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--> '''Taylor:''' “Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.” Emma breaks down crying after Taylor leaves.
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--> '''Taylor:''' “Good."Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.” " Emma breaks down crying after Taylor leaves.
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--> '''Elsa:''' “Why did it have to be you?”
--> '''Madison:''' “I... made a mistake... I was wrong. I was an awful, evil person. I can't take it back. I can't fix it.”
--> '''Madison:''' “I... made a mistake... I was wrong. I was an awful, evil person. I can't take it back. I can't fix it.”
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--> '''Elsa:''' “Why "Why did it have to be you?”
you?"
--> '''Madison:'''“I..."I... made a mistake... I was wrong. I was an awful, evil person. I can't take it back. I can't fix it.”"
--> '''Madison:'''
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--> '''Riley:'''“Why? Because he killed my family. Because he '''destroyed''' my family. He killed my mommy, and my daddy, and my brother. Well...He didn't kill Drew. Not right away. When Mommy and Daddy were dying, I... I knew how to fix them. I tried to fix them. Jack... he wanted to see what else I could do."
--> "So he took Drew and me to the forest. There was this hole in the ground with all these dead bodies. Human and animals too. I dunno what they were doing with it, but Jack hurt Drew really bad. He took Drew's arms off, and his legs. And he cut him open and took other things out. Then he threw us down there, in the pit. He told me to save Drew. So I... I started going through the bodies. I found bits and pieces that still worked, so I put them together. I put them together for a suit that Drew could wear, so he'd have arms and legs and everything. I fixed him.”
--> “Jack made me do it again. But he hurt Drew worse. It was harder. Then he did it again. He thought it was funny. He made me put new bodies together for Drew over and over."
--> "So he took Drew and me to the forest. There was this hole in the ground with all these dead bodies. Human and animals too. I dunno what they were doing with it, but Jack hurt Drew really bad. He took Drew's arms off, and his legs. And he cut him open and took other things out. Then he threw us down there, in the pit. He told me to save Drew. So I... I started going through the bodies. I found bits and pieces that still worked, so I put them together. I put them together for a suit that Drew could wear, so he'd have arms and legs and everything. I fixed him.”
--> “Jack made me do it again. But he hurt Drew worse. It was harder. Then he did it again. He thought it was funny. He made me put new bodies together for Drew over and over."
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--> '''Riley:'''“Why? '''Riley:'''"Why? Because he killed my family. Because he '''destroyed''' my family. He killed my mommy, and my daddy, and my brother. Well...He didn't kill Drew. Not right away. When Mommy and Daddy were dying, I... I knew how to fix them. I tried to fix them. Jack... he wanted to see what else I could do."
--> "So he took Drew and me to the forest. There was this hole in the ground with all these dead bodies. Human and animals too. I dunno what they were doing with it, but Jack hurt Drew really bad. He took Drew's arms off, and his legs. And he cut him open and took other things out. Then he threw us down there, in the pit. He told me to save Drew. So I... I started going through the bodies. I found bits and pieces that still worked, so I put them together. I put them together for a suit that Drew could wear, so he'd have arms and legs and everything. I fixed him.”
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-->“Jack "Jack made me do it again. But he hurt Drew worse. It was harder. Then he did it again. He thought it was funny. He made me put new bodies together for Drew over and over."
--> "So he took Drew and me to the forest. There was this hole in the ground with all these dead bodies. Human and animals too. I dunno what they were doing with it, but Jack hurt Drew really bad. He took Drew's arms off, and his legs. And he cut him open and took other things out. Then he threw us down there, in the pit. He told me to save Drew. So I... I started going through the bodies. I found bits and pieces that still worked, so I put them together. I put them together for a suit that Drew could wear, so he'd have arms and legs and everything. I fixed him.
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--> And last but definitely not least, I had a psychotic monster living inside my head who wouldn’t shut up.
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--> And last but definitely not least, I had a psychotic monster living inside my head who wouldn’t wouldn't shut up.
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/34198555/ 15-11]], Sophia ends up losing an arm in the process of saving a baby.
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/34198555/ 15-11]], Sophia ends up losing an arm in the process of saving a baby.baby.
* Madison sums up just how chaotic her career as a hero has been in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/41068894/ 17-02]] and it.. really paints a depressing picture.
--> Not even two months into my career as a superhero, and where did I stand? My parents had the mentality of children, might never recover, and were being kept in a hospital shelter alongside the other patients like them. My brother was actually one of the bad guys, working for Coil of all people. Most of the capes in the city were being held prisoner by one of the most dangerous villains in the entire country, if not the entire world. The girl I had actually started to really like had turned out to be the (unwilling as she was) serial killer who was taking out everyone who had hurt the girl whose torment I had helped ringlead, and now she was back in the hands of that monster, probably already being turned into his obedient little weapon again, all because I had talked her into walking right into his hands. Oh, and that girl I had helped torment was one of the people that I had to work with if we were ever going to beat that son of a bitch and save everyone.
