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** Meanwhile, Flamegirl's begging him to wake up because he's unconcious from losing to [[spoiler: Demon Zetto]].
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[[spoiler: How about hearing the agonizing screams of Kirbopher/Zetto while he feels the sensation of getting his arm ripped off?]] Yeah, that'll do it to ya.
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** Not made any better by the Fact Bubble special revealing that [[spoiler: Zetto and Kizuna weren't on speaking terms for a while after that event. As well as the fact that Zetto's intent in shooting her in the back wasn't just to save [=SOFDTI=], but as a way of saying "please, no more..."]]
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** Making this worse is [[spoiler: Alpha having what looks like a near panic attack because Kirb got swatted by Kajet and ''[[KilledOffForReal wasn't getting up]]''. Until his SpottingTheThread moment, he thought one of his only friends was dead... and then he found out that that friend was actually the cause of ''everything''.]]
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* Plan Z. Just... plan Z.
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* Plan Z. Just... plan Plan Z.
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[[spoiler: How about hearing the agonizing screams of Kirbopher/Zetto while he feels the sensation of getting his arms ripped off?]] Yeah, that'll do it to ya.
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* When [[spoiler: Kizuna admitted her feelings for Zetto in an emotional standoff against [=SOFTDI=] out of fear that she might spawn another Forbidden Power and hurt Zetto all over again. And then Zetto shoots her in the back to protect [=SOFDTI=] as she looks horrified at him and logs out.]]
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* Alpha and Kirbopher splitting apart from each other because Kirbopher doesn't want Alpha to get mixed up in the mess with the Forbidden Power to the point that Kirb yells at him about how Alpha needs to just stay out of the bullshit and how nothing will be the same anymore if Alpha and the others get back.
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* [[spoiler: Alpha attacking Zetto in a fit of rage after finding out his true identity. Zetto doesn't even fight back, he just holds him off, until Alpha grabs him and starts screaming at him. To see their friendship slowly fissure and crack up to this point is pretty heart-wrenching in itself, but this just puts the icing on the cake.]]
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** And then the four words that end off the series after the camera image fades away speaks volumes.
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* [[spoiler: The sendoff for Gamecrazed after the reveal of them being [=SOFTDI=]'s avatar as they say their goodbyes and accept whatever fate is in store for them.]]
* When [[spoiler: Kizuna admitted her feelings for Zetto in an emotional standoff against [=SOFTDI=] out of fear that she might spawn another Forbidden Power and hurt Zetto all over again. And then Zetto shoots her in the back to protect her as she looks horrified at him and logs out.]]
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* When [[spoiler: Kizuna admitted her feelings for Zetto in an emotional standoff against [=SOFTDI=] out of fear that she might spawn another Forbidden Power and hurt Zetto all over again. And then Zetto shoots her in the back to protect her as she looks horrified at him and logs out.]]
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* The episode starts out on a relatively okay note. Not exactly positive, but not negative either as the team is ready to infiltrate D-buggers and get rid of their program (supposedly a program meant to bring the Forbidden Power down and use it for their own purposes). [[spoiler: Not only is Neomutant knocked out, but Nylocke is captured by Zetto and turned into a component for the near-complete antivirus program.]] While this worries both Alpha and Flamegirl, they manage to keep it together as it's just them now. They're assaulted by Kizuna and Zetto, and while Zetto is talking to Kizuna, [[spoiler: Flamegirl screams in agony as she is presumably killed by the antivirus in her character consuming her completely. The antivirus energy goes into the Dragon Bug vaccine program and powers it up, and the first thing it does upon activating? It repeats Flamegirl's exact scream.]] Alpha's face reads pure terror. At this time the Forbidden Power is released and on the move, the Netkings unable to seal it away. The Dragon Bug flies into a portal taking it to Sanctuary but Alpha angrily grabs onto it and rides it there. [[spoiler: Zetto switches back to Kirbopher and tries to take the Power down, now called Kajet. He puts up a good fight but is crushed in its grip in the end. When Alpha gets to Sanctuary, he hops off the Dragon Bug and one of the first things he sees is Kirbopher's lifeless body. Upon seeing this, he doesn't even say anything. With all his friends being gone, Alpha falls apart and
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* The episode starts out on a relatively okay note. Not exactly positive, but not negative either as the team is ready to infiltrate D-buggers and get rid of their program (supposedly a program meant to bring the Forbidden Power down and use it for their own purposes). [[spoiler: Not only is Neomutant knocked out, but Nylocke is captured by Zetto and turned into a component for the near-complete antivirus program.]] While this worries both Alpha and Flamegirl, they manage to keep it together as it's just them now. They're assaulted by Kizuna and Zetto, and while Zetto is talking to Kizuna, [[spoiler: Flamegirl screams in agony as she is presumably killed by the antivirus in her character consuming her completely. The antivirus energy goes into the Dragon Bug vaccine program and powers it up, and the first thing it does upon activating? It repeats Flamegirl's exact scream.]] Alpha's face reads pure terror. At this time the Forbidden Power is released and on the move, the Netkings unable to seal it away. The Dragon Bug flies into a portal taking it to Sanctuary but Alpha angrily grabs onto it and rides it there. [[spoiler: Zetto switches back to Kirbopher and tries to take the Power down, now called Kajet. He puts up a good fight but is crushed in its grip in the end. When Alpha gets to Sanctuary, he hops off the Dragon Bug and one of the first things he sees is Kirbopher's lifeless body. Upon seeing this, he doesn't even say anything. With all his friends being gone, Alpha falls apart and
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*Plan Z. Just... plan Z.
*Plan Z. Just... plan Z.
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!!Episode 00
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* Rockoon discovering who Skeight is and realizing in horror that he's been nothing but mean to him.
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!!Episode 00
[[spoiler: How about hearing the agonizing screams of Kirbopher/Zetto while he feels the sensation of getting his arms ripped off?]] Yeah, that'll do it to ya.
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* Rockoon discovering who Skeight is and realizing in horror that he's been nothing but mean to him.
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