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*** Compounding this is Su-an [[ItsAllMyFault blaming herself while pleading with her father to stay]] - she believes that if she hadn't insisted they go to Busan, he wouldn't have been bitten.
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*** Compounding this is Su-an [[ItsAllMyFault blaming herself while pleading with her father to stay]] - -- she believes that if she hadn't insisted they go to Busan, he wouldn't have been bitten.
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* Sang-hwa performing a HeroicSacrifice and asking Seok-woo to take care of his wife, who is looking on in tears. And to make it even more heartbreaking, Sang-hwa [[CallBack finally gives Seong-kyeong a name for their baby]]-- just before the zombies smash the glass, and Seok-woo has to drag the despairing mother back.
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* Sang-hwa performing a HeroicSacrifice and asking Seok-woo to take care of his wife, who is looking on in tears. And to make it even more heartbreaking, Sang-hwa [[CallBack finally gives Seong-kyeong a name for their baby]]-- baby]] -- just before the zombies smash the glass, and Seok-woo has to drag the despairing mother back.
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* Jin-hee becoming infected and infecting an emotionally-wrecked Young-guk, who is so distraught over Jin-hee's fate that he doesn't even try to save himself, [[DespairEventHorizon instead crying in despair and holding her until she turns and bites him.]]
-->'''Young-guk''': I'm sorry...!
-->'''Young-guk''': I'm sorry...!
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* Jin-hee becoming infected and infecting an emotionally-wrecked Young-guk, who is so distraught over Jin-hee's fate that he doesn't even try to save himself, [[DespairEventHorizon instead crying in despair and holding her until she turns and bites him.]]
-->'''Young-guk''':him]].
-->'''Young-guk:''' I'm sorry...!
-->'''Young-guk''':
-->'''Young-guk:''' I'm sorry...!
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-->'''Jong-gil''': What a load of shit.
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* The poor train conductor. He had relative safety in his car and control over the train, giving him plenty of occasions to run off for himself. Instead not only he always waits to board as many passengers as he can, but when he finds the rails blocked he informs the passengers on where he will bring the new train to give them a chance, and when he sees Young-suk tripping while running toward the train, what does he do? Get off and run to help. And what he gets for it is to become yet another people used by Young-suk as a human shield, getting devoured by the hordes. To make things worse, Young-suk himself isn't able to avoid the infection before boarding the train car, putting other survivors at risk.
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* The poor train conductor. He had relative safety in his car and control over the train, giving him plenty of occasions to run off for himself. Instead Instead, not only does he always waits wait to board take in as many passengers as he can, but when he finds the rails blocked he informs the passengers on where he will bring the new train to give them a chance, and when he sees Young-suk tripping while running toward the train, what does he do? Get off and run to help. And what in return, he gets for it is to become becomes yet another people person used by Young-suk as a human shield, getting devoured by the hordes. horde. To make things matters worse, Young-suk himself isn't able is unable to avoid the infection before boarding the train car, putting the other survivors at risk.
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* The poor train conductor. He had relative safety in his car and control over the train, giving him plenty of occasions to run off for himself. Instead not only he always waits to board as many passengers as he can, but when he finds the rails blocked he informs the passengers on where he will bring the new train to give them a chance, and when he sees Young-suk tripping while running toward the train, what does he do? Get off and run to help. And what he gets for it is to become yet another people used by Young-suk as a human shield, getting devoured by the hordes. To make things worse, Young-suk himself isn't able to avoid the infection before boarding the train car, putting other survivors at risk.
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* Jin-hee becoming infected and infecting an emotionally-wrecked Young-guk, who is so distraught over Jin-hee's fate that he doesn't even try to save himself, instead crying in despair and holding her until she turns and bites him.
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* Jin-hee becoming infected and infecting an emotionally-wrecked Young-guk, who is so distraught over Jin-hee's fate that he doesn't even try to save himself, [[DespairEventHorizon instead crying in despair and holding her until she turns and bites him.]]
