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* The AdultFear list on the main page.
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** A fraction of the Krogran tried to rise a 2nd rebellion despite Wrex and Bakara's effort.
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** A fraction of the Krogran krogan tried to rise a 2nd rebellion despite Wrex and Bakara's effort.
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*** Alt.Amata was attacked by the Quarians, her son was killed right in front of her. They cut her open (while she remained concious and probably without painkiller) to pull out her daughter. Then they killed her as she hold the body of little Gaius. Her husband later found their baby daughter's butchered body in a preserving jar in a Quarians' lab, surrounding by children's bodies in similar states.
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*** Alt.Amata was attacked by the Quarians, her son was killed right in front of her. They cut her open (while she remained concious and probably without painkiller) to pull out her daughter. Then they killed her as she hold the body of little Gaius. Her husband later found their baby daughter's butchered body in a preserving jar in a Quarians' quarians' lab, surrounding by children's bodies in similar states.
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** The Quarians are now on near extinction because of the crime of a few and they certainly had no hope of escape it.
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** The Quarians quarians are now on near extinction because of the crime of a few and they certainly had no hope of escape it.
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** Shepard's background makes her constantly questioning herself about her worth, her right to be happy and her ability as a mother.
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** Shepard's background makes her constantly questioning herself about her worth, her right to be happy and her ability as a mother.
mother. It actually causes her to unconsciously avoiding living together with her new family and focus most of her energy on her job as being loved and cared by others was just too much for her to handle. This creates a big crack between her and Garrus to the point he actually considers divorcing her. Fortunately, Ouhil and Ceima managed to intervene just in time.
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** Shepard, Adrien, Miranda are all killed (and Miranda's death was absolutely horrifying). Garrus is a lonely old man who lives with the hatred from his true love's son and is being tormented by his own mistakes that all started from his misguided attempt of blowing off steam to forget his love's death.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them just simply because they're exist.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them just simply because they're exist.
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** Shepard, Adrien, Miranda are were all killed (and Miranda's death was absolutely horrifying). Alt.Garrus is a lonely old man who lives with the hatred from his true love's son and is being now an old, lonely, tormented by man who spent his own mistakes that all started from his misguided attempt remaining years regretting over the past for one stupid mistake of blowing off steam to forget with the wrong person while yearning for his love's death.
true love that had died long ago and their only son who despised him.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them just simply because they'reexist.exist and normal people who try to support them will be faced with discrimination and oppression so they must stay silence and witness all the horror.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them just simply because they're
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*** Alt.Amata was attacked by the Quarians, her son was killed right in front of her. They cut her open (while she remained concious and probably without pain killer) painkiller) to pull out her daughter. Then they killed her as she hold the body of little Gaius. Her husband later found their baby daughter's butchered body in a preserving jar in a Quarians' lab, surrounding by children's bodies in similar states.
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* Alt.Garrus' vid for Gaius. He's now an old, lonely, tormented man who spent his remaining years regretting over the past for one stupid mistake while yearning for his true love that had died long ago and their only son who despised him.
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** The Quarians are now on near extinction because of the crime of a few.few and they certainly had no hope of escape it.
*** Alt.Amata was attacked by the Quarians, her son was killed right in front of her. They cut her open (while she remained concious and probably without pain killer) to pull her daughter. Then they killed her as she hold the body of little Gaius. Her husband later found their baby daughter's butchered body in a preserving jar in a Quarians' lab, surrounding by children's bodies in similar states.
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* The vid from Alt!Garrus.
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* The Alt.Garrus' vid from Alt!Garrus.for Gaius. He's now an old, lonely, tormented man who spent his remaining years regretting over the past for one stupid mistake while yearning for his true love that had died long ago and their only son who despised him.
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** Shepard, Adrien, Miranda are all killed. Garrus is a lonely old man who lives with the hatred from his true love's son and is being tormented by his own mistakes that started from just a single night of misguide.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them jsut simply because they're exist.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them jsut simply because they're exist.
