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* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him, and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler: he now can't even be in the same room with them]].them without thinking they want to kill him]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fic, and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. The second chapter in particular gives their reactions of self-hatred in great details. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates,]] [[WhatTheHellHero starting with Bobby breaking up with Lori for the atrocities she committed, and followed by the other Loud girls having their friends abandon them, including Polly Pain, Haiku, Tabby, and Maggie]].
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* Chapter 9: Lincoln is officially diagnosed with syngenesophobia, [[TitleDrop syngenesophobia]] (fear of relatives), and not surprisingly, no-one in his family takes it well. Rita breaks down crying in front of Dr. Richard, Lynn Sr. has a nervous breakdown at work when his wife calls him about it, and the sisters’ guilt increases even more.
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** Lynn voices her concern about the possibility that therapy won't help, and Lincoln will never get over his syngenesophobia. It makes all the girls realize that there is a serious risk that they can could lose Lincoln for good.good. And they're fully aware that if they did, it would be ''entirely their fault.''
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* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have received vicious bullying from her classmates, including being shut into a locker for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she [[MisplacedRetribution repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day]], [[JerkassRealization something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps her realize it]].
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* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have received vicious bullying from her classmates, including [[StuffedIntoALocker being shut into a locker locker]] for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she [[MisplacedRetribution repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day]], [[JerkassRealization something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps her realize it]].
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* In Chapter 8, we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler: he falls on the floor and starts sobbing. To the point that he starts to have trouble breathing due to his bruised ribs not being able to expand to accommodate his lungs, before Lisa puts an oxygen mask on him]].
* Chapter 9: Lincoln is officially diagnosed with Syngenesophobia, and not surprisingly, no-one in his family takes it well. Rita breaks down crying in front of Dr. Richard, Lynn Sr. has a nervous breakdown at work when his wife calls him about it, and the sisters’ guilt increases even more.
* Chapter 9: Lincoln is officially diagnosed with Syngenesophobia, and not surprisingly, no-one in his family takes it well. Rita breaks down crying in front of Dr. Richard, Lynn Sr. has a nervous breakdown at work when his wife calls him about it, and the sisters’ guilt increases even more.
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* In Chapter 8, we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler: he falls on the floor and starts sobbing. To sobbing to the point that he starts to have trouble breathing due to his bruised ribs not being able to expand to accommodate his lungs, before Lisa puts an oxygen mask on him]].
* Chapter 9: Lincoln is officially diagnosed withSyngenesophobia, syngenesophobia, and not surprisingly, no-one in his family takes it well. Rita breaks down crying in front of Dr. Richard, Lynn Sr. has a nervous breakdown at work when his wife calls him about it, and the sisters’ guilt increases even more.
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* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have received viscous bullying from her classmates, including being shut into a locker for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she [[MisplacedRetribution repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day]], [[JerkassRealization something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps her realize it]].
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* Chapter 14: Lincoln has another nightmare, despite receiving pills to prevent them, and it's the his worst dream yet. He ends up wetting himself and getting afraid of Bun-Bun as well as his sisters.
* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have receivedviscous vicious bullying from her classmates, including being shut into a locker for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she [[MisplacedRetribution repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day]], [[JerkassRealization something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps her realize it]].
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* The ''very'' real possibility that BrainyBaby Lily, [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln attempts suicide.
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* The ''very'' real possibility that BrainyBaby Lily, [[WhatTheHellHero who is]] ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln [[DrivenToSuicide attempts suicide.suicide]].
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* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have received viscous bullying from her classmates, including being shut into a locker for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she [[MisplacedRetribution repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day]], [[JerkassRealization something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps it her realize it]].
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* The ''very'' real possibility that BrainyBaby Lily, who is ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln attempts suicide.
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* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have received viscous bullying from her classmates, including being shut into a locker for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she [[MisplacedRetribution repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day, Day]], [[JerkassRealization something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps it realize it.
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* The ''very'' real possibility that BrainyBaby Lily, [[WhatTheHellHero who is ''pissed'' with hersisters, sisters]], might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln attempts suicide.
