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* Seeing just how broken up Cristina is over Ronnie Anne's betrayal is painful. It's implied that she was tied to the last shred of sanity Cristina still had!
* In a sense, Lisa's actions this chapter. While there are no tears present, the idea of a 4-year-old channeling all of her feelings into a single punch is heartbreaking to say the least.
* In a sense, Lisa's actions this chapter. While there are no tears present, the idea of a 4-year-old channeling all of her feelings into a single punch is heartbreaking to say the least.
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** It will specially hurt if you're a Leni fan, seeing how her character changes so wildly from the beginning that you'll begin to wonder what happened to her. It's just really hard to watch Leni act worse then Leni and Lola ever did, especially with her normally being the kindest of the Loud kids.
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** It isn't just restricted to the Loud Sisters. If you're a fan of Ronnie Anne, seeing all the stuff that happends happens to her in later chapters like Chapter 29, Chapter 33, and Chapter 38, is seriously heartbreaking. (See below for more detail on specific events on her)
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* [[spoiler: The way to reverse the effects of helmets. You need to get heartbroken, and the only way to do that is by treating the person picked horribly untill they hate you. Picture that feeling you have after doing it, and you have how most of The Loud kids (Sans Lincoln, Lisa, Lily, and Lucy (Untill later that is) for not having to do it, and Leni who...[[AmbiguousSituation seemed like she liked doing it]]) feel after being forced to do that to the respective virtual versions of their siblings. The most heartbreaking examples are:]]
** [[spoiler: Lori, who has to tell Virtual!Leni that her vasion sense suck. This causes Virtual Leni run away crying.]]
** [[spoiler: Lynn, who had the pleasure of having to destroy a poem made by Virtual!Lucy, who is horrified by what's happening. What's worse, is that while it's never confirmend, it can be quessed that the poem was meant for her. Talk about a kick in the gut.]]
** [[spoiler: Lori, who has to tell Virtual!Leni that her vasion sense suck. This causes Virtual Leni run away crying.]]
** [[spoiler: Lynn, who had the pleasure of having to destroy a poem made by Virtual!Lucy, who is horrified by what's happening. What's worse, is that while it's never confirmend, it can be quessed that the poem was meant for her. Talk about a kick in the gut.]]
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* [[spoiler: The way to reverse the effects of helmets. You need to get heartbroken, and the only way to do that is by treating the person picked horribly untill until they hate you. Picture that feeling you have after doing it, and you have how most of The Loud kids (Sans Lincoln, Lisa, Lily, and Lucy (Untill (until later that is) is,) for not having to do it, and Leni who...[[AmbiguousSituation seemed like she liked doing it]]) feel after being forced to do that to the respective virtual versions of their siblings. The most heartbreaking examples are:]]
** [[spoiler: Lori, who has to tell Virtual!Leni that hervasion fashion sense suck.sucks. This causes Virtual Leni run away crying.]]
** [[spoiler: Lynn, who had the pleasure of having to destroy a poem made by Virtual!Lucy, who is horrified by what's happening. What's worse, is that while it's neverconfirmend, confirmed, it can be quessed guessed that the poem was meant for her. Talk about a kick in the gut.]]
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* [[spoiler: Ronnie being forced to beat up Lincoln thanks to mind control to show Lincoln how horrible his "friends" are.]] The moment is absolutley horrible for both of them:
** It's horrible for Lincoln, because his [[spoiler:girlfriend]] is beating the crap out of him, he doesn't know why, [[KidsAreCruel his supposed "friends"]] (though luckily not Clyde)are mocking him while this is happening, and the poor boy actually ends up in tears and unconcious because of the entire situation.
** It's horrible for Lincoln, because his [[spoiler:girlfriend]] is beating the crap out of him, he doesn't know why, [[KidsAreCruel his supposed "friends"]] (though luckily not Clyde)are mocking him while this is happening, and the poor boy actually ends up in tears and unconcious because of the entire situation.
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** It's horrible for Lincoln, because his [[spoiler:girlfriend]] is beating the crap out of him, he doesn't know why, [[KidsAreCruel his supposed "friends"]] (though luckily not Clyde)are mocking him while this is happening, and the poor boy actually ends up in tears andunconcious unconscious because of the entire situation.
** It's horrible for Lincoln, because his [[spoiler:girlfriend]] is beating the crap out of him, he doesn't know why, [[KidsAreCruel his supposed "friends"]] (though luckily not Clyde)are mocking him while this is happening, and the poor boy actually ends up in tears and
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* [[spoiler: The punshiment Cristina has for Ronnie Anne. She's trapped in VR where she meets Lincoln again, but he doesn't love, and is taken away by someone else. And it's on repeat for a week. Basically, Ronnie is forced to see the love of her life not loving her back, and get taken away by someone else, for an entire week. Poor Ronnie...]]
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* Although most of the gifts delivered by [[spoiler: Cristina]] are harmless, what does Lana get? A jack-in-the-box [[with a demonic Lynn]]. It's specially cruel seeing as Lana was just starting to readjust after [[spoiler: being molested]].
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'''Chapter 19'''
* Lana and Lola's falling out. Lola puts Lana in a bubble in order to keep her safe, but after it goes awry, Lana becomes pissed and makes her help her fix the broken staircase.
* Lynn has apparently been affected so badly by [[spoiler: the fact she molested Lana]] that she cries alone in her room when Lori comes in.