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** Shepard, Adrien, Miranda are all killed. killed (and Miranda's death was absolutely horrifying). Garrus is a lonely old man who lives with the hatred from his true love's son and is being tormented by his own mistakes that all started from just a single night his misguided attempt of misguide.
blowing off steam to forget his love's death.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates themjsut just simply because they're exist.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them
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** In ''Interference'', a 6-year-old Gaius would often asked his mother why people (and his father in particular) hated him and what did he do wrong so he could apologize. Now child should ever have to ask something like that!
** Gaius' incident with Perdita... it hits too close to home for many people...
* This list of [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AdultFear/FanWorks Adult Fear]].
** Gaius' incident with Perdita... it hits too close to home for many people...
* This list of [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AdultFear/FanWorks Adult Fear]].
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*** Alt.Garrus was forced by Appius to make Gaius fight a teenager Krogan or the turian would kill the boy and even Garrus.
*** Gaius' incident with Perdita... it hits too close to home for many people...
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** In ''Interference'', a 6-year-old Gaius would often asked his mother why people (and his father in particular) hated him and what did he do wrong so he could apologize. Now child should ever have to ask something like that!
** Gaius' incident with Perdita... it hits too close to home for many people...
** Gaius' incident with Perdita... it hits too close to home for many people...
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* Emi's second death, and her mother's reaction to the truth about her child.
* The vid from Alt!Garrus.
* The vid from Alt!Garrus.
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** Shepard's background makes her constantly questioning herself about her worth, her right to be happiness happy and her ability as a mother.mother.
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** A fraction of the Krogran are preparing for a 2nd rebellion despite Wrex and Bakara's effort.
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** A fraction of the Krogran are preparing for tried to rise a 2nd rebellion despite Wrex and Bakara's effort.
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* The real story of why Sarah, Jane's mother used drugs, abused her and then gave her away. And [[spoiler: Sam]] had to witness everything.
** Shepard's background makes her constantly questioning herself about her worth, her right to be happiness and her ability as a mother.
** Shepard's background makes her constantly questioning herself about her worth, her right to be happiness and her ability as a mother.
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** The Krogran are prepare for a 2nd rebellion.
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** The A fraction of the Krogran are prepare preparing for a 2nd rebellion.rebellion despite Wrex and Bakara's effort.
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* This list of [[[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AdultFear/FanWorks AdultFear]].
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* This list of [[[[http://tvtropes.[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AdultFear/FanWorks AdultFear]].Adult Fear]].
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* The whole Alt.Future is a bottomless pit of darkness and sorrow:
** Shepard, Adrien, Miranda are all killed. Garrus is a lonely old man who lives with the hatred from his true love's son and is being tormented by his own mistakes that started from just a single night of misguide.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them jsut simply because they're exist.
** The Quarians are now on near extinction because of the crime of a few.
** The Krogran are prepare for a 2nd rebellion.
** Alt.Gaius past is fill with tragedies even before his mom's death.
* This list of [[[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AdultFear/FanWorks AdultFear]].
* In the present day, Garrus constantly tries to reach out to Alt.Gaius with no success and keeps blaming himself for the sin that isn't his. [[spoiler: Until he finally succeed and makes peace with Gaius only to know that he can't keep him.]]
* Miranda's reaction from Adrien's betrayal. She's been treated like that by those she trusted too many times to even get mad. She just simply accepts her fate, no fighting, no shouting, nothing.
* Koria's story, the reason why Makerm was sealed away.
** Shepard, Adrien, Miranda are all killed. Garrus is a lonely old man who lives with the hatred from his true love's son and is being tormented by his own mistakes that started from just a single night of misguide.
** The Hybrids are hunted, enslaved for their abilities while everyone except their families hates them jsut simply because they're exist.
** The Quarians are now on near extinction because of the crime of a few.
** The Krogran are prepare for a 2nd rebellion.
** Alt.Gaius past is fill with tragedies even before his mom's death.
* This list of [[[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/AdultFear/FanWorks AdultFear]].
* In the present day, Garrus constantly tries to reach out to Alt.Gaius with no success and keeps blaming himself for the sin that isn't his. [[spoiler: Until he finally succeed and makes peace with Gaius only to know that he can't keep him.]]
* Miranda's reaction from Adrien's betrayal. She's been treated like that by those she trusted too many times to even get mad. She just simply accepts her fate, no fighting, no shouting, nothing.
* Koria's story, the reason why Makerm was sealed away.
