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* Kiritaka Nagare was a good kid who suffered a traumatizing series of events that ended with his death. Kiritaka came from a good family with loving parents and was especially close to his mother. One day, he saw one of his classmates being tortured by a group of satanic bullies, so he took the classmate's place to protect him. Kiritaka was tortured for months; one of the female bullies framed him for stealing her gym clothes, which ostracized him from his classmates, so he endured the torture alone. It is unknown why Kiritaka never went to the teacher about his bullies, but he kept quiet about his torture with his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother while he gathered evidence to turn the bullies into the police. But tragically, all he endured not to worry his mother and turn in his bullies to the police turns out to be for nothing because, after months of torture, Kiritaka was forced by the bullies to jump onto the road by threatening to post a fake pornographic video of his mother. He jumps and breaks his legs when his mother sees him jump, and then he's hit by a truck and dies. The tragedy of seeing a good person tortured and ostracized from what he rightfully sees as demons and enduring all that alone, believing that he can turn them in only to die because of those demons, and he died in front of his mother, who Kiritaka did not want to worry only for her to have to witness his death which destroyed her. And throughout the story, the readers had to witness the torture he had to go through.
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* At The beginning of the story, we see the tragedy of Kiritaka Nagare was Nagare, a good kid with good intentions who suffered a traumatizing series of events that to take down those whom he rightfully sees as demons, but his actions ultimately didn't accomplish what he wanted, and the first chapter ended with his death. death that destroyed his family.
** Kiritaka came from a good family with loving parents and was especially close to his mother. One day, he saw one of his classmates being tortured by a group of satanic bullies, so he took the classmate's place to protect him. Kiritaka was tortured for months; one of the female bullies framed him for stealing her gym clothes, which ostracized him from his classmates, so he endured the torture alone.
** It is unknown why Kiritaka never went to the teacher about his bullies, but he kept quiet about his torture with his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother while he gathered evidence to turn the bulliesinto in to the police. But tragically, all he endured not to worry his mother and turn in his bullies to the police turns out to be for nothing because, after months of torture, Kiritaka was forced by the bullies to jump onto the road by threatening to post a fake pornographic video of his mother. He jumps and breaks his legs when his mother sees him jump, and then he's hit by a truck and dies. dies, making his determination not to worry her completely meaningless.
** A police investigation told his parents that he committed suicide because of abusive parents to his mother's heartbreak. Eventually, she discovers Kiritaka's journals and discovers the truth, swearing revenge. She promises that she will give the demons to take her son away judgment because revenge would be too soft. His mother throws away her life, divorces his father, cuts ties with her workplace and friends, gets plastic surgery, and, after two years, becomes a nurse at his old school where his bullies are. And it's basically clear that since his death, the demons that killed him had free reign to destroy the lives of his classmates, which implies what he wanted to prevent. It's revealed that his father became an outcast with his colleagues at the police, who believe that he's an abusive parent, And his father's heart was broken by his son's death and the divorce from his wife. While his mother is avenging his death by slowly emotionally destroying the bullies and torturing them the same way they did him and then killing them, it's clear that she's been completely destroyed by his death and is a broken shell of the mother and woman she once was and will likely lose her sanity and life once her revenge is complete. Kiritaka, enduring all the torture and sacrificing his life, accomplished nothing but his death and destroying his family, along with destroying his mother, the one person he loves more than anything in the world.
*** The tragedy of seeing a good person tortured and ostracized from what he rightfully sees as demons and enduring all that alone, believing that he can turn them in only to die because of those demons, and he died in front of his mother, who Kiritaka did not want to worry only for her to have to witness his death which destroyed her. And throughout the story, the readers had to witness the torture he had to go through.
** Kiritaka came from a good family with loving parents and was especially close to his mother. One day, he saw one of his classmates being tortured by a group of satanic bullies, so he took the classmate's place to protect him. Kiritaka was tortured for months; one of the female bullies framed him for stealing her gym clothes, which ostracized him from his classmates, so he endured the torture alone.
** It is unknown why Kiritaka never went to the teacher about his bullies, but he kept quiet about his torture with his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother while he gathered evidence to turn the bullies
** A police investigation told his parents that he committed suicide because of abusive parents to his mother's heartbreak. Eventually, she discovers Kiritaka's journals and discovers the truth, swearing revenge. She promises that she will give the demons to take her son away judgment because revenge would be too soft. His mother throws away her life, divorces his father, cuts ties with her workplace and friends, gets plastic surgery, and, after two years, becomes a nurse at his old school where his bullies are. And it's basically clear that since his death, the demons that killed him had free reign to destroy the lives of his classmates, which implies what he wanted to prevent. It's revealed that his father became an outcast with his colleagues at the police, who believe that he's an abusive parent, And his father's heart was broken by his son's death and the divorce from his wife. While his mother is avenging his death by slowly emotionally destroying the bullies and torturing them the same way they did him and then killing them, it's clear that she's been completely destroyed by his death and is a broken shell of the mother and woman she once was and will likely lose her sanity and life once her revenge is complete. Kiritaka, enduring all the torture and sacrificing his life, accomplished nothing but his death and destroying his family, along with destroying his mother, the one person he loves more than anything in the world.
