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* Claudia's reunion with her WellIntentionedExtremist father Nicolas. He had Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis'' of all characters out of desperation to have Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. Ouch.
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* Claudia's reunion with her WellIntentionedExtremist father Nicolas. He had Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis'' of all characters out of desperation to have Claudia to Claudia reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. Ouch.
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* Claudia's reunion with her WellIntentionedExtremist father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. '''Ouch'''.
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* Claudia's reunion with her WellIntentionedExtremist father Nicolas. He desperately asks had Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis'' of all characters out of desperation to have Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. '''Ouch'''.Ouch.
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when [[FelonyMisdemeanor the latter killed an armed robber in self defense]]. It seemed that she was too frightened of her uncle Kouichiro to disobey after guessing second thoughts about her being an TrophyChild.
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when [[FelonyMisdemeanor the latter killed an armed robber in self defense]]. It seemed that she was too frightened of her uncle Kouichiro to disobey after guessing second thoughts about her being an TrophyChild.used as nothing more than a pawn.
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when [[FelonyMisdemeanor the latter killed an armed robber in self defense]]. It seemed that she was too frightened of her uncle Kouichiro to disobey after guessing second thoughts about her being an UnwittingPawn.
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when [[FelonyMisdemeanor the latter killed an armed robber in self defense]]. It seemed that she was too frightened of her uncle Kouichiro to disobey after guessing second thoughts about her being an UnwittingPawn.TrophyChild.
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* Claudia's reunion with her WellIntentionedExtremist father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. '''Ouch'''!
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* Claudia's reunion with her WellIntentionedExtremist father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. '''Ouch'''!'''Ouch'''.
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when [[FelonyMisdemeanor the latter killed an armed robber in self defense]]. It seemed that she was too frightened of her uncle to disobey after guessing second thoughts about her being an UnwittingPawn.
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when [[FelonyMisdemeanor the latter killed an armed robber in self defense]]. It seemed that she was too frightened of her uncle Kouichiro to disobey after guessing second thoughts about her being an UnwittingPawn.
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* Claudia's reunion with her father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. '''Ouch'''!
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* Claudia's reunion with her WellIntentionedExtremist father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. '''Ouch'''!
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when [[FelonyMisdemeanor the latter killed an armed robber in self defense. defense]]. It seemed that she was too frightened of her uncle to disobey after guessing second-thoughts second thoughts about what she's doing as her being an UnwittingPawn.
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when the latter killed an armed robber in self defense. It seemed that she was to too frightened of her uncle to disobey after guessing second-thoughts about what she's doing as an UnwittingPawn.
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* Claudia's reunion with her father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. Ouch!
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* Claudia's reunion with her father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. Ouch!'''Ouch'''!
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* Ayato losing his sister Haruka when he was young. Anyone who's lost a sibling will know his sorrow.
* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when the latter killed an armed robber in self defense.
* The world being driven into poverty thanks to the IEF, especially Julis's homeland.
* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when the latter killed an armed robber in self defense.
* The world being driven into poverty thanks to the IEF, especially Julis's homeland.
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* Ayato losing his sister Haruka when he was young.young and discovering that she was preserved for a potential experiment with Hilda. Anyone who's lost a sibling will know his sorrow.
* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when the latter killed an armed robber in selfdefense.
defense. It seemed that she was to frightened of her uncle to disobey after guessing second-thoughts about what she's doing as an UnwittingPawn.
* The world being driven into poverty thanks to the IEF, especially Julis's homeland. For those who have followed the series, hearing about it gives the world [[AfterTheEnd a post-apocalyptic feel]] outside of Asterisk.
* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou was detained when the latter killed an armed robber in self
* The world being driven into poverty thanks to the IEF, especially Julis's homeland. For those who have followed the series, hearing about it gives the world [[AfterTheEnd a post-apocalyptic feel]] outside of Asterisk.
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* Claudia's reunion with her father Nicolas. He desperately asks Claudia to reconsider her participation in the Gryps Festa to the point that he is willing to have Gustave Marlowe attack ''Julis''. Unfortunately, Claudia won't reconsider her decision to participate in the Festa and leaves her father, but not before thanking him for all that he's done for her. Ouch!
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* Ayato learning about Kirin's predicament after her father Seijirou being was detained after when the latter kills off killed an armed robber in self defense.
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* Ayato losing his sister Haruka when he was young. Anyone who's lost a sibling will know his sorrow.
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* Ayato losing his sister Haruka when he was young.
* Kirin's father Seijirou being detained after the latter kills off an armed robber in self defense.
* The world being driven into poverty thanks to the IEF, especially Julis's homeland.
* Hilda's experiments on Orphelia to turn her into a Strega.
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* Kirin's father Seijirou being detained after the latter kills off an armed robber in self defense.
* The world being driven into poverty thanks to the IEF, especially Julis's homeland.
* Hilda's experiments on Orphelia to turn her into a Strega.
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