** Even worse, she asks Lori to leave while stating how she only hurts those that she love
* This chapter gives some backstory to Ronnie Anne: After some sort of traumatic experience, [[spoiler: she [[IGaveMyWord promised]] to Cristina she would help her get revenge on the people who hurt them]]. As said above and shown everywhere else, she's not happy about that decision.
'''Chapter 21'''
* Although most of the gifts delivered by [[spoiler: Cristina]] are harmless, what does Lana get? A jack-in-the-box [[with a demonic Lynn]]. It's specially cruel seeing as Lana was just starting to readjust after [[spoiler: being molested]].
* After just making her promise not to hurt Lincoln, Clyde and Ronnie's trust is betrayed by [[spoiler: Cristina]] when she viciously attacks Lincoln.
** Lincoln's side of the story isn't any better: He fails to get information, then does something stupid that almost costs him his life at the hands of [[spoiler: Cristina]], all because he wanted to try and make some progress.
'''Chapter 22'''
* Ronnie has been ''severely'' affected by [[spoiler: Cristina attacking Lincoln]]. When she goes back home, she snaps at her brother, and cries how Lincoln basically just pissed off [[spoiler: Cristina]] and how that means he's basically screwed.
* Leni giving her sisters some ''brutal'' [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "why you suck" speeches]] is this, given that this is the first step to Leni slowly being corrupted from the sweet innocent girl to a jerk.
'''Chapter 23'''
* Ronnie's still upset over the whole "[[spoiler: Lincoln kissed Cristina]]" deal, as she gives Lincoln the cold shoulder treatment.
* Ronnie and Lana share some time together at Dairyland. While this is mostly sweet, it does open up two particularly sad moments:
** Lana misses Lynn. She tells Ronnie of how she played a soccer game with Lynn in a field filled with mud, from which they wound up covered in mud by the end of it, and how she got to attack Lynn with as much mud as possible.
** Ronnie is basically being guilt-tripped with Lana's explanation, specially because not only does she know bad the mud lover feels, but because she's basically-if only partially-responsible for the duo falling out.
* After Ronnie and Lana finish their time together, Lola and Ronnie go next. They don't even get to talk that much: Lola simply dismisses Ronnie when the tomboy tries to give her advice on how to help Lana get better.
'''Chapter 24'''
* Ronnie snaps at Lincoln while they go on the tunnel of love, where she asks him if he remembers their first date, how she [[spoiler: knows of Cristina's plan]] and how she's worried about what will happen to him. This ends with Lincoln confessing his love with Ronnie and them leaving the tunnel of love kissing.
* Lori's end state from her torture: she's battered, is crying blood, and just looks completely traumatized.
'''Chapter 25'''
* Lucy's situation at the beginning: She's regressing back to the Yandere she was earlier in the fic, and can't do anything about it.
** Her heartbreak isn't any better: She essentially screw herself up by driving Virtual!Lincoln uncomfortable with her clingyness, and then earns a sad speech that sends her back to reality.
* Lucy saying she feels "hurt and broken... but myself" after Lynn asks her how she's feeling. Given what she just went through, her answer is understandable, and Lucy would likely say that any other day, but the circumstances behind her answer make it sad.
'''Chapter 26'''
* After readjusting from the whole early fiasco, [[spoiler: the Loud sisters wind up being brainwashed again]]. And it's all [[spoiler: Leni]]'s fault.
** Furthermore, this means [[spoiler: Lynn's promise to play with Ronnie Anne]] now won't ever be fulfilled.
* Lincoln is just as worried for his and Ronnie Anne's relationship as the tomboy did two chapters ago, and it ends with the duo hugging and reassuring each other that things won't go bad.
'''Chapter 27'''
* Mrs. Johnson has tried three times to [[spoiler: figure out Cristina's plans]], all while discovering what sort of lengths [[spoiler: her own daughter]] is willing to go through. That has to hurt.
** A surprising bit of backstory makes it even worse: [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson explaioned to Cristina what shipping was]]. In order, she probably feels partially responsible for [[spoiler: Cristina]]'s fall from grace.
* Lana and Lola's falling out. Lola puts Lana in a bubble in order to keep her safe, but after it goes awry, Lana becomes pissed and makes her help her fix the broken staircase.
* Lynn has apparently been affected so badly by [[spoiler: the fact she molested Lana]] that she cries alone in her room when Lori comes in.
** Even worse, she asks Lori to leave while stating how she only hurts those that she love
* This chapter gives some backstory to Ronnie Anne: After some sort of traumatic experience, [[spoiler: she [[IGaveMyWord promised]] to Cristina she would help her get revenge on the people who hurt them]]. As said above and shown everywhere else, she's not happy about that decision.
'''Chapter 21'''
* Although most of the gifts delivered by [[spoiler: Cristina]] are harmless, what does Lana get? A jack-in-the-box [[with a demonic Lynn]]. It's specially cruel seeing as Lana was just starting to readjust after [[spoiler: being molested]].
* After just making her promise not to hurt Lincoln, Clyde and Ronnie's trust is betrayed by [[spoiler: Cristina]] when she viciously attacks Lincoln.
** Lincoln's side of the story isn't any better: He fails to get information, then does something stupid that almost costs him his life at the hands of [[spoiler: Cristina]], all because he wanted to try and make some progress.
'''Chapter 22'''
* Ronnie has been ''severely'' affected by [[spoiler: Cristina attacking Lincoln]]. When she goes back home, she snaps at her brother, and cries how Lincoln basically just pissed off [[spoiler: Cristina]] and how that means he's basically screwed.
