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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so that her family and friends won’t share her fate is just ''[[DownerBeginning heartwrenching]]''.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later. The last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in is Jackie crying out her name.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later. The last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in is Jackie crying out her name.
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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so that her family and friends won’t won't share her fate is just ''[[DownerBeginning heartwrenching]]''.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes whatshe’s she's about to do, but can’t can't do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later. The last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in is Jackie crying out her name.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what
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** It gets ''worse'' when Elyon’s powers nearly ''kill'' her, and after Elyon stops, she weakly cries out for Jackie, Uncle and Tohru before succumbing to unconsciousness.
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** It gets ''worse'' when Elyon’s Elyon's powers nearly ''kill'' her, and after Elyon stops, she weakly cries out for Jackie, Uncle and Tohru before succumbing to unconsciousness.
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* Miranda’s thoughts reveal that she used to have a better view of friendship, but while we don’t know what caused that view to change, it must have been terrible.
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* Miranda’s Miranda's thoughts reveal that she used to have a better view of friendship, but while we don’t don't know what caused that view to change, it must have been terrible.
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* Drake ([[OnlySaneMan one of the more sane rebel leaders]]) is one of the few who doesn't doubt the Royal Guard's [[MookFaceTurn reformation]]. Then - just when the reconstruction of Sonder Hill is going well - he's left behind when the Knights capture [[TheAtoner Tynar]], helpless to stop them.
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* Drake ([[OnlySaneMan one of the more sane rebel leaders]]) is one of the few who doesn't doubt the Royal Guard's [[MookFaceTurn reformation]]. Then - just when the reconstruction of Sonder Hill is going well - he's left behind when the Knights capture [[TheAtoner Tynar]], helpless to stop them.
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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so that her family and friends won’t share her fate is just [[DownerBeginning ''heartwrenching'']].
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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so that her family and friends won’t share her fate is just [[DownerBeginning ''heartwrenching'']].''[[DownerBeginning heartwrenching]]''.
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* The "Mage’s" BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly get her locked up (and it was intended to be for ''life''). You can easily feel her distress over the situation.
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* The "Mage’s" "Mage's" BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly get her locked up (and it was intended to be for ''life''). You can easily feel her distress over the situation.
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** When she was [[UsedToBeASweetKid just five years old]], her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they [[MamaBear wouldn't]] [[PapaWolf let]] him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by using [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo false promises of letting her parents go if she gives herself in]]. And if that wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while [[KickTheDog belittling her the entire time]]. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so]] [[FreudianExcuse messed up]].
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** When she was [[UsedToBeASweetKid just five years old]], her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they [[MamaBear wouldn't]] [[PapaWolf let]] him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by using [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo false promises of letting her parents go if she gives herself in]]. And if If that wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while [[KickTheDog belittling her the entire time]]. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so]] [[FreudianExcuse messed up]].
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by using false promises of letting her parents go if she gives herself in. And if that wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
* Drake ([[OnlySaneMan one of the less obnoxious rebel leaders]]) is one of the few who doesn't doubt the Royal Guard's reformation. Then he's left behind when the Knights capture [[TheAtoner Tynar]], helpless to stop them.
* Drake ([[OnlySaneMan one of the less obnoxious rebel leaders]]) is one of the few who doesn't doubt the Royal Guard's reformation. Then he's left behind when the Knights capture [[TheAtoner Tynar]], helpless to stop them.
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** When she was [[UsedToBeASweetKid just five years old, old]], her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let [[MamaBear wouldn't]] [[PapaWolf let]] him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by using [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo false promises of letting her parents go if she gives herself in. in]]. And if that wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while [[KickTheDog belittling her the entire time. time]]. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so so]] [[FreudianExcuse messed up]].
* Drake ([[OnlySaneMan one of theless obnoxious more sane rebel leaders]]) is one of the few who doesn't doubt the Royal Guard's reformation. [[MookFaceTurn reformation]]. Then - just when the reconstruction of Sonder Hill is going well - he's left behind when the Knights capture [[TheAtoner Tynar]], helpless to stop them.
* Drake ([[OnlySaneMan one of the
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* Gargoyle is apparently TheLastOfHisKind: Phobos ordered his fellow Gargoyles to be exterminated, [[KickTheDog for no other reason than to prevent Elyon from discovering that they served him]].
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* Gargoyle is apparently TheLastOfHisKind: Phobos ordered his fellow Gargoyles the others to be exterminated, [[KickTheDog for no other reason than to prevent Elyon from discovering that they served him]].
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* Gargoyle is apparently the LastOfHisKind: Phobos ordered his fellow Gargoyles to be exterminated, for no other reason than to prevent Elyon from discovering that they served him.
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* Gargoyle is apparently the LastOfHisKind: TheLastOfHisKind: Phobos ordered his fellow Gargoyles to be exterminated, [[KickTheDog for no other reason than to prevent Elyon from discovering that they served him.him]].
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* The "Mage’s" BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly get her locked up. You can easily feel her distress over the situation.
