz's blood boil but she keeps a calm and collected expression.
** In chapter 17, Luz becomes this when she remarks that she can't even do a simple shopping trip without being harassed by people trying to kill her.
--> '''Luz''': ''(Through barely SuppressedRage)'' You know… I just wanted to get some shopping done. Really, that’s it! ''(RedEyesTakeWarning)'' '''But, it would seem as if I’m not even allowed that.'''
** In chapter 3, Camp Counsellor Johnson is described as one point looking like wanting to scream his face off at AntagonisticGovernor Maxwell, he's able to compose himself, not wanting to continue to let the SmugSnake to get a rise out of him.
** In chapter 4, Julia is described has having eyes glimmering in anger, repulsion, and fury; yet has a ever-calm expression that did not display any of that when first meeting Governor Maxwell. Luz envies that characteristic.
** In chapter 13, upon hearing about the Wittebanes' involvement with the Death Camp from Pastor Domenico makes Luz's blood boil but she keeps a calm and collected expression.
** In chapter 17, Luz becomes this when she remarks that she can't even do a simple shopping trip without being harassed by people trying to kill her.
--> '''Luz''': ''(Through barely SuppressedRage)'' You know… I just wanted to get some shopping done. Really, that’s it! ''(RedEyesTakeWarning)'' '''But, it would seem as if I’m not even allowed that.'''
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'''Harry:''' What was that? [[LeaveNoSurvivors I'm afraid I didn't hear you.]]\\
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* ''Fanfic/TrollingTheToad'': Professor Sprout reacts this way to the revelation of [[spoiler:Umbridge being a child abuser through "the Hogwarts Voice" newsletter]] in Chapter 45:
-->"If these allegations are true, you really do have some nerve sitting amongst us, you know." Professor Sprout spoke with the false kind of cheerfulness that one usually heard from someone when they were doing their very best not to punch someone in the face.
Or hex them, as the case may be.
-->"If these allegations are true, you really do have some nerve sitting amongst us, you know." Professor Sprout spoke with the false kind of cheerfulness that one usually heard from someone when they were doing their very best not to punch someone in the face.
Or hex them, as the case may be.
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* ''Fanfic/VowOfTheKing'': Aizen informs Uryu's parents that one of his Espada killed their son, resulting in incredible rage from Ryuken, but Kanae's expression and voice become completely flat as she promises to kill him.
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* In the [[https://videogameshrines.weebly.com/diablo-iii.html Diablo III shrine]] of the [[https://videogameshrines.weebly.com/ Video Game Shrines]], the main character normally spends his time making flippant comments and lighthearted jokes. After [[spoiler: Adria sacrifices Leah]], he marches through Heaven after Diablo, saying almost nothing and quietly obliterating anything and anyone unfortunate enough to get between him and his quarry. Example: Rakanoth takes over the Library of Fate and barely gets a word of introduction in before Benamin ''immolates the entire library''.
* In the [[https://videogameshrines.weebly.com/diablo-iii.html Diablo III shrine]] of the [[https://videogameshrines.weebly.com/ Video Game Shrines]], the main character normally spends his time making flippant comments and lighthearted jokes. After [[spoiler: Adria sacrifices Leah]], he marches through Heaven after Diablo, saying almost nothing and quietly obliterating anything and anyone unfortunate enough to get between him and his quarry. Example: Rakanoth takes over the Library of Fate and barely gets a word of introduction in before Benamin ''immolates the entire library''.
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%%* In the [[https://videogameshrines.weebly.com/diablo-iii.html Diablo III shrine]] of the [[https://videogameshrines.weebly.com/ Video Game Shrines]], the main character normally spends his time making flippant comments and lighthearted jokes. After [[spoiler: Adria sacrifices Leah]], he marches through Heaven after Diablo, saying almost nothing and quietly obliterating anything and anyone unfortunate enough to get between him and his quarry. Example: Rakanoth takes over the Library of Fate and barely gets a word of introduction in before Benamin ''immolates the entire library''.
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** In the Denoument, after he returns to Marineford, Admiral Aokiji, who previously had pretty much StoppedCaring about - pretty much everything - is clearly ''seething'' in fury, directed both at the Government for its sheer corruption, and himself for JustFollowingOrders for twenty years despite knowing of said corruption. His scowl almost made ''Akainu'' flinch when he did a FaceRevealingTurn after ringing the Ox Bell. Despite this, he never raises his voice beyond a normal level even as [[spoiler:he challenges Akainu to the same DuelToTheDeath they fought in canon, making his intention to kill Akainu utterly explicit by saying that "-the winner will succeed Sengoku. The loser will die."]]