*** The tragedy of seeing a good person tortured and ostracized from what he rightfully sees as demons and enduring all that alone, believing that he can turn them in only to die because of those demons, and he died in front of his mother, who Kiritaka did not want to worry only for her to have to witness his death which destroyed her. And throughout the story, the readers had to witness the torture he had to go through.
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** The true tragedy is that Kiritaka Nagare may have good intentions, but his actions ultimately didn't accomplish what he wanted and destroyed his family. He endured months of torture from these demonic bullies because he tried to turn them in. It's unknown why he didn't go to a teacher but didn't tell his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother. In the end, he died from a prank by the bullies, who threatened to destroy his mother's reputation by posting a fake pornographic video, so he jumped off a cliff, broke his legs, and eventually died by being hit by a truck in front of his mother making his determination not to worry her completely meaningless. A police investigation told his parents that he committed suicide because of abusive parents to his mother's heartbreak. Eventually, she discovers Kiritaka's journals and discovers the truth, swearing revenge. She promises that she will give the demons to take her son away judgment because revenge would be too soft. His mother throws away her life, divorces his father, cuts ties with her workplace and friends, gets plastic surgery, and, after two years, becomes a nurse at his old school where his bullies are. And it's basically clear that since his death, the demons that killed him had free reign to destroy the lives of his classmates, which implies what he wanted to prevent. It's revealed that his father became an outcast with his colleagues at the police, who believe that he's an abusive parent, And his father's heart was broken by his son's death and the divorce from his wife. While his mother is avenging his death by slowly emotionally destroying the bullies and torturing them the same way they did him and then killing them, it's clear that she's been completely destroyed by his death and is a broken shell of the mother and woman she once was and will likely lose her sanity and life once her revenge is complete. Kiritaka, enduring all the torture and sacrificing his life, accomplished nothing but his death and destroying his family, along with destroying his mother, the one person he loves more than anything in the world.
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** The true tragedy is that Kiritaka Nagare may have good intentions, but his actions ultimately didn't accomplish what he wanted and destroyed his family. He endured months of torture from these demonic bullies because he tried to turn them in. It's unknown why he didn't go to a teacher but didn't tell his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother. In the end, he died from a prank by the bullies, who threatened to destroy his mother's reputation by posting a fake pornographic video, so he jumped off a cliff, broke his legs, and eventually died by being hit by a truck in front of his mother making his determination not to worry her completely meaningless. A police investigation told his parents that he committed suicide because of abusive parents to his mother's heartbreak. Eventually, she discovers Kiritaka's journals and discovers the truth, swearing revenge. She promises that she will give the demons to take her son away judgment because revenge would be too soft. His mother throws away her life, divorces his father, cuts ties with her workplace and friends, gets plastic surgery, and, after two years, becomes a nurse at his old school where his bullies are. And it's basically clear that since his death, the demons that killed him had free reign to destroy the lives of his classmates, which implies what he wanted to prevent. It's revealed that his father became an outcast with his colleagues at the police, who believe that he's an abusive parent, And his father's heart was broken by his son's death and the divorce from his wife. While his mother is avenging his death by slowly emotionally destroying the bullies and torturing them the same way they did him and then killing them, it's clear that she's been completely destroyed by his death and is a broken shell of the mother and woman she once was and will likely lose her sanity and life once her revenge is complete. Kiritaka, enduring all the torture and sacrificing his life, accomplished nothing but his death and destroying his family, along with destroying his mother, the one person he loves more than anything.
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** The true tragedy is that Kiritaka Nagare may have good intentions, but his actions ultimately didn't accomplish what he wanted and destroyed his family. He endured months of torture from these demonic bullies because he tried to turn them in. It's unknown why he didn't go to a teacher but didn't tell his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother. In the end, he died from a prank by the bullies, who threatened to destroy his mother's reputation by posting a fake pornographic video, so he jumped off a cliff, broke his legs, and eventually died by being hit by a truck in front of his mother making his determination not to worry her completely meaningless. A police investigation told his parents that he committed suicide because of abusive parents to his mother's heartbreak. Eventually, she discovers Kiritaka's journals and discovers the truth, swearing revenge. She promises that she will give the demons to take her son away judgment because revenge would be too soft. His mother throws away her life, divorces his father, cuts ties with her workplace and friends, gets plastic surgery, and, after two years, becomes a nurse at his old school where his bullies are. And it's basically clear that since his death, the demons that killed him had free reign to destroy the lives of his classmates, which implies what he wanted to prevent. It's revealed that his father became an outcast with his colleagues at the police, who believe that he's an abusive parent, And his father's heart was broken by his son's death and the divorce from his wife. While his mother is avenging his death by slowly emotionally destroying the bullies and torturing them the same way they did him and then killing them, it's clear that she's been completely destroyed by his death and is a broken shell of the mother and woman she once was and will likely lose her sanity and life once her revenge is complete. Kiritaka, enduring all the torture and sacrificing his life, accomplished nothing but his death and destroying his family, along with destroying his mother, the one person he loves more than anything.anything in the world.