* Leni giving her sisters some ''brutal'' [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech "why you suck" speeches]] is this, given that this is the first step to Leni slowly being corrupted from the sweet innocent girl to a jerk.
'''Chapter 23'''
* Ronnie's still upset over the whole "[[spoiler: Lincoln kissed Cristina]]" deal, as she gives Lincoln the cold shoulder treatment.
* Ronnie and Lana share some time together at Dairyland. While this is mostly sweet, it does open up two particularly sad moments:
** Lana misses Lynn. She tells Ronnie of how she played a soccer game with Lynn in a field filled with mud, from which they wound up covered in mud by the end of it, and how she got to attack Lynn with as much mud as possible.
** Ronnie is basically being guilt-tripped with Lana's explanation, specially because not only does she know bad the mud lover feels, but because she's basically-if only partially-responsible for the duo falling out.
* After Ronnie and Lana finish their time together, Lola and Ronnie go next. They don't even get to talk that much: Lola simply dismisses Ronnie when the tomboy tries to give her advice on how to help Lana get better.
'''Chapter 24'''
* Ronnie snaps at Lincoln while they go on the tunnel of love, where she asks him if he remembers their first date, how she [[spoiler: knows of Cristina's plan]] and how she's worried about what will happen to him. This ends with Lincoln confessing his love with Ronnie and them leaving the tunnel of love kissing.
* Lori's end state from her torture: she's battered, is crying blood, and just looks completely traumatized.
'''Chapter 25'''
* Lucy's situation at the beginning: She's regressing back to the Yandere she was earlier in the fic, and can't do anything about it.
** Her heartbreak isn't any better: She essentially screw herself up by driving Virtual!Lincoln uncomfortable with her clingyness, and then earns a sad speech that sends her back to reality.
* Lucy saying she feels "hurt and broken... but myself" after Lynn asks her how she's feeling. Given what she just went through, her answer is understandable, and Lucy would likely say that any other day, but the circumstances behind her answer make it sad.
'''Chapter 26'''
* After readjusting from the whole early fiasco, [[spoiler: the Loud sisters wind up being brainwashed again]]. And it's all [[spoiler: Leni]]'s fault.
** Furthermore, this means [[spoiler: Lynn's promise to play with Ronnie Anne]] now won't ever be fulfilled.
* Lincoln is just as worried for his and Ronnie Anne's relationship as the tomboy did two chapters ago, and it ends with the duo hugging and reassuring each other that things won't go bad.
'''Chapter 27'''
* Mrs. Johnson has tried three times to [[spoiler: figure out Cristina's plans]], all while discovering what sort of lengths [[spoiler: her own daughter]] is willing to go through. That has to hurt.
** A surprising bit of backstory makes it even worse: [[spoiler: Mrs. Johnson explaioned to Cristina what shipping was]]. In order, she probably feels partially responsible for [[spoiler: Cristina]]'s fall from grace.
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* Lincoln [[spoiler: [[ItsAllMyFault blames himself for bringing the machines that caused this whole mess in the first place]]]].
** Lisa soon follows up by saying that she's just as guilty because [[spoiler: she didn't tell them anything about the chips or who made them either]].
* Lana reveals just how much [[spoiler: her molestation at the hands of Lynn]] took a toll on her: she blames herself because she didn't defend herself against [[spoiler: Lynn]], despite the fact that she couldn't do anything about it at the moment. And when Lola tries to comfort her, she lashes out at her.
'''Chapter 13'''
* When Leni is left alone, she reveals to the voice how she feels like she's nothing more than a moron, specially compared to her sisters: Luan's a comedian, Lynn's an athlete, but herself? Leni believes she'll forever be seen as the dumb sister.
** What's worse: When Lori comforts her soon afterwards and says how she'll make sure nothing bad happens to her, her thoughts imply ''she knew Lori was lying''.
* The whole Lynn-Lucy-Lincoln love triangle gives Lucy inspiration to write a poem. While this doesn't sound bad, she soon adds that the inspiration is not only great, but ''traumatizing''.
* Leni doesn't have a good time in this chapter: Outside of her StartOfDarkness happening here, she's ignored by Lisa, Lori essentially ruins her chance to get a first kiss with her, and while also kinda creepy, her outburst when Lisa essentially betrays her trust after they play but she refuses to listen to her despite promising to do so earlier, is pretty sad.
* Lynn seeing a battered Lana ([[spoiler: actually Carol Pingrey shapeshifted as her]]), while also creepy, is pretty sad: she barely got out of her mind-controlled state, and now she's seeing stuff reminding her about it.
** Later, she hides when Lana and Lola meet Lincoln and Lucy. The idea that Lynn, who's usually willing to face any challenge and is pretty agressive, is reduced to hiding for her dear life is pretty hard to watch.
* Lori has second thoughts regarding [[spoiler: breaking up Luna and Luan]] after seeing [[spoiler: the picture she took of them]].
* Luna revealing Luan how nobody thinks she's funny and explaining to her why everybody laughs at her and not with her, while also providing explanations for why they laughed. For someone like [[ThePrankster Luan]], that has to be harsh.
'''Chapter 14'''
* Leni's behavior during her and Lori's mission, when you think about it: She's obviously upset her sister-her designated ''lover''-is paying attention to another couple instead of her.
** This culminates in her snapping at Lori just before she goes into the restaurant, and Lori stays behind at Leni's request.
