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** Then, we find out that Boa Hoa had walked in on him as he finishes, and [[HeKnowsTooMuch he has to kill her in order to keep the murder quiet]]. The two had just befriended this Chapter (with Banri clearly [[ShipTease showing signs of a crush on her]]), and now?... Banri then goes on to explain that after this murder, he went straight to the bathroom and [[OutDamnedSpot scrubbed his hands raw]].
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** Then, we find out that Boa Hoa had walked in on him as he finishes, and [[HeKnowsTooMuch he has to kill her in order to keep the murder quiet]]. The two had just befriended this Chapter (with Banri clearly [[ShipTease showing signs of a crush on her]]), and now?... Banri then goes on to explain that after this murder, he went straight to the bathroom and [[OutDamnedSpot [[ScrubbingOffTheTrauma scrubbed his hands raw]].
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*** [[spoiler: the worst part of her execution is that she desperately struggled to get out, making her situation worse in the long run, and quietly and sadly accepted her fate as the water rushed in her casket. Such as sad way to go for such a gentle girl.]]
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** Antoinette's [[spoiler: death]] in the same Chapter, and the reveal of her DarkSecret- that she [[spoiler: had to hide the deaths of her parents after her crash landing on St. Olga]].
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* Antoinette's parting words to all of the other inmates. Her last statements to Ozu about regretting her decisions especially hurts, considering she was beginning to fall in love with him...
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* Jiang-li's incredible guilt after [[spoiler: killing Gingie]]. All she's able to do is apologize over and over again when it comes to [[spoiler: his]] page on the Relationships chart.
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--> '''To [[spoiler: Eiji]:''' Probably would’ve been best in th’ long run if it was me instead of you..
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--> '''To [[spoiler: Eiji]:''' Eiji]]:''' Probably would’ve been best in th’ long run if it was me instead of you..
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* Reading Ozu's post-game Relationships page gives us a look into the mind of a boy that's pretty much [[BreakTheCutie lost his will to live.]] Many of his final thoughts on the dead inmates are about broken promises and SurvivorGuilt especially in [[spoiler: Iseri]]'s case.
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* Reading Ozu's post-game Relationships page gives us a look into the mind of a boy that's pretty much [[BreakTheCutie lost his will to live.]] Many of his final thoughts on the dead inmates are about broken promises and SurvivorGuilt especially in [[spoiler: Iseri]]'s case. The last notes to his closest friends really take the cake:
--> '''To [[spoiler: Antoinette]]:''' ..Sorry.. I might not get t’ take ya to St. Olaf after all..
--> '''To [[spoiler: Kyo]]:''' A-after everythin’ ya said t’ me, why’d ya have t’… [[HowDareYouDieOnMe fuckin’ throw everythin’ away!]] Y-ya knew fightin’ th’ bear was gonna get ya killed!.. Is… is that why ya did it..? D-did ya get tired of me..? Of everythin’..? …I’ll tell ya, I can relate t’ that… …I’ll see ya soon, bro..
--> '''To [[spoiler: Eiji]:''' Probably would’ve been best in th’ long run if it was me instead of you..
--> '''To [[spoiler: Antoinette]]:''' ..Sorry.. I might not get t’ take ya to St. Olaf after all..
--> '''To [[spoiler: Kyo]]:''' A-after everythin’ ya said t’ me, why’d ya have t’… [[HowDareYouDieOnMe fuckin’ throw everythin’ away!]] Y-ya knew fightin’ th’ bear was gonna get ya killed!.. Is… is that why ya did it..? D-did ya get tired of me..? Of everythin’..? …I’ll tell ya, I can relate t’ that… …I’ll see ya soon, bro..
--> '''To [[spoiler: Eiji]:''' Probably would’ve been best in th’ long run if it was me instead of you..
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* Chapter 4 reveals that [[spoiler: The previous session was happening at the ''same time'' as this session.]] This means that [[spoiler: two wholr groups of kids are dying at the exact same time]]. [[DramaticIrony And neither group is aware of the other one, or even able to help each other...]]
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* Chapter 4 reveals that [[spoiler: The previous session was happening at the ''same time'' as this session.]] This means that [[spoiler: two wholr whole groups of kids are dying at the exact same time]]. [[DramaticIrony And neither group is aware of the other one, or even able to help each other...]]]]