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* Kiritaka Nagare was a good kid who suffered a traumatizing series of events that ended with his death. Kiritaka came from a good family with loving parents and was especially close to his mother. One day, he saw one of his classmates being tortured by a group of satanic bullies, so he took the classmate's place to protect him. Kiritaka was tortured for months; one of the female bullies framed him for stealing her gym clothes, which ostracized him from his classmates, so he endured the torture alone. It is unknown why Kiritaka never went to the teacher about his bullies, but he kept quiet about his torture with his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother while he gathered evidence to turn the bullies into the police. But tragically, all he endured not to worry his mother and turn in his bullies to the police turns out to be for nothing because, after months of torture, Kiritaka was forced by the bullies to jump onto the road by threatening to post a fake pornographic video of his mother. He jumps and breaks his legs when his mother sees him jump, and then he's hit by a truck and dies. The tragedy of seeing a good person tortured and ostracized from what he rightfully sees as demons and enduring all that alone, believing that he can turn them in only to die because of those demons, and he died in front of his mother, who Kookie did not want to worry only for her to have to witness his death which destroyed her. And throughout the story, the readers had to witness the torture he had to go through.
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* Kiritaka Nagare was a good kid who suffered a traumatizing series of events that ended with his death. Kiritaka came from a good family with loving parents and was especially close to his mother. One day, he saw one of his classmates being tortured by a group of satanic bullies, so he took the classmate's place to protect him. Kiritaka was tortured for months; one of the female bullies framed him for stealing her gym clothes, which ostracized him from his classmates, so he endured the torture alone. It is unknown why Kiritaka never went to the teacher about his bullies, but he kept quiet about his torture with his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother while he gathered evidence to turn the bullies into the police. But tragically, all he endured not to worry his mother and turn in his bullies to the police turns out to be for nothing because, after months of torture, Kiritaka was forced by the bullies to jump onto the road by threatening to post a fake pornographic video of his mother. He jumps and breaks his legs when his mother sees him jump, and then he's hit by a truck and dies. The tragedy of seeing a good person tortured and ostracized from what he rightfully sees as demons and enduring all that alone, believing that he can turn them in only to die because of those demons, and he died in front of his mother, who Kookie Kiritaka did not want to worry only for her to have to witness his death which destroyed her. And throughout the story, the readers had to witness the torture he had to go through.
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* Kiritaka Nagare was a good kid who suffered a traumatizing series of events that ended with his death. Kiritaka came from a good family with loving parents and was especially close to his mother. One day, he saw one of his classmates being tortured by a group of satanic bullies, so he took the classmate's place to protect him. Kiritaka was tortured for months; one of the female bullies framed him for stealing her gym clothes, which ostracized him from his classmates, so he endured the torture alone. It is unknown why Kiritaka never went to the teacher about his bullies, but he kept quiet about his torture with his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother while he gathered evidence to turn the bullies into the police. But tragically, all he endured not to worry his mother and turn in his bullies to the police turns out to be for nothing because, after months of torture, Kiritaka was forced by the bullies to jump onto the road by threatening to post a fake pornographic video of his mother. He jumps and breaks his legs when his mother sees him jump, and then he's hit by a truck and dies. The tragedy of seeing a good person tortured and ostracized from what he rightfully sees as demons and enduring all that alone, believing that he can turn them in only to die because of those demons, and he died in front of his mother, who Kookie did not want to worry only for her to have to witness his death which destroyed her. And throughout the story, the readers had to witness the torture he had to go through.
** The true tragedy is that Kiritaka Nagare may have good intentions, but his actions ultimately didn't accomplish what he wanted and destroyed his family. He endured months of torture from these demonic bullies because he tried to turn them in. It's unknown why he didn't go to a teacher but didn't tell his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother. In the end, he died from a prank by the bullies, who threatened to destroy his mother's reputation by posting a fake pornographic video, so he jumped off a cliff, broke his legs, and eventually died by being hit by a truck in front of his mother making his determination not to worry her completely meaningless. A police investigation told his parents that he committed suicide because of abusive parents to his mother's heartbreak. Eventually, she discovers Kiritaka's journals and discovers the truth, swearing revenge. She promises that she will give the demons to take her son away judgment because revenge would be too soft. His mother throws away her life, divorces his father, cuts ties with her workplace and friends, gets plastic surgery, and, after two years, becomes a nurse at his old school where his bullies are. And it's basically clear that since his death, the demons that killed him had free reign to destroy the lives of his classmates, which implies what he wanted to prevent. It's revealed that his father became an outcast with his colleagues at the police, who believe that he's an abusive parent, And his father's heart was broken by his son's death and the divorce from his wife. While his mother is avenging his death by slowly emotionally destroying the bullies and torturing them the same way they did him and then killing them, it's clear that she's been completely destroyed by his death and is a broken shell of the mother and woman she once was and will likely lose her sanity and life once her revenge is complete. Kiritaka, enduring all the torture and sacrificing his life, accomplished nothing but his death and destroying his family, along with destroying his mother, the one person he loves more than anything.