* When Lucy, Lincoln and Lynn return to their resort room, Lisa is waiting for Lincoln to return. It doesn't seem like much, but seeing how much Lisa likes her brother...
* Lucy snaps at Lynn asking her what they can do about their issues: Lucy can't do anything if she just writes poems about it, and Lynn essentially fails to give her an answer, and instead leaves her alone.
* Luna and Luan's date take a turn for the worse when [[spoiler: Storge, shapeshifted as Luna]], takes her place. They were having such a good time, and then [[spoiler: Storge]] comes up and messes it all up!
* [[spoiler: Lori becoming the new Storge]] has shades of this. She's essentially ''forced'' into the position without being asked about her opinion on the matter, and she then has to watch Luna beat up [[spoiler: Storge while she's shapeshifted as herself]].
'''Chapter 17'''
* Lola forcing Lana to play in the mud, despite the fact that she's not in the mood, becomes this when you realize that while trying to help her sister, all Lola did was further scare Lana by forcing her to do something she didn't want to do.
** Lana being hesitant to play is in itself rather sad, because seeing as how her getting dirty and playing in the mud is something she generally likes to do, the fact that [[spoiler: being molested by Lynn]] caused her to swore it off means a lot.
* Lincoln [[spoiler: [[ItsAllMyFault blames himself for bringing the machines that caused this whole mess in the first place]]]].
** Lisa soon follows up by saying that she's just as guilty because [[spoiler: she didn't tell them anything about the chips or who made them either]].
* Lana reveals just how much [[spoiler: her molestation at the hands of Lynn]] took a toll on her: she blames herself because she didn't defend herself against [[spoiler: Lynn]], despite the fact that she couldn't do anything about it at the moment. And when Lola tries to comfort her, she lashes out at her.
'''Chapter 13'''
* When Leni is left alone, she reveals to the voice how she feels like she's nothing more than a moron, specially compared to her sisters: Luan's a comedian, Lynn's an athlete, but herself? Leni believes she'll forever be seen as the dumb sister.
** What's worse: When Lori comforts her soon afterwards and says how she'll make sure nothing bad happens to her, her thoughts imply ''she knew Lori was lying''.
* The whole Lynn-Lucy-Lincoln love triangle gives Lucy inspiration to write a poem. While this doesn't sound bad, she soon adds that the inspiration is not only great, but ''traumatizing''.
* Leni doesn't have a good time in this chapter: Outside of her StartOfDarkness happening here, she's ignored by Lisa, Lori essentially ruins her chance to get a first kiss with her, and while also kinda creepy, her outburst when Lisa essentially betrays her trust after they play but she refuses to listen to her despite promising to do so earlier, is pretty sad.
* Lynn seeing a battered Lana ([[spoiler: actually Carol Pingrey shapeshifted as her]]), while also creepy, is pretty sad: she barely got out of her mind-controlled state, and now she's seeing stuff reminding her about it.
** Later, she hides when Lana and Lola meet Lincoln and Lucy. The idea that Lynn, who's usually willing to face any challenge and is pretty agressive, is reduced to hiding for her dear life is pretty hard to watch.
* Lori has second thoughts regarding [[spoiler: breaking up Luna and Luan]] after seeing [[spoiler: the picture she took of them]].
* Luna revealing Luan how nobody thinks she's funny and explaining to her why everybody laughs at her and not with her, while also providing explanations for why they laughed. For someone like [[ThePrankster Luan]], that has to be harsh.
'''Chapter 14'''
* Leni's behavior during her and Lori's mission, when you think about it: She's obviously upset her sister-her designated ''lover''-is paying attention to another couple instead of her.
** This culminates in her snapping at Lori just before she goes into the restaurant, and Lori stays behind at Leni's request.
* When Lucy, Lincoln and Lynn return to their resort room, Lisa is waiting for Lincoln to return. It doesn't seem like much, but seeing how much Lisa likes her brother...
* Lucy snaps at Lynn asking her what they can do about their issues: Lucy can't do anything if she just writes poems about it, and Lynn essentially fails to give her an answer, and instead leaves her alone.
* Luna and Luan's date take a turn for the worse when [[spoiler: Storge, shapeshifted as Luna]], takes her place. They were having such a good time, and then [[spoiler: Storge]] comes up and messes it all up!
* [[spoiler: Lori becoming the new Storge]] has shades of this. She's essentially ''forced'' into the position without being asked about her opinion on the matter, and she then has to watch Luna beat up [[spoiler: Storge while she's shapeshifted as herself]].
'''Chapter 17'''
* Lola forcing Lana to play in the mud, despite the fact that she's not in the mood, becomes this when you realize that while trying to help her sister, all Lola did was further scare Lana by forcing her to do something she didn't want to do.
** Lana being hesitant to play is in itself rather sad, because seeing as how her getting dirty and playing in the mud is something she generally likes to do, the fact that [[spoiler: being molested by Lynn]] caused her to swore it off means a lot.
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** It isn't just restricted to the Loud Sisters. If you're a fan of Ronnie Anne, seeing all the stuff that happends to her in later chapters like Chapter 29, Chapter 33, and Chapter 38. (See below for more detail on specefic events on her)
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* At first, [[spoiler: Lana being molested by Lynn]] is purely nightmare fuel, and maybe even some squick. But then 19 chapters later, we discover that Lana admires [[spoiler: Lynn]] to an extent, so not only did she get molested, but she was molested by [[spoiler: someone she honestly admire]]. That's pretty sad.
