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I thought we\'d managed to workt hat whole \"how did anyone forget X\" tendency from editors.....
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* How can you forget about when Simon gets shot? When he's lying there thinking hes about to die and he turns to River and starts apologising that he won't be able to look after her anymore.
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* How can you forget about when When Simon gets shot? When he's shot. He's lying there thinking hes about to die and he turns to River and starts apologising that he won't be able to look after her anymore.
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-->'''Simon''': They opened up her skull and they cut into her brain (...) They did it ''over, and over''.
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* That tiny little moment in Objects In Space, when Simon, upon hearing what the alliance was trying to do to River, a girl he still thinks of as his goofy, bratty know it all sister, just quietly brokenly says, "She's just a kid, she just wants to be a kid ". its so easy to forget that he still just sees her as a little girl.
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* That tiny little moment in Objects In Space, when Simon, upon hearing what the alliance was trying to do to River, a girl he still thinks of as his goofy, bratty know it all sister, just quietly brokenly says, "She's just a kid, she just wants to be a kid ". its It's so easy to forget that he still just sees her as a little girl.
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* That tiny little moment in Objects In Space, when Simon, upon hearing what the alliance was trying to do to River, a girl he still thinks of as his goofy, bratty know it all sister, just quietly brokenly says, "She's just a kid, she just wants to be a kid ". its so easy to forget that he still just sees her as a little girl
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* That tiny little moment in Objects In Space, when Simon, upon hearing what the alliance was trying to do to River, a girl he still thinks of as his goofy, bratty know it all sister, just quietly brokenly says, "She's just a kid, she just wants to be a kid ". its so easy to forget that he still just sees her as a little girl
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* In "Objects in Space" Kaylee managed to take things to a whole new level of [[TearJerker sad]] and [[NightmareFuel scary]] with one line:
--> '''Kaylee:''' There's... there's nobody can help me.
** What makes this even more sad is the fact that Mal said in the pilot episode, "I don't believe there is power in the 'verse that can stop Kaylee from being cheerful." Yet there she was. ''Crying''. A superb BreakTheCutie moment.
* In "Objects in Space" Kaylee managed to take things to a whole new level of [[TearJerker sad]] and [[NightmareFuel scary]] with one line:
--> '''Kaylee:''' There's... there's nobody can help me.
** What makes this even more sad is the fact that Mal said in the pilot episode, "I don't believe there is power in the 'verse that can stop Kaylee from being cheerful." Yet there she was. ''Crying''. A superb BreakTheCutie moment.
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** That's nothing! The looks of guilt on the rest of the crews faces realy pulls on the heart-strings.
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** That's nothing! The looks of guilt on the rest of the crews faces realy really pulls on the heart-strings.
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** That's nothing! The looks of guilt on the rest of the crews faces realy pulls no the heart-strings.
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** That's nothing! The looks of guilt on the rest of the crews faces realy pulls no on the heart-strings.
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** The thing that really gets me is when Simon is operating on Kaylee with the sombre music in the background. Not too bad until you get a shot of the teddybear on Kaylee's pantleg...
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* In the beginning of the pilot, when Mal realizes that the [[TheEmpire spaceships]] he heared are not the [[TheCavalry the ones he had hoped for]] the camera zooms in on his face while sad chello music plays. It's not a Tear Jerker the first time around, but after watching the whole series and the movie, you will feel the pain [[BreakTheCutie of him falling apart.]]
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* In the beginning of the pilot, when Mal realizes that the [[TheEmpire spaceships]] he heared are not the [[TheCavalry the ones he had hoped for]] the camera zooms in on his face while sad chello cello music plays. It's not a Tear Jerker the first time around, but after watching the whole series and the movie, you will feel the pain [[BreakTheCutie of him falling apart.]]
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** Adding to that, the scene in "The Train Job" where River wakes up, panics, looks around the ship's infirmary in confusion, gets deeply saddened PuppyDogEyes, and whispers "Isn't home?" in this broken little child's voice. It's a tiny thing, but the look of loss and pain on her face is so ''profound.''
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** Adding to that, the scene in "The Train Job" where River wakes up, panics, looks around the ship's infirmary in confusion, gets deeply saddened PuppyDogEyes, and whispers "Isn't home?" "This isn't home." in this broken little child's voice. It's a tiny thing, but the look of loss and pain on her face is so ''profound.''
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--> Please, God, make me a stone!
** River's ramblings while locked in the supply closet with Simon. It doesn't become apparent just what she's saying for a bit, but then you get her laughing/sobbing comment about "Bullet in the brainpan, squish!" and you realize ''she wants to commit suicide rather than let the rest of the crew be in danger on her account.''