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* The "Mage’s" BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly get her locked up.up (and it was intended to be for ''life''). You can easily feel her distress over the situation.
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by false promises of letting her parents go if she gives herself in. And if that's wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by using false promises of letting her parents go if she gives herself in. And if that's that wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by false promises of letting them go if she gives herself in. And if that's wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by false promises of letting them her parents go if she gives herself in. And if that's wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
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* Gargoyle is apparently the LastOfHisKind: Phobos ordered his fellow Gargoyles to be exterminated, for no other reason than to prevent Elyon from discovering that they served him.
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* Miranda is truly sad about having to leave[[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes Cedric]] behind (though she hides it well).
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* Miranda is truly sad about having to leave[[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes leave [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes Cedric]] behind (though she hides it well).
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by false lies of letting them go if she gives herself in. And if that's not bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by false lies promises of letting them go if she gives herself in. And if that's not wasn't bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so her family and friends won’t share her fate is just ''heartwrenching''.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later, with the last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in being Jackie crying out her name.
* Jade regaining control and begging for help is pretty sad.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later, with the last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in being Jackie crying out her name.
* Jade regaining control and begging for help is pretty sad.
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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so that her family and friends won’t share her fate is just ''heartwrenching''.
[[DownerBeginning ''heartwrenching'']].
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a secondlater, with the later. The last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in being is Jackie crying out her name.
* Jade regaining control from the Queen and begging for help is pretty sad.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second
* Jade regaining control from the Queen and begging for help is pretty sad.
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* “The Mage’s” BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly getting her locked up.
* Miranda is truly sad about having to leave Cedric behind (though she hides it well).
* Miranda is truly sad about having to leave Cedric behind (though she hides it well).
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* “The Mage’s” The "Mage’s" BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly getting get her locked up.
up. You can easily feel her distress over the situation.
* Miranda is truly sad about having toleave Cedric leave[[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes Cedric]] behind (though she hides it well).
* Miranda is truly sad about having to
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* Drake being left behind when the Knights grab Tynar, helpless to stop them.
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** When she was just five years old, her (ordinary human) parents were burned at stake by [[KnightTemplar Kur]] just because they wouldn't let him [[FantasticRacism kill her along with other shapeshifters]]. He captures her by false lies of letting them go if she gives herself in. And if that's not bad enough, he [[ForcedToWatch forces her to watch]] their death while belittling her the entire time. No wonder that girl is [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds so messed up]].
* Drakebeing ([[OnlySaneMan one of the less obnoxious rebel leaders]]) is one of the few who doesn't doubt the Royal Guard's reformation. Then he's left behind when the Knights grab Tynar, capture [[TheAtoner Tynar]], helpless to stop them.
* Drake
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** It gets ‘’worse’’ when Elyon’s powers nearly ''kill'' her, and after Elyon stops, she weakly cries out for Jackie, Uncle and Tohru before succumbing to unconsciousness.
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** It gets ‘’worse’’ ''worse'' when Elyon’s powers nearly ''kill'' her, and after Elyon stops, she weakly cries out for Jackie, Uncle and Tohru before succumbing to unconsciousness.
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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so her family and friends won’t share her fate is just ‘’heartwrenching’’.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ‘’worse’’, especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later, with the last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in being Jackie crying out her name.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ‘’worse’’, especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later, with the last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in being Jackie crying out her name.
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* Jade deciding to make a HeroicSacrifice and let herself be banished so her family and friends won’t share her fate is just ‘’heartwrenching’’.
''heartwrenching''.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even‘’worse’’, ''worse'', especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later, with the last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in being Jackie crying out her name.name.
* Jade regaining control and begging for help is pretty sad.
** It gets ‘’worse’’ when Elyon’s powers nearly ''kill'' her, and after Elyon stops, she weakly cries out for Jackie, Uncle and Tohru before succumbing to unconsciousness.
* “The Mage’s” BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly getting her locked up.
* Miranda is truly sad about having to leave Cedric behind (though she hides it well).
* Miranda’s thoughts reveal that she used to have a better view of friendship, but while we don’t know what caused that view to change, it must have been terrible.
* Drake being left behind when the Knights grab Tynar, helpless to stop them.
** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even
* Jade regaining control and begging for help is pretty sad.
** It gets ‘’worse’’ when Elyon’s powers nearly ''kill'' her, and after Elyon stops, she weakly cries out for Jackie, Uncle and Tohru before succumbing to unconsciousness.
* “The Mage’s” BlatantLies about Jade being an evil shapeshifter nearly getting her locked up.
* Miranda is truly sad about having to leave Cedric behind (though she hides it well).
* Miranda’s thoughts reveal that she used to have a better view of friendship, but while we don’t know what caused that view to change, it must have been terrible.
* Drake being left behind when the Knights grab Tynar, helpless to stop them.
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** Jade saying goodbye to Jackie makes it even ‘’worse’’, especially when Viper realizes what she’s about to do, but can’t do anything to stop Jade from letting go a second later, with the last thing Jade hears before she gets sucked in being Jackie crying out her name.
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