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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a very sad movie. After all Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that potentially, they simply aren't the right people for each other.
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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a very sad movie. After all Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that potentially, they simply aren't the right people for each other.
other because of their different upbringings and perspective on humans.
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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' sad movie. After all Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that they simply aren't the right people for each other. Luckily, Jewel does come around in the end and most likely sees the error of her ways, so they maybe are the right people for each other, just with a lot of differences. But, their arguments can be still sad to watch.
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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' very sad movie. After all Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that potentially, they simply aren't the right people for each other. Luckily, Jewel does come around in the end and most likely sees the error of her ways, so they maybe are the right people for each other, just with a lot of differences. But, their arguments can be still sad to watch.
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* Jewel's backstory; Separated from her flock and father when she was just a chick, and forced to survive on her own. Until she met Blu, she was convinced she was the last of her kind. One line in particular is especially heartrending:
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* Jewel's backstory; Separated from her flock and father when she was just a chick, chick from loggers that caused a wildfire, and forced to survive on her own. Until she met Blu, she was convinced she was the last of her kind. One line in particular is especially heartrending:
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* The junior novel expands on Jewel's and Eduardo's reunion a bit more with an additional line after Eduardo states Jewel looks like her mother she looks at him in hopes she is still alive. However, a response is given to his silent sorrowful expression that Jewel understands her mother is gone presumed to have also fallen victim to the wildfire at the same time she was separated from her flock.
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* The junior novel expands on Jewel's and Eduardo's reunion a bit more with an additional line after Eduardo states Jewel looks like her mother she looks at him in hopes she is still alive. However, a response is given to a look in his silent sorrowful expression eyes that Jewel understands her mother is gone presumed to have also fallen victim to the wildfire at the same time she was separated from her flock.
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* The junior novel expands on Jewel's and Eduardo's reunion a bit more with an additional line after Eduardo states Jewel looks like her mother she looks at him in hopes her mother is still alive. However, a response is given to his silent sorrowful expression that Jewel understands her mother is gone implied to have also fallen victim to the wildfire at the same time she was separated from her flock.
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* The junior novel expands on Jewel's and Eduardo's reunion a bit more with an additional line after Eduardo states Jewel looks like her mother she looks at him in hopes her mother she is still alive. However, a response is given to his silent sorrowful expression that Jewel understands her mother is gone implied presumed to have also fallen victim to the wildfire at the same time she was separated from her flock.
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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' sad movie. After all Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that they simply aren't the right people for each other.
other. Luckily, Jewel does come around in the end and most likely sees the error of her ways, so they maybe are the right people for each other, just with a lot of differences. But, their arguments can be still sad to watch.
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* An alternative scene of Blu and Jewel argument, Blu expresses how he doesn't belong to the jungle or Jewel's family and wishes to go back to Rio. Jewel would then scream at him why he doesn't go back to Rio for himself, immediately regreting what she just said. Blu flies away heartbrokwn, leaving Jewel with tears.
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* An alternative scene of Blu and Jewel argument, Blu expresses how he doesn't belong to the jungle or nor Jewel's family and wishes to go back to Rio. Jewel would then scream at him why he doesn't go back to Rio for himself, immediately regreting regretting what she just said. Blu flies away heartbrokwn, heartbroken, leaving Jewel with tears.
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* An alternative scene of Blu and Jewel argument, Blu expresses how he doesn't belong to the jungle or Jewel's family and wishes to go back to Rio. Pearl would then screams at him why he doesn't go back to Rio for himself, immediately regreting what she just said. Blu flies away heartbrokwn, leaving Jewel with tears.
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* An alternative scene of Blu and Jewel argument, Blu expresses how he doesn't belong to the jungle or Jewel's family and wishes to go back to Rio. Pearl Jewel would then screams scream at him why he doesn't go back to Rio for himself, immediately regreting what she just said. Blu flies away heartbrokwn, leaving Jewel with tears.
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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' sad movie. After all Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that they simply aren't the right people for each other.
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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' sad movie. After all Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that they simply aren't the right people for each other.other.
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-->'''Blu:''' I thought I was your one and only, but I guess I was just the only one.
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* An alternative scene of Blu and Jewel argument, Blu expresses how he doesn't belong to the jungle or Jewel's family and wishes to go back to Rio. Pearl would then screams at him why he doesn't go back to Rio for himself, immediately regreting what she just said. Blu flies away heartbrokwn, leaving Jewel with tears.
-->'''Blu:''' I thought I was your one and only, but I guess I was just the only one.
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* After getting into an argument with Jewel in regards to living in the Amazon, Blu leaves to find Linda to say goodbye, deciding to live in the Amazon with his family. But Jewel watches him leave, and misinterpreting his intentions, becomes heartbroken, [[AdultFear tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids]] after what she said to him.
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* After getting into an argument with Jewel in regards to living in the Amazon, Blu leaves to find Linda to say goodbye, deciding to live in the Amazon with his family. But Jewel watches him leave, and misinterpreting his intentions, becomes heartbroken, [[AdultFear tearfully remorseful, thinking that he's abandoning avoiding her and their kids]] after what she said to him.
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* After getting into an argument with Jewel in regards to living in the Amazon, Blu leaves to find Linda to say goodbye, deciding to live in the Amazon with his family. But Jewel watches him leave, and misinterpreting his intentions, becomes heartbroken, [[AdultFear tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids]].kids]] after what she said to him.
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, and Nigel did do some things to deserve it, [[spoiler: his overdramatic "death scene", followed by Gabi's,]] can come across as this.
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* Even though it's it is supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, and Nigel did do some things to deserve it, [[spoiler: his overdramatic "death scene", followed by Gabi's,]] can come across as this.