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* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him, and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he [[spoiler: he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fic, and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. The second chapter in particular gives their reactions of self-hatred in great details. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates,]] [[WhatTheHellHero starting with Bobby breaking up with Lori for the atrocities she committed, and followed by the other Loud girls having their friends abandon them, including Polly Pain, Haiku, Tabby, and Maggie]].
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* In Chapter 8, we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler:he [[spoiler: he falls on the floor and starts sobbing. To the point that he starts to have trouble breathing due to his bruised ribs not being able to expand to accomodate accommodate his lungs, before Lisa puts an oxygen mask on him]].
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* Chapter 14: Lincoln has another nightmare, despite receiving pills to prevent them, and it's the worst dream yet. He ends up wetting himself and getting afraid of Bun-Bun as well as his sisters.
* Chapter 14: Lincoln has another nightmare, despite receiving pills to prevent them, and it's the worst dream yet. He ends up wetting himself and getting afraid of Bun-Bun as well as his sisters.
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* Lori reveals in Chapter 12 that she hates being seen as the tyrannical older sister, but the pressures of looking after her siblings got to her, and now she wishes that she could be the sister she wanted to be when she was younger.
younger but can't find a way to bring that relationship back.
* Chapter 14: Lincoln has another nightmare, despite receiving pills to prevent them, and it's the worst dream yet. He ends up wetting himself and getting afraid of Bun-Bun as well as hissisters. sisters.
* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have received viscous bullying from her classmates, including being shut into a locker for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day, something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps it realize it.
* The ''very'' real possibility that BrainyBaby Lily, who is ''pissed'' with her sisters, might grow up resenting her sisters, especially if Lincoln attempts suicide.
* Chapter 14: Lincoln has another nightmare, despite receiving pills to prevent them, and it's the worst dream yet. He ends up wetting himself and getting afraid of Bun-Bun as well as his
* Chapter 15: Luan turns out to have received viscous bullying from her classmates, including being shut into a locker for ''hours'', futilely calling for help until being discovered by a teacher. She was so traumatized that she repressed all of her anger over it and proceeded to take all of it out on her family every April Fool's Day, something she deeply regrets once Dr. Lopez helps it realize it.
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* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him, and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fic, and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. The second chapter in particular gives their reactions of self-hatred in great details. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates, classmates,]] [[WhatTheHellHero starting with Bobby breaking up with Lori for the atrocities she committed, and followed by the other Loud girls having their friends abandon them, including Polly Pain, Haiku, Tabby, and Maggie]].
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* The story in general is a big Tearjerker TearJerker for [[TheWoobie Lincoln]], as he develops an intense fear of his sisters after one of the sibling fights [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown ended]] ''[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown really]]'' [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown badly for him]].
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* Chapter 3, after a horrible nightmare, Lincoln wakes up in the hospital, just as visitor hours are over. Afraid to be left alone, he begs his mother to stay with him.
* Chapter 3, after a horrible nightmare, Lincoln wakes up in the hospital, just as visitor hours are over. Afraid to be left alone, he begs his mother to stay with him.
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classmates, starting with Bobby breaking up with Lori for the atrocities she committed, and followed by the other Loud girls having their friends abandon them, including Polly Pain, Haiku, Tabby, and Maggie]].
* Chapter 3, after a horriblenightmare, nightmare in which demonic versions of his sisters kill him for being at fault for every dispute, Lincoln wakes up in the hospital, just as visitor hours are over. Afraid to be left alone, he begs his mother to stay with him.
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* Chapter 9: Lincoln is officially diagnosed with Syngenesophobia, and not surprisingly, no-one in his family takes it well. Rita breaks down crying in front of Dr. Richard, Lynn Sr. has a nervous breakdown at work when his wife calls him about it, and the sisters’ guilt increases even more.
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* Chapter 9: Lincoln is officially diagnosed with Syngenesophobia, and not surprisingly, no-one in his family takes it well. Rita breaks down crying in front of Dr. Richard, Lynn Sr. has a nervous breakdown at work when his wife calls him about it, and the sisters’ guilt increases even more.more.