** The true tragedy is that Kiritaka Nagare may have good intentions, but his actions ultimately didn't accomplish what he wanted and destroyed his family. He endured months of torture from these demonic bullies because he tried to turn them in. It's unknown why he didn't go to a teacher but didn't tell his parents because he didn't want to worry his mother. In the end, he died from a prank by the bullies, who threatened to destroy his mother's reputation by posting a fake pornographic video, so he jumped off a cliff, broke his legs, and eventually died by being hit by a truck in front of his mother making his determination not to worry her completely meaningless. A police investigation told his parents that he committed suicide because of abusive parents to his mother's heartbreak. Eventually, she discovers Kiritaka's journals and discovers the truth, swearing revenge. She promises that she will give the demons to take her son away judgment because revenge would be too soft. His mother throws away her life, divorces his father, cuts ties with her workplace and friends, gets plastic surgery, and, after two years, becomes a nurse at his old school where his bullies are. And it's basically clear that since his death, the demons that killed him had free reign to destroy the lives of his classmates, which implies what he wanted to prevent. It's revealed that his father became an outcast with his colleagues at the police, who believe that he's an abusive parent, And his father's heart was broken by his son's death and the divorce from his wife. While his mother is avenging his death by slowly emotionally destroying the bullies and torturing them the same way they did him and then killing them, it's clear that she's been completely destroyed by his death and is a broken shell of the mother and woman she once was and will likely lose her sanity and life once her revenge is complete. Kiritaka, enduring all the torture and sacrificing his life, accomplished nothing but his death and destroying his family, along with destroying his mother, the one person he loves more than anything.
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* As Maria is cleaning the principal's ear, worrying about the prior situation concerning Iijima's death and disinterested in the old man's flirting, her mind briefly sees her ex-husband instead of the latter. This hallucination immediately stops her from doing further cleaning and leaves the room. This demonstrates that despite Maria having thrown away her old identity to prepare two years of revenge in cold-blooded, Maria is anxious -- and probably fears -- that the man she loved will be an obstacle to avenge their son. She then sees her reflection which showcases who she really is: a broken Mari whose world was shattered by Kiri-kun's death and who sacrificed everything for him. However, to Maria, the crying Mari who loved her husband is dead, an identity she doesn’t need for her plotting.
* As Maria is cleaning the principal's ear, worrying about the prior situation concerning Iijima's death and disinterested in the old man's flirting, her mind briefly sees her ex-husband instead of the latter. This hallucination immediately stops her from doing further cleaning and leaves the room. This demonstrates that despite Maria having thrown away her old identity to prepare two years of revenge in cold-blooded, Maria is anxious -- and probably fears -- that the man she loved will be an obstacle to avenge their son. She then sees her reflection which showcases who she really is: a broken Mari whose world was shattered by Kiri-kun's death and who sacrificed everything for him. However, to Maria, the crying Mari who loved her husband is dead, an identity she doesn’t need for her plotting.
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19: FOREIGN SUBSTANCE
* As Maria is cleaning the principal's ear, worrying about the prior situation concerning Iijima's death and disinterested in the old man's flirting, her mind briefly sees her ex-husband instead of the latter. This hallucination immediately stops her from doing further cleaning and leaves the room. This demonstratesthat that, despite Maria [[ThatWomanIsDead having thrown away her old identity identity]] to [[BestServedCold prepare two years of revenge in cold-blooded, cold-blooded fashion]], Maria is anxious -- and probably fears -- that the man she loved will be an obstacle to avenge their son. She then sees her reflection which [[TheMirrorShowsYourTrueSelf showcases who she really is: is]]: a broken Mari whose world was shattered by Kiri-kun's death and who sacrificed everything for him. However, to Maria, the crying Mari who loved her husband is dead, an identity she doesn’t need for her plotting.
* As Maria is cleaning the principal's ear, worrying about the prior situation concerning Iijima's death and disinterested in the old man's flirting, her mind briefly sees her ex-husband instead of the latter. This hallucination immediately stops her from doing further cleaning and leaves the room. This demonstrates
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* As Maria is cleaning the principal's ear, worrying about the prior situation concerning Iijima's death and disinterested in the old man's flirting, her mind briefly sees her ex-husband instead of the latter. This hallucination immediately stops her from doing further cleaning and leaves the room. This demonstrates that despite Maria having thrown away her old identity to prepare two years of revenge in cold-blooded, Maria is anxious --- -- and probably fears --- -- that the man she loved will be an obstacle to avenge their son. She then sees her reflection which showcases who she really is: a broken Mari whose world was shattered by Kiri-kun's death and who sacrificed everything for him. However, to Maria, the crying Mari who loved her husband is dead, an identity she doesn’t need for her plotting.
