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* Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.
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* Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] ill and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.
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* Several of the scenes where Maia wrestles with his (justified) resentment of Setheris.
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* Several of the scenes where Maia wrestles with his (justified) resentment of Setheris.Setheris and how harsh it was for him growing up with that kind of anger and resentment around him.
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** Made retroactively ''worse'' in [[Literature/TheCemeteriesOfAmalo The Grief of Stones]]'' when we find out that Celehar was [[DrivenToSuicide suicidal]], and it was only Maia giving him a job/purpose that helped him move forward.
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** Made retroactively ''worse'' in [[Literature/TheCemeteriesOfAmalo ''[[Literature/TheCemeteriesOfAmalo The Grief of Stones]]'' when we find out that Celehar was [[DrivenToSuicide suicidal]], and it was only Maia giving him a job/purpose that helped him move forward.
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** Made retroactively ''worse'' in [[TheCemeteriesOfAmalo The Grief of Stones]]'' when we find out that Celehar was [[DrivenToSuicide suicidal]], and it was only Maia giving him a job/purpose that helped him move forward.
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** Made retroactively ''worse'' in [[TheCemeteriesOfAmalo [[Literature/TheCemeteriesOfAmalo The Grief of Stones]]'' when we find out that Celehar was [[DrivenToSuicide suicidal]], and it was only Maia giving him a job/purpose that helped him move forward.
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** Made retroactively ''worse'' in [[TheCemeteriesOfAmalo The Grief of Stones]]'' when we find out that Celehar was [[DrivenToSuicide suicidal]], and it was only Maia giving him a job/purpose that helped him move forward.
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* Chelehar's backstory, of being forced to condemn the man he loved.
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* Chelehar's Celehar's backstory, of being forced to condemn the man he loved.
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* Chelehar's backstory, of being forced to condemn the man he loved.
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* It’s equally tearjerking and heartwarming, but Maia’s 19th birthday has him inundated with gifts, both obliged from courtiers and heartfelt from people he’s aided - and he simply doesn’t understand that there is no ulterior motive to any of them beyond wishing him a happy birthday.
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* It’s equally tearjerking and heartwarming, but Maia’s 19th birthday has him inundated with gifts, both obliged from courtiers and heartfelt from people he’s aided - and he simply doesn’t understand that there is no ulterior motive to any of them beyond wishing him a happy birthday.birthday.
* While Chavar's comeuppance is richly satisfying, his SpoiledSweet son Nurevis getting caught in the crossfire isn't, with Maia sadly observing that he's being left impoverished and that [[FairWeatherFriend all of his friends have turned their back on him due to the scandal attached to his father]].
* The general situation of Stano, the fiancee of one of Maia's brothers, who is caught in a state of political limbo due to her legal status following her betrothal to the dead archduke and gets dragged into a failed conspiracy.
* Several of the scenes where Maia wrestles with his (justified) resentment of Setheris.
* While Chavar's comeuppance is richly satisfying, his SpoiledSweet son Nurevis getting caught in the crossfire isn't, with Maia sadly observing that he's being left impoverished and that [[FairWeatherFriend all of his friends have turned their back on him due to the scandal attached to his father]].
* The general situation of Stano, the fiancee of one of Maia's brothers, who is caught in a state of political limbo due to her legal status following her betrothal to the dead archduke and gets dragged into a failed conspiracy.
* Several of the scenes where Maia wrestles with his (justified) resentment of Setheris.
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* Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.
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* Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.child.
* It’s equally tearjerking and heartwarming, but Maia’s 19th birthday has him inundated with gifts, both obliged from courtiers and heartfelt from people he’s aided - and he simply doesn’t understand that there is no ulterior motive to any of them beyond wishing him a happy birthday.
* It’s equally tearjerking and heartwarming, but Maia’s 19th birthday has him inundated with gifts, both obliged from courtiers and heartfelt from people he’s aided - and he simply doesn’t understand that there is no ulterior motive to any of them beyond wishing him a happy birthday.
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* Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his more larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.
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* Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his more larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.
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*Maia's grief over his mother's death is heartbreaking. He speaks of searching for her everywhere and praying to the gods to let him die too. All of this when he was only nine years old.
**Made worse by the fact she is the only loving parent figure he ever had growing up meaning that after her death he was left with a physically, emotionally, and verbally [[AbusiveParent abusive]] guardian in his distant cousin Setheris and a completely neglectful father.
*Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his more larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.
**Made worse by the fact she is the only loving parent figure he ever had growing up meaning that after her death he was left with a physically, emotionally, and verbally [[AbusiveParent abusive]] guardian in his distant cousin Setheris and a completely neglectful father.
*Chenelo's own circumstances are very tearjerking. She is married off at a young age by her father, who cares only for securing his northern borders against his more larger and more powerful neighboring country and nothing for her, to the Emperor of a different country forcing her to leave her home and live in a court full of [[FantasticRacism racist]] courtiers. Her husband is still mourning his last [[PerfectlyArrangedMarriage wife]] who suffered {{Death by Childbirth}} delivering a stillborn and finds her ugly, boring, and unappealing. The wedding night she falls pregnant and gives birth to a half-elf son who her husband hates as much as he hates her. She and her newborn are sent away to a backwater estate where she raises her child alone and writes letters to her father who never answers. She falls [[IllGirl ill]] and passes away before she is even thirty leaving behind her nine-year-old child.