--> And last but definitely not least, I had a psychotic monster living inside my head who wouldn’t shut up.
* Madison sums up just how chaotic her career as a hero has been in [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/41068894/ 17-02]] and it.. really paints a depressing picture.
--> Not even two months into my career as a superhero, and where did I stand? My parents had the mentality of children, might never recover, and were being kept in a hospital shelter alongside the other patients like them. My brother was actually one of the bad guys, working for Coil of all people. Most of the capes in the city were being held prisoner by one of the most dangerous villains in the entire country, if not the entire world. The girl I had actually started to really like had turned out to be the (unwilling as she was) serial killer who was taking out everyone who had hurt the girl whose torment I had helped ringlead, and now she was back in the hands of that monster, probably already being turned into his obedient little weapon again, all because I had talked her into walking right into his hands. Oh, and that girl I had helped torment was one of the people that I had to work with if we were ever going to beat that son of a bitch and save everyone.
--> And last but definitely not least, I had a psychotic monster living inside my head who wouldn’t shut up.
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* In [[15-11 https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/34198555/]], Sophia ends up losing an arm in the process of saving a baby.
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* In [[15-11 https://forums.[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/34198555/]], com/posts/34198555/ 15-11]], Sophia ends up losing an arm in the process of saving a baby.
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--> “Jack made me do it again. But he hurt Drew worse. It was harder. Then he did it again. He thought it was funny. He made me put new bodies together for Drew over and over."
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--> “Jack made me do it again. But he hurt Drew worse. It was harder. Then he did it again. He thought it was funny. He made me put new bodies together for Drew over and over.""
* In [[15-11 https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/34198555/]], Sophia ends up losing an arm in the process of saving a baby.
* In [[15-11 https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/34198555/]], Sophia ends up losing an arm in the process of saving a baby.
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--> '''Madison:''' “I... made a mistake... I was wrong. I was an awful, evil person. I can't take it back. I can't fix it.”
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--> '''Madison:''' “I... made a mistake... I was wrong. I was an awful, evil person. I can't take it back. I can't fix it.””
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/28473941/ 14-03]], we learn just what Jack Slash did to Riley and why she wants revenge.
--> '''Riley:'''“Why? Because he killed my family. Because he '''destroyed''' my family. He killed my mommy, and my daddy, and my brother. Well...He didn't kill Drew. Not right away. When Mommy and Daddy were dying, I... I knew how to fix them. I tried to fix them. Jack... he wanted to see what else I could do."
--> "So he took Drew and me to the forest. There was this hole in the ground with all these dead bodies. Human and animals too. I dunno what they were doing with it, but Jack hurt Drew really bad. He took Drew's arms off, and his legs. And he cut him open and took other things out. Then he threw us down there, in the pit. He told me to save Drew. So I... I started going through the bodies. I found bits and pieces that still worked, so I put them together. I put them together for a suit that Drew could wear, so he'd have arms and legs and everything. I fixed him.”
--> “Jack made me do it again. But he hurt Drew worse. It was harder. Then he did it again. He thought it was funny. He made me put new bodies together for Drew over and over."
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/28473941/ 14-03]], we learn just what Jack Slash did to Riley and why she wants revenge.
--> '''Riley:'''“Why? Because he killed my family. Because he '''destroyed''' my family. He killed my mommy, and my daddy, and my brother. Well...He didn't kill Drew. Not right away. When Mommy and Daddy were dying, I... I knew how to fix them. I tried to fix them. Jack... he wanted to see what else I could do."
--> "So he took Drew and me to the forest. There was this hole in the ground with all these dead bodies. Human and animals too. I dunno what they were doing with it, but Jack hurt Drew really bad. He took Drew's arms off, and his legs. And he cut him open and took other things out. Then he threw us down there, in the pit. He told me to save Drew. So I... I started going through the bodies. I found bits and pieces that still worked, so I put them together. I put them together for a suit that Drew could wear, so he'd have arms and legs and everything. I fixed him.”
--> “Jack made me do it again. But he hurt Drew worse. It was harder. Then he did it again. He thought it was funny. He made me put new bodies together for Drew over and over."
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** When Taylor and the others save her, she's so scared of Elsa that she begs them to take her with them rather than let the police take her because she's so scared Elsa will come back and try to kill her. Even though Taylor admits she still dislikes Julia the sheer horror of what she endured makes it impossible to hate her.
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** When Taylor and the others save her, she's so scared of Elsa that she begs them to take her with them rather than let the police take her because she's so scared Elsa will come back and try to kill her. Even though Taylor admits she still dislikes Julia the sheer horror of what she endured makes it impossible to hate her.