* Reading Ozu's post-game Relationships page gives us a look into the mind of a boy that's pretty much [[BreakTheCutie lost his will to live.]] Many of his final thoughts on the dead inmates are about broken promises and SurvivorGuilt especially in [[spoiler: Iseri]]'s case.
* Reading Ozu's post-game Relationships page gives us a look into the mind of a boy that's pretty much [[BreakTheCutie lost his will to live.]] Many of his final thoughts on the dead inmates are about broken promises and SurvivorGuilt especially in [[spoiler: Iseri]]'s case.
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* Considering that she's a huge [[AlphaBitch pain the ass,]] seeing Ai Senzaki have a brief moment of weakness when Banri tells her that [[BeneathTheMask she's just as scared as the rest of them underneath all of her bravado]] finally humanized her a little.
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* Considering that she's a huge [[AlphaBitch pain the ass,]] seeing Ai Senzaki have a brief moment of weakness when Banri tells her that [[BeneathTheMask she's just as scared as the rest of them underneath all of her bravado]] finally humanized her a little. bravado]]. Poor kid was on the verge of tears saying it too, after the [[HannibalLecture verbal lashing that Senzaki gave him]].
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* When [[spoiler: Ai]] is discovered as the culprit, she basically tells everyone that the bonds she made during her time in prison were real, and even takes some time reflecting on who she spent time with.
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* As much as she pissed off her fellow inmates, [[spoiler: Nagisa]]'s death was both this and NightmareFuel. It's quite an overlooked fact that the whole situation she was faced with happened ''on a whim'', and she really had no real power in fighting back at all.
* When [[spoiler: Ai]] is discovered as the culprit, she basically tells everyone that the bonds she made during her time in prison were real, and even takes some time reflecting on who she spent time with.
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* Figuring out that the entire group (save [[spoiller: [[TokenEvilTeammate Estuko]]]])[[spoiler: was presumed "At Risk" after participating in SHSL Despair. It makes you kind of wonder ''what'' made them [[spoiler: At Risk]] in the first place.
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* Figuring out that the entire group (save [[spoiller: [[spoiler: [[TokenEvilTeammate Estuko]]]])[[spoiler: was presumed "At Risk" after participating in SHSL Despair. It makes you kind of wonder ''what'' made them [[spoiler: At Risk]] in the first place.
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* Figuring out that the entire group [[spoiler: (save [[TokenEvilTeammate]] Estuko) were presumed "At Risk" students after participating in SHSL Despair. It makes you kind of wonder ''what'' made them At Risk in the first place.]]
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* Figuring out that the entire group [[spoiler: (save [[TokenEvilTeammate]] Estuko) were [[spoiller: [[TokenEvilTeammate Estuko]]]])[[spoiler: was presumed "At Risk" students after participating in SHSL Despair. It makes you kind of wonder ''what'' made them [[spoiler: At Risk Risk]] in the first place.]]
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* Reading into Atlas' [[HeroicSelfDeprecation thought on himself and his relevance to the story can be somewhat depressing, especially with the brave face he puts on for everyone. He never does grow out of it by the end of the Roleplay.
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* Reading into Atlas' [[HeroicSelfDeprecation thought thoughts on himself and his relevance to the story story]] can be somewhat depressing, especially with the brave face he puts on for everyone. He never does grow out of it by the end of the Roleplay.
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* Considering that she'said a huge [[AlphaBitch pain the ass,]] seeing Ai Senzaki have a brief moment of weakness when Banri tells her that [[BeneathTheMask she'said just as scared as the rest of them underneath all of her bravado]] finally humanized her a little.
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* Considering that she'said she's a huge [[AlphaBitch pain the ass,]] seeing Ai Senzaki have a brief moment of weakness when Banri tells her that [[BeneathTheMask she'said she's just as scared as the rest of them underneath all of her bravado]] finally humanized her a little.
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* Oten discovering that his new friend, Kouya Itoutani, was the murderer of Chapter 1.
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* Reading into Atlas' [[HeroicSelfDeprecation thought on himself and his relevance to the story can be somewhat depressing, especially with the brave face he puts on for everyone. He never does grow out of it by the end of the Roleplay.
* Misaki recalling the incident where she accidentally killed a group of researchers with a genetically modified fruit tree.