** River's ramblings while locked in the supply closet with Simon. It doesn't become apparent just what she's saying for a bit, but then you get her laughing/sobbing comment about "Bullet in the brainpan, squish!" and you realize ''she wants to commit suicide rather than let the rest of the crew be in danger on her account.''
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--> Please, God, make me a stone!
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** River's ramblings while locked in the supply closet with Simon. It doesn't become apparent just what she's saying for a bit, but then you get her laughing/sobbing comment about "Bullet in the brainpan,squish!" squish." and you realize ''she wants to commit suicide rather than let the rest of the crew be in danger on her account.''
** River's ramblings while locked in the supply closet with Simon. It doesn't become apparent just what she's saying for a bit, but then you get her laughing/sobbing comment about "Bullet in the brainpan,
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** That tiny little moment in Objects In Space, when Simon, upon hearing what the alliance was trying to do to River, a girl he still thinks of as his goofy, bratty know it all sister, just quietly brokenly says, "She's just a kid, she just wants to be a kid ". its so easy to forget that he still just sees her as a little girl
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** That tiny little moment in Objects In Space, when Simon, upon hearing what the alliance was trying to do to River, a girl he still thinks of as his goofy, bratty know it all sister, just quietly brokenly says, "She's just a kid, she just wants to be a kid ". its so easy to forget that he still just sees her as a little girl
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* "Out of Gas". ''WhamEpisode The entire freaking episode''.
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* "Out of Gas". ''WhamEpisode The ''The entire freaking episode''.
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* "Out of Gas". ''[[WhamEpisode The entire freaking episode]]''.
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* "Out of Gas". ''[[WhamEpisode ''WhamEpisode The entire freaking episode]]''.episode''.
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* "Out of Gas". ''The entire freaking episode''.
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* "Out of Gas". ''The ''[[WhamEpisode The entire freaking episode''.episode]]''.
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* "Out of Gas". ''The entire freaking episode''.
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* From "Out of Gas", after Inara snaps--or as close as she ever comes to snapping--that she "doesn't need a clinical description right now" when Simon was hopelessly describing what happens when a human body suffocates.
-->'''Simon:''' ...Sorry. It's just...*sigh*...It was my birthday.
** With the WordOfGod that Inara is [[spoiler: dying of a terminal illness]] her line becomes this.
-->'''Inara:''' I love this ship. I have since I first saw it.\\
'''Simon:''' I just don't want to ''die'' on it.\\
'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.
-->'''Simon:''' ...Sorry. It's just...*sigh*...It was my birthday.
** With the WordOfGod that Inara is [[spoiler: dying of a terminal illness]] her line becomes this.
-->'''Inara:''' I love this ship. I have since I first saw it.\\
'''Simon:''' I just don't want to ''die'' on it.\\
'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.
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* In "Out Of Gas" it's an odd thing to get choked up over, but seeing Mal's flashback at the end of buying Serenity brings tears to my eyes. The relationship between Mal's hopes and dreams and the ship is incredibly poinant.
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Deleted reference to the line \"Captain Daddy\" - since I watched the episode twice to try to find it, and there just is no such line.
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*** [[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]] on this one, as there's a spot in the same episode where she calls Mal "Captain Daddy", so by saying "Daddy will come for us", she could be seen as telling Simon that everything will be alright, that Mal will come for them, which makes it more of a [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming CMOH]].
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* Seeing [[spoiler: Serenity crash]] in the Big Damn Movie can be this. After all, ''she's'' the main character of Firefly, and watching her "die" like that is one of the only parts of the movie that can make this troper cringe every time. Sure, [[spoiler: she gets better]], but that's heartbreaking. Wash's death seconds later does ''not'' help.
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* Seeing [[spoiler: Serenity crash]] in the Big Damn Movie can be this. After all, ''she's'' the main character of Firefly, and watching her "die" like that is one of the only parts of the movie that can make this troper cringe every time. Sure, [[spoiler: she gets better]], but that's heartbreaking. Wash's death [[spoiler:Wash's death]] seconds later does ''not'' help.
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** And immediately afterward, seeing [[spoiler:Zoe's]] reaction to it. She's not crying, she's not breaking down, she isn't even showing an ounce of pain or anguish....she's just loading her shotgun, and you can ''tell'' she's simply trying to hold on after her entire world has been shattered.
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** And immediately afterward, seeing [[spoiler:Zoe's]] reaction to it. She's In the cockpit, right after he's hit, she's breaking down with tears and pleading for him to answer her; Mal has to literally grab her and pull her out of there by force. By the time anyone else realizes what's happened as they regroup, she's not crying, she's not breaking down, she isn't even showing an ounce of pain or anguish....she's just loading her shotgun, and you can ''tell'' she's simply trying to hold on after her entire world has been shattered.