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* ''Fanfic/TheAccidentalWarlordAndHisPack'': Eskel goes cold and silent with with fury after [[spoiler:Lytta betrays Geralt]] and nearly kills him. ''"Eskel has no words left, nothing but the growl rumbling deep in his chest, nothing but the glacier-cold anger filling his thoughts."''
* ''Fanfic/TheAccidentalWarlordAndHisPack'': Eskel goes cold and silent with with fury after [[spoiler:Lytta betrays Geralt]] and nearly kills him. ''"Eskel has no words left, nothing but the growl rumbling deep in his chest, nothing but the glacier-cold anger filling his thoughts."''
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* ''Fanfic/CodePrime'': In ''Nerves of Steel'', [[Characters/CodePrimeMegatron Megatron]] catches everyone off guard when he tells them they are dismissed, despite the fact that they failed to acquire another Cybertronian artifact and lost another energon mine, as well as a large number of slaves. He doesn’t raise his voice, nor does he punish any of them, but he makes it clear that he’s absolutely livid when Starscream tries to question him.
** Later in ''A United Front Facing the Dark Horizon'', Megatron recaps everything he was told regarding the failed attempts to take over the EU and Chinese Federation, all while growling lowly. He eventually explodes with anger when Starscream tries to make excuses.
** Later in ''A United Front Facing the Dark Horizon'', Megatron recaps everything he was told regarding the failed attempts to take over the EU and Chinese Federation, all while growling lowly. He eventually explodes with anger when Starscream tries to make excuses.
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* ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'': Asuka of all people slips into this when she sees Rei's ''atrocious'' living conditions, and finds out the whole thing was arranged by Gendo.
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* ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'': ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeelingCrazy88'': Asuka of all people slips into this when she sees Rei's ''atrocious'' living conditions, and finds out the whole thing was arranged by Gendo.
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** In [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/700972045402603520/ another]] such non-canon crossover where the fic's Mark Russell meets his [[Characters/MonsterVerseMarkRussell canon self]] from ''Film/GodzillaVsKong''; the [=Mark's=] argue with each-other over Abraxas!Mark being a less smothering and controlling father to Madison than Canon!Mark is out of fear of losing her, and when Canon!Mark accuses Abraxas!Mark of not caring if Godzilla kills his Madison after they originally lost their other child to a Titan battle, Abraxas!Mark's response isn't to raise his voice and counter-argue at all. It's to breathe deeply, then tell Canon!Mark in a calm tone; it's a shame that he (Abraxas!Mark) can't go back in time and warn Canon!Mark's Vivienne off of saving his life in Antarctica, because if he could, it would save Canon!Vivienne from being eaten by Ghidorah and would ensure that Canon!Mark's Madison would have a more competent and comforting guardian than either of her biological parents turned out to be.
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* ''Fanfic/OwlsHellThatEndsWell'': When Stolas finally learns that his long-lost daughter Octavia has been with Blitzo all this time and Blitzo withheld this information from him, he's ''absolutely furious'', but he controls himself long enough to send Loona home so that she doesn't have to see this side of him, and long enough to see Blitzo's reaction with his own eyes when he calmly lays the accusation at Blitzo's feet.
* ''Fanfic/OwlsHellThatEndsWell'': When Stolas finally learns that his long-lost daughter Octavia has been with Blitzo all this time and Blitzo withheld this information from him, he's ''absolutely furious'', but he controls himself long enough to send Loona home so that she doesn't have to see this side of him, and long enough to see Blitzo's reaction with his own eyes when he calmly lays the accusation at Blitzo's feet.
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** {{Discussed}} in Chapter 9. It's made clear during the story that Godzilla relies on this kind of controlled and calculated fury to fuel his actions when fighting.
** {{Discussed}} in Chapter 9. It's made clear during the story that Godzilla relies on this kind of controlled and calculated fury to fuel his actions when fighting.
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** {{Discussed}} in Chapter 9. It's made clearduring the story that Godzilla relies on this kind of controlled and calculated fury to fuel his actions when fighting.
** {{Discussed}} in Chapter 9. It's made clear
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* In a [[https://hrodvitnon.tumblr.com/post/735195888844177408/ non-canon crossover]] by ''Abraxas'' author Hrodvitnon on her Tumblr, San is a lot quieter than his sister half Vivienne when they learn from the "Graham Lives" Vivienne that Monarch in the latter's universe are keeping Ghidorah's severed left head intact, calmly saying at the end: "Where is the head being stored? I'm feeling ''peckish''."
