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* Yongzhang essentially becoming the unfavorite son after Langhua's funeral. It doesn't help how his younger brothers, Yongcheng and Yongqi, surpass him in intellect and skills that cause Hongli to favor them more which leads to him ignoring or get unreasonably mad at his current oldest son. While he did eventually give Yongzhang more attention, this was because Yongcheng's actions were making Hongli suspicious. Even after he dies from the stress and Chun's death, his death is the only one of all the children who died his father doesn't even mourn since he's too concentrated on Xiangjian.
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* Yongzhang essentially becoming the unfavorite son after Langhua's funeral. It doesn't help how his younger brothers, Yongcheng and Yongqi, surpass him in intellect and skills that cause Hongli to favor them more which leads to him ignoring or get unreasonably mad at his current oldest son. While The only times he did eventually give finally gives Yongzhang more attention, this was because attention is when Yongcheng's actions were making Hongli suspicious. suspicious and he had a child. Even after he dies from the stress and which was ultimately from Chun's death, his death is the only one of all the children who died his father doesn't ''doesn't'' even mourn since he's he was too concentrated on Xiangjian.
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* Hongli walks the same path he and Ruyi used to walk on in their younger years and remembers when he and Ruyi still loved each other, when he first saw her after their wedding, and when she stated that the phrase she loved him saying to her most was “Do not worry”. Hongli collapses on a railing and can’t help but cry over losing the one person who loved him most, who loved him past his title as Emperor, who never even wished to be roped into the fiascos of the harem, and the one person he never trusted when the other women started rumors about her.
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* Hongli walks the same path he and Ruyi used to walk on in their younger years and remembers when he and Ruyi still loved each other, when he first saw her after their wedding, and when she stated that the phrase she loved him saying to her most was “Do not worry”. Hongli collapses on a railing and can’t help but cry over losing the one person who loved him most, who loved him past his title as Emperor, who never even wished to be roped into the fiascos of the harem, and the one person he never trusted began to distrust when the other women started rumors about her.
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* Yongzhang essentially becoming the unfavorite son after Langhua's funeral. It doesn't help how his younger brothers, Yongcheng and Yongqi, surpass him in intellect and skills that cause Hongli to favor them more which leads to him ignoring or get unreasonably mad at his current oldest son. While he did eventually give Yongzhang more attention, this was because Yongcheng's actions were making Hongli suspicious. Even after he dies from the stress and Chun's death, his death is the only one of all the children who died his father doesn't even mourn since he's too concentrated on Xiangjian.
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* Yongzhang essentially becoming the unfavorite son after Langhua's funeral. It doesn't help how his younger brothers, Yongcheng and Yongqi, surpass him in intellect and skills that cause Hongli to favor them more which leads to him ignoring or get unreasonably mad at his current oldest son. While he did eventually give Yongzhang more attention, this was because Yongcheng's actions were making Hongli suspicious. Even after he dies from the stress and Chun's death, his death is the only one of all the children who died his father doesn't even mourn since he's too concentrated on Xiangjian.
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* Yongzhang essentially becoming the unfavorite son after Langhua's funeral. It doesn't help how his younger brothers, Yongcheng and Yongqi, surpass him in intellect and skills that cause Hongli to favor them more which leads to him ignoring or get unreasonably mad at his current oldest son. While he did eventually give Yongzhang more attention, this was because Yongcheng's actions were making Hongli suspicious. Even after he dies from the stress and Chun's death, his death is the only one of all the children who died his father doesn't even mourn since he's too concentrated on Xiangjian.
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** Yonglian’s death. His mother’s paranoia that Ruyi is out to get her causes her to put so much pressure on him to be outstanding because he’s the legitimate son and thus has to look far better than his siblings. In the end, he has an asthma flare up because of reed flowers in his bedroom and dies from suffocation in his sleep. Then Hongli hears Langhua screaming her son’s name after she finds him.
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** Yonglian’s death. His mother’s paranoia that Ruyi is out to get her causes her to put so much pressure on him to be outstanding because he’s the legitimate son and thus has to look far better than his siblings. In the end, he has an asthma flare up because of reed flowers in his bedroom and dies from suffocation in his sleep. Then Hongli hears Langhua screaming her their son’s name after she finds him.him dead.
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*** Hongli's reaction to Yonghuang's death shows a genuine look of regret and sadness. When Ruyi and Hongli talk alone, this is one of the moments where Hongli is being true to himself. He did love Yonghuang, he had to show coldness to him because he never forgot how his son showed he wanted to be Crown Prince in Langhua's funeral. But he was his first child so he feels sad that his child died before him. He even keeps a keepsake of Yonghuang's mother showing he did have some affection for her before her death.
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*** Hongli's reaction to Yonghuang's death shows a genuine look of regret and sadness. When Ruyi and Hongli talk alone, alone after his death, this is one of the moments where Hongli is being true to himself. He did love Yonghuang, he had to show coldness to him because he never forgot how his son showed he wanted to be Crown Prince in Langhua's funeral. But he was his first child so and he feels sad mourns the fact that his child died before him. He even keeps a keepsake of Yonghuang's mother showing he did have some affection for her before her death.