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* Not to mention in TheMovie, between [[spoiler: the scene where River is finally "okay" and the almost sadistic glee in killing off half the cast.]]
** "I am a leaf on the wind. Watch how I-"
** [[spoiler:"W-wait, Wash! W-where's Wash?" "... He ain't comin'."]] I get myself together after "leaf on the wind," and then that happens. It doesn't get better with repeat viewings, either.
** "I am a leaf on the wind. Watch how I-"
** [[spoiler:"W-wait, Wash! W-where's Wash?" "... He ain't comin'."]] I get myself together after "leaf on the wind," and then that happens. It doesn't get better with repeat viewings, either.
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'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.\\
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'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.\\
* [[spoiler:"W-wait, Wash! W-where's Wash?" "... He ain't comin'."]] I get myself together after "leaf on the wind," and then that happens. It doesn't get better with repeat viewings, either.
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*** What gets me is when Zoe breaks the formation the crew's set up and just runs at the Reavers with her gun, even though she's vastly outnumbered. She had to have known that move was borderline suicidal, but these are the monsters that [[spoiler: killed her husband]] and she just doesn't care anymore.
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--->'''Inara:''' I love this ship. I have since I first saw it.
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--->'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.
--->'''Simon:''' I just don't want to ''die'' on it.
--->'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.
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--->'''Inara:'''
'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.\\
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--->'''Jayne''': All of you! You think someone's just gonna drop money on ya, money they could use? There ain't people like that! There's just people like me.
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*** What gets me is when Zoe breaks the formation the crew's set up and just runs at the Reavers with her gun, even though she's vastly outnumbered. She had to have known that move was borderline suicidal, but these are the monsters that [[spoiler: killed her husband]] and she just doesn't care anymore.
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*** [[YourMileageMayVary YMMV]] on this one, as there's a spot in the same episode where she calls Mal "Captain Daddy", so by saying "Daddy will come for us", she could be seen as telling Simon that everything will be alright, that Mal will come for them, which makes it more of a [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming CMOH]].
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** Also, Mal's final monologue to River. "Love keeps her in the air when she oughta' fall down."
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* Also, Mal's final monologue to River. "Love keeps her in the air when she oughta' fall down."
** Definitely moving on its own, but if you are willing to take a meta perspective, the monologue gains additional Tear Jerker quality as it seems to be Whedon talking about the show itself getting one final go for the movie.
** Definitely moving on its own, but if you are willing to take a meta perspective, the monologue gains additional Tear Jerker quality as it seems to be Whedon talking about the show itself getting one final go for the movie.
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---> '''Book:''' I don't care what you believe...just believe it.
---> '''Book:''' I don't care what you believe...just believe it.
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* Seeing [[spoiler: Serenity crash]] in the Big Damn Movie can be this. After all, ''she's'' the main character of Firefly, and watching her "die" like that is one of the only parts of the movie that can make this troper cringe every time. Sure, [[spoiler: she gets better]], but that's heartbreaking. Wash's death seconds later does ''not'' help.
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* From "Out of Gas", after Inara snaps--or as close as she ever comes to snapping--that she "doesn't need a clinical description right now" when Simon was hopelessly describing what happens when a human body suffocates.
--->'''Simon:''' ...Sorry. It's just...*sigh*...It was my birthday.
** With the WordOfGod that Inara is [[spoiler: dying of a terminal illness]] her line becomes this.
--->'''Inara:''' I love this ship. I have since I first saw it.
--->'''Simon:''' I just don't want to ''die'' on it.
--->'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.
--->'''Simon:''' ...Sorry. It's just...*sigh*...It was my birthday.
** With the WordOfGod that Inara is [[spoiler: dying of a terminal illness]] her line becomes this.
--->'''Inara:''' I love this ship. I have since I first saw it.
--->'''Simon:''' I just don't want to ''die'' on it.
--->'''Inara:''' *softly* I don't want to die at all.
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** That's nothing! The looks of guilt on the rest of the crews faces realy pulls no the heart-strings.
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* River's disjointed breakdown on Miranda, like a ''lot'' of the scenes involving River in this movie, was jarring and emotionally hard-hitting, especially the bit at the end where she starts praying frantically in Chinese.
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* River's disjointed breakdown on Miranda, like a ''lot'' of the scenes involving River in this movie, was jarring and emotionally hard-hitting, especially the bit at the end where she starts praying frantically in Chinese. In the midst of the chaotic, disjointed Chinese prayers, she suddenly breaks into English long enough to scream.
-->Please, God, make me a stone!
-->Please, God, make me a stone!