* Chapter 10: Lynn voices her concern about the possibility that therapy won't help, and Lincoln will never get over his syngenesophobia. It makes all the girls realize there is a serious risk that they will lose Lincoln for good.
* Chapter 10: Lynn voices her concern about the possibility that therapy won't help, and Lincoln will never get over his syngenesophobia. It makes all the girls realize there is a serious risk that they will lose Lincoln for good.
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* In Chapter 8, we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler:he falls on the floor and starts sobbing. To the point that he starts to have trouble breathing]].breathing]].
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*Chapter 9: Lincoln is officially diagnosed with Syngenesophobia, and not surprisingly, no-one in his family takes it well. Rita breaks down crying in front of Dr. Richard, Lynn Sr. has a nervous breakdown at work when his wife calls him about it, and the sisters’ guilt increases even more.
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* Chapter 6, when Lynn tries to appologize to Lincoln, the boy panicks and hits her with a food tray. What makes it worse is that Lynn mistakes Lincolns fear for anger, and thinks he ''hates'' her now, so she storms out of the room crying.
* Chapter 8 we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler:he falls on the floor and sobbing. To the point that he starts to have troubles breathing.]]
* Chapter 6, when Lynn tries to appologize to Lincoln, the boy panicks and hits her with a food tray. What makes it worse is that Lynn mistakes Lincolns fear for anger, and thinks he ''hates'' her now, so she storms out of the room crying.
* Chapter 8 we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler:he falls on the floor and sobbing. To the point that he starts to have troubles breathing.]]
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* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him him, and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fanfic fic, and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates]].
* Chapter 6, when Lynn tries toappologize apologize to Lincoln, the boy panicks panics and hits her with a food tray. What makes it worse is that Lynn mistakes Lincolns Lincoln's fear for anger, and thinks he ''hates'' her now, so she storms out of the room crying.
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* The story in general is a big Tearjerker for Lincoln, as he develops an intense fear of his sisters after one of the sibling fights end ''really'' badly for him. [[spoiler:In chapter 8, Lincoln completely ''freaks out'' when they're all reunited together in the same room again, falling on the floor and sobbing. To the point that he starts to have troubles breathing.]]
* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fanfic and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates]].
* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fanfic and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates]].
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* The story in general is a big Tearjerker for Lincoln, as he develops an intense fear of his sisters after one of the sibling fights end ''really'' badly for him. [[spoiler:In chapter 8, Lincoln completely ''freaks out'' when they're all reunited together in the same room again, falling on the floor and sobbing. To the point that he starts to have troubles breathing.]]\n
* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fanfic and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends andclassmates]].classmates]].
* Chapter 6, when Lynn tries to appologize to Lincoln, the boy panicks and hits her with a food tray. What makes it worse is that Lynn mistakes Lincolns fear for anger, and thinks he ''hates'' her now, so she storms out of the room crying.
* Chapter 8 we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler:he falls on the floor and sobbing. To the point that he starts to have troubles breathing.]]
* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fanfic and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and
* Chapter 6, when Lynn tries to appologize to Lincoln, the boy panicks and hits her with a food tray. What makes it worse is that Lynn mistakes Lincolns fear for anger, and thinks he ''hates'' her now, so she storms out of the room crying.
* Chapter 8 we get to see just how messed up Lincoln has become. When his sisters come to visit, [[spoiler:he falls on the floor and sobbing. To the point that he starts to have troubles breathing.]]
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* The story in general is a big Tearjerker for Lincoln, as he develops an intense fear of his sisters after one of the sibling fights end ''really'' badly for him. [[spoiler:In chapter 8, Lincoln completely ''freaks out'' when they're all reunited together in the same room again, falling on the floor and sobbing. To the point that he starts to have troubles breathing.]]
* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fanfic and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates]].
* His sisters are [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone horrified]] by what they did to him and now have to deal with the fact that their brother fears them so much that [[spoiler:he now can't even be in the same room with them]]. Their emotions are detailed several times in the fanfic and you can tell that the whole ordeal hits them ''hard''. Plus, since word about what they did gets around quickly, all the girls find themselves [[AllOfTheOtherReindeer ostracized by their friends and classmates]].