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* Cody tearfully, quietly, begging Andrew [[spoiler:not [[spoiler:coming to kick him out because he cheated on him grips with Bligh]].Cody's cheating]].
** [[spoiler:"Then - I'd be left here, just me and you - your dog-boy, with furry ears - you can give me treats and I'll just wait for you every day by the door until you get home."]]
** [[spoiler:"Then - I'd be left here, just me and you - your dog-boy, with furry ears - you can give me treats and I'll just wait for you every day by the door until you get home."]]
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** A moment later, Andrew, who is on the phone with Stephen, imagines his younger brother, who has grown up to be a vodka-swilling PrettyBoy {{Jerkass}} as an innocent little kid again.
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* Stephen telling Andrew he could have been a better brother, and Andrew correcting him to the contrary.
** A moment later, Andrew, who is on the phone with Stephen, imagines his younger brother, who has grown up to be a vodka-swilling PrettyBoy {{Jerkass}} as an innocent little kid again.contrary.
** A moment later, Andrew, who is on the phone with Stephen, imagines his younger brother, who has grown up to be a vodka-swilling PrettyBoy {{Jerkass}} as an innocent little kid again.
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* Andrew's breakdown in the {{Flashback}} to when he and Bligh were nine and he was nearly mauled to death by a mountain lion. Doubles as a HeartwarmingMoment SugarWiki/{{Heartwarming Moment|s}} when Bligh tries to calm him down in the same flashback.
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* When Andrew notices that [[spoiler:Cody's key is still in the dish with his, meaning he left with Bligh and didn't bother taking it]], he slides to the floor and starts sobbing.
** The whole chapter was essentially Andrew crossing one long DespairEventHorizon. Which would have been completely avoided had [[spoiler:Bligh not overestimated the dosage of his paralysis-causing herbs]].
* Andrew [[spoiler:ripping open his own stomach with a carving knife]] because he cannot stand the thought [[spoiler:of living as a half-dog]]. Wow, [[spoiler:GoodThingYouCanHeal]] ''indeed.''
** The whole chapter was essentially Andrew crossing one long DespairEventHorizon. Which would have been completely avoided had [[spoiler:Bligh not overestimated the dosage of his paralysis-causing herbs]].
* Andrew [[spoiler:ripping open his own stomach with a carving knife]] because he cannot stand the thought [[spoiler:of living as a half-dog]]. Wow, [[spoiler:GoodThingYouCanHeal]] ''indeed.''
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** From the same chapter, [[spoiler:Andrew]] realizing that he [[spoiler:might not be changing at the same rate as Bligh and Cody, and therefore would be different from the two of them]]. He gets better, though.
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** The whole chapter was essentially Andrew crossing one long DespairEventHorizon. Which [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot would have been completely avoided]] avoided had [[spoiler:Bligh not overestimated the dosage of his paralysis-causing herbs]].
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** From the same chapter, [[spoiler:Andrew]] realizing that he [[spoiler:might not be changing at the same rate as Bligh and Cody, and therefore would be different from the two of them]]. [[ItGotBetter He gets better, though]].
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** From the same chapter, [[spoiler:Andrew]] realizing that he [[spoiler:might not be changing at the same rate as Bligh and Cody, and therefore would be different from the two of them]]. [[ItGotBetter He gets better, though]].though.
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** A moment later, Andrew, who is on the phone with Stephen, imagines his younger brother, who has grown up to be a vodka-swilling PrettyBoy {{Jerkass}} as an innocent little boy kid again.
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** From the same chapter, [[spoiler:Andrew]] realizing that he [[spoiler:might not be changing at the same rate as Bligh and Cody, and therefore would be different from the two of them]]. [[ItGotBetter He gets better, though]].
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** From the same chapter, [[spoiler:Andrew]] realizing that he [[spoiler:might not be changing at the same rate as Bligh and Cody, and therefore would be different from the two of them]]. [[ItGotBetter He gets better, though]].though]].
* Stephen telling Andrew he could have been a better brother, and Andrew correcting him to the contrary.
** A moment later, Andrew, who is on the phone with Stephen, imagines his younger brother as a little boy again.
* Stephen telling Andrew he could have been a better brother, and Andrew correcting him to the contrary.
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* Andrew's breakdown in the {{Flashback}} to when he and Bligh were nine and he was nearly mauled to death by a mountain lion. Doubles as a HeartwarmingMoment when Bligh tries to calm him down.
* When Andrew notices that [[spoiler:Cody's key is still in the dish with his, meaning he left with Bligh and didn't bother taking it]], he slides to the floor and starts sobbing.
**The whole chapter was essentially Andrew crossing one long DespairEventHorizon. Which [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot would have been completely avoided]] had [[spoiler:Bligh not overestimated the dosage of his paralysis-causing herbs]].
* Andrew [[spoiler:ripping open his own stomach with a carving knife]] because he cannot stand the thought [[spoiler:of living as a half-dog]]. Wow, [[spoiler:GoodThingYouCanHeal]] ''indeed.''
* Cody tearfully, quietly, begging Andrew [[spoiler:not to kick him out because he cheated on him with Bligh]].
* Bligh's LiarRevealed moment in the Checkers parking lot, utterly helpless being confronted with how he became a half-dog in the past and his actions from the night before.
**From the same chapter, [[spoiler:Andrew]] realizing that he [[spoiler:might not be changing at the same rate as Bligh and Cody, and therefore would be different from the two of them]]. [[ItGotBetter He gets better, though]].
* When Andrew notices that [[spoiler:Cody's key is still in the dish with his, meaning he left with Bligh and didn't bother taking it]], he slides to the floor and starts sobbing.
**The whole chapter was essentially Andrew crossing one long DespairEventHorizon. Which [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot would have been completely avoided]] had [[spoiler:Bligh not overestimated the dosage of his paralysis-causing herbs]].
* Andrew [[spoiler:ripping open his own stomach with a carving knife]] because he cannot stand the thought [[spoiler:of living as a half-dog]]. Wow, [[spoiler:GoodThingYouCanHeal]] ''indeed.''
* Cody tearfully, quietly, begging Andrew [[spoiler:not to kick him out because he cheated on him with Bligh]].
* Bligh's LiarRevealed moment in the Checkers parking lot, utterly helpless being confronted with how he became a half-dog in the past and his actions from the night before.
**From the same chapter, [[spoiler:Andrew]] realizing that he [[spoiler:might not be changing at the same rate as Bligh and Cody, and therefore would be different from the two of them]]. [[ItGotBetter He gets better, though]].