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* At first, [[spoiler: Lana being molested by Lynn]] is purely nightmare fuel, NightmareFuel, and maybe even some squick. But then 19 chapters later, we discover that Lana admires [[spoiler: Lynn]] to an extent, so not only did she get molested, but she was molested by [[spoiler: someone she honestly admire]]. That's pretty sad.
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** The part is a specially massive kick in the gut to [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], who after having done who knows what just to protect Lincoln, [[spoiler: [[MyGreatestFailure she winds up watching him get stabbed, essentially failing to do the only reason she joined with Cristina's plan]]]]. [[spoiler: And right after that, she also gets horrible insults and threats from Cristina when she decides to tell Lincoln the entire plan.]]
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** The part is a specially massive kick in the gut to [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], who after having done who knows what just to protect Lincoln, [[spoiler: [[MyGreatestFailure she winds up watching him get stabbed, essentially failing to do the only reason she joined with Cristina's plan]]]]. [[spoiler: And right after that, she also gets horrible insults and threats from Cristina when she decides to tell Lincoln the entire plan.]]
'''Chapter 37'''
* [[spoiler: The punshiment Cristina has for Ronnie Anne. She's trapped in VR where she meets Lincoln again, but he doesn't love, and is taken away by someone else. And it's on repeat for a week. Basically, Ronnie is forced to see the love of her life not loving her back, and get taken away by someone else, for an entire week. Poor Ronnie...]]
'''Chapter 37'''
* [[spoiler: The punshiment Cristina has for Ronnie Anne. She's trapped in VR where she meets Lincoln again, but he doesn't love, and is taken away by someone else. And it's on repeat for a week. Basically, Ronnie is forced to see the love of her life not loving her back, and get taken away by someone else, for an entire week. Poor Ronnie...]]
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** Furthermore, by the time she does call it off and [[spoiler: betrays Ronnie Anne]]? It's too late. [[spoiler: Not only have most of the sisters been hurt by the events, not only has she basically allowed all of that to happen while failing to recognize Cristina for the threat she is right from the start, but she basically fails to protect Lincoln, and he winds up being stabbed and taken to the hospital by protecting her]]. [[TheWoobie Poor girl just can't catch a break]].
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** Furthermore, by the time she does call it off and [[spoiler: betrays Ronnie Anne]]? Cristina]]? It's too late. [[spoiler: Not only have most of the sisters been hurt by the events, not only has she basically allowed all of that to happen while failing to recognize Cristina for the threat she is right from the start, but she basically fails to protect Lincoln, and he winds up being stabbed and taken to the hospital by protecting her]]. [[TheWoobie Poor girl just can't catch a break]].
** Some of The Four Lovers' predicaments also count as this. [[spoiler: Bobby only joined to keep Ronnie Anne safe, Carol is as much of a victim as everybody else, and Ronnie... well, you know]], and worst of all, they're stuck working with someone like [[spoiler: Cristina]].
** Some of The Four Lovers' predicaments also count as this. [[spoiler: Bobby only joined to keep Ronnie Anne safe, Carol is as much of a victim as everybody else, and Ronnie... well, you know]], and worst of all, they're stuck working with someone like [[spoiler: Cristina]].
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* Ronnie Anne's predicament. [[IGaveMyWord She promised]] [[spoiler: Cristina]] [[IGaveMyWord that she would help her with her plan]], and her [[HonorBeforeReason family pride]] prevents her from calling it quits. Because of it, she not only [[spoiler: helps Cristina basically make the Louds' life a living hell]], but she's at the very least responsible for [[spoiler: at least hurting one of their relationships]]. [[{{Deconstruction}} She really should've thought about it more]].
** Furthermore, by the time she does call it off and [[spoiler: betrays Ronnie Anne]]? It's too late. [[spoiler: Not only have most of the sisters been hurt by the events, not only has she basically allowed all of that to happen while failing to recognize Cristina for the threat she is right from the start, but she basically fails to protect Lincoln, and he winds up being stabbed and taken to the hospital by protecting her]]. [[TheWoobie Poor girl just can't catch a break]].
** Furthermore, by the time she does call it off and [[spoiler: betrays Ronnie Anne]]? It's too late. [[spoiler: Not only have most of the sisters been hurt by the events, not only has she basically allowed all of that to happen while failing to recognize Cristina for the threat she is right from the start, but she basically fails to protect Lincoln, and he winds up being stabbed and taken to the hospital by protecting her]]. [[TheWoobie Poor girl just can't catch a break]].
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* At first, [[spoiler: Lana being molested by Lynn]] is purely nightmare fuel, and maybe even some squick. But then 19 chapters later, we discover that Lana admires [[spoiler: Lynn]] to an extent, so not only did she get molested, but she was molested by [[spoiler: someone she honestly admire]]. That's pretty sad.
* At first, [[spoiler: Lana being molested by Lynn]] is purely nightmare fuel, and maybe even some squick. But then 19 chapters later, we discover that Lana admires [[spoiler: Lynn]] to an extent, so not only did she get molested, but she was molested by [[spoiler: someone she honestly admire]]. That's pretty sad.
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** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made dedecaded to all her instruments, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happened? No? Well now you know.]]
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** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made dedecaded dedicated to all her instruments, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happened? No? Well now you know.]]
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** [[spoiler: Lori, who has to tell Virtual!Leni that her vasion sense suck. This causes Virtual Leni run awat crying.]]
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** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made decorated dedecaded to all her instruments, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happened? No? Well now you know.]]