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* As Maria is cleaning the principal's ear, worrying about the prior situation concerning Iijima's death and disinterested in the old man's flirting, her mind briefly sees her ex-husband instead of the latter. This hallucination immediately stops her from doing further cleaning and leaves the room. This demonstrates that despite Maria having thrown away her old identity to prepare two years of revenge in cold-blooded, Maria is anxious --- and probably fears --- that the man she loved will be an obstacle to avenge their son. She then sees her reflection which showcases who she really is: a broken Mari whose world was shattered by Kiri-kun's death and who sacrificed everything for him. However, to Maria, the crying Mari who loved her husband is dead, an identity she doesn’t need for her plotting.
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* During a police interview where Taiichiro and his partner are questioning the principal and Atsuki about the rumors about Kumiru's connections to criminal activity, the principal denies knowing it, but Atsuki is guilty, admitting knowing but doing nothing, and Taiichiro's advice Atsuki that the only thing he can do is accept the pain and regret while continuing to live with his guilt. Both Atsuki and the principal react with shock to his words. Atsuki still feels guilty for not doing more, unaware of the monsters Kowase and Kumiru truly were, while Taiichiro lives with the pain of his son, staff, and wife, leaving him unaware of the actual circumstances of what happened.
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* The scene where Kumiru manipulates vulnerable men to give her money, which she cruelly calls fishes. The man genuinely opened himself to her, believing she was a kind and caring girl because she acted caring and always paid for the meals. He holds her in a gentle embrace, and his words imply that women hurt him in the past. Kumiru makes the man emotional by guessing that he has always had trouble with women, causing him to tear up. Then Kumiru thug Iijima comes in and beats up the poor man, mocks him for being a pervert despite him not doing anything sexual with Kumirum with him just holding her, and Kumiru reveals the deceit and blackmails the poor man, heartbroken out of money. And then, the reader is treated to the scene of Kumiru taking a bath without a care in the world, thinking of the way she uses the money to impress Okaya; she truly is nothing but a cruel, heartless harpy, and we can do nothing but shed tears for that poor man and her possible other victims.
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* The scene where Kumiru manipulates vulnerable men to give her money, which she cruelly calls fishes.fishing. The man genuinely opened himself to her, believing she was a kind and caring girl because she acted caring and always paid for the meals. He holds her in a gentle embrace, and his words imply that women hurt him in the past. Kumiru makes the man emotional by guessing that he has always had trouble with women, causing him to tear up. Then Kumiru thug Iijima comes in and beats up the poor man, mocks him for being a pervert despite him not doing anything sexual with Kumirum with him just holding her, and Kumiru reveals the deceit and blackmails the poor man, heartbroken out of money. And then, the reader is treated to the scene of Kumiru taking a bath without a care in the world, thinking of the way she uses the money to impress Okaya; she truly is nothing but a cruel, heartless harpy, and we can do nothing but shed tears for that poor man and her possible other victims.
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* The scene where Kumiru manipulates vulnerable men to give her money, which she cruelly calls fishes. The man genuinely opened himself to her, believing she was a kind and caring girl because she acted caring and always paid for the meals. He holds her in a gentle embrace, and his words imply that women hurt him in the past. Kumiru makes the man emotional by guessing that he has always had trouble with women, causing him to tear up. Then Kumiru thug Iijima comes in and beats up the poor man, mocks him for being a pervert despite him not doing anything sexual with Kumirum with him just holding her, and Kumiru reveals the deceit and blackmails the poor man, heartbroken out of money. And then, the reader is treated to the scene of Kumiru taking a bath without a care in the world, thinking of the way she uses the money to impress Okaya; she truly is nothing but a cruel, heartless harpy, and we can do nothing but shed tears for that poor man and her possible other victims.
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* The scene of Inspector Taiichiro Nagare meeting with Nozomu Okaya. The monster that killed his son and only regrets that he couldn’t torture him anymore is in front of Taiichiro, and Nozomu is putting on an act of being sympathetic to Kiritaka and Taiichiro to take that suspicion off of him. Readers can’t help but tear up to see that the monster that killed Kiritaka continues to live without remorse, and he’s manipulating his father.
* The scene where Kumiru manipulates vulnerable men to give her money, which she cruelly fishes. The man genuinely opened himself to her, believing she was a kind and caring girl because she acted caring and always paid for the meals. He holds her in a gentle embrace, and his words imply that women hurt him in the past. Kumiru makes the man emotional by guessing that he has always had trouble with women, causing him to tear up. Then Kumiru thug Iijima comes in and beats up the poor man, mocks him for being a pervert despite him not doing anything sexual with Kumirum with him just holding her, and Kumiru reveals the deceit and blackmails the poor man, heartbroken out of money. And then, the reader is treated to the scene of Kumiru taking a bath without a care in the world, thinking of the way she uses the money to impress Okaya; she truly is nothing but a cruel, heartless harpy, and we can do nothing but shed tears for that poor man and her possible other victims.
