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* Zammis witnessing for itself the [[HumansAreBastards Scavenger's cruelty]] and shedding a SingleTear.
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* Zammis witnessing for itself the [[HumansAreBastards Scavenger's Scavengers' cruelty]] and shedding a SingleTear.
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-->"Will... when you see Mercheson, just don't call her 'the white balloon' anymore; it hurts her feelings. And don't let the guys call her that... I'm really tired..."
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-->"Will... when you see Mercheson, just don't call her 'the white balloon' anymore; it hurts her feelings. And don't let the guys call her that... Will? I'm really tired..."
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-->"Well, Jerry, what am I supposed to do now? You taught me all about the Talmaan, and about the Jeriba line... But you didn't say nothing about taking care of baby Dracs! So long, Jerry..."
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-->"Well, Jerry, what am I supposed to do now? You taught me all about the Talmaan, and about the Jeriba line... But you didn't say nothing about taking care of baby Dracs! So long, Jerry..."Jerry!"
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* The death of Davidge's co-pilot Wooster in the opening.
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* The death of Davidge's co-pilot Joey Wooster in the opening.opening. You don't even need to look closely to see that the poor guy is shedding tears as he says his last words, because he already knows full well he's not going to make it:
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* Jerry's DeathByChildbirth halfway through the film (pictured).(pictured), with Davidge having to quickly bury him and say his goodbyes to tend to newborn Zammis. You can tell in his voice that he's TryingNotToCry.
-->"Well, Jerry, what am I supposed to do now? You taught me all about the Talmaan, and about the Jeriba line... But you didn't say nothing about taking care of baby Dracs! So long, Jerry..."
-->"Well, Jerry, what am I supposed to do now? You taught me all about the Talmaan, and about the Jeriba line... But you didn't say nothing about taking care of baby Dracs! So long, Jerry..."
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-->"Will... when you see Mercheson, just don't call her 'the white balloon' anymore; it hurts her feelings. And don't let the guys call her that... I'm really tired..."
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** Sadly the scene where Davidge stands and recites Jeriba's entire family line is cut shorter than in the novella, where it really packs a wallop, but still wets some eyes.
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** Sadly the scene where Davidge stands and recites Jeriba's entire family line is cut shorter than in the novella, where it really packs a wallop, but still wets some the eyes.
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* "I wish I was not a Drac!"
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* "I "[[IJustWantToBeNormal I wish I was not a Drac!"Drac]]!"
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** Sadly the scene where Davidge stands and recites Jeriba's entire family line is cut shorter than in the novella, where it really packs a wallop, but still wets some eyes.
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* Sadly the scene where Davidge stands and recites Jeriba's entire family line is cut shorter than in the novella, where it really packs a wallop, but still wets some eyes.
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* The death of Davidge's co-pilot Wooster in the opening.
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* Jerry's DeathByChildbirth halfway through the film.
* "I wish I was not a Drac!"
* "I wish I was not a Drac!"
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* Jerry's DeathByChildbirth halfway through the film.
film (pictured).
* "I wish I was not aDrac!"Drac!"
* Zammis witnessing for itself the [[HumansAreBastards Scavenger's cruelty]] and shedding a SingleTear.
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* "I wish I was not a
* Zammis witnessing for itself the [[HumansAreBastards Scavenger's cruelty]] and shedding a SingleTear.
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[[caption-width-right:350:"Don't die on me, Jerry!"]]
[[caption-width-right:350:"Don't die on me, Jerry!"]]
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* Jerry's death DeathByChildbirth halfway through the film.
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* Jerry's death helfway through the film.
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* Jerry's death helfway halfway through the film.
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle".
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, Zammis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle"."Uncle".
* Jerry's death helfway through the film.
* "I wish I was not a Drac!"
* Jerry's death helfway through the film.
* "I wish I was not a Drac!"
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the accompanying Tear Jerker page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the accompanying Tear Jerker page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle".
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* The last 15 minutes of the film is sure to evoke tears, especially when Davidge finds Zamis, and when Davidge's name is included in the family roll call as "Uncle". Also see the accompanying Tear Jerker page, because if you don't cry at this, you have no soul.