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* [[spoiler: The way to reverse the effects of helmets. You need to get heartbroken, and the only way to is by treating the person picked horribly untill they hate you. Picture that feeling you have after doing it, and you have how most of The Loud kids (Sans Lincoln, Lisa, Lily, and Lucy (Untill later that is) for not having to do it, and Leni who liked doing it) feel after being forced to do that to the respective virtual versions of their siblings. The most heartbreaking examples are:]]
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** [[spoiler: Lynn, who had the pleasure of having to destroy a poem made by Virtual!Lucy, who is horrified by what's happening. What's worse, is that while never confirmend, it can be quessed that the poem was meant for her. That makes it downright heartbreaking.]]
** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made decaded to all her instruemtns, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happend? No. Well now you know]]
** [[spoiler: The worst of them though, is by far Luna, who has to tell Virtual!Luan that her comedy sucks, nobody is laughing with her but AT her, that Mr. Cocunuts is creepy (Wich is followed by the puppet falling in a wood shredder) and that not even her family likes her jokes. Virtual!Luan is left completley broken by the end of the rant, and even Luna is crying after it all. And it all started with Virtual!Luan just wanting to make Luna laugh...]]
** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made decaded to all her instruemtns, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happend? No. Well now you know]]
** [[spoiler: The worst of them though, is by far Luna, who has to tell Virtual!Luan that her comedy sucks, nobody is laughing with her but AT her, that Mr. Cocunuts is creepy (Wich is followed by the puppet falling in a wood shredder) and that not even her family likes her jokes. Virtual!Luan is left completley broken by the end of the rant, and even Luna is crying after it all. And it all started with Virtual!Luan just wanting to make Luna laugh...]]
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** [[spoiler: Lynn, who had the pleasure of having to destroy a poem made by Virtual!Lucy, who is horrified by what's happening. What's worse, is that while it's never confirmend, it can be quessed that the poem was meant for her. That makes it downright heartbreaking.Talk about a kick in the gut.]]
** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna madedecaded decorated to all her instruemtns, instruments, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happend? No. happened? No? Well now you know]]
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** [[spoiler: The worst of them though, is by far Luna, who has to tell Virtual!Luan that her comedy sucks, nobody is laughing with her but AT her, that Mr. Cocunuts is creepy (Wich is followed by the puppet falling in a wood shredder) and that not even her family likes her jokes. Virtual!Luan is leftcompletley completely broken by the end of the rant, and even Luna is crying after it all. And it all started with Virtual!Luan just wanting to make Luna laugh...]]
** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made
** [[spoiler: The worst of them though, is by far Luna, who has to tell Virtual!Luan that her comedy sucks, nobody is laughing with her but AT her, that Mr. Cocunuts is creepy (Wich is followed by the puppet falling in a wood shredder) and that not even her family likes her jokes. Virtual!Luan is left
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* [[spoiler: The way to reverse the effects of helmets. You need to get heartbroken, and the only way to is by treating the person picked horribly.horribly untill they hate you. Picture that feeling you have after doing it, and you have how most of The Loud kids (Sans Lincoln, Lisa, Lily, and Lucy (Untill later that is) for not having to do it, and Leni who liked doing it) feel after being forced to do that to the respective virtual versions of their siblings. The most heartbreaking examples are:]]
** [[spoiler: Lori, who has to tell Virtual!Leni that her vasion sense suck. This causes Virtual Leni run awat crying.]]
** [[spoiler: Lynn, who had the pleasure of having to destroy a poem made by Virtual!Lucy, who is horrified by what's happening. What's worse, is that while never confirmend, it can be quessed that the poem was meant for her. That makes it downright heartbreaking.]]
** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made decaded to all her instruemtns, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happend? No. Well now you know]]
** [[spoiler: The worst of them though, is by far Luna, who has to tell Virtual!Luan that her comedy sucks, nobody is laughing with her but AT her, that Mr. Cocunuts is creepy (Wich is followed by the puppet falling in a wood shredder) and that not even her family likes her jokes. Virtual!Luan is left completley broken by the end of the rant, and even Luna is crying after it all. And it all started with Virtual!Luan just wanting to make Luna laugh...]]
** [[spoiler: Lori, who has to tell Virtual!Leni that her vasion sense suck. This causes Virtual Leni run awat crying.]]
** [[spoiler: Lynn, who had the pleasure of having to destroy a poem made by Virtual!Lucy, who is horrified by what's happening. What's worse, is that while never confirmend, it can be quessed that the poem was meant for her. That makes it downright heartbreaking.]]
** [[spoiler: Luan, who had to destroy a museum Virtual!Luna made decaded to all her instruemtns, with the excuse she didn't want to make music with her. Virtual!Luna responds by punching Luan with a guitar (at the same spot she was already hit by with a guitar by the real Luna) and screaming that that didn't give her the right to destroy her museum. Oh, and did I say that Virtual!Luna confessed her love to Luan before all of that happend? No. Well now you know]]
** [[spoiler: The worst of them though, is by far Luna, who has to tell Virtual!Luan that her comedy sucks, nobody is laughing with her but AT her, that Mr. Cocunuts is creepy (Wich is followed by the puppet falling in a wood shredder) and that not even her family likes her jokes. Virtual!Luan is left completley broken by the end of the rant, and even Luna is crying after it all. And it all started with Virtual!Luan just wanting to make Luna laugh...]]
