Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* As Birdboy confronts his demons by going inside the lighthouse, he reaches his former room and retrieves from his old wardrobe a photo taken when his father was still alive, making a TroubledFetalPosition on the ruined bed as he reminisces about his childhood.
-->'''Birdboy's father echo:''' Calm down my son, I will always be proud of you no matter what.
** The state of the room itself. Before the disaster, the room was well decorated with furniture, there was a mattress on the bed and the room was well-maintained. When Birdboy visits it, the room is suffering from abandonment as the only standing furniture is a wardrobe and a bed without a mattress, and the walls and the floor are decaying from neglect.
-->'''Birdboy's father echo:''' Calm down my son, I will always be proud of you no matter what.
** The state of the room itself. Before the disaster, the room was well decorated with furniture, there was a mattress on the bed and the room was well-maintained. When Birdboy visits it, the room is suffering from abandonment as the only standing furniture is a wardrobe and a bed without a mattress, and the walls and the floor are decaying from neglect.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Capitalization was fixed from Tearjerker.Bird Boy The Forgotten Children to TearJerker.Bird Boy The Forgotten Children. Null edit to update page. Page may need a mojibake cleanup after the fact
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
* The battle between two rats and their respective sons ends up with one’s son and one’s father killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their dad/son and after a moment they just silently walk away together, making a new dad-son pair.
to:
* The battle between two rats and their respective sons ends up with one’s one's son and one’s one's father killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their dad/son and after a moment they just silently walk away together, making a new dad-son pair.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their respective brothers and after a moment they just silently walk away together.
to:
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers sons ends up with their brothers one’s son and one’s father killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their respective brothers dad/son and after a moment they just silently walk away together.together, making a new dad-son pair.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
* Zachariah's life: In retrospective, he technically could leave the island and go to a better place, but he's short on money and doesn't want to abandon his ill mother.
to:
* Zachariah's life: In retrospective, Since he's one of the only people on the island who still has a working boat, he technically could can leave the island and go to a better place, place whenever he wants, but he's short on money and doesn't want to abandon his ill mother.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,8 (click to see context) from:
* Zacharias's life: In retrospective, he technically could leave the island and go to a better place, but he's short of resources and doesn't want to abandon his ill mother.
* The death of Zacharias's mother.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their respective brothers and after a moment they just silently walk away together
* The ending
** Just as everything is going right for the kids, an unexpected shot from the police hits Birdboy hard in the heart which kills him and his corpse plummets down from the sky into the depths of the ocean.
** The reaction of the policeman who shot him, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, while his superior [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
** A wave destroying the three kids float and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked over the death of Birdboy, the boy who she loved, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying to leave the island again.
* The death of Zacharias's mother.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their respective brothers and after a moment they just silently walk away together
* The ending
** Just as everything is going right for the kids, an unexpected shot from the police hits Birdboy hard in the heart which kills him and his corpse plummets down from the sky into the depths of the ocean.
** The reaction of the policeman who shot him, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, while his superior [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
** A wave destroying the three kids float and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked over the death of Birdboy, the boy who she loved, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying to leave the island again.
to:
* Zacharias's Zachariah's life: In retrospective, he technically could leave the island and go to a better place, but he's short of resources on money and doesn't want to abandon his ill mother.
* The death ofZacharias's Zachariah's mother.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their respective brothers and after a moment they just silently walk awaytogether
together.
* Theending
ending:
** Just as everything is going right for the kids, an unexpectedshot gunshot from the police hits Birdboy hard in the heart which kills heart, killing him instantly and his corpse plummets down from the sky sending him plummeting into the depths of the ocean.
** The reaction of the policeman who shothim, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, him. [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone He clearly feels bad]], while his InspectorJavert superior [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
it]].
** A wave destroying thethree kids float kids' raft and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
**The Dinky's final monologue of Dinky: fate: She is still shocked over the death of Birdboy, the boy who she loved, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying taken back to leave the island again.island, leaving her stuck with parents who love their dog more than they love her and don't realize that she almost died twice in one day.
* The death of
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stop after seeing the deaths of their respective brothers and after a moment they just silently walk away
* The
** Just as everything is going right for the kids, an unexpected
** The reaction of the policeman who shot
** A wave destroying the
**
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
making correction
Changed line(s) 1,3 (click to see context) from:
* Zacharias's life: In retrospective, he technically could leave the island and go to a better place, but he's short of recourses and doesn't want to abandon his ill mother.
* Zacharias's mother death.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stops after seeing their respective brother death and after a moment they just silently walk away together
* Zacharias's mother death.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stops after seeing their respective brother death and after a moment they just silently walk away together
to:
* Zacharias's life: In retrospective, he technically could leave the island and go to a better place, but he's short of recourses resources and doesn't want to abandon his ill mother.
* The death of Zacharias'smother death.
mother.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families,stops stop after seeing the deaths of their respective brother death brothers and after a moment they just silently walk away together
* The death of Zacharias's
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families,
Changed line(s) 5,8 (click to see context) from:
** Just as everything is going bright to the kids, an unexpected shot from the police hits Birdboy hard in the heart and kills him, falling down to the deeps of the ocean.
** The reaction of the guard who shot him, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, while his boss [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
** destroying their float and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked over his boyfriend's death, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying to leave the island again.
** The reaction of the guard who shot him, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, while his boss [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
** destroying their float and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked over his boyfriend's death, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying to leave the island again.
to:
** Just as everything is going bright to right for the kids, an unexpected shot from the police hits Birdboy hard in the heart and which kills him, falling him and his corpse plummets down to from the deeps sky into the depths of the ocean.
** The reaction of theguard policeman who shot him, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, while his boss superior [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
** A wave destroyingtheir the three kids float and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked overhis boyfriend's death, the death of Birdboy, the boy who she loved, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying to leave the island again.
** The reaction of the
** A wave destroying
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked over
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* Zacharias's life: In retrospective, he technically could leave the island and go to a better place, but he's short of recourses and doesn't want to abandon his ill mother.
* Zacharias's mother death.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stops after seeing their respective brother death and after a moment they just silently walk away together
* The ending
** Just as everything is going bright to the kids, an unexpected shot from the police hits Birdboy hard in the heart and kills him, falling down to the deeps of the ocean.
** The reaction of the guard who shot him, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, while his boss [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
** destroying their float and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked over his boyfriend's death, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying to leave the island again.
* Zacharias's mother death.
* The battle between two rats and their respective little brothers ends up with their brothers killed. The two survivors, each from different families, stops after seeing their respective brother death and after a moment they just silently walk away together
* The ending
** Just as everything is going bright to the kids, an unexpected shot from the police hits Birdboy hard in the heart and kills him, falling down to the deeps of the ocean.
** The reaction of the guard who shot him, feeling a bit guilty about killing him, while his boss [[NoSympathy is glad and gloating about Birdboy's death]]
** destroying their float and therefore, killing the living rubber duck.
** The final monologue of Dinky: She is still shocked over his boyfriend's death, she was returned to her abusive home and is ultimately hopeless of any chance of trying to leave the island again.