* Considering that she'said a huge [[AlphaBitch pain the ass,]] seeing Ai Senzaki have a brief moment of weakness when Banri tells her that [[BeneathTheMask she'said just as scared as the rest of them underneath all of her bravado]] finally humanized her a little.
* Misaki recalling the incident where she accidentally killed a group of researchers with a genetically modified fruit tree.
* Considering that she'said a huge [[AlphaBitch pain the ass,]] seeing Ai Senzaki have a brief moment of weakness when Banri tells her that [[BeneathTheMask she'said just as scared as the rest of them underneath all of her bravado]] finally humanized her a little.
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* Chapter 4 reveals that [[spoiler: The previous session was happening at the ''same time'' as this session.]] This means that [[spoiler: ''two groups of kids are dying at the exact same time]]. [[DramaticIrony And neither group is aware of the other one, or even able to help each other...]]
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* Reading through the excerpts of Banri's journal entries [[spoiler: from before Etsuko's intervention]] reveals a ''much'' happier time, showing some of the relationships between inmates as they're going through [[spoiler: the Rehabilitation process at the Future Foundation]] and Banri's personal growth over the past couple of months. He jusy sounds like he has so much ''hope'' for himself...
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* Reading through the excerpts of Banri's journal entries [[spoiler: from before Etsuko's intervention]] reveals a ''much'' happier time, showing some of the relationships between inmates as they're going through [[spoiler: the Rehabilitation process at the Future Foundation]] and Banri's personal growth over the past couple of months. He jusy just sounds like he has so much ''hope'' for himself...
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* Oten's [[BreakTheCutie absolute breakdown]] during the beginning of Chapter 3, after figuring out that one of his closest friends (and [[HoYay possible crushes]]), yet ''again'' was one of the perpetrators. When he confronts Banri[[spoiler: 's Alter Ego]], he tries to talk to him, but at the mention of everyone dying at some point or another, Oten breaks so badly that he [[spoiler: tries to ''destroy'' [=AE!Banri=]]], all while proclaiming that [[PrimalFear he won't die in that prison, ever.]] [[spoiler: It's too bad that his claim never followed through...]]
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* Oten's [[BreakTheCutie absolute breakdown]] during the beginning of Chapter 3, after figuring out that one of his closest friends (and [[HoYay possible crushes]]), crushes]]) yet ''again'' was one of the perpetrators. When he confronts Banri[[spoiler: 's Alter Ego]], he tries to talk to him, but at the mention of everyone dying at some point or another, Oten breaks so badly that he [[spoiler: tries to ''destroy'' [=AE!Banri=]]], all while proclaiming that [[PrimalFear he won't die in that prison, ever.]] [[spoiler: It's too bad that his claim never followed through...]]
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* Chapter 4 was no walk in the park for anybody, either. Monobear exposes a new place to explore- a watchtower, where all the remaining inmates go to discover that they're in the middle of ''nowhere''. Kaori takes this so badly that she breaks down in tears and pushes her dearest friend, Misaki, away. Then ''she'' takes it badly, and Kaori locks herself up in her cell for several days.
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* Chapter 4 was no walk in the park for anybody, anybody either. Monobear exposes a new place to explore- explore-- a watchtower, watchtower-- where all the remaining inmates go to discover that they're in the middle of ''nowhere''. Kaori takes this so badly that she breaks down in tears and pushes her dearest friend, Misaki, away. Then ''she'' takes it badly, and Kaori locks herself up in her cell for several days.days.
* Reading through the excerpts of Banri's journal entries [[spoiler: from before Etsuko's intervention]] reveals a ''much'' happier time, showing some of the relationships between inmates as they're going through [[spoiler: the Rehabilitation process at the Future Foundation]] and Banri's personal growth over the past couple of months. He jusy sounds like he has so much ''hope'' for himself...
* Reading through the excerpts of Banri's journal entries [[spoiler: from before Etsuko's intervention]] reveals a ''much'' happier time, showing some of the relationships between inmates as they're going through [[spoiler: the Rehabilitation process at the Future Foundation]] and Banri's personal growth over the past couple of months. He jusy sounds like he has so much ''hope'' for himself...