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* [[spoiler: The way to reverse the effects of helmets. You need to get heartbroken, and the only way to is by treating the person picked horribly. Picture that feeling you have after doing it, and you have how most of The Loud kids feel after being forced to do that to the respective virtual versions of their siblings.]]
* [[spoiler: The way to reverse the effects of helmets. You need to get heartbroken, and the only way to is by treating the person picked horribly. Picture that feeling you have after doing it, and you have how most of The Loud kids feel after being forced to do that to the respective virtual versions of their siblings.]]
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** The part is a specially massive kick in the gut to [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], who after having done who knows what just to protect Lincoln, [[spoiler: [[MyGreatestFailure she winds up watching him get stabbed, essentially failing to do the only reason she joined with Cristina's plan]]]].
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** The part is a specially massive kick in the gut to [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], who after having done who knows what just to protect Lincoln, [[spoiler: [[MyGreatestFailure she winds up watching him get stabbed, essentially failing to do the only reason she joined with Cristina's plan]]]]. [[spoiler: And right after that, she also gets horrible insults and threats from Cristina when she decides to tell Lincoln the entire plan.]]
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** While not as big compared all of the above examples, if you're a fan of Lori, it'll be hard to see her go from the alpha sister to Leni's bitch.
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** It will specially hurt if you're a Leni fan, seeing how her character changes so wildly from the beginning that you'll begin to wonder what happened to her. It's just really hard to watch Leni act worse then Leni and Lola ever did, especailly with her nomrally being the kindest of the Loud kids. Esepcailly if you're a Leni fan.
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. If you are [[BlatantLies then you'll certaintly enjoy seeing her get smacked by a guiter twice, or any of the other stuff that happends.]] Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
** [[FromBadToWorse Want something even worse?]] Lana fans get to enjoy her being molested by Lynn pretty early on
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. If you are [[BlatantLies then you'll certaintly enjoy seeing her get smacked by a guiter twice, or any of the other stuff that happends.]] Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
** [[FromBadToWorse Want something even worse?]] Lana fans get to enjoy her being molested by Lynn pretty early on
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** It will specially hurt if you're a Leni fan, seeing how her character changes so wildly from the beginning that you'll begin to wonder what happened to her. It's just really hard to watch Leni act worse then Leni and Lola ever did, especailly especially with her nomrally normally being the kindest of the Loud kids. Esepcailly if you're a Leni fan.
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** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. If you are [[BlatantLies then you'll certaintly enjoy seeing her get smacked by a guiter twice, or any of the other stuff that happends.]] Seriously, you'll almost start to feelwhat she's feeling...
just as hurt as she herself is...
** [[FromBadToWorse Want something even worse?]] Lana fans get to enjoy her being molested by Lynn pretty earlyon
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** But don't worry, [[FalseReassurance you don't have to feel out if you're a Lynn fan]]! You not only get to see her [[RealityEnsues feel horrible for what she did]], but also be shamed and threatened for it by Lola.
** Believe it or not, even Lola fans get something, thanks to [[spoiler: whatever Cristina did to her]].
** And if you like Lisa, you'll get to see her [[spoiler: being horrified at having stabbed Lincoln so badly, he's sent to the hospital]].
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. If you are [[BlatantLies then you'll certaintly enjoy seeing her get smacked by a guiter twice, or any of the other stuff that happends.]] Seriously, you'll almost start to feel
** [[FromBadToWorse Want something even worse?]] Lana fans get to enjoy her being molested by Lynn pretty early
** But don't worry, [[FalseReassurance you don't have to feel out if you're a Lynn fan]]! You not only get to see her [[RealityEnsues feel horrible for what she did]], but also be shamed and threatened for it by Lola.
** Believe it or not, even Lola fans get something, thanks to [[spoiler: whatever Cristina did to her]].
** And if you like Lisa, you'll get to see her [[spoiler: being horrified at having stabbed Lincoln so badly, he's sent to the hospital]].
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** [[spoiler: [[EvenEvilHasStandards Crstina even hates this is happening.]]]] [[spoiler: She's]] only doing this because she thinks it's nessecary for her plans, and doesn't enjoy it anymore then [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]] and Lincoln. She even decides to bring Lincoln to the nurse when it's over, and gives [[spoiler: Ronnie]] permission to beat the kids up once it's all done.
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** [[spoiler: [[EvenEvilHasStandards Crstina even hates this is happening.]]]] [[spoiler: She's]] only doing this because she thinks it's nessecary for her plans, and doesn't enjoy it anymore then [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]] and Lincoln. She even decides to bring Lincoln to the nurse when it's over, and gives [[spoiler: Ronnie]] permission to beat the kids up once it's all done.done.
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* [[spoiler: Lincoln being stabbed Lisa]]. To be more specific:
** [[spoiler: Lincoln]]'s been forced to [[spoiler: date and nearly marry Ronnie Anne]] out of his will, and then out of nowhere come out [[spoiler: some of his mind-controlled sisters]] who proceed to attack her. They manage to dodge them until [[spoiler: Lisa]] comes into play, and Lincoln [[spoiler: [[TakingTheBullet takes the stabbing for Ronnie Anne]]]], which ends with him being sent to the hospital.
** [[spoiler: Lisa]] is basically ''stabbing [[spoiler: her own brother]]'', who she not only had to time to come to know and care about, but also grew affectionate with him. And she just stabbed him. It becomes very telling in the next hospital scene, since all she can say before leaving him is "I'm sorry".