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* In Fanfic/AnywayIveBeenThere Pacifica enters a tranquil fury for a few chapters, proceeding to ice Dipper out, until he manages to win her over with a big romantic gesture.
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* In Fanfic/AnywayIveBeenThere ''Fanfic/AnywayIveBeenThere'': When Pacifica enters a tranquil fury for a few chapters, proceeding runs away from home and the twins take her in, Pacifica's mom arrives to ice talk to Mrs. Pines. The kids don't hear the conversation, but at the end of it Pacifica is allowed to stay. Mrs. Pines, meanwhile, is ''trembling with rage'' when she reveals the bell that Pacifica's mom gave her. Pacifica has been conditioned to obey a ringing bell, and Mrs. Pines is clearly not happy about it. She tells Dipper out, until he manages to win her over get rid of it, and Dipper and Pacifica cut it up with a big romantic gesture.
cutting torch.
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* ''Fanfic/LongLostLoud'': While most NSL fics have Lincoln yell and get into a NoHoldsBarredbeatdown with Lynn or gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to them or worst of all, think his family hates him, not this time. Here Lincoln NEARLY loses his temper but instead holds it in and just allows them to go on their day out.
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* ''Fanfic/LongLostLoud'': While most NSL fics have Lincoln yell and get into a NoHoldsBarredbeatdown NoHoldsBarredBeatdown with Lynn or gives a TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to them or worst of all, think his family hates him, not this time. Here Lincoln NEARLY loses his temper but instead holds it in and just allows them to go on their day out.
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* ''Fanfic/TaylorIsDOOMed'': Being trapped in a facility full of monsters and constantly fighting for her life gives Taylor some serious anger issues, but as she continues to die and respawn, over and over, the anger becomes cold rather than hot, which makes her even more lethally efficient. By the time of her 104th death:
--> She was also so far beyond fury that she couldn't even think of a word for it, and had ended up in an almost zenlike state of eerie calm underlaid by a rage that would destroy a star.\\
She settled for destroying absolutely everything else, not having a star handy to take out her peevishness on.
* ''Fanfic/TaylorIsDOOMed'': Being trapped in a facility full of monsters and constantly fighting for her life gives Taylor some serious anger issues, but as she continues to die and respawn, over and over, the anger becomes cold rather than hot, which makes her even more lethally efficient. By the time of her 104th death:
--> She was also so far beyond fury that she couldn't even think of a word for it, and had ended up in an almost zenlike state of eerie calm underlaid by a rage that would destroy a star.\\
She settled for destroying absolutely everything else, not having a star handy to take out her peevishness on.
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* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/chapters/44887825 best (fake) smile]]'': When Adrien talks with Marinette and learns more about the extent of Lila's campaign of bullying against her, he is livid -- internally. But he doesn't show it to Marinette, he just tries to be supportive and then, once he's home, talks with Plagg and makes plans. By the time he's done, Lila's reputation has been torn down, ripped into confetti, set on fire, and scattered to the four winds, while Adrien continues to smile politely at her and act like a perfect gentleman.
--> "We're not doing this for ''fun'', Plagg. We're doing this for ''justice''."\\
"But we're still gonna crush her like a soda can, right? Good. Great. Glad we're on the same page."
--> "We're not doing this for ''fun'', Plagg. We're doing this for ''justice''."\\
"But we're still gonna crush her like a soda can, right? Good. Great. Glad we're on the same page."
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* ''WebAnimation/ReturnToKrocodileIsle'': In the post-credits scene, K. Rool briefly sinks into his rage-induced mental distortion before calmly and affably threatening Klump after he realizes that [[spoiler:Klump not knowing his full name has led to him missing out on ''years'' of ''Smash Bros.'' invitations]].
-->'''K. Rool:''' (gently) Klump, my dearly dauntless Klump. Remind me, if I ever were to kill myself, I could scale to the heights of your blind devotion ([[SuddenlyShouting suddenly furious]]) ''and leap down towards your IQ!''\\
'''Klump:''' ([[OhCrap realizing who the letters are for]]) You know, [[ProfessionalButtKisser it's a very handsome name]]. (rolls back to dodge as K. Rool shoots at him) [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Well, I'll just be, I'll be... welcome home, sir!]]
* ''WebAnimation/ReturnToKrocodileIsle'': In the post-credits scene, K. Rool briefly sinks into his rage-induced mental distortion before calmly and affably threatening Klump after he realizes that [[spoiler:Klump not knowing his full name has led to him missing out on ''years'' of ''Smash Bros.'' invitations]].
