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*** Not to mention Krile ''begging'' her grandfather not to die and leave her alone, because he's her only living family. And then a few minutes later when she unflinchingly [[TakeUpMySword takes his place]] in the party at his behest.
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*** Not to mention Krile ''begging'' her grandfather not to die and leave her alone, because he's her only living family. family, and initially has no intention of taking his place because she just wants him back. And then a few minutes later when she unflinchingly [[TakeUpMySword takes his place]] in the party at his behest.behest, less because she wants to, but because she ''has'' to.