* The scene of Inspector Taiichiro Nagare meeting with Nozomu Okaya. The monster that killed his son and only regrets that he couldn’t torture him anymore is in front of Taiichiro, and Nozomu is putting on an act of being sympathetic to Kiritaka and Taiichiro to take that suspicion off of him. Readers can’t help but tear up to see that the monster that killed Kiritaka continues to live without remorse, and he’s manipulating his father.
* The scene where Kumiru manipulates vulnerable men to give her money, which she cruelly fishes. The man genuinely opened himself to her, believing she was a kind and caring girl because she acted caring and always paid for the meals. He holds her in a gentle embrace, and his words imply that women hurt him in the past. Kumiru makes the man emotional by guessing that he has always had trouble with women, causing him to tear up. Then Kumiru thug Iijima comes in and beats up the poor man, mocks him for being a pervert despite him not doing anything sexual with Kumirum with him just holding her, and Kumiru reveals the deceit and blackmails the poor man, heartbroken out of money. And then, the reader is treated to the scene of Kumiru taking a bath without a care in the world, thinking of the way she uses the money to impress Okaya; she truly is nothing but a cruel, heartless harpy, and we can do nothing but shed tears for that poor man and her possible other victims.
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* When Kowase realizes that Maria is not joking about killing him by drowning him, he attempts to talk her down to escape his predicament. Kowase insisted that he was just fooling around with Yajima, and while he was a little rough with her, he would've stopped if it hadn't been a big deal. We see a flashback with Yajima in her underwear with a broken face, with the implication that [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil he forced her to have sex with him]]. This monster abused this poor girl, and as Maria listens to him, she remembers how her own son suffered the abuse in silence because he did not want to worry her; no wonder when Kowase said if she didn't fight back, it wasn't a big deal, Maria kicked the door and told him to shut up.
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* When Kowase realizes that [[MyGodYouAreSerious Maria is not joking about killing him by drowning him, him]], he attempts to talk her down to escape his predicament. Kowase insisted insists that he was just fooling around with Yajima, and while he was [[{{understatement}} a little rough rough]] with her, [[BlatantLies he would've stopped if Yajima had told him to]]; but because she said nothing, [[NotIfTheyEnjoyedItRationalization that means it hadn't been wasn't such a big deal. deal]]. We see a flashback with Yajima in her underwear [[HeroicBSOD with a broken face, face]], with the implication that [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil he forced her to have sex with him]]. This monster abused this poor girl, [[DiggingYourselfDeeper and as his poor attempt at an excuse only shows that he doesn't even really believe that what he did was wrong]]. As Maria listens to him, [[CloseToHome she remembers how her own son suffered the abuse in silence silence]] because he did not want to worry her; no wonder when Kowase said if she didn't fight back, it wasn't a big deal, her. Fed up with Kowase's bullshit, Maria kicked kicks the door and told tells him to shut up.
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* When Kowase realizes that Maria is not joking about killing him by drowning him, he attempts to talk her down to escape his predicament. Kowase insisted that he was just fooling around with Yajima, and while he was a little rough with her, he would've stopped if it hadn't been a big deal. We see a flashback with Yajima in her underwear with a broken face, with the implication that [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil he forced her to have sex with him. him]]. This monster abused this poor girl, and as Maria listens to him, she remembers how her own son suffered the abuse in silence because he did not want to worry her; no wonder when Kowase said if she didn't fight back, it wasn't a big deal, Maria kick kicked the door and told him to shut your mouth.
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* Kowase got what he deserved and drowned to death; at no point was he made sympathetically, or was the reader ever made to sympathize with him despite how horrifying his death was because of how much of a scumbag he is. In his last thoughts, Kowase showed how much of a scumbag he was when he revealed that he wanted to get rich by abusing women. Maria herself said that his greatest crime was being born and not what he did to her son, which perfectly describes what kind of useless scumbag Kowase is and how everyone else is better off without him. The real tragedy is that Maria herself takes no joy in his death despite what a monster he is; she quietly disposes of his corpse by chopping up his body before burning what's left of him in a barrel. As she is doing all of this, she has a flashback to her happier time with her son and husband; she starts to shake before she calms herself down, stating that there are four to go. A monster that deserves to die has been defeated, and an innocent girl has been saved, but Maria takes no joy in what she has to do to get revenge for her son; we are reminded that Maria's vengeance has a cost, and she herself doesn't take any satisfaction in it, even if these monsters get what they deserve the damage done to Maria and her family is permanent even if they get what they deserved.