-->'''K. Rool:''' (gently) Klump, my dearly dauntless Klump. Remind me, if I ever were to kill myself, I could scale to the heights of your blind devotion ([[SuddenlyShouting suddenly furious]]) ''and leap down towards your IQ!''\\
'''Klump:''' ([[OhCrap realizing who the letters are for]]) You know, [[ProfessionalButtKisser it's a very handsome name]]. (rolls back to dodge as K. Rool shoots at him) [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere Well, I'll just be, I'll be... welcome home, sir!]]
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** Hugh has one of these moments during Chapter 6 of the original, upon witnessing the sight of a group of goblins alongside several female corpses, one of them used as a HumanSacrifice. Internally declaring that the greenskin race are AlwaysChaoticEvil, he brandishes his [[KatanasAreJustBetter Chikage]] with a cold look overcoming his features.
** [[AloofDarkHairedGirl Olga's]] voice is described as "seductive, ringing with authority and barely concealed anger", when she notices the Hunter entering her throne room in the remastered version.
** [[AloofDarkHairedGirl Olga's]] voice is described as "seductive, ringing with authority and barely concealed anger", when she notices the Hunter entering her throne room in the remastered version.
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** Hugh has one of these moments during Chapter 6 of the original, upon witnessing the sight of a group of goblins alongside several female corpses, one of them used as a HumanSacrifice. Internally declaring that the greenskin race greenskins are AlwaysChaoticEvil, he brandishes his [[KatanasAreJustBetter Chikage]] blade with a cold look overcoming his features.
features, intent on tearing the shaman responsible apart.
**[[AloofDarkHairedGirl Olga's]] voice is described as "seductive, ringing with authority and barely concealed anger", Olga's face does not show emotion when she notices suddenly appears to scorch the Hunter entering her throne room rebels under Mandeville's command, but she is in the remastered version.fact incoherently furious about Chloe being seriously wounded. Even Kyril and a few of his soldiers, all of them hard fighters, are momentarily taken aback.
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** An all-too-often occasion for [[TheStoic the Good Hunter]] whenever he is on a hunt or pissed.
** Hugh has one of these moments during Chapter 6 of the original, upon witnessing the sight of a group of goblins alongside several female corpses, one of them used as a HumanSacrifice. Internally declaring that the greenskin race are AlwaysChaoticEvil, he brandishes his [[KatanasAreJustBetter Chikage]] with a cold look overcoming his features. [[JustifiedTrope This trope is the only way for him to express anger, because he is mute]].
** Hugh has one of these moments during Chapter 6 of the original, upon witnessing the sight of a group of goblins alongside several female corpses, one of them used as a HumanSacrifice. Internally declaring that the greenskin race are AlwaysChaoticEvil, he brandishes his [[KatanasAreJustBetter Chikage]] with a cold look overcoming his features. [[JustifiedTrope This trope is the only way for him to express anger, because he is mute]].
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** An all-too-often occasion for [[TheStoic the Good Hunter]] The Hunter is devoid of expression whenever he is swinging his heavy serrated cleaver in arcs meant to maim, sever, and kill on a hunt or pissed.
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** Hugh has one of these moments during Chapter 6 of the original, upon witnessing the sight of a group of goblins alongside several female corpses, one of them used as a HumanSacrifice. Internally declaring that the greenskin race are AlwaysChaoticEvil, he brandishes his [[KatanasAreJustBetter Chikage]] with a cold look overcoming his features. [[JustifiedTrope This trope is the only way for him to express anger, because he is mute]].
** Hugh has one of these moments during Chapter 6 of the original, upon witnessing the sight of a group of goblins alongside several female corpses, one of them used as a HumanSacrifice. Internally declaring that the greenskin race are AlwaysChaoticEvil, he brandishes his [[KatanasAreJustBetter Chikage]] with a cold look overcoming his features.
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* ''Fanfic/SuicidalOverconfidence'': After Bitsy presses his Wilson Fisk's BerserkButton by insulting his dead family, Wilson Fisk he just chuckles and states rather serenely that some people would find his life story funny. He then walks in front of Bitsy and [[spoiler:[[ImpliedDeathThreat asks what kind of funeral she wants]] before [[CurbStompBattle beating her to death]] off-screen]].
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* ''Fanfic/SuicidalOverconfidence'': After Bitsy insults presses his BerserkButton by insulting his dead family, Wilson Fisk just chuckles and says states rather serenely that some people would find his life story funny. He then walks in front of Bitsy and [[spoiler:[[ImpliedDeathThreat asks what kind of funeral she wants]] before [[CurbStompBattle beating her to death death]] off-screen]].