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thought I'd make it sound more clear and specific.
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* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' sad movie. After all they've Blu and Jewel have been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that they simply aren't the right people for each other.
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** For that matter, Blu saying goodbye to Linda's picture. That he's willing to give up his comfort, his safety, and much of his identity for the family's sake is sad enough, but watching him cut ties with his best friend and foster mother borders on difficult to watch.
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, and Nigel did do some things to deserve it, [[spoiler: his overdramatic "death scene", followed by Gabi's,]] can come across as this.
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, and Nigel did do some things to deserve it, [[spoiler: his overdramatic "death scene", followed by Gabi's,]] can come across as this.this.
* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' sad movie. After all they've been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that they simply aren't the right people for each other.
* Depending on which side of the BrokenBase you take regarding Jewel's actions, this has the potential to be a ''very'' sad movie. After all they've been through in the first movie, it's sobering to think that they simply aren't the right people for each other.
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, [[spoiler: Nigel and Gabi's "death scene"]] can come across as this.
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, and Nigel did do some things to deserve it, [[spoiler: Nigel and Gabi's his overdramatic "death scene"]] scene", followed by Gabi's,]] can come across as this.
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Correct me if I\'m wrong but I put Adult Fear in there because I usually think of something like this as a real fear adults deal with.
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* After getting into an argument with Jewel in regards to living in the Amazon, Blu leaves to find Linda to say goodbye, deciding to live in the Amazon with his family. But Jewel watches him leave, and misinterpreting his intentions, becomes heartbroken, [[AdultFear tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids.kids]].
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, [[spoiler: Nigel's "death scene", and to a lesser extent, Gabi's,]] can come across as this.
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, [[spoiler: Nigel's Nigel and Gabi's "death scene", and to a lesser extent, Gabi's,]] scene"]] can come across as this.
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** It is also implied that the event traumatized her childhood friend Roberto.
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* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, [[spoiler: Nigel's "death scene", and to a lesser extent, Gabi's,]] can come across as this.
* Even though it's supposed to be PlayedForLaughs, [[spoiler: Nigel's "death scene", and to a lesser extent, Gabi's,]] can come across as this.
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-->'''Jewel''': All this time, I... I never let myself hope they were alive...
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-->'''Jewel''': All this time, I... I never let myself hope they were alive...alive...
** It is also implied that the event traumatized her childhood friend Roberto.
** It is also implied that the event traumatized her childhood friend Roberto.
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* Blu looking on after he fails to fit in at the reunion celebration.
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* Jewel's backstory; Separated from her flock and father when she was just a chick, and forced to survive on her own. Until she met Blu, she was convinced she was the last of her kind. One line in particular is especially heartrending:
-->'''Jewel''': All this time, I... I never let myself hope they were alive...
* Jewel's backstory; Separated from her flock and father when she was just a chick, and forced to survive on her own. Until she met Blu, she was convinced she was the last of her kind. One line in particular is especially heartrending:
-->'''Jewel''': All this time, I... I never let myself hope they were alive...
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* After getting into an argument with Jewel regarding living in the Amazon, Blu doesnt want to live here, but Jewel points out this is a better place and their kids like it here, and that he should stop thinking just about himself, Jewel leaves, leaving Blu there thinking, after thinking about it Blu leaves to find Linda, for say goodbye to her deciding to live in the Amazon, but Jewel watches him leave, not knowing Blu true intentions tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids.
* After getting into an argument with Jewel regarding living in the Amazon, Blu doesnt want to live here, but Jewel points out this is a better place and their kids like it here, and that he should stop thinking just about himself, Jewel leaves, leaving Blu there thinking, after thinking about it Blu leaves to find Linda, for say goodbye to her deciding to live in the Amazon, but Jewel watches him leave, not knowing Blu true intentions tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids.
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* After getting into an argument with Jewelregarding in regards to living in the Amazon, Blu doesnt want to live here, but Jewel points out this is a better place and their kids like it here, and that he should stop thinking just about himself, Jewel leaves, leaving Blu there thinking, after thinking about it Blu leaves to find Linda, for Linda to say goodbye to her goodbye, deciding to live in the Amazon, but Amazon with his family. But Jewel watches him leave, not knowing Blu true intentions and misinterpreting his intentions, becomes heartbroken, tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids.kids.
* Blu looking on after he fails to fit in at the reunion celebration.
* After getting into an argument with Jewel
* Blu looking on after he fails to fit in at the reunion celebration.
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* After getting into an argument with Jewel regarding living in the Amazon, Blu doesnt want to live here, but Jewel points out this is a better place and their kids like it here, and that he should stop thinking just about himself, Jewel leaves, leaving Blu there thinking, after thinking about it Blu leaves to find Linda, for leave say goodbye to her deciding to live in the Amazon, but Jewel watches him leave, not knowing Blu true intentions tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids.
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* After getting into an argument with Jewel regarding living in the Amazon, Blu doesnt want to live here, but Jewel points out this is a better place and their kids like it here, and that he should stop thinking just about himself, Jewel leaves, leaving Blu there thinking, after thinking about it Blu leaves to find Linda, for leave say goodbye to her deciding to live in the Amazon, but Jewel watches him leave, not knowing Blu true intentions tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids.
* After getting into an argument with Jewel regarding living in the Amazon, Blu doesnt want to live here, but Jewel points out this is a better place and their kids like it here, and that he should stop thinking just about himself, Jewel leaves, leaving Blu there thinking, after thinking about it Blu leaves to find Linda, for leave say goodbye to her deciding to live in the Amazon, but Jewel watches him leave, not knowing Blu true intentions tearfully thinking that he's abandoning her and their kids.
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