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--> '''Taylor:''' “Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.”
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--> '''Taylor:''' “Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.”” Emma breaks down crying after Taylor leaves.
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--> '''Taylor:''' “Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.”
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--> '''Taylor:''' “Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.”
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/27912946/ 14-01]], the truth comes out about Elsa being the Butcher and Madison being one of Taylor's bullies. All at once, the budding relationship they had became strained.
--> '''Elsa:''' “Why did it have to be you?”
--> '''Madison:''' “I... made a mistake... I was wrong. I was an awful, evil person. I can't take it back. I can't fix it.”
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/27912946/ 14-01]], the truth comes out about Elsa being the Butcher and Madison being one of Taylor's bullies. All at once, the budding relationship they had became strained.
--> '''Elsa:''' “Why did it have to be you?”
--> '''Madison:''' “I... made a mistake... I was wrong. I was an awful, evil person. I can't take it back. I can't fix it.”
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/24834848/ 13-02]], despite Sophia saving her family from being abducted, her mother holds a shotgun to her head and then tells her to GetOut. And when Sophia tries to state she didn't kill Armsmaster, her mother tells her she doesn't believe her.
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/24834848/ 13-02]], despite Sophia saving her family from being abducted, her mother holds a shotgun to her head and then tells her to GetOut. And when Sophia tries to state she didn't kill Armsmaster, her mother tells her she doesn't believe her.her.
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/25249066/ 13-03]] we get the full story behind the attack in the alley that led to Sophia and Emma meeting. Then we learned that her father and Winslow basically gave her a free pass because of it. And while all of this could be used as an excuse, it ultimately came down to Emma feeling the need to tear down Taylor to build herself back up. Taylor explicitly points out that while she feels sorry that all of that happened, it was her choice to not tell Taylor anything and to bully her to the extent that what happened could never make up for it. They would never be friends again.
--> '''Taylor:''' “Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.”
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/25249066/ 13-03]] we get the full story behind the attack in the alley that led to Sophia and Emma meeting. Then we learned that her father and Winslow basically gave her a free pass because of it. And while all of this could be used as an excuse, it ultimately came down to Emma feeling the need to tear down Taylor to build herself back up. Taylor explicitly points out that while she feels sorry that all of that happened, it was her choice to not tell Taylor anything and to bully her to the extent that what happened could never make up for it. They would never be friends again.
--> '''Taylor:''' “Good. I don't want you to die. Be careful, Emma. Maybe I can talk to you again sometime. But right now, I don't even want to look at you anymore. Maybe you had your reasons. But they were stupid. You hurt me to make yourself feel better. I was your friend, and you threw it away. Maybe you feel sorry now. But you should have felt sorry then. Before it was too late.”
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* 12-06 reveals that [[spoiler:Maidson's parents regressed mentally to children along with others due to the drugs the Merchants gave them, Chronicler's injuries can't be healed, and the effects are spreading to stop others from healing with powers as well, meaning that they won't lift the quarantine.]]
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* 12-06 reveals that [[spoiler:Maidson's Maidson's parents regressed mentally to children along with others due to the drugs the Merchants gave them, Chronicler's injuries can't be healed, and the effects are spreading to stop others from healing with powers as well, meaning that they won't lift the quarantine.]]
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/22907314/ 12-07]], Lisa is brought to tears when she sees her brother's alternate-self.
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* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/22907314/ 12-07]], Lisa is brought to tears when she sees her brother's alternate-self.alternate-self.
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/24834848/ 13-02]], despite Sophia saving her family from being abducted, her mother holds a shotgun to her head and then tells her to GetOut. And when Sophia tries to state she didn't kill Armsmaster, her mother tells her she doesn't believe her.
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/24834848/ 13-02]], despite Sophia saving her family from being abducted, her mother holds a shotgun to her head and then tells her to GetOut. And when Sophia tries to state she didn't kill Armsmaster, her mother tells her she doesn't believe her.
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* 12-06 reveals that [[spoiler:Maidson's parents regressed mentally to children along with others due to the drugs the Merchants gave them, Chronicler's injuries can't be healed, and the effects are spreading to stop others from healing with powers as well, meaning that they won't lift the quarantine.]]
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* 12-06 reveals that [[spoiler:Maidson's parents regressed mentally to children along with others due to the drugs the Merchants gave them, Chronicler's injuries can't be healed, and the effects are spreading to stop others from healing with powers as well, meaning that they won't lift the quarantine.]]]]
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/22907314/ 12-07]], Lisa is brought to tears when she sees her brother's alternate-self.
* In [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/posts/22907314/ 12-07]], Lisa is brought to tears when she sees her brother's alternate-self.