** The part is a specially massive kick in the gut to [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], who after having done who knows what just to protect Lincoln, [[spoiler: [[MyGreatestFailure she winds up watching him get stabbed, essentially failing to do the only reason she joined with Cristina's plan]]]].
'''Chapter 33'''
* [[spoiler: Lincoln being stabbed Lisa]]. To be more specific:
** [[spoiler: Lincoln]]'s been forced to [[spoiler: date and nearly marry Ronnie Anne]] out of his will, and then out of nowhere come out [[spoiler: some of his mind-controlled sisters]] who proceed to attack her. They manage to dodge them until [[spoiler: Lisa]] comes into play, and Lincoln [[spoiler: [[TakingTheBullet takes the stabbing for Ronnie Anne]]]], which ends with him being sent to the hospital.
** [[spoiler: Lisa]] is basically ''stabbing [[spoiler: her own brother]]'', who she not only had to time to come to know and care about, but also grew affectionate with him. And she just stabbed him. It becomes very telling in the next hospital scene, since all she can say before leaving him is "I'm sorry".
** The part is a specially massive kick in the gut to [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]], who after having done who knows what just to protect Lincoln, [[spoiler: [[MyGreatestFailure she winds up watching him get stabbed, essentially failing to do the only reason she joined with Cristina's plan]]]].
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** It will specially hurt if you're a Leni fan, seeing how her character changes so wildly from the beginning that you'll begin to wonder what happened to her.
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
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her. It's just really hard to watch Leni act worse then Leni and Lola ever did, especailly with her nomrally being the kindest of the Loud kids. Esepcailly if you're a Leni fan.
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. If you are [[BlatantLies then you'll certaintly enjoy seeing her get smacked by a guiter twice, or any of the other stuff that happends.]] Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. If you are [[BlatantLies then you'll certaintly enjoy seeing her get smacked by a guiter twice, or any of the other stuff that happends.]] Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
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Again, just because this is a fanfic based on [[WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse The Loud House]] doesn't mean it won't have sad moments.
!! In General
* If you're a fan of a particular Loud sister, watching them suffer so much crap from [[spoiler: Cristina]] is a pretty sad thought.
** It will specially hurt if you're a Leni fan, seeing how her character changes so wildly from the beginning that you'll begin to wonder what happened to her.
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
!! The Story
'''Chapter 29'''
* [[spoiler: Ronnie being forced to beat up Lincoln thanks to mind control to show Lincoln how horrible his "friends" are.]] The moment is absolutley horrible for both of them:
** It's horrible for Lincoln, because his [[spoiler:girlfriend]] is beating the crap out of him, he doesn't know why, [[KidsAreCruel his supposed "friends"]] (though luckily not Clyde)are mocking him while this is happening, and the poor boy actually ends up in tears and unconcious because of the entire situation.
** [[spoiler:Ronnie Anne herself]] doesn't get it much better either. She's forced to do this thanks to [[spoiler: Cristina mind controlling her, and she's aware of what she's doing the entire time.]] [[spoiler: There's even a moment where she tries to stop herself, but the mind control proves to strong and she just keeps on going.]] And all the while, [[spoiler: she's]] forced to listem to the mockery Lincoln is getting. No wonder that in the end, [[spoiler: she]] beats up Lincoln's "friends" (sans Clyde) after [[spoiler: Cristina]] asks her to.
** [[spoiler: [[EvenEvilHasStandards Crstina even hates this is happening.]]]] [[spoiler: She's]] only doing this because she thinks it's nessecary for her plans, and doesn't enjoy it anymore then [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]] and Lincoln. She even decides to bring Lincoln to the nurse when it's over, and gives [[spoiler: Ronnie]] permission to beat the kids up once it's all done.
!! In General
* If you're a fan of a particular Loud sister, watching them suffer so much crap from [[spoiler: Cristina]] is a pretty sad thought.
** It will specially hurt if you're a Leni fan, seeing how her character changes so wildly from the beginning that you'll begin to wonder what happened to her.
** And for an even bigger kick in the gut? Be a Luan fan. Seriously, you'll almost start to feel what she's feeling...
!! The Story
'''Chapter 29'''
* [[spoiler: Ronnie being forced to beat up Lincoln thanks to mind control to show Lincoln how horrible his "friends" are.]] The moment is absolutley horrible for both of them:
** It's horrible for Lincoln, because his [[spoiler:girlfriend]] is beating the crap out of him, he doesn't know why, [[KidsAreCruel his supposed "friends"]] (though luckily not Clyde)are mocking him while this is happening, and the poor boy actually ends up in tears and unconcious because of the entire situation.
** [[spoiler:Ronnie Anne herself]] doesn't get it much better either. She's forced to do this thanks to [[spoiler: Cristina mind controlling her, and she's aware of what she's doing the entire time.]] [[spoiler: There's even a moment where she tries to stop herself, but the mind control proves to strong and she just keeps on going.]] And all the while, [[spoiler: she's]] forced to listem to the mockery Lincoln is getting. No wonder that in the end, [[spoiler: she]] beats up Lincoln's "friends" (sans Clyde) after [[spoiler: Cristina]] asks her to.
** [[spoiler: [[EvenEvilHasStandards Crstina even hates this is happening.]]]] [[spoiler: She's]] only doing this because she thinks it's nessecary for her plans, and doesn't enjoy it anymore then [[spoiler: Ronnie Anne]] and Lincoln. She even decides to bring Lincoln to the nurse when it's over, and gives [[spoiler: Ronnie]] permission to beat the kids up once it's all done.