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* Kowase got what he deserved and drowned to death; at no point was he made sympathetically, or was the reader ever made to sympathize with him despite how horrifying his death was because of how much of a scumbag he is. In his last thoughts, Kowase showed how much of a scumbag he was when he revealed that he wanted to get rich by abusing women. Maria herself said that his greatest crime was being born and not what he did to her son, an understandable sentiment considering what he had done to both Yajima and Kiritaka and possibly countless other people, which perfectly describes what kind of useless scumbag Kowase is and how everyone else is better off without him. The real tragedy is that Maria herself takes no joy in his death despite what a monster he is; she quietly disposes of his corpse by chopping up his body before burning what's left of him in a barrel. As she is doing all of this, she has a flashback to her happier time with her son and husband; she starts to shake before she calms herself down, stating that there are four to go. A monster that deserves to die has been defeated, and an innocent girl has been saved, but Maria takes no joy in what she has to do to get revenge for her son; we are reminded that Maria's vengeance has a cost, and she herself doesn't take any satisfaction in it, even if these monsters get what they deserve the damage done to Maria and her family is permanent even if they get what they deserved.
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* And when Yajima is kidnapped by Kowase and taken to his home, where he starts drowning her, she finally has enough and states that she doesn't care about him blackmailing her with his video of her shoplifting, feeling that her future being destroyed is better than dealing with him for another day and angrily tells him to get out of her life, Kowase's tries to drown her in response with the implication that he plans on killing her, as she falls unconscious, she dreams of Maria, thankfully Maria arrives just in time to save her and make sure that Kowase's never hurts her or anyone ever again.
!!!Chapter 4: SHOW THY SINS
* When Kowase realizes that Maria is not joking about killing him by drowning him, he attempts to talk her down to escape his predicament. Kowase insisted that he was just fooling around with Yajima, and while he was a little rough with her, he would've stopped if it hadn't been a big deal. We see a flashback with Yajima in her underwear with a broken face, with the implication that he forced her to have sex with him. This monster abused this poor girl, and as Maria listens to him, she remembers how her own son suffered the abuse in silence because he did not want to worry her; no wonder when Kowase said if she didn't fight back, it wasn't a big deal, Maria kick the door and told him to shut your mouth.
!!!Chapter 4: SHOW THY SINS
* When Kowase realizes that Maria is not joking about killing him by drowning him, he attempts to talk her down to escape his predicament. Kowase insisted that he was just fooling around with Yajima, and while he was a little rough with her, he would've stopped if it hadn't been a big deal. We see a flashback with Yajima in her underwear with a broken face, with the implication that he forced her to have sex with him. This monster abused this poor girl, and as Maria listens to him, she remembers how her own son suffered the abuse in silence because he did not want to worry her; no wonder when Kowase said if she didn't fight back, it wasn't a big deal, Maria kick the door and told him to shut your mouth.
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!!!Chapter 5: I TOLD YOU SO
* Kowase got what he deserved and drowned to death; at no point was he made sympathetically, or was the reader ever made to sympathize with him despite how horrifying his death was because of how much of a scumbag he is. In his last thoughts, Kowase showed how much of a scumbag he was when he revealed that he wanted to get rich by abusing women. Maria herself said that his greatest crime was being born and not what he did to her son, which perfectly describes what kind of useless scumbag Kowase is and how everyone else is better off without him. The real tragedy is that Maria herself takes no joy in his death despite what a monster he is; she quietly disposes of his corpse by chopping up his body before burning what's left of him in a barrel. As she is doing all of this, she has a flashback to her happier time with her son and husband; she starts to shake before she calms herself down, stating that there are four to go. A monster that deserves to die has been defeated, and an innocent girl has been saved, but Maria takes no joy in what she has to do to get revenge for her son; we are reminded that Maria's vengeance has a cost, and she herself doesn't take any satisfaction in it, even if these monsters get what they deserve the damage done to Maria and her family is permanent even if they get what they deserved.
* Kowase got what he deserved and drowned to death; at no point was he made sympathetically, or was the reader ever made to sympathize with him despite how horrifying his death was because of how much of a scumbag he is. In his last thoughts, Kowase showed how much of a scumbag he was when he revealed that he wanted to get rich by abusing women. Maria herself said that his greatest crime was being born and not what he did to her son, which perfectly describes what kind of useless scumbag Kowase is and how everyone else is better off without him. The real tragedy is that Maria herself takes no joy in his death despite what a monster he is; she quietly disposes of his corpse by chopping up his body before burning what's left of him in a barrel. As she is doing all of this, she has a flashback to her happier time with her son and husband; she starts to shake before she calms herself down, stating that there are four to go. A monster that deserves to die has been defeated, and an innocent girl has been saved, but Maria takes no joy in what she has to do to get revenge for her son; we are reminded that Maria's vengeance has a cost, and she herself doesn't take any satisfaction in it, even if these monsters get what they deserve the damage done to Maria and her family is permanent even if they get what they deserved.
