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!!Chapter Twenty-Three
* How Caynz and Yolko met: Yolko had gone to the graveyard for a funeral, and found Caynz crying in front of his mother's tomb, so she held him and told him he could cry as much as he needed. They were both five years old.
* How Caynz and Yolko met: Yolko had gone to the graveyard for a funeral, and found Caynz crying in front of his mother's tomb, so she held him and told him he could cry as much as he needed. They were both five years old.
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* Kirita forcing herself to become TheScapegoat. She clearly does not deserve it, she knows she is being misblamed - and she takes on that load because, if she doesn't, other beta testers will suffer.
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* Kirita cries over her past mistakes and the accumulated stress that she build up over the events of the game.
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* Akio's flashback which indicated he did not have too many successful friendships either.
* [[spoiler:Diabel's death both in the virtual and real world.]]
* Akio's flashback which indicated he did not have too many successful friendships either.
* [[spoiler:Diabel's death both in the virtual and real world.]]
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* Midori believing many of the things that have gone wrong with her family is her fault.
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[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder:Story Arc One: What Happened Before]]
!!Chapter One
* The death of Kazuta's parents
!!Chapter Two
!!Chapter Three
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Story Arc Two: Welcome to the Death Game]]
!!Chapter Four
!!Chapter Five
!!Chapter Six
!!Chapter Seven
!!Chapter Eight
!!Chapter Nine
* Argo pushing Kirita's buttons about her issues with men. She ends up shouting at him.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Story Arc Three: Rise of the Guilds]]
!!Chapter Ten
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Story Arc One: What Happened Before]]
!!Chapter One
* The death of Kazuta's parents
!!Chapter Two
!!Chapter Three
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Story Arc Two: Welcome to the Death Game]]
!!Chapter Four
!!Chapter Five
!!Chapter Six
!!Chapter Seven
!!Chapter Eight
!!Chapter Nine
* Argo pushing Kirita's buttons about her issues with men. She ends up shouting at him.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Story Arc Three: Rise of the Guilds]]
!!Chapter Ten
[[/folder]]