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** Then, we find out that Boa Hoa had walked in on him as he finishes, and [[HeKnowsTooMuch he has to kill her in order to keep the murder quiet]]. The two had just befriended this Chapter (with Banri clearly [[ShipTease showing signs of a crush on her]]), and now? Banri then goes on to explain that after this murder, he went straight to the bathroom and [[OutDamnedSpot scrubbed his hands raw]].
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** Then, we find out that Boa Hoa had walked in on him as he finishes, and [[HeKnowsTooMuch he has to kill her in order to keep the murder quiet]]. The two had just befriended this Chapter (with Banri clearly [[ShipTease showing signs of a crush on her]]), and now? now?... Banri then goes on to explain that after this murder, he went straight to the bathroom and [[OutDamnedSpot scrubbed his hands raw]]. raw]].
* Oten's [[BreakTheCutie absolute breakdown]] during the beginning of Chapter 3, after figuring out that one of his closest friends (and [[HoYay possible crushes]]), yet ''again'' was one of the perpetrators. When he confronts Banri[[spoiler: 's Alter Ego]], he tries to talk to him, but at the mention of everyone dying at some point or another, Oten breaks so badly that he [[spoiler: tries to ''destroy'' [=AE!Banri=]]], all while proclaiming that [[PrimalFear he won't die in that prison, ever.]] [[spoiler: It's too bad that his claim never followed through...]]
* Oten's [[BreakTheCutie absolute breakdown]] during the beginning of Chapter 3, after figuring out that one of his closest friends (and [[HoYay possible crushes]]), yet ''again'' was one of the perpetrators. When he confronts Banri[[spoiler: 's Alter Ego]], he tries to talk to him, but at the mention of everyone dying at some point or another, Oten breaks so badly that he [[spoiler: tries to ''destroy'' [=AE!Banri=]]], all while proclaiming that [[PrimalFear he won't die in that prison, ever.]] [[spoiler: It's too bad that his claim never followed through...]]
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* Chapter 4 was no walk in the park for anybody, either. Monobear exposes a new place to explore- a watchtower, where all the remaining inmates go to discover that they're in the middle of ''nowhere''. Kaori takes this so badly that she breaks down in tears and puses her dearest friend, Misaki, away. Then ''she'' takes it badly, and Kaori locks herself up in her cell for several days.
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* Chapter 4 was no walk in the park for anybody, either. Monobear exposes a new place to explore- a watchtower, where all the remaining inmates go to discover that they're in the middle of ''nowhere''. Kaori takes this so badly that she breaks down in tears and puses pushes her dearest friend, Misaki, away. Then ''she'' takes it badly, and Kaori locks herself up in her cell for several days.
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**Tetsuo Shingen's [[spoiler: death]] and all of the fallout that happens afterwards.
** Antoinette's [[spoiler: death]] in the same Chapter, and the reveal of her DarkSecret- that she [[spoiler: had to hide the deaths of her parents after her crash landing on St. Olga]].
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** Then, we find out that Boa Hoa had walked in on him as he finishes, and [[HeKnowsTooMuch he has to kill her in order to keep the murder quiet]]. The two had just befriended this Chapter (with Banri clearly [[ShipTease showing signs of a crush on her]]), and now? Banri then goes on to explain that after this murder, he went straight to the bathroom and [[OutDamnedSpot scrubbed his hands raw]].
* Chapter 4 was no walk in the park for anybody, either. Monobear exposes a new place to explore- a watchtower, where all the remaining inmates go to discover that they're in the middle of ''nowhere''. Kaori takes this so badly that she breaks down in tears and puses her dearest friend, Misaki, away. Then ''she'' takes it badly, and Kaori locks herself up in her cell for several days.
** Then, we find out that Boa Hoa had walked in on him as he finishes, and [[HeKnowsTooMuch he has to kill her in order to keep the murder quiet]]. The two had just befriended this Chapter (with Banri clearly [[ShipTease showing signs of a crush on her]]), and now? Banri then goes on to explain that after this murder, he went straight to the bathroom and [[OutDamnedSpot scrubbed his hands raw]].
* Chapter 4 was no walk in the park for anybody, either. Monobear exposes a new place to explore- a watchtower, where all the remaining inmates go to discover that they're in the middle of ''nowhere''. Kaori takes this so badly that she breaks down in tears and puses her dearest friend, Misaki, away. Then ''she'' takes it badly, and Kaori locks herself up in her cell for several days.
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