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* In a flashback, it is revealed that Kumiru Shikimi framed Kiritaka Nagare for stealing her gym to get their classmates to ostracize him, which succeeded when Shikimi asked their classmates to raise their hands if they believed Nagare, keep their hands down if they didn’t. No one lifts their hands, and Shikimi whispers to Nagare; apparently, no one believes in you. Kiritaka writes in his journal that he believes that there must’ve been some people who knew he wasn’t the culprit, but no one believed in him, and there was no value in trying to help him; he never felt so alone until that day.
** What makes it worse is that we don’t know if Kiritaka had any friends or friendly classmates before this incident; he either didn’t have friends or his friends abandoned him because of the incident and imagined how his classmates would react when they learned the truth about Shikimi.
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* In a flashback, it is revealed that Kumiru Shikimi framed [[FrameUp framed]] Kiritaka Nagare for stealing her gym clothes to get their classmates to ostracize him, which succeeded when Shikimi asked their classmates to raise their hands if they believed Nagare, Kiri or to keep their hands down if they didn’t. No one lifts lifted their hands, and [[EvilGloating Shikimi whispers whispered to Nagare; apparently, Nagare that no one believes believed in you. him]]. Kiritaka writes wrote in his journal that he believes believed that there must’ve been some people who knew he wasn’t the culprit, but that no one believed in him, and stood up for him because there was no value in trying to help him; he never him.
-->'''Kiritaka:''' That was the day where I feltso that I was alone until that day.
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** What makes it worse is that we don’t know if Kiritaka actually had any friends or friendly classmates before this incident; he either didn’t have friends or his friends abandoned him because of theincident and imagined incident. Imagine how his classmates would react when they learned the truth about Shikimi.
Shikimi and realized [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone they abandoned Kiritaka for nothing]].
-->'''Kiritaka:''' That was the day where I felt
** What makes it worse is that we don’t know if Kiritaka actually had any friends or friendly classmates before this incident; he either didn’t have friends or his friends abandoned him because of the
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** What makes it worse is that we don’t know if Kiritaka had any friends or friendly classmates before this incident; he either didn’t have friends or his friends abandoned him because of the incident and imagined how his classmates would react when they learned the truth about Shikimi.
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!!Chapter 7: THE NEST OF THE RED SPIDER
* In a flashback, it is revealed that Kumiru Shikimi framed Kiritaka Nagare for stealing her gym to get their classmates to ostracize him, which succeeded when Shikimi asked their classmates to raise their hands if they believed Nagare, keep their hands down if they didn’t. No one lifts their hands, and Shikimi whispers to Nagare; apparently, no one believes in you. Kiritaka writes in his journal that he believes that there must’ve been some people who knew he wasn’t the culprit, but no one believed in him, and there was no value in trying to help him; he never felt so alone until that day.
** What makes it worse is that we don’t know if Kiritaka had any friends or friendly classmates before this incident; he either didn’t have friends or abandoned him and imagined how his classmates would react when they learned the truth about Shikimi.
* In a flashback, it is revealed that Kumiru Shikimi framed Kiritaka Nagare for stealing her gym to get their classmates to ostracize him, which succeeded when Shikimi asked their classmates to raise their hands if they believed Nagare, keep their hands down if they didn’t. No one lifts their hands, and Shikimi whispers to Nagare; apparently, no one believes in you. Kiritaka writes in his journal that he believes that there must’ve been some people who knew he wasn’t the culprit, but no one believed in him, and there was no value in trying to help him; he never felt so alone until that day.
** What makes it worse is that we don’t know if Kiritaka had any friends or friendly classmates before this incident; he either didn’t have friends or abandoned him and imagined how his classmates would react when they learned the truth about Shikimi.
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* Maria decides to leave the party early. Atsuki and another teacher see her leave and become concerned; one of the teachers asks if she would like to go for the second round because he really wants her to sing, but she declines, saying that she would like to be invited again another time. Atsuki then bows his head towards Maria and thanks her for helping him earlier. She becomes upset and just leaves without saying a word, to the shock of Atsuki and two other teachers. As she walks away, Maria feels guilty that they're showing her gratitude. This shows that while Maria retains some level of kindness that pushes her to look after the people around her in small ways, after all the things she's done and will do in the name of revenge [[IAmAMonster she feels unworthy of being thanked]] even when it's for a legitimate reason.
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* Maria decides to leave the party early. Atsuki and another teacher see her leave and become concerned; one of the teachers asks if she would like to go for the second round because he really wants her to sing, but she declines, saying that she would like to be invited again another time. Atsuki then bows his head towards Maria and thanks her for helping him earlier. She becomes upset and just leaves without saying a word, to the shock of Atsuki and two other teachers. As she walks away, Maria feels guilty that they're showing her gratitude. This shows that while Maria retains some level of kindness that pushes her to look after the people around her in small ways, after all the things she's done and will do in the name of revenge [[IAmAMonster she feels unworthy of being thanked]] even when it's for a legitimate reason.reason like her genuine acts of kindness.
