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* [[spoiler: Nate talking to Casey in a dream after he passes out thanks to the vaccine.]]
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* Poor Vaughan having to deal with the fact that [[spoiler: Charlie willingly slept with the bandit to get back at him for lying about his cancer.]]
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** This is ironic/foreshadowing in the worst way since [[spoiler: it's Nate that ends up losing her and Vaughan instead.]]
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** This is ironic/foreshadowing ironic/{{foreshadowing}} in the worst way since [[spoiler: it's Nate that ends up losing her and Vaughan instead.]]
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* [[spoiler: Charlie crying when she thinks she's going to lose both Nate and Vaughan in the same day.]]
** This is ironic/foreshadowing in the worst way since [[spoiler: it's Nate that ends up losing her and Vaughan instead.]]
** This is ironic/foreshadowing in the worst way since [[spoiler: it's Nate that ends up losing her and Vaughan instead.]]
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* Vaughan admitting that he thinks [[spoiler: every bad thing that happened throughout the story was his fault and that Nate should let him go.]]
** [[spoiler: Vaughan sobbing into Nate's chest when he chooses to not let him go and Vaughan admitting that he doesn't actually want to die or be alone.]]
** [[spoiler: Vaughan sobbing into Nate's chest when he chooses to not let him go and Vaughan admitting that he doesn't actually want to die or be alone.]]
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* Roxane and Sissy waiting for everyone [[spoiler: to come back [[spoiler: to the abandoned camp without knowing that they never will.]]
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* Knowing that Jude and Raymond [[spoiler: along with the rest of the patients most likely died after Nate and crew abandoned them.]]
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* Knowing that Jude and Raymond Raymond, [[spoiler: along with the rest of the patients patients, most likely died after Nate and crew abandoned them.]]
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* Knowing that Jude and Raymond [[spoiler: along with the rest of the patients most likely died after Nate and crew abandoned them.]]
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* [[spoiler: "(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been so cruel.cruel.
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* Sissy not knowing how bad the apocalypse really is, and not knowing that [[spoiler: her aunt, uncle, cousin, and later her mother are all dead.]]
* Roxane and Sissy waiting for everyone to come back [[spoiler: to the abandoned camp without knowing that they never will.]]
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* [[spoiler: "(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been so cruel.
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** Nate's past in general was pretty sad; having a neglectful alcoholic of a mom, an abusive dad, and the only family member that he liked [[spoiler: dying on him]] and causing him long lasting emotional distress.
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* [[spoiler: Charlie's death, especially if you were expecting Vaughan to die.]]
** It's even worse when [[spoiler: he dies anyways.]]
* [[spoiler: "(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been socruel.cruel.
** It's even worse when [[spoiler: he dies anyways.]]
* [[spoiler: "(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been so
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* Another depression set of notifications that occur in chapter five are the ones that show up when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted" them. So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.
* Another depression set of notifications that occur in chapter five are the ones that show up when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted" them. So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.
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* Some depressing set of notifications occurs in chapter five when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted" them. So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.
* [[spoiler: "(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been socruel.
* Another depression set of notifications that occur in chapter five are the ones that show up when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted" them. So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.cruel.
* [[spoiler: "(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been so
* Another depression set of notifications that occur in chapter five are the ones that show up when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted" them. So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.
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** It's especially heartbreaking sad to think about what Guatier had to go through. [[spoiler: He saw he wife get murdered, had to kill her when she reanimated, and was powerless to stop strangers from kidnapping their baby just before he died.]]
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** It's especially heartbreaking to think about what Guatier had to go through. [[spoiler: He saw he wife get murdered, had to kill her when she reanimated, when and was powerless to stop strangers from kidnapping their baby just before he died.]]
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* What happened to Hanna and Guatier.
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** It's especially heartbreaking to think about what Guatier had to go through. [[spoiler: He saw he wife get murdered, had to kill her when she reanimated, when was powerless to stop strangers from kidnapping their baby just before he died.]]
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* Anya explaining what happened at the party and her eventual fate. Despite what she tried to do do, [[spoiler: she was just traumatized from what happened to her and didn't want that to happen to anyone else.]]
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* Anya explaining what happened at the party and her eventual fate. Despite what she tried to do [[spoiler: she was just traumatized from what happened to her and didn't want that to happen to anyone else.]]
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* Another depression set of notifications that occur in chapter five are the ones that show up when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted".comforted" them. So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.
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* [[spoiler: "(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been so cruel.cruel.
* Another depression set of notifications that occur in chapter five are the ones that show up when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted". So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.
* Another depression set of notifications that occur in chapter five are the ones that show up when Nate decides to comfort [[spoiler: both Charlie and Vaughan.]] It says that "you tried" to comfort them, not "you comforted". So even though it was nice of Nate to try to be there for them, he might not have actually helped make them feel better.
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* [[spoiler: The baby's death]] and Nate's subsequent distress over it in the latter chapters is heartbreaking."(?) Vaughan can't answer that." "(?) Vaughan won't remember that."]] Never has a notification been so cruel.
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* This is more of a fridge tearjerker, but in chapter 4 of the revamp, after Nate remembers [[spoiler: Casey's funeral,]] the narration states that Casey deserved to have better parents. ''Casey'', not "they". This most likely implies that Nate thinks he personally didn't deserve better parents.
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* This is more of a fridge tearjerker, but in chapter 4 of the revamp, after Nate remembers [[spoiler: Casey's funeral,]] the narration states that Casey deserved to have better parents. ''Casey'', not "they". This most likely implies that Nate thinks he personally didn't deserve better parents.parents.
* [[spoiler: The baby's death]] and Nate's subsequent distress over it in the latter chapters is heartbreaking.
* [[spoiler: The baby's death]] and Nate's subsequent distress over it in the latter chapters is heartbreaking.
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* This is more of a fridge tearjerker, but in chapter 4 of the revamp, after remembering Nate remembers [[spoiler: Casey's funeral,]] the narration states that Casey deserved to have better parents. ''Casey'', not "they". This most likely implies that Nate thinks he personally didn't deserve better parents.
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* This is more of a fridge tearjerker, but in chapter 4 of the revamp, after remembering [[spoiler: Casey's funeral,]] the narration states that Casey deserved to have better parents. ''Casey'', not "they". This most likely implies that Nate thinks he personally didn't deserve better parents.
* This is more of a fridge tearjerker, but in chapter 4 of the revamp, after remembering [[spoiler: Casey's funeral,]] the narration states that Casey deserved to have better parents. ''Casey'', not "they". This most likely implies that Nate thinks he personally didn't deserve better parents.
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